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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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 Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 5:09 pm
Rofl Fish taking Altae into his room the way he's doing things seems a bit pervy
I've got something to show you little girl ;3
in my room it is
come and see my enormous FISHY p***s
HOSHIT
wait no Enormous Mirror to the afterlife.
that's what I meant.
I always get that mixed up
Fishy p***s...
Mirror to the afterlife
it's an easy mistake to make.
ALSO
Altae has been in Fish's room before?
holy s**t, SUGGESTED FLING?!
MAYBE SHE'S ALREADY SEEN THAT FISHY p***s AFTER ALL?!
Quote: “I take it you wanted to show me this mirror, then?” she questioned walking over to it almost instantly. “Yeah, how did you know?” Fish asked her. “Well, that’s really the only new thing in here.” She told him, giving them whole room a quick look with a small grin, “So… what is so special in this mirror?”
omg
Fish seckz
with altae
Yeah.. Okay moving onward awesome chapterzzzzz so far and as expected, I need more explosions though. >> xd
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:34 pm
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] Rofl Fish taking Altae into his room the way he's doing things seems a bit pervy
I've got something to show you little girl ;3
in my room it is
come and see my enormous FISHY p***s
HOSHIT
wait no Enormous Mirror to the afterlife.
that's what I meant.
I always get that mixed up
Fishy p***s...
Mirror to the afterlife
it's an easy mistake to make.
ALSO
Altae has been in Fish's room before?
holy s**t, SUGGESTED FLING?!
MAYBE SHE'S ALREADY SEEN THAT FISHY p***s AFTER ALL?!
Quote: “I take it you wanted to show me this mirror, then?” she questioned walking over to it almost instantly. “Yeah, how did you know?” Fish asked her. “Well, that’s really the only new thing in here.” She told him, giving them whole room a quick look with a small grin, “So… what is so special in this mirror?”
omg
Fish seckz
with altae
Yeah.. Okay moving onward awesome chapterzzzzz so far and as expected, I need more explosions though. >> xd
My mind too thought these same things as I read. Just in a slightly less british way. xd
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 7:09 am
Ok in chapter 6 this line
In silence he quickly made his way down the long, boring hall until he stopped in front of the cafeteria.The seen before him captivated him, everyone in a joyous mood, laughing and cheering as they ate merrily.
The word which is misspelt is seen I think you meant scene.It's ok I do things like that to . 3nodding
There have been a few others but I have been at work today and can't be bother to go through it .
Anyways I enjoyed reading the new chapter, I have no idea about spelling this time my brain is dead. I loved it though.
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 11:27 am
@Draken - That's the first thing that came to mind too when I was writing it rofl
@Godstone - Ah yeah, I see what you are saying my mistake. Glad you liked the new chapter as well.
You all can expect a new chapter pretty soon.
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 11:28 am
So has Fish been taking Altae to his room? =o
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 11:29 am
I guess you'll just have to wait and see. nope
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 11:34 am
Seaphron I guess you'll just have to wait and see. nope Oh man. xd
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 10:40 pm
Who has red hair besides Bodewyn?
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:03 pm
I would like to apologize to the Cult for not updating In the Next LIfe recently. My last two weeks have been quite busy, not to mention a case of writers block. But I am not here to make excuses ( xd Go figure) I would just like to say that I am feeling the itch to start writing and you might be seeing chapter eight quite soon. My Apologies. --Seaphron
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:04 pm
You don't need to apologize. I haven't even worked on Memoirs of Masamune in weeks. xd
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:29 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 5:30 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:13 pm
Uneditted Chapter Eight Added, hope you all enjoyed that secret message from before wink
Seeing as I pretty much have this planned out. I am decididing on future works in the Cult. Which sounds better to you Culties, a redone Cult Team Go! or a completly different story (Koosei/Michalia would be the main character/More details to come)
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:18 am
Good chapter Seaphron, even if un edited, I dont care about Grammar so much so yeah... anyway that was an interesting way to introduce Meta Ducky, and what a shocker Mauls getting it again xd Great chapter.
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 8:06 am
Interesting chapter, loved it. 3nodding
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