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 Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:54 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:54 am
She lay down on the grass,
Looking up at the sky,
thinking, it’s all she can do.
If she disappeared she would not be missed.
She will be gone just like everyone else.
Getting up from the grass,
she walks on the sand,
looking outward towards the sea.
She walks into the water high up above her knees.
~~~♥~~~♥ Narc Lit ♥~~~♥~~~
Oh.. Yaya found it!! Hehe.. I think they're really cute!! <3 I especially love the nerd.. but I love freaks and geeks [the movie too..] so, it's explanatory.. that and it reminds me of Elliot from Scrubs... XD
Edit: I'm not going to tell you anything about changing it. Because it's your opinion and if you truly believe that they do/don't match, then it's your option to change or not. That and this is a competition, if I give one person advice then everyone will take the advice and change it, even if I am one who is competing...
~~~♥~~~♥ Narc Lit ♥~~~♥~~~
The waves softly hit her legs.
She looks at the sunset and its yellow-red hues
she walks into the sea, farther and farther,
opening her arms towards the wave.
The water is high up to her hips.
The wave comes towards her.
She looks at the wave with her arms stretched out;
the water starts to rage, the wave hits her body hard.
Then the water calms down. The water recedes,
then darkness falls, and all goes dark.
The sun goes down and the day is done.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:58 am
Bunny:  Monster:  EDIT: Finished la nerd! Nerd: 
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:59 am
Narcissistic Literature She lay down on the grass,
Looking up at the sky,
thinking, it’s all she can do.
If she disappeared she would not be missed.
She will be gone just like everyone else.
Getting up from the grass,
she walks on the sand,
looking outward towards the sea.
She walks into the water high up above her knees.
~~~♥~~~♥ Narc Lit ♥~~~♥~~~
Oh.. Yaya found it!! Hehe.. I think they're really cute!! <3 I especially love the nerd.. but I love freaks and geeks [the movie too..] so, it's explanatory.. that and it reminds me of Elliot from Scrubs... XD
Edit: I'm not going to tell you anything about changing it. Because it's your opinion and if you truly believe that they do/don't match, then it's your option to change or not. That and this is a competition, if I give one person advice then everyone will take the advice and change it, even if I am one who is competing...
~~~♥~~~♥ Narc Lit ♥~~~♥~~~
The waves softly hit her legs.
She looks at the sunset and its yellow-red hues
she walks into the sea, farther and farther,
opening her arms towards the wave.
The water is high up to her hips.
The wave comes towards her.
She looks at the wave with her arms stretched out;
the water starts to rage, the wave hits her body hard.
Then the water calms down. The water recedes,
then darkness falls, and all goes dark.
The sun goes down and the day is done.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:59 am
Narc - If it wouldn't be too much trouble, can you check mine out as well =X. Last post on page two. I'm very narb when it comes to tektek. sweatdrop I think I need to redo my geek xD.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:03 pm
Onesinglereason Onesinglereason Tektek isn't working right for me :/ I can only see the image if I save it, very irritating. Is this normal or? xD Well ?
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:04 pm
Onesinglereason Onesinglereason Onesinglereason Tektek isn't working right for me :/ I can only see the image if I save it, very irritating. Is this normal or? xD Well ? It's probably lagging, or being worked on. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:05 pm
finally finished all three! heart
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:05 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:09 pm
Pailzor Ack! Posts are too long for quoting! gonk
About the underlined part: I'd gotten a message from some random guild member sometime in my first week in the guild, saying something like that about me...
I've actually become part of the crew for it. xd
But yeah, don't worry. It is really helpful. 3nodding 3nodding
And I'm gonna go back to bed and try to actually get to sleep this time.....
Later. She lay down on the grass,
Looking up at the sky,
thinking, it’s all she can do.
If she disappeared she would not be missed.
She will be gone just like everyone else.
Getting up from the grass,
she walks on the sand,
looking outward towards the sea.
She walks into the water high up above her knees.
~~~♥~~~♥ Narc Lit ♥~~~♥~~~
gonk It's because of my poem.. But I don't really want to change it... because I lovesh my poem.
This is the first time it's been okay... Heh.. I think people have yelled at me before, in threads, not within this guild, for god-modding like that etc... Actually in TWF, a Harry Potter RPG forum I was an Avatar Maker and I kind of had too much extra time and I tend to try help but people eventually think I'm being a "smart alek" for trying to help with/inform them of everything. =3 Because no one can see my emotions online you never know what to think about my "helpfulness"
Nighty night. I'll be going to bed myself in one or two hours..
~~~♥~~~♥ Narc Lit ♥~~~♥~~~
The waves softly hit her legs.
She looks at the sunset and its yellow-red hues
she walks into the sea, farther and farther,
opening her arms towards the wave.
The water is high up to her hips.
The wave comes towards her.
She looks at the wave with her arms stretched out;
the water starts to rage, the wave hits her body hard.
Then the water calms down. The water recedes,
then darkness falls, and all goes dark.
The sun goes down and the day is done.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:12 pm
Onesinglereason Onesinglereason Onesinglereason Tektek isn't working right for me :/ I can only see the image if I save it, very irritating. Is this normal or? xD Well ? She lay down on the grass,
Looking up at the sky,
thinking, it’s all she can do.
If she disappeared she would not be missed.
She will be gone just like everyone else.
Getting up from the grass,
she walks on the sand,
looking outward towards the sea.
She walks into the water high up above her knees.
~~~♥~~~♥ Narc Lit ♥~~~♥~~~
What kind of internet do you have?
It could be because a lot of people are tekteking... It's a very active time of day in the AT forums and this guild's competition..
Keep trying.. I don't know when midnight PST is... and since Gaia doesn't go by any certain time, you'll just have to find out... I always try googling... but I never succeed.
~~~♥~~~♥ Narc Lit ♥~~~♥~~~
The waves softly hit her legs.
She looks at the sunset and its yellow-red hues
she walks into the sea, farther and farther,
opening her arms towards the wave.
The water is high up to her hips.
The wave comes towards her.
She looks at the wave with her arms stretched out;
the water starts to rage, the wave hits her body hard.
Then the water calms down. The water recedes,
then darkness falls, and all goes dark.
The sun goes down and the day is done.
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