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 Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 5:29 pm
I can't wait for chapter 10.
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:10 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:44 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:44 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 8:05 pm
I recognise this series of 'fourthing' from another thread. ninja xd
FIFTHED-ED.
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 2:49 am
Yeah and that ended in explosive nuts >=O
SIXTHED
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 4:28 am
Sorry it is taking so long sweatdrop , I get my computer out today so I will hopefully be able to get more chapters out more quickly for you. As for chapter 10 I have to retype it because the ******** technologist noticed it wasn't a school file and deleted my first one. The upside to this is i have quite a few chapters handwritten so it won't take to long to type them all out. Wow what does that remind me of? Funky Monkey Bill Why can't you write it on your mom's computer? Do you have to share it or something? You could always write it by hand, scan it and send it to me, I'll type it for you. I can type pretty fast, at least the fastest in my class in a Tech high school. Lol, Microsoft word does really suck. It's spellcheck and grammar check aren't that good, but works a lot. I am grounded from my mothers computer for doing horrid in chemistry. As for you typing it that would work out if i could get the scanner currently it is in my moms office at her job.
scream scream Damn I am Pissed!
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 7:33 pm
It's good. But I thought that the traitor was discovered a little abruptly. That's not too bad considering he's a crazy lunatic but it's just a kind of writing style. Keep up the good work! biggrin
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:03 pm
Seaphron Sorry it is taking so long sweatdrop , I get my computer out today so I will hopefully be able to get more chapters out more quickly for you. As for chapter 10 I have to retype it because the ******** technologist noticed it wasn't a school file and deleted my first one. The upside to this is i have quite a few chapters handwritten so it won't take to long to type them all out. Wow what does that remind me of? Funky Monkey Bill Why can't you write it on your mom's computer? Do you have to share it or something? You could always write it by hand, scan it and send it to me, I'll type it for you. I can type pretty fast, at least the fastest in my class in a Tech high school. Lol, Microsoft word does really suck. It's spellcheck and grammar check aren't that good, but works a lot. I am grounded from my mothers computer for doing horrid in chemistry. As for you typing it that would work out if i could get the scanner currently it is in my moms office at her job.
scream scream Damn I am Pissed!
Yeah, just send them to me anytime and I'll try my best to get them typed up as soon as I can if that's what you choose. I'd love to help out in such a great story.
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:35 pm
Chapter 10 Added - Sorry it has taken so long, and sorry it isn't that long.
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:44 pm
Isn't Adeline that painter in Kirby 64:Crystal Shards?
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:51 pm
Yup he is the guy who's paintings come to life.
Hence where my idea came from, Funny enough Teleghost asked me about this to a few days ago.
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:54 pm
Seaphron Yup he is the guy who's paintings come to life.
Hence where my idea came from, Funny enough Teleghost asked me about this to a few days ago. He was my favourite character in that game.
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:59 pm
Lavableman He was my favourite character in that game. Same here.
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Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 11:12 pm
Kudos on the Adeline reference, that's actually who first came to mind when you mentioned that Forsaken's ability ran in the family. I get to help with the interrogations, huh? This'll be fun, and they would have been even more so if I hadn't sold my demon arm. I'll have to buy that back.... but I digress, nice addition Seaphron 3nodding
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