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 Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 5:42 pm
Rednal 4laugh *Is glomped* My day is complete. heh... funny daddy.
[*huggles Rednal*]
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 2:57 pm
so... are you ever going to consider continuing/finsishing Golden?
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:46 pm
@Phydur: Highly unlikely. The story was awful anyways. sweatdrop sweatdrop
@Shouri: Whaddaya mean, funny? I'm being honest here! crying *Huggles back anyways*
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Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 12:53 pm
that story was not awful.
i really liked it.
there are thousands of storys that are a thousand times worse.
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Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 4:41 pm
Yeah, and I wrote most of them. xd xd
But seriously, the story needs a lot of work. The chapters are far too short, the grammar is HORRIBLE, and plot points need to be developed. If I were to continue, I'd probably start it all over again and write from scratch. @.@ Old version is too bad to continue.
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:44 am
crying i liked it...
it's better then anything i could ever write... crying
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 3:58 pm
Rednal @Phydur: Highly unlikely. The story was awful anyways. sweatdrop sweatdrop @Shouri: Whaddaya mean, funny? I'm being honest here! crying *Huggles back anyways* [*gently pecks Rednal's nose with a small kiss.*]
'cause daddy loves his daughter, besides sometimes you make me laugh, also....
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Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 5:10 pm
I try. =^.^= People smiling makes for a friendly guild, and GAIA's about the only life I have. xd
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:19 pm
Rednal I try. =^.^= People smiling makes for a friendly guild, and GAIA's about the only life I have. xd Yay! [*glomp*] whee heart
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 4:50 pm
^^ Just like this. *Falls to the floor* Am I a masochist for liking this?
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 5:27 pm
"Er.. Well I aren't sure what to say exactly. But I did enjoy that story."
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 3:20 pm
^^ That I like, even if it did kind of suck.
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:15 pm
Rednal ^^ Just like this. *Falls to the floor* Am I a masochist for liking this? mew!
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:21 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 12:39 pm
[*giggles softly*]
heheh... funny daddy....
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[*hugs Rednal back*]
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