Belladonna Snow
Domain Request:
Pet: link
Chosen Domain: Darkness
Powers: Travel the Shadows, Shut out the light bubble, dark dimension
Den Link: link
Notes: Suggestion:
Power Name: Travel the shadows of darkness
Power Description: This ability allows you to use shadow to travel. This ability makes travel faster. When you use this ability it like swimming in water. If you go undershadow you will have to hold your breath because you wont be able to breathe. When you are traveling undershadow it will be pitch black except for little holes of light shinning at the top. The holes if light are the other shadow puddles.
Power Limitations: you can use this ability as many times as you want bhtnits limited on hownlong you can hold your breath.
Notes: Suggestion:
Power Name: Shut out the light bubble
Power Description: This ability it to create a bubble that cuts off light and is complete darkness. You can leave to bubble but you would have to find the way out. This bubble can also be used to hold or carry things.
Power Limitations: this ability is based on how big the bubble is.
For a small bubble luke the size to cover one or two doggos will last for a day
For a medium bubble that can cover a tree or a 2 story house will last for 12 hours
A large bubble that can cover a huge company business will last for 6 hours.
Notes: Suggestion:
Power Name: Dark Dimension
Power Description: This ability allows you to enter a dimension of nothing but darkness.
Power Limitations: This ability is only for the user to be able to enter. Other can enter if they want to but they can only exit and enter if the user create the portal holes. There is no limit on how many times they can use it.
Notes: Shadow Travel - No problem with the frequency of usage. It should be limited to distance instead how long they can hold their breath. 100 yards (300 feet) would be the distance we think is reasonable. They can breath while 'diving' into the shadows and can go to any shadow that is within a 100 yard radius. Can only be used on them, cannot be used on others.
Shut out the light bubble - Have no problem with the basic description of creating a bubble that can block out light completely that anyone can enter or leave. The part about using it hold or carry things doesn't make sense for this type of power so we're going to nix that.
As for limitations, there's no need to break it up in small, medium, or large. Just making it so the bubble can go to a maximum size of a 100 foot radius will suffice. The god can choose to go smaller but they cannot go larger than that. As for a time limit at the maximum of 100 foot radius it can last for 4 hours. If the bubble is made smaller it can last for longer the smaller it is up to 24 hours.
Dark Dimension - This one we're really unsure about. The world of Labyrinth is all about different realms connected with a gate or gates for Dwellers to travel through that connect to specific realms. This power is bypassing that while also creating a whole new realm with no known information. It also is really similar to the shadow travel other than allowing someone else to travel with them.
I would suggest instead of this, that it ties in to the first power in allowing the god to bring someone else with them to travel through the shadows. They would need to remain with the god or will be stuck in the shadow until the god helps them out. Thus it would have the same limitations that shadow travel has.
Or if you want you can nix this power for the moment and create a different third power. Then we can work with you for when you earn your next god power for this god to create a realm to be known as the Dark Dimension that this god can create a temporary gate to in order to travel there and back to the previous realm they were at.
Let us know if you're okay with these changes and they'll be official. Especially let us know on the third power as that's the one we're really unsure about. If you're not okay with any of the changes we can talk it over with you to find an agreeable middle ground.
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