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Posted: Tue May 10, 2005 8:32 am
Hoshiko now feeling a little pruny at the fingers, turned around and lifted her self out of the spring. She went strate to the dressing room where she changed into a red minnie skirt and a tight black tanktop. After fully dressing she walked from the Hot springs in seach of a wooded area to think. Her feet kept a steady pase as she continued on. She found a large oak witch she quicky climbed. When she found her spot on a thick branck she sat there with one leg on each side and she back agenst the trunk. She started to hum.
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 6:12 pm
Its been a while since Sakura Ai has been to the hot springs and she needing to go somewhere to relaxed and think for a while since she's been having stress every since Oliver and Feena first came around. Wondering why they would be here, she can understand why Feena is here but Oliver..why would he be around wouldn't be with his brother, Hiro. Letting out a sigh she walked into the girls changing room. Peeking around, she saw that no one really was at the hot springs..for the first time..it was empty..wonderful.
Sakura changed into the bikini, the one she bought for the summer vacation, she tied up her hair in a bun, placing the bells in her bag. She checked her hair in front of a mirror. SHe grabbed a pure white towel and wrapped around her slender body as she opened the door to the girls side of the springs.
All i asked for was a normal life..is that so hard? Thought the angelic creature as she slipped her body into the warm water, letting the water spilled between her toes and slowly making her way into it. WHen the water was up to her hips she slowly sat down and gazed upon her surroundings, taking advantage of the peace. Being a creature of light was so hard sometimes she wished she was more like her sister Feena, a creature from the underworld. But, Sakura Ai, all she is a weak shy angel whom helps others instead of her's.
Sakura couldn't help but think of her first reaction when she came to Ria. No offense to all those students she has met so far, but, Sakura thought they were in some kind of cult. SHe thought they would sacrifice her, do experiments, or claim that they want to save the earth. Until everyone was so nice to her..it was something she couldn't resist but smile to. It felt good to have friends for the first time after many years of being teased and beaten up..she thought she would have to walk this world all alone. She wished she could thank all those people who took her hand and showed her the meaning of kindness.
There was something i wanted..something i envisioned..loving parents..a happy home..with everyone smiling at me..a home that no one would leave..a warm place..a warm person..i know it exists. But when were we're together, my fears suddenly fly to the other side of the stars Thought Sakura as she leaned forward in the water, looking at her reflection, her angelic apperence that seemed to always give everyone a happy smile..even those who were clouded with darkness. Her true smile crept over her face, the smile the no one has whitnessed yet, her lavender eyes showing a hint of relief and joy that dreamy look as a few strands of lavender hair fell out of place. It seemed that, that slumber on a bed of roses that she was sleeping eternally on seemed to be awakening. Awakening for the first time after utter oblivion.
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 6:18 pm
**Warning from: SaKuRaBaBy** ...Where should I start? Perhaps you should read the rules again. Look at SaKuRaBaBy's list of pet peeves. I only ask for the fundamentals of grammer! Yes, you capitalized the beginning of every sen---wait I don't see any sentences. Why? A sentence ends with some sort of punctuation. You seem to lack them. This is your second warning, so I suggest you reread the rules and be careful.
Another tip that I would like to give to you is to make your posts longer. Add in more description or character thoughts. You are cutting it close to one-liners. One-liners are also one of my pet peeves btw.
Hiroki walks into the hot spring "Aww man this week has been hard and this new school has been hard to get used to"thought Hiroki as he walked into the hot spring "Aww that hits the spot"say Hiroki as he begins to relax
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 7:36 pm
Letting the water swirl around her perfectly shaped slender body, she gazed upon her reflection some more with that dreamy smile. That shy girl that everyone knew was the mask to hide the true beauty of Sakura Ai, she smiled for how well she kept her secret, although only one perosn outside her family knew her scecret, she felt like she acomplished something for the very first time.
She cupped her hands in the water and slowly let the water swivel some more in her palms. Feeling that warm fuzzy feeling down her throat, that same feeling when she is around her new friends. Lifting her hands back up from the water, she stared at a miniture reflection of her face. Letting oout that warm smile that she only showed to herself and no one else. She splashed the water that she cupped in her hands at her face, the water slowly dipping down her rosy lips and down her neck like it was holy water.
Everyone takes care of me..because of these people in Ria..everyday is fun..its a strange feeling..what should i call it? Thought Sakura Ai as she splashed more water on her arms and shoulders. The locket that still hugged her neck glistened in the blazing sun giving it some sweet serenity and enchantment. What Sakura was feeling was more than kindness, sorrow, love, happy, angry..its was an unknown feeling..full of warmth.
Feena, Oliver and Hiro...what should i call this feeling?
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 9:07 am
Katarina stepped into the girls' hot springs and slipped in. With a soft sigh, she rubbed her shoulder. Her quiver of arrows had left a bruise there. Maybe if she didn't keep it there for weeks at a time without taking it off...ah, well. Too late now. She glanced around and smiled at the other occupants of the spring.
"Ano, hi!" she said cheerfully. "I'm new here."
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 11:07 am
Sakura Ai's day dreaming came to an utter end when she heard a voice of a new student. Ah, she remembered what it was like to be new, you don't know anyone plus new students were always shy, that was how Sakura Ai was, she was a shy girl..but she still looked like that same shy girl. A forceful smile was planted on her face as her gaze went to the new girl, for some odd reason, she felt stupid at the moment.
