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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:33 pm
Lady of the Black Moon A lot of these made-ups are involving the world now O.o... i do believe that Loki and Metal are the first world characters in a long time
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:37 pm
im gonna have to ask if you can hurry and tell me whats wrong with my madeup so i can Spar with Metal plz
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 11:55 am
klamachpin Akira Matoko Okay. What do you mean a limiter? Drawback? There has to be something to limit this, in the current wording if you faught my character that would make those seem to bind me with easy and I am way out of your league in Chakra Points alone. Oh okay. Damn this will be the hard part.
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:02 pm
Level 1. Hyuuga Style: Binding Paralysis Jutsu. With ths, he can guide chakra through the ground or whatever he's standing on. With this, he binds his opponent to one spot. This letting him move in for a vicious Taijutsu attack. If his opponents has already focused chakra into his feet, or is continuously moving, this technique will have no effect.
((This enough?))
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:07 pm
Akira Matoko Level 1. Hyuuga Style: Binding Paralysis Jutsu. With ths, he can guide chakra through the ground or whatever he's standing on. With this, he binds his opponent to one spot. This letting him move in for a vicious Taijutsu attack. If his opponents has already focused chakra into his feet, or is continuously moving, this technique will have no effect. ((This enough?)) (It's not my place to critique, so feel free to disregard this.) Personally, how fond are you of the binding? That's more the Nara clan's trait. If nothing else, maybe try something like: Hyuuga Style: Stunning Paralysis Jutsu Using this technique, the user sends out a steady pulse of chakra from his feet through the ground, to rush at his opponent. The chakra moves quickly, and when it reaches the opponent's feet, it explodes in a sphere of chakra that momentarily stuns the opponent's entire body. The length of stunning is based on their chakra level in relation to the user of this technique, ranging from near-instant for someone incredibly stronger, up to several turns, if they're incredibly weaker.
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:16 pm
Wow I like your technique better. But the 1st level is specifically for keeping their feet down. from the ankles up, the have complete control.
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 12:27 pm
Akira Matoko Wow I like your technique better. But the 1st level is specifically for keeping their feet down. from the ankles up, the have complete control. Hmm, that would almost have to be a variant on the 64 Palms type of move, with attacking chakra nodes and pressure points in the legs, rather than sending chakra under the ground. Because if you're doing something similar to when Neji was wrapped up in the spider-guy's webs, he released chakra from each of the nodes of his own body, like the Gentle Fist style with his entire body as a conduit rather than just the hands. If you take into account having to control the chakra after it's left the body, you'd likely have to concentrate fairly heavily on it. So if you really want to just stop their feet, maybe: Hyuuga Style: 64 Palms Strike: Heaven's Cessation The user's hands glow with chakra, as they dash towards their opponent. Using all the skill and grace of the Gentle Fist, they strike out at each chakra node and pressure point in the opponent's legs, covering all the different points in a handful of seconds. If the hits are successful, the opponent's legs will be unable to function, they will be effectively frozen in place. As the intruding chakra is antithesis the the opponent's own chakra, it decays as the natural chakra forces it out. This process is slower or faster based on the opponent's chakra level in relation to the user of this technique.
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:09 pm
Genjutsu Slumber Description: This technique was developed as a solution to Kyoshou's problem about not being able to resist genjutsu. This technique is a supplementary techniques that requires no hand seals. When an opponent performs a genjutsu, Kyoshou must realize he is in the genjutsu. He can then transfer the genjutsu to the subconscious of his mind where it has no effect on him. He will simply have a dream of what the genjutsu was later that night feeling none of the perceived stresses on the human body. Furthermore, Kyoshou is able to analyze the genjutsu that was attempted to be used on him in his subconscious and use it against his opponent.
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 8:13 pm
Great drainage of the chakra: The user performs some handseals, Taking one post for the jutsu to take effect. The chakra out of anything (Not humans ort such) Can be drains away. Like if the user was being attacked with a water dragon, the attack would drain the chakra from the water dragon making the dragon turn back to plain water.
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 6:04 am
metal mist Possibility of Use: I am not sure about this one since I do not like the ideal of making Hidden Fragment's techniques work in the normal world of RPing. I will let you know when I decide. Celestial Mark: CLEARed Don't Mess With Me!: I like the ideal and your thought proccess, but I would like to see a limiter to your other customs to allow this to happen. I do not think it would be far to allow you have all your customs and the opponent none at all. Destined Entrance: I know Ace approved it, but I have at least one question. By "world" I am going to assume that you are talking about Hidden Fragment that is like a virtual world while the rest are in the real world. What are you required to do to allow this to happen? Valkiron I see no problems with either "Medical Examination" or "Medical Defense"... CLEARED Loki Angel of Darkness Crossing Worlds:I am not sure about this one since I do not like the ideal of making Hidden Fragment's techniques work in the normal world of RPing. I will let you know when I decide. 2-C-Virus: I will allow this... CLEARED noir_kama Black Alchemy - Alchemists Soul: I will read this technique tomorrow or later tonight. I do not have time to read and think about what this technique does right now. Dr Entropy Genjutsu Slumber: I like the ideal of this technique, but I am not sure about it right now. let me think on it a little more. I will let you know tonight or tomorrow when I get online again. Ace Zero Great drainage of the chakra: Does this technique have to be preformed every time that you drain the chakra out of the jutsu that is preformed to attack?
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:37 am
Hyuuga Style: 64 Palms Strike: Heaven's Cessation The user's hands glow with chakra, as they dash towards their opponent. Using all the skill and grace of the Gentle Fist, they strike out at each chakra node and pressure point in the opponent's legs, or arms covering all the different points in a handful of seconds. If the hits are successful, the opponent's legs or arms will be unable to function, they will be effectively frozen in place or have useless arms. As the intruding chakra is antithesis the the opponent's own chakra, it decays as the natural chakra forces it out. This process is slower or faster based on the opponent's chakra level in relation to the user of this technique.
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 3:47 pm
By the same rules for Crossing of the worlds i mean like.... same rules aply for like changing the world for like Gate Hacking and changing the battle area in a seconds notice i dont mean like all techniques smile Thanks for the aprroval of C-Virus razz
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 9:03 pm
possibility of use- i'm fine with it not working... it would be fun though, my main focus for it was to use regular attacks within the world. don't mess with me!-this could be limited with the loss of 1/4 of total points, aswell as no use of this for a week after being used. destined Entrance- not sure, its basically like a genjutsu that affects the body instead of the mind as it draws the opponent inside the world. once they are in they can not escape by any normal means. the rules of the world are still in effect so there is no outside techs aloud. the draw back would be the user has to wait 3 turns until they can pull them inside, aswell i have to be inside the world and know that my target is inside the village i started to take him/her from.
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Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:01 am
noir_kama Black Alchemy - Alchemists Soul: Interresting and well thought out... However, I feel that the Alchemist that opens their gate that is buried deep in their soul to preform this technique should be placing themselves in great danger of losing their own life for this action. I can not allow it to pass in this form. I do not feel the drawbacks are enough. Dr Entropy Genjutsu Slumber: I will allow this minus this line... "Furthermore, Kyoshou is able to analyze the genjutsu that was attempted to be used on him in his subconscious and use it against his opponent." Akira Matoko Hyuuga Style: 64 Palms Strike: Heaven's Cessation much better. CLEARED
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