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Imaginary Imbecile

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 22, 2013 4:11 am


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Full Name: Aloise Comedor de los Huesos
Nickname: Al, or Tres

True Age: 4,501
Age Appeared: Early twenties
Birthdate: November 17th
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Spanish-American mixed
Blood Type: AB+

Sexuality: No preference

Height: 66"
Weight: 146lbs.
Eye Color: Turquoise
Hair Color: Pink
Mask Remnant: A slim piece of bone that hangs around her left ear and widens as it flows down and conforms to her jawline. Jagged and broken teeth still hang to the jaw section of her mask remnant.
Hollow Hole Location: In the palm of her left hand

Life View: Aloise views her own life, as well as the lives of other as nothing more than tools, or at least so she expresses. In reality she holds a soft spot for the life given to other creatures, though hides it behind a mask of indifference. In views of her own life, she struggles between the belief that all beings are created for a purpose and the thought that an arrancar is nothing more than a hollow lucky enough to move up the food chain. With this inner turmoil, she can be easily swayed towards one way of thinking or another.
Personality: For the most part Aloise puts on an air of indifference and apathy, not so much because she has no feelings, but rather she has never been taught to express them. In times when she does show any kind of emotion she does so awkwardly, unsure of what exactly her emotions are. Rage and anger are the exception to this, however; these two emotions react strongly and with an almost practiced air when sparked and seem to be the only emotions Aloise is truly familiar with. While she is not quick to anger, her wrath is not to be taken for granted as she will strike without mercy.

Likes:
- Eating bones
- Being in the world of the living
Dislikes
- Wasting anything
- Being griped at
- Feeling unneeded

Aspect of Death: Emptiness
Fraccion: None at the moment
Rank: Tres Espada
Side: { should known }

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬

From the death of a young girl named Aloise Barcelona began the existence of Aloise as a spirit. Her death had been quick and unexpected, leaving many regrets and unfinished business in the girl's abrupt end. As she refused to accept her own death, Aloise miraculously avoided both hollow and shinigami to watch over her still living lover. However, as he made to move on past her death, Aloise's Chain of Fate decayed at an unbelievable rate and finally broke completely as her lover found a new love. Distraught with this revelation combined with her change into a hollow, Aloise hunted both down and devoured them bones and all.
No longer driven by reason, but merely hunger and a grief that she no longer recalls Aloise became a renowned and feared beast as she not only ate vulnerable souls, but other hollows, weaker shinigami, and even a human every now and then were added to her diet. With each new meal, she became more intelligent and able to escape the pursuing shinigami who sought to rid the world of her hunger. While she would sometimes be cornered, she was never caught and even managed to discover a new realm where her only nemesis were other hollows and creatures derived from such.
The longer she stayed in this realm, named Hueco Mundo, and devoured those of her own kind, she could feel herself growing in strength until many years later she became a Gillian. For many centuries she struggled among other hollows that made up the Gillian for control until she finally achieved control and once more began to devour those of her own race without heart or thought. She knew not how long she lived this way, mindlessly devouring her own kind before she achieved a new form, an adjucha.
Her human memories were forgotten upon obtaining her new form and was promptly replaced by only apathy, curiosity, and an unyielding hunger. In this form, Aloise noticed a trend in her appetite, for after devouring whatever poor creature came across her path, she couldn't stop herself from eating their bones as well. With this new discovery she donned the surname "Comedor de Los Huesos" and never once tried to fight these strange impulses, rather she embraced them and traveled between Hueco Mundo and the world of the living frequently, her diet still consisting of fellow hollows, shinigami, and the ocassional human should she manage to get her hands on one.
Aloise did not form any groups with the other adjuchas for safety, but merely devoured all she came across in hopes of finding something more. After a great deal of time this hope was realized; Aloise changed form once more to a Vasto Lorde. Her once ravenous hunger calmed to a more tolerable level, though still plagued Aloise but more as an after thought rather than a necessity. While Aloise was somewhat content in this form, she noticed one day that another of her kind was attempting to tear off its mask, however it seemed the creature did not have enough power to do so. As she became curious of what the other had been trying to achieve, she too began to work at pulling off her mask. She failed the first time, but did not give in and continued to expand her powers until she finally gained new powers from ripping off her mask.
Aloise continued her existence without much difference until she was approached by an arrancar who claimed he was going to devour her and absorb her spiritual powers. The two fought for quite some time until Aloise claimed victory and ate the arrancar, bones and all. Soon after she was offered the position of Tres Espada, as the arrancar she had devoured had been of the rank. She accepted without much conversation and earned not only a respective title, but also fear from weaker arrancars, as they are often afraid that she'll turn and devour them on the spot.


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Reiatsu Color: Pink
Reiryoku Level: Immense

Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Expert Level
• Air Dash: Expert Level
• Sonido: Master Level
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Expert Level
• Jyuuken: Master Level
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Expert Level
• Kendo: Expert Level
Reiryoku Technique:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Expert Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing, Master Level
• Jumping, Master Level

Strengths:
• Close range combat
• Grounded fights
Weaknesses:
• Her curiosity for knowledge
• Long range fighters
Fears:
• Taking the life of an innocent
• Never learning what her emotions are


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo

Zanpakuto Name: Engano
Zanpakuto Location: In a holster hanging below her backside
Zanpakuto Appearance: Engano
Zanpakuto Type: Unclassified


▬▬┤|Resurrección

Resurrección Name: Mentiroso
Resurrección Incantation: "Susurro mi dulce Mentiroso."- Translates to: "Whsiper my sweet Liar."
Resurrección Description: Basic appearance; In addition, she dons a pair of small black, curled horns that sprout from behind her ears and a black, bony tail-like extension from the end of her spine.
Resurrección Ability:
- Aire Fresco: Aloise builds up a toxic gas inside of her lungs and releases it as she breaths. This gas causes fierce hallucinations rather than poisoning whomever breaths it in and only effects those within a ten foot radius of Aloise at the time she uses the attack. After the first initial release of the gas, it dissipates after one minute.
- Huelga Suave: Aloise summons large amounts of reiyoka into her hands and feet and switches immediately to hand-to-hand combat. She preforms series of quick, but not very powerful strikes in an attempt to land a blow on her opponent. Upon hitting her mark, Aloise will release reiyoka into her opponent through the pores in their skin. This reiyoka will tear the surface muscles and fracture the nearest bones of wherever it enters.
- Caido de Dios: Mentiroso becomes encased in a poison that, if left untreated in the body too long, can lead to severe illnesses and in rare cases, death. This poison spreads through the body defendant upon how much the body moves; the more the body moves, the faster the poison spreads.
- Incompleto: Aloise incompletely charges a cero and instead of firing it, ingests the unfired blast. The potential energy from the incomplete cero is broken down and converted into adrenaline to give her body a brief boost in speed and agility.
- Gritar: Aloise gathers reiyoka around her lips and whistles at a very high pitched frequency, causing brief disorientation as long as she continues to whistle. How effective this technique is dependent upon the opponent and can range anywhere from being very effective to hardly effective at all.
- Tiro Desequilibrado: Aloise fills the bullets in her ammo clip with high amounts of reiyoka and fires them from the gun portion of her Zanpakutō. The bullets explode upon hitting anything with an explosion diameter of forty feet. Being a close range fighter, the farther the opponent is from Aloise when she fires, the better their chances of avoiding not only the bullet, but the blast as well.
- Juego Sucio: Aloise allows her opponent to land a few attacks on her before mirroring the attacks back on a slightly smaller scale. This technique is not limited to custom techniques or Zanpakutō specialties and can even mimic kido spells without the incantation.
- Rabia: Aloise places a seal on her opponent and begins to taunt and berate them with the intention of throwing them into a blind rage. Once this is accomplished, the seal will activate and begin to drain the opponents rage, storing it within the seal and leading them towards both confusion and apathy. Aloise will then drain the rage from the seal and use it herself to preform a series of physical attacks.


▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa

Segunda Etapa Name: Portador Verdad
Segunda Etapa Incantation: "Ilumina Los ignorante"- Translates to: "Enlighten the ignorante."
Segunda Etapa Description: Basic appearance; In addition, a single short white, gnarled horn protrudes from her upper forehead and her mask remnant extends back behind her neck down to her shoulder blades with three medium sized spines sticking out along her vertebral column.
Segunda Etapa Ability:
- Curador: In her Segunda Etapa release, Aloise's saliva takes on a new characteristic, a healing sealant. Should a wound not be too large or deep, Aloise can spit into the wound and her saliva will not only seal off the wound to prevent infection, but will slowly begin to heal it should the wounded not put any stress on the area. The healing effects come from reiyoka infused into Aloise's saliva.
- Ilustracion: Aloise sheaths Portador Verdad and switches to hand-to-hand combat. She pours reiyoka into her finger tips and strikes at only chi points, pushing her reiyoka into her opponents chi points to sever their chi networks and potentially slow down their movements. These chi networks can be repaired easily, but burn when cut by Aloise's reiyoka.
- El Beso de un Angel: Once close enough to her target, Aloise will place a kiss to her opponents forehead. From where she kissed a red thumb print will sear itself into the opponents skin as a curse mark. This mark drains and stores small amounts of reiyoka as the opponent uses more and more and will ocassionally heat up as more reiyoka is stored inside it. If Aloise can manage to kiss the mark once more, then she can absorb the reiyoka sealed inside the curse marking.
- Refugio Seguro: To begin using this technique, Aloise must either sheath or in some manner put away her Zanpakutō. Once this is done, Aloise will pull out her shield and pour large amounts of reiyoka into it, causing a light pink field of energy to encompass a twenty foot diameter with her inside. This field can withstand physical attacks, but can only hold up against very few high level kido spells/cero blasts. Alois cannot move around while preforming this technique.

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▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques

▬▬┤|Your List

• Bala
• Cero
• Cero Oscuras [Resurreccion Only]
• Hierro
• Gonzui
• Pesquisa
• Negación
• Garganta
• Gran Ray Cero
• Caja Negación

▬▬┤|Custom Techniques

• None
 
PostPosted: Fri Nov 22, 2013 11:22 am


Imaginary Imbecile
𝓛𝓾𝓼𝓽...𝒫𝓇𝒾𝒹𝓮...𝔇𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔞𝔫𝔠𝔢...

A good profile. Well done. Some technical issues that ought to be addressed are:
The position you are shooting for is actually called "Tercera" meaning Third, not "Tres". I see this often.

There are three terms for spiritual energy: Reiryoku, potential energy or one's inherent power; Reiatsu, kinectic or Active spiritual energy being what is released from the body; and Reishi, spirit particles or particles of spirit energy. If Reiyoka, which happens to not be a work, is supposed to be spirit particles, it should be changed to "reishi".

Honestly, the section about how Aloise attained her rank should be removed. Primarily because it cannot be guaranteed that she may have the position, nor that it would line up will story. Presently, I believe we have someone who's already laid claim to Tercera. However, Cuarta, "Fourth" may be available. Fortunately for you, you are going in on the verge of a 2 Month Time Skip and the beginning of 2 new beautiful Arcs and Ranks are about to be decided. If you are siding with me, your rank will be officially given soon.

Oh, and Tiny Thing: I note no gun or firing apparatus in picture or description. What is she firing to possess an ammo clip for the ability "Tiro Desequilibrado"?




Aside from these little things, I have no issues with this profile and would gladly call it Approved. But I would certainly like to see some of these corrections made before transition into a thread of your own.

((I suggest using ctrl+f to find all instances of reiyoka to change with "reishi" or "reiatsu"))

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Imaginary Imbecile

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 22, 2013 8:36 pm


Oh dang. :/ So many mistakes...
I was in a bit of a rush to get this profile made, seeing as I have limited time between school and family issues, hence the mess up with Tiro Desequilibrado. In my haste I confused Mentiroso for Engano, which is a gun blade. That was all on me, sorry. >.< I went ahead and just removed the technique. If its alright, I would like to leave that technique slot open in case I decide to have Aloise begin dabbling in creating a new technique.
And right before I started on my profile the rank list said that Cuarta was already taken and that Trecera(I've always heard it called Tres) was open. Either way, I'll go wherever is open. c:
And thank you for clarifying the differences between reiyoka, reiatsu, and reishi. I've never really known the true difference between them.
I think I have fixed everything, but if there are still screw ups, please let me know and I will mess around with it some more.


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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Aloise Comedor de los Huesos
Nickname: Al

True Age: 4,501
Age Appeared: Early twenties
Birthdate: November 17th
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Spanish-American mixed
Blood Type: AB+

Sexuality: No preference

Height: 66"
Weight: 146lbs.
Eye Color: Turquoise
Hair Color: Pink
Mask Remnant: A slim piece of bone that hangs around her left ear and widens as it flows down and conforms to her jawline. Jagged and broken teeth still hang to the jaw section of her mask remnant.
Hollow Hole Location: In the palm of her left hand

Life View: Aloise views her own life, as well as the lives of other as nothing more than tools, or at least so she expresses. In reality she holds a soft spot for the life given to other creatures, though hides it behind a mask of indifference. In views of her own life, she struggles between the belief that all beings are created for a purpose and the thought that an arrancar is nothing more than a hollow lucky enough to move up the food chain. With this inner turmoil, she can be easily swayed towards one way of thinking or another.
Personality: For the most part Aloise puts on an air of indifference and apathy, not so much because she has no feelings, but rather she has never been taught to express them. In times when she does show any kind of emotion she does so awkwardly, unsure of what exactly her emotions are. Rage and anger are the exception to this, however; these two emotions react strongly and with an almost practiced air when sparked and seem to be the only emotions Aloise is truly familiar with. While she is not quick to anger, her wrath is not to be taken for granted as she will strike without mercy.

Likes:
- Eating bones
- Being in the world of the living
Dislikes
- Wasting anything
- Being griped at
- Feeling unneeded

Aspect of Death: Emptiness
Fraccion: None at the moment
Rank: Cuarta Espada
Side: { should known }

