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 Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 12:28 pm
Zelyhon That needs major revision. For one thing, your history is *very, very* vague at best. I will give credit for incorporating two locations in, but it needs serious work. Why was he forced down? Who killed them? What did his family do to deserve to live in the Upper City? Stuff like that is needed for a good bio. Furthermore, you need to clarify what you mean by storm magic and you need to fill out demeanor. That needs to be done before I even think about accepting that bio. Rykato: When you update your bio with the suggestions I made or other ones, then let me know so I can give it another look-through. I know that it needs work, I was pressed for time, I planned to come back and fix it up. It really needs it.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 12:34 pm
airsswordsman Zelyhon That needs major revision. For one thing, your history is *very, very* vague at best. I will give credit for incorporating two locations in, but it needs serious work. Why was he forced down? Who killed them? What did his family do to deserve to live in the Upper City? Stuff like that is needed for a good bio. Furthermore, you need to clarify what you mean by storm magic and you need to fill out demeanor. That needs to be done before I even think about accepting that bio. Rykato: When you update your bio with the suggestions I made or other ones, then let me know so I can give it another look-through. I know that it needs work, I was pressed for time, I planned to come back and fix it up. It really needs it. Mmmhmm. If you get a new version, post it here or edit and let me know so I can take another look.
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 3:56 pm
Okay, new emebers updated...
JUST FYI...
I'm going to be gone next week.
Goin' to DISNEYLAND~~~
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 5:49 am
Have fun in Disneyland Lelio - kick mikey for me, kay?
Also ; C'moooonnnn Peeeeennnndeeeeennnn *whines* I've been waiting for Adan to respond in the lower city for aaaagggggeeessss.... In fact - c'mon everybody. I want some explosions.
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 8:51 am
Galexia Have fun in Disneyland Lelio - kick mikey for me, kay? Also ; C'moooonnnn Peeeeennnndeeeeennnn *whines* I've been waiting for Adan to respond in the lower city for aaaagggggeeessss.... In fact - c'mon everybody. I want some explosions. Hey dont look at me, I'm waiting on you razz
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 1:48 pm
Zelyhon Mmmhmm. If you get a new version, post it here or edit and let me know so I can take another look. Name: Trailind Age: 22 Hair: Long black and greasy Eyes: bright emerald green, he wears bronze rimmed glasses Height: 5' 11'' Wearing: A thin green cloak and some brownish rags Carrying: Several daggers attatched to a rope belt Magic: Trailind has elemental control over the air, he can move it, compress it.Therefore he can make winds, pull the air out of someone's body (with much effort) and compress air into a solid object. Active or Passive: Active Demeanor: Arrogant, he never lets himself believe others can win History: Once lived in the upper city due to his parents' information, with which they blackmailed the council,but his parents were killed before they could tell him, he vowed revenge on their murderers, and was forced down into the lower city. He has spent years researching his past ot find his parent's killers. He has acquired a large mass of information about the city, and its areas. Or so he thinks. He has become paranoid that the council is after him, and believes that everyone is for them. He has no wish to destroy the council. Only to regain his former status. He carries daggers with him at all times, Allegiance: Unafilliated ((is this good enough?))
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 8:20 pm
Kai Karasurei Hey dont look at me, I'm waiting on you razz Yeah, I know, and that's mostly why I'm in such rush, really. xd BTW; this is my favorite emoticon xd xd xd EDIT: Ooh, Penden replied. Goody whee
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 8:15 am
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:23 am
Sorry, my life's been a little crazy the last week or two, with job assignments being given and ended and trying to get a loan. Hanse is almost ready to be posted.
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 10:38 am
Finals for me. I just finished, so expect Iahhel to appear relatively soon.
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 6:30 am
somewhat of a writers block ;_; but I'm slowly getting over it.
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 7:04 am
*crosses his legs and waits*
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Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2004 1:26 pm
I'm just waiting for True to finish his post in the AU HQ...
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Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2004 5:52 pm
Name: Ryan
Age: 19
Hair: his hair is rather short and spiked with wax and dyed green.
Eyes: Ryans eyes are a strange deep purple with no irisis.
Height:Ryan is about 5"4
Other physical features: he has a lean but well muscled frame with a gold ring in his right ear with two dimonds and three emrealds to mark his status, he also wears a necklace with a silver tooth on it.
Wearing:Ryan wears very light leather armor with black baggy pants, he also wears a long brown slightly weatherd hooded cloak and a single leather fingerless glove on his right hand with a bright gold disc in the middle of the back and also light boots.
Carrying:paper
Magic: Ryan uses paper to make oragomi then he can bring these things to life but this power has little offensive use and he keeps very underwraps. He uses his power mostly to amuse children with small paper birds and animals.
Active or Passive: Passive
Demeanor: he is quite distent, kind and protective.
History:When he was young Ryan was drafted into service for the counsel where he was trained to be a private guard for high ranking counsil members and was shelterd from the realites of the city he lived in seeing the council as only benevolent leaders. But when confronted with the reality of what was going on with the council Ryan stole away in the night looking for a group of reabels he had heard of from his former master and he thought he might have a thing or two to share...
Allegiance: unalligned
Job within group:none
Other details:the disc that Ryan carried is a shield that is crafted from magic that enlarges and can take of many shapes its the weapon given to those who serve as personal guards.
