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 Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:19 pm
After a few minutes and a few minutes of concentration, the wings began to flap repeatedly as Makura continued to manipulate the chakra. At this, the wings would beat rapidly and then slowly consistantly as Makura tested them out. The old man nodded as he saw a drastic improvement in the child. Continuing this movement, the child would then flap one wing at a time in order to get a feel of how to make them move more accurately.
"This is fairly easy..."
Makura felt quite confident in his abilities. It was simple when the person possesed the sharingan. The child knew that one day he will become a great shinobi...and these eyes will lead him there. He turned his head to face the old man who then took a few steps backwards as he calmly spoke.
"Good...Now lets try making them create a barrier over your body."
{5/6}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:27 pm
Makura would only smirk. The technique was very simple and would take little work to accomplish. But he must show this old man this as well. Without a second thought, Makura would leap backwards as to not hit the old man with his large wings. At this, Makura would lower his body to the ground and let the wings cave in on his body. The wings moved over his body, performing a complete barrier from all physical attacks and perhaps most ninjutsu. The technique was quite useful, but Makura had quite a few defensive techniques.
"Also with this technique you can use the wings to attack at an opponent."
Makura would find himself dumbfounded.
So it is both offensive and defensive...interesting...
The child would smirk, lifting his body from the ground and letting the wings disperse in a small explosion of rainbow chakra.
[Scatter]
{6/6}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:45 pm
"Now that you've gotton that, I will show you how to make these wings fly...it will be very fun."
The old man smiled as he turned to face Makura. Suddenly the wings extended from the old mans back and almost startled Makura. Taking a few steps back, Makura continued to watch the old man, letting his sharingan tomoe spin rapidly as time progressed. He was immediatly copying the technique with no problem, the same thing that he had done for quite some time.
"Now...in order to fly, you must change the shape of the wings...they must be more defined and controled than ever before."
The old man decided to end his words and show the lad exactly how flight was to take place.
[Flight]
{1/8}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:49 pm
The old man smirked as he swiftly jumped back only to gain momentum. As he landed to the ground he would leap into the air once again, still moving backwards as his peacock feathers swiftly took the form of what appeared to be dragon fly wings. They extended outwards from his back and to either side of his body. With one swift beating of the wings, the old man lifted higher into the air as if he were being carried on the wind. The wings slowly continued their beating motion as the man continued to levitate a few feet above the ground.
"Now...I'll let you leave this place unless you can touch my wing..."
Makura's pupils dialated as he heard to offer the old man made. At first, he thought he was crazy, but this was probably a gag to get Makura to start flying.
{2/8}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:53 pm
Makura smirked and shifted his body wieght to his right side while folding his arms across his chest. The cloak that Makura wore continued to blow in the wind as he looked at the man fly about in the air. He arched his body backwards and performed a few flips in the air as he laughed at Makura.
"Show off..."
The child would then produce his wings once again and begin to let them flap about wildly. Though all he did was lift a few inches from the ground. Makura then leaped as he continued to beat his peacock feathers in order to fly again, but to no avail. The child quickly grew annoyed...and the old man's laughter wasn't helping even the slightest.
{3/8}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 1:56 pm
Still growing more and more furious, the child's eyes narrowed as he leaped into the air. He let his wings beat rapidly to let himself stay in the air, but to no avail. As his wings continued to flap wildly as if he were a dying bird, the child slowly decended to the ground.
What am I doing wrong...?
The child looked puzzled and then turned to face the old man who continued to mock him by flapping his wings wildly and pretending to fall to the ground. Makura took little interest in this as he wanted to stay focused on the task at hand.
{4/8}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 2:03 pm
Continuing to focus his rainbow chakra, the child began to swell with chakra. His entire body glew in the chakra yet again as he continued to focus this energy. The child wanted to fly, though he did not know how. He continued to apply this energy to his wings, letting but one of them turn into the dragon fly wing that the old man wanted Makura to do. At this, Makura leaped into the air and flapped his wings. At this, he began to fly slightly but soon landed onto the ground.
Almost...
"You need to have both wings look like a dragon fly, not just one. You won't be able to even leave the ground at this rate..."
{5/8}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 2:08 pm
The old man would laugh as he came to the ground. At this, the wings disperse back into his back, he was getting rather tired...and it was almost morning at this time. Yawning and stretching his arms into the heavens, the old man would wander towards a large boulder and began to rest his eyes. After all this time training, the old man wrinkles finally seemed relaxed.
Smirking, the child continued to manipulate the charka. He had to finish this training and now. For he knew that he needed to become stronger and by any means. At this, the child continued to let the rainbow chakra surge throughout his body, continuing his focus.