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬

From the death of a young girl named Aloise Barcelona began the existence of Aloise as a spirit. Her death had been quick and unexpected, leaving many regrets and unfinished business in the girl's abrupt end. As she refused to accept her own death, Aloise miraculously avoided both hollow and shinigami to watch over her still living lover. However, as he made to move on past her death, Aloise's Chain of Fate decayed at an unbelievable rate and finally broke completely as her lover found a new love. Distraught with this revelation combined with her change into a hollow, Aloise hunted both down and devoured them bones and all.
No longer driven by reason, but merely hunger and a grief that she no longer recalls Aloise became a renowned and feared beast as she not only ate vulnerable souls, but other hollows, weaker shinigami, and even a human every now and then were added to her diet. With each new meal, she became more intelligent and able to escape the pursuing shinigami who sought to rid the world of her hunger. While she would sometimes be cornered, she was never caught and even managed to discover a new realm where her only nemesis were other hollows and creatures derived from such.
The longer she stayed in this realm, named Hueco Mundo, and devoured those of her own kind, she could feel herself growing in strength until many years later she became a Gillian. For many centuries she struggled among other hollows that made up the Gillian for control until she finally achieved control and once more began to devour those of her own race without heart or thought. She knew not how long she lived this way, mindlessly devouring her own kind before she achieved a new form, an adjucha.
Her human memories were forgotten upon obtaining her new form and was promptly replaced by only apathy, curiosity, and an unyielding hunger. In this form, Aloise noticed a trend in her appetite, for after devouring whatever poor creature came across her path, she couldn't stop herself from eating their bones as well. With this new discovery she donned the surname "Comedor de Los Huesos" and never once tried to fight these strange impulses, rather she embraced them and traveled between Hueco Mundo and the world of the living frequently, her diet still consisting of fellow hollows, shinigami, and the ocassional human should she manage to get her hands on one.
Aloise did not form any groups with the other adjuchas for safety, but merely devoured all she came across in hopes of finding something more. After a great deal of time this hope was realized; Aloise changed form once more to a Vasto Lorde. Her once ravenous hunger calmed to a more tolerable level, though still plagued Aloise but more as an after thought rather than a necessity. While Aloise was somewhat content in this form, she noticed one day that another of her kind was attempting to tear off its mask, however it seemed the creature did not have enough power to do so. As she became curious of what the other had been trying to achieve, she too began to work at pulling off her mask. She failed the first time, but did not give in and continued to expand her powers until she finally gained new powers from ripping off her mask.


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Reiatsu Color: Pink
Reiryoku Level: Immense

Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Expert Level
• Air Dash: Expert Level
• Sonido: Master Level
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Expert Level
• Jyuuken: Master Level
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Expert Level
• Kendo: Expert Level
Reiryoku Technique:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Expert Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing, Master Level
• Jumping, Master Level

Strengths:
• Close range combat
• Grounded fights
Weaknesses:
• Her curiosity for knowledge
• Long range fighters
Fears:
• Taking the life of an innocent
• Never learning what her emotions are


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo

Zanpakuto Name: Engano
Zanpakuto Location: In a holster hanging below her backside
Zanpakuto Appearance: Engano
Zanpakuto Type: Unclassified


▬▬┤|Resurrección

Resurrección Name: Mentiroso
Resurrección Incantation: "Susurro mi dulce Mentiroso."- Translates to: "Whsiper my sweet Liar."
Resurrección Description: Basic appearance; In addition, she dons a pair of small black, curled horns that sprout from behind her ears and a black, bony tail-like extension from the end of her spine.
Resurrección Ability:
- Aire Fresco: Aloise builds up a toxic gas inside of her lungs and releases it as she breaths. This gas causes fierce hallucinations rather than poisoning whomever breaths it in and only effects those within a ten foot radius of Aloise at the time she uses the attack. After the first initial release of the gas, it dissipates after one minute.
- Huelga Suave: Aloise summons large amounts of reiatsu into her hands and feet and switches immediately to hand-to-hand combat. She preforms series of quick, but not very powerful strikes in an attempt to land a blow on her opponent. Upon hitting her mark, Aloise will release reiatsug into her opponent through the pores in their skin. This reiatsu will tear the surface muscles and fracture the nearest bones of wherever it enters.
- Caido de Dios: Mentiroso becomes encased in a poison that, if left untreated in the body too long, can lead to severe illnesses and in rare cases, death. This poison spreads through the body defendant upon how much the body moves; the more the body moves, the faster the poison spreads.
- Incompleto: Aloise incompletely charges a cero and instead of firing it, ingests the unfired blast. The potential energy from the incomplete cero is broken down and converted into adrenaline to give her body a brief boost in speed and agility.
- Gritar: Aloise gathers reiatsu around her lips and whistles at a very high pitched frequency, causing brief disorientation as long as she continues to whistle. How effective this technique is dependent upon the opponent and can range anywhere from being very effective to hardly effective at all.
- Juego Sucio: Aloise allows her opponent to land a few attacks on her before mirroring the attacks back on a slightly smaller scale. This technique is not limited to custom techniques or Zanpakutō specialties and can even mimic kido spells without the incantation.
- Rabia: Aloise places a seal on her opponent and begins to taunt and berate them with the intention of throwing them into a blind rage. Once this is accomplished, the seal will activate and begin to drain the opponents rage, storing it within the seal and leading them towards both confusion and apathy. Aloise will then drain the rage from the seal and use it herself to preform a series of physical attacks.


▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa

Segunda Etapa Name: Portador Verdad
Segunda Etapa Incantation: "Ilumina Los ignorante"- Translates to: "Enlighten the ignorante."
Segunda Etapa Description: Basic appearance; In addition, a single short white, gnarled horn protrudes from her upper forehead and her mask remnant extends back behind her neck down to her shoulder blades with three medium sized spines sticking out along her vertebral column.
Segunda Etapa Ability:
- Curador: In her Segunda Etapa release, Aloise's saliva takes on a new characteristic, a healing sealant. Should a wound not be too large or deep, Aloise can spit into the wound and her saliva will not only seal off the wound to prevent infection, but will slowly begin to heal it should the wounded not put any stress on the area. The healing effects come from reiyoka infused into Aloise's saliva.
- Ilustracion: Aloise sheaths Portador Verdad and switches to hand-to-hand combat. She pours reiatsu into her finger tips and strikes at only chi points, pushing her reiatsu into her opponents chi points to sever their chi networks and potentially slow down their movements. These chi networks can be repaired easily, but burn when cut by Aloise's reiatsu.
- El Beso de un Angel: Once close enough to her target, Aloise will place a kiss to her opponents forehead. From where she kissed a red thumb print will sear itself into the opponents skin as a curse mark. This mark drains and stores small amounts of reiatsu as the opponent uses more and more and will ocassionally heat up as more reiyoka is stored inside it. If Aloise can manage to kiss the mark once more, then she can absorb the reiatsu sealed inside the curse marking.
- Refugio Seguro: To begin using this technique, Aloise must either sheath or in some manner put away her Zanpakutō. Once this is done, Aloise will pull out her shield and pour large amounts of reiatsu into it, causing a light pink field of energy to encompass a twenty foot diameter with her inside. This field can withstand physical attacks, but can only hold up against very few high level kido spells/cero blasts. Alois cannot move around while preforming this technique.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques

▬▬┤|Your List

• Bala
• Cero
• Cero Oscuras [Resurreccion Only]
• Hierro
• Gonzui
• Pesquisa
• Negación
• Garganta
• Gran Ray Cero
• Caja Negación

▬▬┤|Custom Techniques

• None



Prince Caelum Tsukiyo
PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 2:58 pm


Imaginary Imbecile
Oh dang. :/ So many mistakes...
I was in a bit of a rush to get this profile made, seeing as I have limited time between school and family issues, hence the mess up with Tiro Desequilibrado. In my haste I confused Mentiroso for Engano, which is a gun blade. That was all on me, sorry. >.< I went ahead and just removed the technique. If its alright, I would like to leave that technique slot open in case I decide to have Aloise begin dabbling in creating a new technique.
And right before I started on my profile the rank list said that Cuarta was already taken and that Trecera(I've always heard it called Tres) was open. Either way, I'll go wherever is open. c:
And thank you for clarifying the differences between reiyoka, reiatsu, and reishi. I've never really known the true difference between them.
I think I have fixed everything, but if there are still screw ups, please let me know and I will mess around with it some more.