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 11:57 pm
All fear the noob! I have not RP'ed in *blinks* centuries. Yes, "centuries" sounds right. Sorry for joining late, but here is my profile. I obviously have to go and PM Zelyhon now about the whole council stuff. That is, if everyone finds my bio acceptable. I'm afraid it is rather too "prose-like" for RPing, but I'll leave the judging up to you guys. That, and I wonder if it is too late to insert myself into the council. Then again, the thread for the council looks rather empty, and I'd love to fill it with my diabolical character. Muwhahaha.
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Name: Niousa Katastrefo (first word is Greek for "mind", second is "destroy"). Also known as "The Subtle Destroyer"
Age: 31
Hair: Dark Red, of an extremely dark crimson (almost black) worn in a shoulder-length bob. Casually worn free, but during meeting in council, it is drawn up into a messy bun low on the back of her head
Eyes: Deep green, originating as a forest green at the pupils and slowly gradating out to a dark emerald which can be mistaken for black.
Height: 4'8''
Other physical features: An abundance of freckles consumes her features. Her hair is its natural color (she refuses to dye it), and is shorn short only because of its thickness, which usually causes it to become rather bushy if not taken care of. Her figure, matching her height, is extremely petite. She weighs less than 80 pounds, and is physically very weak. Also, her chosen expertise of magic has ravaged her body since her youth, resulting in her present diminutive stature. Pale, she always appears at the verge of collapse.
Wearing: Niousa prefers tight clothes for obvious reasons: anything remotely baggy and it appears that she is literally drowning in her apparel. She usually wears straight, formally cut, black pants, and a forest green top. Her tops are always semi-formal (she hates to be mistaken for a child and thus, wears her clothes to maximize her age). Long sleeves are her choice, as she suffers from extreme sensitivity to the elements. Cloaks are a must, and she prefers hers tailored and long, colored black, gray, or brown.
Carrying: Concealed within her cloak, she carries a 6 inch dagger, which she meticulously sharpens every night to a point. The blade has no magical properties, but it was a gift from her brother, Adynato (Greek for "weakness"), so it is of top quality and make of an unknown metal resistant to magical tampering.
Magic (If applicable): Niousa specializes in one type of magic and one type only: that of the mind. Ever since she was a child, she has been able to "read" emotions, those that remain in a location, those that were in a location, and that of the people around her. Her master mistook her for an Empath, until age revealed her as something else: an Influencer Mage. She has the ability to break down barriers carefully constructed within her victim's mind and implant the impulse to do something quite out of character. While only the weakest can she compel to commit such acts as murder or suicide, prolonged exposure to her magic can strengthen its power, and direct contact can have fatal results. Recently, there has been speculation that she also has the ability to break a mind down completely and construct 'slaves' that have no free will of their own. However, these rumors are unconfirmed, as no evidence of her 'slaves' has been found. She is known as a "mind-reader" (although she only truly reads emotions), and a destroyer (for the breaching of man's last refuge, his mind, before one realizes what has happened.) Thus, she earned her nickname, "The Subtle Destroyer". However, her magic comes at a price: her physical well-being. Prolonged use of her gifts has stunted her growth, and extended periods of its use can actually cripple her or render her unconscious. Her powers are almost useless in close combat, so she rarely ventures outside the Upper City and the Council Chambers.
Active or Passive: Active
Demeanor: Quiet and reserved, Niousa would be seem harmless if it was not for the tangible unease anyone feels when within proximity of her. Her eyes have a subtle glint of madness, and her outbursts are limited to fits of laughter, making her first impression upon others that of insanity. However, every move she makes is calculated with utmost certainty. Although she causes those around her to act impulsively, she could hardly be described as spontaneous herself. Thus, her input in the council, while few, is highly valued for its wisdom, thought, and directness. The ends always justify the means, and Niousa will do whatever prolongs her survival. Ruthless, cunning, and cold, she is the perfect lackey. Of course, that is before one discovers exactly who is controlling who.
History: Her current allegiance is dark for one purpose and one purpose only: revenge. Her older brother, Adynato, raised her from a child. She knows nothing of her parents, not even their names. Her brother never mentioned them, and she sensed that asking about them would be unwise. Adynato served simultaneously as her brother, father, mentor, and master. He too was blessed with the gifts of the Empath and Influencer, and taught her nearly everything she knows. Her childhood was spend living off the fortune of her brother, who received his wealth from his "work", which he spends hours doing in the study and out of the house. On her twentieth birthday, Niousa waited up for her brother, only for him to never show. His arrival was heralded early in the morning the next day by a coffin, and a gift that he had intended to give to her the preceding night: her dagger. Horrified, Niousa remained locked in her house, only emerging to purchase food and other needs, for four years. Finally, when it seemed that her insanity had left her, she emerged changed. Gone was the joyful woman, replaced with the cold shell of her former self. In the four years, she had discovered her morbid control of the mind, and the truth of her brother's demise: a high-ranking council member, he was betrayed by one of his "co-workers", a humanist, as an enemy of the Empire, and killed by the Empire's assassins. Vowing revenge, Niousa took her brother's empty post and lives for one purpose only: the extermination of the Arcane Underground. Her only delight is to crush the resistance, and remains openly hostile to all pro-humanists on the council, as well as any other force she deems pro-terrorist
Allegiance (AU, council, Unaffiliated): Council, extreme Imperialist (see history)
Job within group: Council member, also self-appointed torturer of those captured by the Empire; a job that suits her abilities well.
Other details: Human and frail, her only refuge is her mind powers. However, her one fault may be her loyalty: she literally never lies, in an effort to distance herself from her brother's betrayers. Overly vague or overly direct is her style.
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*Nods* Yes! My bio is insanely long! *laughs diabolically* Now all I await is approval so that I can have my character go make a lovely gory mess all over this RP!
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