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 Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:42 pm
NICE WORK! I really liked these two chapters! Great detail and great suspense. I especially like how you worded the scene where you killed the assassin aiming at Daniel! Keep it up Forsaken great job!
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:03 pm
Great chapters FS I like them a lot since I am not being annoyed anymore xd great work
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:33 pm
Chapter 10 online: Sauvie and Maul time!!
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:33 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Chapter 10 online: Sauvie and Maul time!! oh s**t stare
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:36 pm
It isn't that bad Sauvie. I thoroughly enjoyed it Forsaken 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:38 pm
Seaphron It isn't that bad Sauvie. I thoroughly enjoyed it Forsaken 3nodding I know, it is really good, I only said that because of my role and Mauls reletive insanity but what do ya know I was good in that chapter mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:39 pm
Wow. Those two must've been incredibly drunk. A chicken on his head? XD
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:40 pm
Sauvie Seaphron It isn't that bad Sauvie. I thoroughly enjoyed it Forsaken 3nodding I know, it is really good, I only said that because of my role and Mauls reletive insanity but what do ya know I was good in that chapter mrgreen I know I just said it to spark conversation XD
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:42 pm
Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron It isn't that bad Sauvie. I thoroughly enjoyed it Forsaken 3nodding I know, it is really good, I only said that because of my role and Mauls reletive insanity but what do ya know I was good in that chapter mrgreen I know I just said it to spark conversation XD oh cool I actually really enjoyed that chapter, I dont know why but I like dialogue more than action most of the time
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:43 pm
Lavableman Wow. Those two must've been incredibly drunk. A chicken on his head? XD Well actually there were a few spelling mistakes in the chapter. I should have written "cocaine" instead of "scotch" xd . @Sauvie: Yeah, you were a nice guy in this chapter. If you look back at the other chapters, you weren't bad really, most of the time you just got stuck with Drakam etc.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:43 pm
Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron It isn't that bad Sauvie. I thoroughly enjoyed it Forsaken 3nodding I know, it is really good, I only said that because of my role and Mauls reletive insanity but what do ya know I was good in that chapter mrgreen I know I just said it to spark conversation XD oh cool I actually really enjoyed that chapter, I dont know why but I like dialogue more than action most of the time Yeah I know what you mean.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:43 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Lavableman Wow. Those two must've been incredibly drunk. A chicken on his head? XD Well actually there were a few spelling mistakes in the chapter. I should have written "cocaine" instead of "scotch" xd . @Sauvie: Yeah, you were a nice guy in this chapter. If you look back at the other chapters, you weren't bad really, most of the time you just got stuck with Drakam etc. I have said it before and I will say it again Damn Spork Ninja
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:44 pm
Sauvie Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron It isn't that bad Sauvie. I thoroughly enjoyed it Forsaken 3nodding I know, it is really good, I only said that because of my role and Mauls reletive insanity but what do ya know I was good in that chapter mrgreen I know I just said it to spark conversation XD oh cool I actually really enjoyed that chapter, I dont know why but I like dialogue more than action most of the time I'm actually quite proud of my dialogue. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:45 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Lavableman Wow. Those two must've been incredibly drunk. A chicken on his head? XD Well actually there were a few spelling mistakes in the chapter. I should have written "cocaine" instead of "scotch" xd . They should've had Masamune with them to see if anyone drugged the scotch. xd
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:45 pm
Assassin. ninja Too bad I'm dead though. And... bulky... apparently.....
And now, Maul and Sauvie are drunk rofl
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