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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Aloise Comedor de los Huesos
Nickname: Al

True Age: 4,501
Age Appeared: Early twenties
Birthdate: November 17th
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Spanish-American mixed
Blood Type: AB+

Sexuality: No preference

Height: 66"
Weight: 146lbs.
Eye Color: Turquoise
Hair Color: Pink
Mask Remnant: A slim piece of bone that hangs around her left ear and widens as it flows down and conforms to her jawline. Jagged and broken teeth still hang to the jaw section of her mask remnant.
Hollow Hole Location: In the palm of her left hand

Life View: Aloise views her own life, as well as the lives of other as nothing more than tools, or at least so she expresses. In reality she holds a soft spot for the life given to other creatures, though hides it behind a mask of indifference. In views of her own life, she struggles between the belief that all beings are created for a purpose and the thought that an arrancar is nothing more than a hollow lucky enough to move up the food chain. With this inner turmoil, she can be easily swayed towards one way of thinking or another.
Personality: For the most part Aloise puts on an air of indifference and apathy, not so much because she has no feelings, but rather she has never been taught to express them. In times when she does show any kind of emotion she does so awkwardly, unsure of what exactly her emotions are. Rage and anger are the exception to this, however; these two emotions react strongly and with an almost practiced air when sparked and seem to be the only emotions Aloise is truly familiar with. While she is not quick to anger, her wrath is not to be taken for granted as she will strike without mercy.

Likes:
- Eating bones
- Being in the world of the living
Dislikes
- Wasting anything
- Being griped at
- Feeling unneeded

Aspect of Death: Emptiness
Fraccion: None at the moment
Rank: Cuarta Espada
Side: { should known }

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬

From the death of a young girl named Aloise Barcelona began the existence of Aloise as a spirit. Her death had been quick and unexpected, leaving many regrets and unfinished business in the girl's abrupt end. As she refused to accept her own death, Aloise miraculously avoided both hollow and shinigami to watch over her still living lover. However, as he made to move on past her death, Aloise's Chain of Fate decayed at an unbelievable rate and finally broke completely as her lover found a new love. Distraught with this revelation combined with her change into a hollow, Aloise hunted both down and devoured them bones and all.
No longer driven by reason, but merely hunger and a grief that she no longer recalls Aloise became a renowned and feared beast as she not only ate vulnerable souls, but other hollows, weaker shinigami, and even a human every now and then were added to her diet. With each new meal, she became more intelligent and able to escape the pursuing shinigami who sought to rid the world of her hunger. While she would sometimes be cornered, she was never caught and even managed to discover a new realm where her only nemesis were other hollows and creatures derived from such.
The longer she stayed in this realm, named Hueco Mundo, and devoured those of her own kind, she could feel herself growing in strength until many years later she became a Gillian. For many centuries she struggled among other hollows that made up the Gillian for control until she finally achieved control and once more began to devour those of her own race without heart or thought. She knew not how long she lived this way, mindlessly devouring her own kind before she achieved a new form, an adjucha.
Her human memories were forgotten upon obtaining her new form and was promptly replaced by only apathy, curiosity, and an unyielding hunger. In this form, Aloise noticed a trend in her appetite, for after devouring whatever poor creature came across her path, she couldn't stop herself from eating their bones as well. With this new discovery she donned the surname "Comedor de Los Huesos" and never once tried to fight these strange impulses, rather she embraced them and traveled between Hueco Mundo and the world of the living frequently, her diet still consisting of fellow hollows, shinigami, and the ocassional human should she manage to get her hands on one.
Aloise did not form any groups with the other adjuchas for safety, but merely devoured all she came across in hopes of finding something more. After a great deal of time this hope was realized; Aloise changed form once more to a Vasto Lorde. Her once ravenous hunger calmed to a more tolerable level, though still plagued Aloise but more as an after thought rather than a necessity. While Aloise was somewhat content in this form, she noticed one day that another of her kind was attempting to tear off its mask, however it seemed the creature did not have enough power to do so. As she became curious of what the other had been trying to achieve, she too began to work at pulling off her mask. She failed the first time, but did not give in and continued to expand her powers until she finally gained new powers from ripping off her mask.


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Reiatsu Color: Pink
Reiryoku Level: Immense

Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Expert Level
• Air Dash: Expert Level
• Sonido: Master Level
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Expert Level
• Jyuuken: Master Level
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Expert Level
• Kendo: Expert Level
Reiryoku Technique:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Expert Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing, Master Level
• Jumping, Master Level

Strengths:
• Close range combat
• Grounded fights
Weaknesses:
• Her curiosity for knowledge
• Long range fighters
Fears:
• Taking the life of an innocent
• Never learning what her emotions are


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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo

Zanpakuto Name: Engano
Zanpakuto Location: In a holster hanging below her backside
Zanpakuto Appearance: Engano
Zanpakuto Type: Unclassified


▬▬┤|Resurrección

Resurrección Name: Mentiroso
Resurrección Incantation: "Susurro mi dulce Mentiroso."- Translates to: "Whsiper my sweet Liar."
Resurrección Description: Basic appearance; In addition, she dons a pair of small black, curled horns that sprout from behind her ears and a black, bony tail-like extension from the end of her spine.
Resurrección Ability:
- Aire Fresco: Aloise builds up a toxic gas inside of her lungs and releases it as she breaths. This gas causes fierce hallucinations rather than poisoning whomever breaths it in and only effects those within a ten foot radius of Aloise at the time she uses the attack. After the first initial release of the gas, it dissipates after one minute.
- Huelga Suave: Aloise summons large amounts of reiatsu into her hands and feet and switches immediately to hand-to-hand combat. She preforms series of quick, but not very powerful strikes in an attempt to land a blow on her opponent. Upon hitting her mark, Aloise will release reiatsu into her opponent through the pores in their skin. This reiatsu will tear the surface muscles and fracture the nearest bones of wherever it enters.
- Caido de Dios: Mentiroso becomes encased in a poison that, if left untreated in the body too long, can lead to severe illnesses and in rare cases, death. This poison spreads through the body dependant upon how much the body moves; the more the body moves, the faster the poison spreads.
- Incompleto: Aloise incompletely charges a Cero and instead of firing it, ingests the unfired blast. The potential energy from the incomplete cero is broken down and converted into adrenaline to give her body a brief boost in speed and agility.
- Gritar: Aloise gathers reiatsu around her lips and whistles at a very high pitched frequency, causing brief disorientation as long as she continues to whistle. How effective this technique is dependent upon the opponent and can range anywhere from being very effective to hardly effective at all.
- Juego Sucio: Aloise allows her opponent to land a few attacks on her before mirroring the attacks back on a slightly smaller scale. This technique is not limited to custom techniques or Zanpakutō specialties and can even mimic kido spells without the incantation.
- Rabia: Aloise places a seal on her opponent and begins to taunt and berate them with the intention of throwing them into a blind rage. Once this is accomplished, the seal will activate and begin to drain the opponents rage, storing it within the seal and leading them towards both confusion and apathy. Aloise will then drain the rage from the seal and use it herself to preform a series of physical attacks.


▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa

Segunda Etapa Name: Portador Verdad
Segunda Etapa Incantation: "Ilumina Los ignorante"- Translates to: "Enlighten the ignorante."
Segunda Etapa Description: Basic appearance; In addition, a single short white, gnarled horn protrudes from her upper forehead and her mask remnant extends back behind her neck down to her shoulder blades with three medium sized spines sticking out along her vertebral column.
Segunda Etapa Ability:
- Curador: In her Segunda Etapa release, Aloise's saliva takes on a new characteristic, a healing sealant. Should a wound not be too large or deep, Aloise can spit into the wound and her saliva will not only seal off the wound to prevent infection, but will slowly begin to heal it should the wounded not put any stress on the area. The healing effects come from reiryoku infused into Aloise's saliva.
- Ilustracion: Aloise sheaths Portador Verdad and switches to hand-to-hand combat. She pours reiatsu into her finger tips and strikes at only chi points, pushing her reiatsu into her opponents chi points to sever their chi networks and potentially slow down their movements. These chi networks can be repaired easily, but burn when cut by Aloise's reiatsu.
- El Beso de un Angel: Once close enough to her target, Aloise will place a kiss to her opponents forehead. From where she kissed a red thumb print will sear itself into the opponents skin as a curse mark. This mark drains and stores small amounts of reiatsu as the opponent uses more and more and will occasionally heat up as more reiatsu is stored inside it. If Aloise can manage to kiss the mark once more, then she can absorb the reiatsu sealed inside the curse marking.
- Refugio Seguro: To begin using this technique, Aloise must either sheath or in some manner put away her Zanpakutō. Once this is done, Aloise will pull out her shield and pour large amounts of reiatsu into it, causing a light pink field of energy to encompass a twenty foot diameter with her inside. This field can withstand physical attacks, but can only hold up against very few high level kido spells/Cero blasts. Alois cannot move around while preforming this technique.

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▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques

▬▬┤|Your List

• Bala
• Cero
• Cero Oscuras [Resurreccion Only]
• Hierro
• Gonzui
• Pesquisa
• Negación
• Garganta
• Gran Ray Cero
• Caja Negación

▬▬┤|Custom Techniques

• None



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PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 5:14 pm


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Full Name: Aloise Comedor de los Huesos
Nickname: Al

True Age: 4,501
Age Appeared: Early twenties
Birthdate: November 17th
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Spanish-American mixed
Blood Type: AB+

Sexuality: No preference

Height: 66"
Weight: 146lbs.
Eye Color: Turquoise
Hair Color: Pink
Mask Remnant: A slim piece of bone that hangs around her left ear and widens as it flows down and conforms to her jawline. Jagged and broken teeth still hang to the jaw section of her mask remnant.
Hollow Hole Location: In the palm of her left hand

Life View: Aloise views her own life, as well as the lives of other as nothing more than tools, or at least so she expresses. In reality she holds a soft spot for the life given to other creatures, though hides it behind a mask of indifference. In views of her own life, she struggles between the belief that all beings are created for a purpose and the thought that an arrancar is nothing more than a hollow lucky enough to move up the food chain. With this inner turmoil, she can be easily swayed towards one way of thinking or another.
Personality: For the most part Aloise puts on an air of indifference and apathy, not so much because she has no feelings, but rather she has never been taught to express them. In times when she does show any kind of emotion she does so awkwardly, unsure of what exactly her emotions are. Rage and anger are the exception to this, however; these two emotions react strongly and with an almost practiced air when sparked and seem to be the only emotions Aloise is truly familiar with. While she is not quick to anger, her wrath is not to be taken for granted as she will strike without mercy.

Likes:
- Eating bones
- Being in the world of the living
Dislikes
- Wasting anything
- Being griped at
- Feeling unneeded

Aspect of Death: Emptiness
Fraccion: None at the moment
Rank: Cuarta Espada
Side: { should known }

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From the death of a young girl named Aloise Barcelona began the existence of Aloise as a spirit. Her death had been quick and unexpected, leaving many regrets and unfinished business in the girl's abrupt end. As she refused to accept her own death, Aloise miraculously avoided both hollow and shinigami to watch over her still living lover. However, as he made to move on past her death, Aloise's Chain of Fate decayed at an unbelievable rate and finally broke completely as her lover found a new love. Distraught with this revelation combined with her change into a hollow, Aloise hunted both down and devoured them bones and all.
No longer driven by reason, but merely hunger and a grief that she no longer recalls Aloise became a renowned and feared beast as she not only ate vulnerable souls, but other hollows, weaker shinigami, and even a human every now and then were added to her diet. With each new meal, she became more intelligent and able to escape the pursuing shinigami who sought to rid the world of her hunger. While she would sometimes be cornered, she was never caught and even managed to discover a new realm where her only nemesis were other hollows and creatures derived from such.
The longer she stayed in this realm, named Hueco Mundo, and devoured those of her own kind, she could feel herself growing in strength until many years later she became a Gillian. For many centuries she struggled among other hollows that made up the Gillian for control until she finally achieved control and once more began to devour those of her own race without heart or thought. She knew not how long she lived this way, mindlessly devouring her own kind before she achieved a new form, an adjucha.
Her human memories were forgotten upon obtaining her new form and was promptly replaced by only apathy, curiosity, and an unyielding hunger. In this form, Aloise noticed a trend in her appetite, for after devouring whatever poor creature came across her path, she couldn't stop herself from eating their bones as well. With this new discovery she donned the surname "Comedor de Los Huesos" and never once tried to fight these strange impulses, rather she embraced them and traveled between Hueco Mundo and the world of the living frequently, her diet still consisting of fellow hollows, shinigami, and the ocassional human should she manage to get her hands on one.
Aloise did not form any groups with the other adjuchas for safety, but merely devoured all she came across in hopes of finding something more. After a great deal of time this hope was realized; Aloise changed form once more to a Vasto Lorde. Her once ravenous hunger calmed to a more tolerable level, though still plagued Aloise but more as an after thought rather than a necessity. While Aloise was somewhat content in this form, she noticed one day that another of her kind was attempting to tear off its mask, however it seemed the creature did not have enough power to do so. As she became curious of what the other had been trying to achieve, she too began to work at pulling off her mask. She failed the first time, but did not give in and continued to expand her powers until she finally gained new powers from ripping off her mask.


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Reiatsu Color: Pink
Reiryoku Level: Immense

Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Expert Level
• Air Dash: Expert Level
• Sonido: Master Level
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Expert Level
• Jyuuken: Master Level
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Expert Level
• Kendo: Expert Level
Reiryoku Technique:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Expert Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing, Master Level
• Jumping, Master Level

Strengths:
• Close range combat
• Grounded fights
Weaknesses:
• Her curiosity for knowledge
• Long range fighters
Fears:
• Taking the life of an innocent
• Never learning what her emotions are


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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo

Zanpakuto Name: Engano
Zanpakuto Location: In a holster hanging below her backside
Zanpakuto Appearance: Engano
Zanpakuto Type: Unclassified


▬▬┤|Resurrección

Resurrección Name: Mentiroso
Resurrección Incantation: "Susurro mi dulce Mentiroso."- Translates to: "Whsiper my sweet Liar."
Resurrección Description: Basic appearance; In addition, she dons a pair of small black, curled horns that sprout from behind her ears and a black, bony tail-like extension from the end of her spine.
Resurrección Ability:
- Aire Fresco: Aloise builds up a toxic gas inside of her lungs and releases it as she breaths. This gas causes fierce hallucinations rather than poisoning whomever breaths it in and only effects those within a ten foot radius of Aloise at the time she uses the attack. After the first initial release of the gas, it dissipates after one minute.
- Huelga Suave: Aloise summons large amounts of reiatsu into her hands and feet and switches immediately to hand-to-hand combat. She preforms series of quick, but not very powerful strikes in an attempt to land a blow on her opponent. Upon hitting her mark, Aloise will release reiatsu into her opponent through the pores in their skin. This reiatsu will tear the surface muscles and fracture the nearest bones of wherever it enters.
- Caido de Dios: Mentiroso becomes encased in a poison that, if left untreated in the body too long, can lead to severe illnesses and in rare cases, death. This poison spreads through the body dependant upon how much the body moves; the more the body moves, the faster the poison spreads.
- Incompleto: Aloise incompletely charges a Cero and instead of firing it, ingests the unfired blast. The potential energy from the incomplete cero is broken down and converted into adrenaline to give her body a brief boost in speed and agility.
- Gritar: Aloise gathers reiatsu around her lips and whistles at a very high pitched frequency, causing brief disorientation as long as she continues to whistle. How effective this technique is dependent upon the opponent and can range anywhere from being very effective to hardly effective at all.
- Juego Sucio: Aloise allows her opponent to land a few attacks on her before mirroring the attacks back on a slightly smaller scale. This technique is not limited to custom techniques or Zanpakutō specialties and can even mimic kido spells without the incantation.
- Rabia: Aloise places a seal on her opponent and begins to taunt and berate them with the intention of throwing them into a blind rage. Once this is accomplished, the seal will activate and begin to drain the opponents rage, storing it within the seal and leading them towards both confusion and apathy. Aloise will then drain the rage from the seal and use it herself to preform a series of physical attacks.


▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa

Segunda Etapa Name: Portador Verdad
Segunda Etapa Incantation: "Ilumina Los ignorante"- Translates to: "Enlighten the ignorante."
Segunda Etapa Description: Basic appearance; In addition, a single short white, gnarled horn protrudes from her upper forehead and her mask remnant extends back behind her neck down to her shoulder blades with three medium sized spines sticking out along her vertebral column.
Segunda Etapa Ability:
- Curador: In her Segunda Etapa release, Aloise's saliva takes on a new characteristic, a healing sealant. Should a wound not be too large or deep, Aloise can spit into the wound and her saliva will not only seal off the wound to prevent infection, but will slowly begin to heal it should the wounded not put any stress on the area. The healing effects come from reiryoku infused into Aloise's saliva.
- Ilustracion: Aloise sheaths Portador Verdad and switches to hand-to-hand combat. She pours reiatsu into her finger tips and strikes at only chi points, pushing her reiatsu into her opponents chi points to sever their chi networks and potentially slow down their movements. These chi networks can be repaired easily, but burn when cut by Aloise's reiatsu.
- El Beso de un Angel: Once close enough to her target, Aloise will place a kiss to her opponents forehead. From where she kissed a red thumb print will sear itself into the opponents skin as a curse mark. This mark drains and stores small amounts of reiatsu as the opponent uses more and more and will occasionally heat up as more reiatsu is stored inside it. If Aloise can manage to kiss the mark once more, then she can absorb the reiatsu sealed inside the curse marking.
- Refugio Seguro: To begin using this technique, Aloise must either sheath or in some manner put away her Zanpakutō. Once this is done, Aloise will pull out her shield and pour large amounts of reiatsu into it, causing a light pink field of energy to encompass a twenty foot diameter with her inside. This field can withstand physical attacks, but can only hold up against very few high level kido spells/Cero blasts. Alois cannot move around while preforming this technique.

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▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques

▬▬┤|Your List

• Bala
• Cero
• Cero Oscuras [Resurreccion Only]
• Hierro
• Gonzui
• Pesquisa
• Negación
• Garganta
• Gran Ray Cero
• Caja Negación

▬▬┤|Custom Techniques

• None
PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 7:04 pm


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Full Name: Aleksandr Vitalyevich Marchant
Nickname: Lord, Emperor, Aleks, Father Aleksandr
True Age:1000+
Age Appeared: 50
Birthdate: ????
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Russian
Blood Type: ????

Sexuality: Hetero

Height: 6'5''
Weight: 200 lbs
Eye Color: brown
Hair Color: Grey (originally black)

Life View: "I am the Envoy of our Lord and Savior. The Quincy are my sheep and I am their Shepherd. None shall lead astray."
Personality: He is religious fanatic that goes insane if one disrespects his God. Most of the time however he is a very charismatic individual that many people know and love. They however do not know what he'd to them if his Lord asked.
Wise due to his past experiences however his faith blurs it from time to time.
Likes:
• Praying
• Reading the Bible
• Sundays
• Teaching children the ways of the Lord
• A nice cup of tea
• Laughing
Dislikes
• Disrespect
• Hollows
• Arrancar
• Sinful behavior
• Athiests

Side: Quincy
Rank: Emperor, Insignia -A

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Aleksandr was born the son of an exiled quincy and human. This fact would be hidden from him for most of his existence. He no longer remembers the name of his hometown or parents, but knows that it was in Russia.
His childhood was cold. Both physically and emotionally. Where he lived, the temperatures would be at a constant low. Snow was not fun to play around with. Much like dirt wasn't to countries where snow was rare.
Aleks' father was an extremely cold individual. Compassion was never given to Aleks. He gave the young boy constant beatings while the mother just simply watched. The man would hit Aleks in the head so hard that he'd be knocked out for days. This is part of the reason he cannot recall many things from his childhood. Key moments are; his father's beatings, his mother giggling behind her right palm at him while blood leaked out of his ear and when the Quincy came to kill his father.

"The woman ran away on her own. No need to chase her. The cold will take care of her." A shrouded Quincy said to his followers that all wore the same outfit. This Quincy however bore a special cross that seemed to be unaffected by the temperature of the area. "Sir, we found someone!" A Quincy marched towards the cross bearer with a small child in her arms. Bruises covered his entire body like someone actually tried to kill him.

Aleks awoke lying alone on a bed inside of a massive Cathedral in Western Russia. After a couple hours, a man came inside to speak to Aleks. He promised the boy power. Power to protect himself and those he loved. "I don't have anything to love." Aleks replied with a lifeless expression. "That is where you are wrong. For God loves you very much. The least you can do..........

[Plan on fleshing this out more]


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Reiatsu Color: Holy white/golden
Reiryoku Level: Vast

Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Expert
• Air Dash: Expert
• Hirenkyaku: Master
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Grappling: Expert
• Gun-Kata: Master
Known Weapon Styles:
• Quincy Archery: Master
• Quincy Marksmanship: Master
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reishi Absorption: Master
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Master
• Jumping: Expert

Strengths:
• Accuracy
• Speed
Weaknesses:
• Religious Fanatisism
• Close Ranged combat
Fears:
• Wrath of God




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▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: The Bow of Trinity

Cross Name: Ayn Rand
Cross Location: Long necklace
Cross Appearance: Refer to character pic
Weapon Type: Bow. Due to amount of skill Aleks has accumulated over time he can shoot "bows" with only his index fingers if he pleased. This action limits the overal power of his "bows" to 75%.

Aleks' Bow is different to other Quincy bows. It's sheer size is massive. (20 feet)
Not only that, but it releases three different kinds of arrows. Each type can only be used seperately. The bow changes color whenever it shifts arrows.

Ventus: Aleks shoots an "arrow" surrounded by violent winds. Upon launch it blows away its surroundings. If hit the opponent will be launched back in a spinning motion while having a loss of oxygen

Igne: Aleks shoots an "arrow" engulfed im violent, thrashing flames. Upon impact, these "arrows inflict heavy burns as well as an explosion on impact.

Tonat: Aleks shoots an "arrow" conducting a deadly amount of voltage. Equivalent to three thunderstrikes put together. The speed of this shot is greater than the others. Getting struck by this shot stuns the body for 2 posts.