{6/8}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 2:18 pm
The old man would open but one eye to see the child's progress one last time before falling to sleep. Makura continued to let the chakra flow through his body. He turned to face his wings to see any changes in their shape, but there was not even a single feather of change. After seeing this, the old man continued to fall into a deep sleep awaitng for the child to complete the jutsu.
"Almost..."
As a large shockwave of energy surged through the child's body, it would knock the old man from the boulder and onto the soft grass below. He swiftly awoken to stare at Makura, who was now begining to glow radiantly. The chakra around Makura took the form of two large dragon fly wings that beated softly, causing Makura to levitate a few inches in the air. Makura smirked, keeping his hands folded at his chest as he watched the old man wake up.
{7/8}
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 2:34 pm
At this, the old man swiftly produced the dragon fly wings and levitated to the skies. Makura nodded at the old mans actions. With this, Makura soared at impressive speeds towards the old man. As Makura came closer, the old man would lift higher into the air, easily dodging Makura's attack.
Makura's sharingan would easily predict the old man's movements. As he came closer to him, Makura span his body around so that his wings colided with the old man's as he soared into the heavens. Makura knicked the old mans foot and send him hurling to the ground.
The man quickly caught his balance and stood on the ground as he dispersed his wings. He was proud of Makura, and a little upset that he didn't get the rest he wanted.
Makura only smiled as he decended to the ground.
"So simple.."
{8/8}
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 8:39 am
As Shokan disembarked he was greeted by Akahoshi, "So you're here to learn the stars' jutsu's huh?" Shokan nodded and Toji barked. He nodded, "Fine the first technique you must learn is 'Kujaku Myouhou', the basic technique for our village." Shokan nodded, "All right then lets get started!" Akahoshi Shook his head,"It's not that simple, you must meditate with the meteorite." Shokan looked at him confused. "Follow me" He continued. The walk was a quiet one. Shokan had put Toji in his cloak his head and front paws stuck out around Shokans neck and they were both getting kind of jumpy not knowing what to expect from this country, they had never heard of any problems from them, but sence the attack he barely lived through he was alot more cautious.
1/20
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 8:52 am
They had walked a fair distance when they reached a forest, "Come on." Akahoshi said without even turning twoards him and he leapt into the trees. Shokan followed but started to fall behind. "What's taking you so long?" Akahoshi yelled back to him, Shokan sped up to just behind him. "Where are we going?" Shokan asked. "You'll see soon enough." Akahoshi's voice was flat, and Shokan took offence. "You don't have to be so rude." Akahoshi stopped, "I will do as I wish for I am going to show you how to use my villages secret technique, so don't act like a child." Shokan had a shocked look on his face and watched Akahoshi start going through the trees again and Shokan followed.
2/20
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:03 am
As they leapt through the trees Shokan was talking to himself, Toji had to train too, I don't want him to fall like that again As he was talking to himself he nearly bumped into Akahoshi. "We're almost there." Shokan sighed in relief. "Finally!" Akahoshi Held out his hand and hanging from it was a gas mask, he put on one himself. "Why do we need gas masks?" Akahoshi pointed to the canyon, "It's poisinous gas, a gas mask protects you from it." There was a hint of sarcasim in his voice. Shokan now understood he was extremly privlaged to be learning these jutsus. Shokan nodded, "Thank you very much." Shokan put on the mask and waited for instruction, "Wait! What about Toji? Akahoshi sighed, "This may hurt him." He did hand signs and a dog figure appeared from his back and launded Toji to the other side.
3/20
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:11 am
Shokan got angry for a second then forgave him knowing he could be healed if it was bad. "We'll meet him on the other side of the reveene." Akahoshi said calmly, "Lets go." He began to slide down the revine. Shokan nodded and jumped down and slid next to Akahoshi. "I was wondering, why would a ravine of posionus gas be surroudning your village?" Akahoshi sighed, "It's obvious it's for protection. Many of the outside villages don't know about it, thus it protects us from invaders." Shokan nodded and blushed behind the mask, it was obvious he just asked without thinking.
4/20
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:15 am
They sped through the bottom of the ravine. As they climbed the other side they heard Toji barking waiting for them. "We are nearly there down there see that house?" Shokan nodded, "Go there you will meditate there and learn what to do there." Shokan nodded again, "But you're not going to teach me?" Akahoshi sighed, "You must first learn to absorb the power of the meteor. Then I will show you the basic technique. If I show you how to do the technique without you being able to use our charka style, it would be pointless." Shokan understood and began to walk down to the house.
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