"Hello..i'm sorry but i can't stay long i was on my way out..but if we do cross in each other's paths, at least you'll know my name is Sakura Ai" she said, she stood up tieing the towel that was around her in a tight knot. Slowly, she stretched her arms out in the sun with a gleeful smile. She hastely made her way out of the spring, her long lavender hair wet and sticking on her cheeks and the back of her neck. Before entering the girls changing rooms she looked over her shoulder to the new girl that came in.
"I hope i'll met you again soon..then we can be properly introduced" Sakura Ai said with a flawless smile but it was slightly different from that smile she kept hidden from all her friends, even her sister and her brothers. With a friendly salute she walked into the girls cahnging room and made haste as she changed back into a black skirt and a white tank with black lace on the rear ends of the tank. Then she placed her arms in the arm holes of her long black cloak. Though, by the way she dresses her self you'll think that she was a loner a person whom doesn't like the company of others but that wasn't true. She loves being with a group, but at the moment she had a lot going in her head.
She placed her hands in the cloaks pockets and looked up into the sky, like she longed to go back to her home..Heaven. Her face looked painless but her eyes told a neverending story..her eyes were telling the nature that she was afriad to find out if she told...
Its a strange feeling..very strange indeed.. was a simple thought she was thinking at the time, making way towards a building in Ria.
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 2:35 pm
Katarina smiled. At least some people here were friendly. She examined the ends of her fingers and grinned sheepishly. The first three fingers on her right hand and the palm of her left hand were heavily calloused from her bow. She rubbed hard at the skin under the water and continued a conversation, hoping someone would take some interest.
"Mou, my hands hurt now! Do any of the rest of you like archery? I like archery. I've had a bow since I was...well...as long as I can remember. What about you?"
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Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 9:03 pm
**Tip from SaKuRaBaBy** When dealing with quotes, there is a format that you must follow on this site and in English grammer. Using the quote you used.Quote: " I've been here for to long." she mumbled now rubbing her upper arms with her pruny hands. It should be written as. "I've been here too long," she mumbled blah blah blah. OR! She sighed blah blah. "quote." Also, please check your spelling. tone -> tune; huvverd -> hovered; eccoed -> echoed; contiued -> continued.Hoshiko sat in the steamy water as she started to hum a low tone. Her shoulders hung low and and her eyes remain closed. The sound huvverd over the water and eccoed back to her. " I've been here for to long." she mumbled now rubbing her upper arms with her pruny hands. She contiued to hum, now a different tune waiting for something to happen.
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 6:41 am
Poppy had brought a metal pot and filled it with the steaming with heat Hotspring water. She then summoned two turtles. She wrapped a string around the shell as the turtle just "mew..mew.." the string was attached to a fishing poll as she slowly dropped the turtle towards the pot. "Poppy hungry!Sorry Mr.Turtle!!"
When Poppy was about to drop the turtle into its doomed steamy death,Bloom came running towards Poppy,holding a piece of appaer. "Convict foudn!He actually near Ria high!! In a city called Illian,street Yorkville,building number 1234,room 45."
Poppy looked up,and put the turtle down,who wiggeled out of the string and flew away."mew!!Mew!!" Poppy looked at the paper. "yay!"
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 11:12 pm
Mitsukoshi slipped into the boy's side of the spring. "Finally, a chance to relax,"Talking to himself. Quietly, Mitsukoshi watched his little ducks waddle around him in the water.
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:15 pm
Darius walked into the changing area of the hot springs and changed into a bathing suit. He really wanted a bit of relaxation.
"Well time to head on out then," he said to himself.
Darius walked out and, in true Darius fasion, tripped and fell into the hot spring with a splash.
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 2:30 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 5:12 pm
Darius poked his head out of the water and spat out a small fountain of water form his mouth. He smiled.
"Oh well I'll have to get better at staying semi on my feet."
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:22 am
Poppy walked in,a towl wrapped around her hourglass curved body,her hand around someone wrist. That someone was Poppys newest andriod.She had fair skin like Poppys,with brown,gold eyes,depending on the lighting. Her silver hair was so long,that it actually dropepd to the ground,and made a large pile. Poppy had made her a pink dress,with a corset top,and a long ruffeled trailing down the side,it opened at the front to show her legs. "Now you can take off your dress and lets go into the hotspring!!" She giggled then dove right in,making a loud splash. The andriod,named Louisie,tilted her head,then stepped out of the dress,and followed suit. Amazingly she didn't shoot otu sparks when she hit the water,she was waterproof. Poppy smiled cheerfully. "Can Louisie say hotpsring?" " "H-ot..s-sspri-ng!!HotSpring!!" Louisie clapped her hands with delight having said her 10th word. The rest were Poppy,Suu,Bloom,food,tree,andriod,Louisie,dress,look,and now Hotspring. Poppy smiled again,Louisie was very cute,and it actually made her jelouse of how beautiful looking Louisie was. dress Louisie was wearing.
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 6:03 pm
-It was Sienna's first time visiting the hot springs, as she was still getting used to things around Ria. A few girls were talking about it in her last class and it seemed a cool place to check out. She walked in, a towel wrapped around her petite frame. She glanced around nervously, seeing many unfamiliar faces. Then again, she was new... every face was unfamiliar.-
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