Cross Type: Emperor's Necklace


▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: True Weapon

True Weapon Name: Святой Грааль [Holy Grail]
True Weapon Type: Gun
True Weapon Description: A pistol made out of Reishi forms in the right palm of Aleksandr whenever he snaps two fingers. It is inscribed with Biblical passages that change with every shot he takes. These "bullets" are deadly to any being influenced by hollow power. Corrupting the point of impact with a decay that lasts for 4 posts until it leaves a gaping hole in their body. Those without hollow influence do not suffer this effect. The "bullets" created by Holy Grail have 4 times the speed of Aleks' Tonat Bow.
True Weapon Ability:
• [Пастырь возмездия] Shepherd Of Retribution
Description: Aleks' True Weapon creates a large cross covering himself and if neccessary the cross will expand large enough to protect those around him. This technique not only blocks powerful techniques of lower or equal caliber, but absorves the Reishi in the technique block. Aleks' pistol will glow a powerful, vibrant white until all the Reishi he absorbed is shot out with amplified power.
This technique is notably weaker against techniques with hollow influences such as a Cero, but in general any technique used by someone with hollow influence will be stronger against it. (This does not mean an Arrancar with the number 150 can beat it simply because they have hollow powers. The opponent needs to have decent power.)
This technique has a 7 post cooldown. 10 if inhanced.

• [Лжепророк] False Prophet
Description: Aleks transforms his pistol into the mirror opposite of himself. This clone has all of Aleks' techniques, but can only use them up to 50%. The real Aleks cannot perform any kind of technique or else it is dispelled.
• [Гало] Halo
Description: A curved blade of light grows along Aleks' True Weapon. Subsequentially he spins the pistol at a very rapid rate giving it the appearance of a Halo. With Aleks' accuracy he can throw it directly at an opponent. If clashed with a blade the sheer force of the technique will hold back the opponent while the gun remains spinning. With a snap of his fingers, the gun returns to his right hand once again.
• [Божественная опустошение] Divine Devastation
Description: By combing the power of his bow and gun, Aleks creates a sort of submachine gun releasing hundreds of half bullets half arrow shots in 4 seconds.
This technique has a three post cooldown

• [Второе пришествие] The Second Coming
Description: Aiming his gun into the sky. Aleks releases hundreds of of small orbs of light. They do not damage anything at all. Once they reach their height limit, the orbs expand to the size of medium sized vehicles. The light they produce is absolutely blinding to the extent that they will turn night to day. This however does not affect Aleks. These orbs will continue to expand in size and brightness every post. This can be canceled if Aleks over exherts himself or loses his gun.
• [Шквал Небес] Heaven's Squall
Description: This technique can only be activated 10 posts after the activation of The Second Coming. By that point the orbs will be the size of metorites. This technique is so powerful that it will most likely kill anyone directly hit by the massive barrage of falling orbs. Even Aleks puts his life on the line when using it. The orbs take 2 post to descend and make contact.

Vollständig ( Quincy:Complete )
Vollständig Name: [Генезис и Армагеддон] Genesis and Armageddon
Vollständig Enchantments:
• Отец, дай мне силы. Аминь.
Vollständig Description:
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Ayn Rand dissapears leaving behind a beautiful sparkle. Immediately after, everything within a 4 yard radius is turned into pure Reishi. That energy flows into both palms of Aleks' hands. The dual pistols Genisis and Armageddon are created. This leaves a cillindrical depression in the area. After recitting a passage from the book of Genisis and then Revelations lights from the pistols envelop Aleks. This light transforms into a very futuristic looking armor. It amplifies each element of his Trinity bow. Increases his vision range by 10x, grants him a greater indurance due to armor and triples his overall speed.
Vollständig Ability:
• Holy Aura: The Reishi around Aleks is in constant absorption. It's range is 5 inches from his body. Enemies that strike him who are too weak will have their weapons completely absorved as long as they breach his aura. This applies to 3-4th seated members and below. A VC will have their weapon slightly weaker.
• Steel Schneider Double Prowess: Two Steel Schneiders grow from Aleks' elbows. Throughout the duration of a match they slowly absorb Reishi in combat in conjunction with Holy Aura. Within 5 posts it will be powerful enough to loosen the bonds of Reishi within even a Captain's zanpakuto.
• The Deceit of Jonah: A more powerful version of divine devastation, however this technique does not use his bow. With both of his pistols, Aleks can shoot 1000 Reishi blasts in 4 seconds. This technique requires a three post cooldown. If Steel Schneider Double Prowess is active, Aleks may use the energy they have gathered to shorten the time by a little or completely drain them. Aleks may not move as they are firing.
• Cross of Nazareth: This technique is capable of blocking a Cero coming from a Primeira Espada. It's use is purely defensive unlike Shepherd of Retribution, but can block much more powerful techniques. It has a 5 post cooldown.


▬▬┤|Quincy Letzt stil

Letzt Stil Description:
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This is a last resort power only to be used if the Earth or the Quincy as a whole are put in grave danger. Aleks sees it as using the Devil's power, but in reality it is himself tapping into a darker part of his power. When he takes off his Sanrei Glove he asks his Holy Father for forgivness. What ensues is Aleks using 100% of his power without restraint. This lasts for a total of 5 posts. Any longer will decrease his attack and speed by 50%. Holy Grail changes its appearance as well. Aleks will refer it as Grail Unholy
Letzt Stil Ability:
• Satan's Favor: Damage Aleks recieved before removing his glove is regenerated as long as his Letzt Stil is active.
• Unholy Blast: Grail Unholy shoots a blast similar to a cero in appearance.
• Reishi Corruption: Reishi is broken into particles, but stops before it is absorved into Aleks it stops mid-air. Four orbs end up being created. One at his front and back. One on both sides. These orbs block incoming Reishi emmissions for 5 posts.
• Satan's Price: When everything is lost and nothing can be done. Aleks concentrates all of the Reaitsu within himself. Reishi slowly dissipates around himself. After muttering another apology to God in Russian he detonates. This takes 2 posts to fully load. The detonation has a mile long range.
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• Heizen
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• Wolke
• Sprenger
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 7:18 pm


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I have the approval of the basic bow. But just remember that Vollständig must still be learned through training (or at least I think that's how it goes. I would ask Diablo.)
PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 7:24 pm


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Approved
I have the approval of the basic bow. But just remember that Vollständig must still be learned through training (or at least I think that's how it goes. I would ask Diablo.)

Wha...The Emperor has to learn Vollstandig?

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 7:25 pm


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Approved
I have the approval of the basic bow. But just remember that Vollständig must still be learned through training (or at least I think that's how it goes. I would ask Diablo.)

Wha...The Emperor has to learn Vollstandig?

As I said, ask Diablo. I'm still knew to the changes.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 9:42 pm


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Your Insignia is "A"
that part should not have been removed

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 9:50 pm


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Your Insignia is "A"
that part should not have been removed

I know, but where do you want me to put that?...
PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 9:55 pm


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Next to your rank so should look like.

Rank: Emperor, Insignia - "A"

Also the quincy of today have deemed Letzt Stil obsolete and no longer us it.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 24, 2013 10:32 pm


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Next to your rank so should look like.

Rank: Emperor, Insignia - "A"

Also the quincy of today have deemed Letzt Stil obsolete and no longer us it.

That's a choice. Aleksandr uses it.
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Full Name: Temperance William Kohlrusch
Nickname: Frost
The Name he goes by in school is Lance Sweets.

True Age: 35
Age Appeared: 23
Birthdate: July 18th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: German
Blood Type: B+

Sexuality: Bisexual

Height: 6'3"
Weight: 175 lbs
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Reddish Brown
Voice: Daisuke Hirakawa
Theme Song: Bad Behavior.

Life View: Ah... Party? Now? Yeah let's go.
Personality: Temperance is what one would call a, Jerk. Only if your a sensitive whinny cry baby that is. He enjoys partying and having a good time. Life is short so why not enjoy it. He is very sarcastic and enjoys putting people down. Temperance acts extremely perverted. His perverted nature caused him to be suspended often from school. Temperance is both a Do-Masochist (extreme masochist) and a Do-Sadist (extreme sadist). He is always cheerful and loves to joke and loves teasing girl. However, his personality suddenly changes when something goes against his wishes, often punishes those because of that.

