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 Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:31 pm
aurora strech and got up from her chair "i ask she in the morning then dad.. im tired myself" she said yawning and walked to the new guy "hi my name is aurora... but im going to sleep now so.. i see you around" she said yawning so much she went to her room and fullen asleep
((good night i am getting tired .. see you soon))
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:32 pm
" louie looks at the man or vampire before him ill follow you lead the way louie says"
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:33 pm
"I'll lead the way in a moment." Shadow said to Louie. "Alright, good night, princess." Shadow asked Aurora as she left. "Alright now then louie, I'll show you to a room." Shadow said as he stood.
((edit))
((Dude "" go around what you say not your actions as well.))
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:33 pm
"louie bow goodnight miss aurora and stand back up "
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:36 pm
"louie look kinda shocked "
louie "says to himself a princess "?!
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:38 pm
Knight followed her departure out of the room, letting out a little sigh. He hadn't forgiven her, only because there was nothing she had done wrong, however, it seemed to him that he wasn't forgiven by her. Slowly, and sulkily, Knight begun to eat through the meat, deciding to make his presence more known to the newcomer as soon as he had finished eating.
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:39 pm
((ok, you obviously have miss read the rules. put "" aroudn what your character says, put nothing around your characters action.))
Shadow walked out of the dinning room and gestrued for Louie to follow. "Follow me." Shadow said as he started to walk down the main hall.
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:39 pm
louie "mouth just drops open "
louie "qucikly close his mouth back again and sallwos hard "
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:41 pm
louie nods
louie "qucikly pick up his bags and follows him"
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:41 pm
((Take a look at my posts, use them as a guid line. I don't see how hard this concept could possibly be to get across. Frfom what I just seen there your character has just spoken the words 'Mouth just drops open' Also use the edit button if you are going to add anything, postign so fast makes things look bad.))
Shadow lead the way to the second floor and Showed Louie and enpty room. "This should be suitable for you. Have a nice time with us." Shadow said as he walked back towards the stairs.
((edit))
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:44 pm
[Or just do as we do. Both are simple, mind you I know how long it took me to adjust to roleplaying years ago when I begun.]
Knight retreated from his half eaten meal, unable to eat any more. His throat was burning like the fire that had burnt him. He begun to sniff so he could pick up their trail, and begun to track them to where they were, slowly limping each step of the way. He would further his attempt to eat, and either retreat to the library afterwards, or move to his own room. Being stuck in such a form wouldn't limit him. He wouldn't allow it.
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:44 pm
{looks im not trying to be diffacult but im not been in a gulid on here before } {what im getting is that you put the "" around what you say or is it what your action is }
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:46 pm
((I have said this twice already. "" gose aroudn what you say, put nothing around your actions. I am just trying to help you out by the way, what i am saying is not ment to be crule or anything along those lines.))
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:48 pm
Tyrn miraged into the kitchen and opened the fridge. He put the files on the table and pulled out a pitcher of blood. He poured himself a glass and then sat down and started reading the files. He had been in the mortal hall of ascension for the past few hours reading up on known enemies. He couldnt find much because no one really knew about them and the files they had was only on the history. He continued to read as he drank from his glass.
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:50 pm
[An easy way to go about it would be to imagine you were writing a book. You use the same style and methods, just now other people are alongside you writing it too. It's a nice way to remember, and an eye friendly way to go too.]
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