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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:37 am
Omg, fine:
Once upon a time there were these two guys, They were attracted to each other like green flies, Their names were Foamy and Arc, And one day they went to the park, Foamy told Arc that he liked him, Arc gave a smile and the lights went dim...
;D You know the rest. rofl rofl
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:39 am
That's plain scary My little, beautiful fairy My feet are hairy Do you think that'll still make us merry?
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:45 am
No XD We were never merry, we all know you popped Foamy's cherry. rofl
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:46 am
Don't you think it's all just a dream to satisfy what you scheme? ;3
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:55 am
Sikh:
What the hell kinda rhyme was that? All of the lines were bland and flat. Not only was it short too, But its situation's just plain untrue. If you wish to extrapolate, Then at least don't start to fabricate. talk2hand
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:14 am
Oh there you go again, always hatin', I know you're jealous and I know you're shakin', I write my rhymes in black and white, No dancing around words to make them sound tight, They all make sense and tell a story, Not some rhyme that sounds so corny.
talk2hand
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:20 am
"Story" and "corny" don't work, you twit. If you're gonna rhyme, make 'em legit. I know you wanna be creative, but geez, You can't sling words around just as you please. (So, these stanzas are gonna be six lines long? That's what I'm seeing, but correct me if I'm wrong.)
talk2hand
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:34 am
 Stop speaking in rhyme. I feel like I'm in a Dr. Seuss book gonk
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:19 am
(Aw, but it's kinda fun!)
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:43 pm
It may sound like you're in a book, But, please, stop and take a look. The rhymes are not meant to cause pain, Think of it as intellectual gain. smile
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Nespin Fernagon Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:47 pm
A Drider? Oh dear. I am in trouble, aren't I....
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:50 pm
A Nessy!!!! *can't decide if she should kidnap him and take him back to her web, or just huggle him...*
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Nespin Fernagon Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:52 pm
...right. Right. For some reason everything wants to hug me. Even when I have a scary glary face. Perhaps not in so much trouble after all. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:53 pm
This ghost won't hurt a Nessy!!!! It missed Nessy! It's fault, true, but still!!!! *Huggles!!!!*
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Nespin Fernagon Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:54 pm
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