Likes:
  • Winter
  • Moonlight
  • Drinking
  • Freedom
  • Being Right
  • Fashion

Dislikes
  • Summer
  • Goodies. (Boring)
  • Fruity drink
  • Tight spaces


Side: Quincy, Justice.
Rank: Star Knight F - " The Frost"

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The Kohlrusch family much like other family attached to the Quicy are a very old, rich, and powerful branch of Quincy. Having connections to other families like themselves being the closest with the Marenette. Having to be the best along with the other main families. Training hard and from a early age. Being a only child he had to be the best of the best to prove his family wasn't falling behind. His mother too weak to bare any more children and while most men would find another wife his father loved his mother like no other which put the purser of him and for the first part of his life all he did was train, eat, sleep and study. Loving his parents greatly and was willing to do anything for them seeing as they loved him so much.

By the time he was twenty-one he already had three PH.D's in Anthropologist, Kinesiologist and Pathology. His smarts and hard work took him very far as he seemed to have breezed through medical school while on top of that being one of the best Quincy. At the age of twenty five he met up with his childhood friend Serah Elizabeth De Marentette who in her time had become a movie star and a top class Quincy like himself maybe even better. Seeing the life she lived something switched inside him maybe he had been work far to hard for too long but he wanted a new life. Becoming Serah's fashion assistant and traveling the world and partying with her. They just clicked together as they spend their time doing whatever the hell they want. Even posing as high school kids.


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Reiatsu Color: Crystal Blue
Reiryoku Level: Great

Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level { Expert }
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level { Master }
• Hirenkyaku: No Skills { Master }
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Grappling: Practitioner Level { Expert }

Known Weapon Styles:
• Quincy Archery: Practitioner Level { Master }
• Quincy Marksmanship: Practitioner Level { Master }
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reishi Absorption: Practitioner Level { Master }
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level { Expert }
• Jumping: Practitioner Level { Expert }

Strengths:
• Marksmanship
• Weak point on the human body
Weaknesses:
• Fire
• Sword play
Fears:
• Having his hair cut
• Not having alcohol
• Dark and enclosed space


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▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: The Bow

Cross Name: Frost Knight
Cross Location: Bracelet. Around his wrist.
Cross Appearance: ---
Weapon Type: Bow
Cross Type: Basic


▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: True Weapon

True Weapon Name: Frozen Heart
True Weapon Type: Bow
True Weapon Description: With each arrow that hit, Temperance's attacks slow his targets. This draining Reishi with each hit. Slowing them by half of their speed. If he misses the arrow will explode on his command slowly the target area of four feet around by 1/4 for their speed. Slows last for one post for each arrow hit. Due to his medical knowledge Temperance knows where all the vital organs are in the human body able to hit directly or inches off to spar a life or take it.
True Weapon Ability:

• [Volley] - A row of arrows appear on his bow string as he fires eight arrows at once. Coning out an area of ten feet at its widen point. All on hit frost effect are active.

• [Hawkshot] - Temperance can activate and send his Hawk Spirit on a scouting mission. The Hawk is a sprite animal that can last in role play for two days before having to return to the world in which it came.

• [Avalanche]
Making a giant snow like Hirenkyaku, Temperance glides over the battlefield leaving an avalanche of snow in his wake. The avalanche covers peoples from the chest down, leaving them stuck in place for two posts.

• [Hail]
Conjuring up several orbs of ice, Temperance casts them into the sky. They grow to wrecking ball size over two posts. Afterwards he drops them on his target, or targets. [also lasts two posts]. When a hale ball hits directly, it would mostly like kill any low seated enemies, it explodes like a grenade, sending out large splinters of ice. If hit by the ice shards, they are slowed by three fourths of their speed.

• [Mist]
After firing volley, Temperance is able to command the arrows fired to explode into a fifty foot cloud of mist. This slows people caught in the mist by one fourth of their speed.

• [Sheer Cold]
When activated, anyone caught in a slowing effect, is frozen stiff for one whole post.




▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: Quincy: Vollständig ( Quincy:Complete )

Vollständig Name: Frozen Trigger
Vollständig Enchantments: "Let's just behave."
Vollständig Description:Pow Pow - With his new found gun. It comes with a different type of bullet then most. Blood bullets. The blood to make the bullets came from the hollows he had killed over the years. The blood is frozen in the chamber in the gun as it reaches temperatures of −346 °F. The blood being from hollows doesn't hold any known blood type. If you do not know if someone takes blood from the wrong downer it can cause Fluid overload , Allergic reaction, Haemolytic reaction, and Graft versus host disease. All be fatal if not treated. On top of all that he has a second trigger that allowed him to shot ice or frost bullets.
Vollständig Ability:
• [ Glacial Shield ] - Create an impenetrable shield of ice good for stopping any attack for two post but Temperance however can not move while the shield is up or it will brake.

• [Super Psycho Love] *Passive* - Once the bullet start flying Temperance can get a little battle crazy. Screaming for his gun to shot faster. This gives him a Speed buff along with a Marksmanship buff for just being in battle. Increasing it by a level.

• [Ring of Frost] - Aims a bullet towards the ground. If the shot hits the enemy standing near the bullet and I mean right by their foot it freezes the area around them, binding them to the ground for one post. If they force their way or brake the ice it can shaker into raze sharp edges.

• [Glacial Path] - Tapping the blade at the end of his gun it begins to freeze the ground and expands for a mile. If standing on the ice it will drain the Reishi from however is standing on the ice but for Quincy.

• [Blood Spray] - A spray of 5,000 bullets in a span of a minute. Pretty much Temperance is having a trigger happy moment. The on hit effect apply with the blood bullets.
[Ice Spray] - A spray of 5,000 bullets in a span of a minute. Pretty much Temperance is having a trigger happy moment. The on hit effect apply with the frost bullets.

* Part of the double trigger feature on his gun. Can only use one Spray at a time with a two post cool down in between.

• [Enchanted Blood Bullet] - Temperance fires a missile of ice in a straight line. If the missile collides with an enemy, it deals damage and stuns them for up to two post but it take two post to charge up the attack. In addition, surrounding enemy units take damage and are slowed by half their speed. The missile will explode at Temperacne's will. Shoot shards of bloody ice in 360 degrees and 10 feet around.


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▬▬┤|Ginto Techniques

• Heizen (聖噬 [ハイゼン], haizen; German for "Heating", Japanese for "Sacred Bite") Heizen instantly gouges and purges whatever is enclosed in the space within the four tossed gintōs. It is tremendously effective even against Menos Grandes. This technique creates a transparent, rectangular beam of energy from the silver tubes which then slices through the opponent. It is activated by the command: "Feel the wrath of battle and accept this sacred chalice - Heizen!" (大気の戦陣を杯に受けよ)

• Gritz (五架縛 [グリツ], gurittsu; Japanese for "Five Rack Ties") A film of Reishi emitted from a thrown Ginto surrounds the enemy. This technique forms a man-sized pentagonal Quincy cross which envelops its target. It is activated by the command: "A silver rod strikes the five-fingered stone bed - Gritz!" (銀鞭下りて五手石床に堕つ)

• Wolke (緑杯 [ヴォルコル], vorukōru; German for "Cloud", Japanese for "Green Cup") Cushioning the impact of a fall with Reiryoku contained inside a Ginto. This technique uses a silver tube to create a large blast. It is activated by the command: "Tilt the goblet to the west - Wolke!" (盃よ西方に傾け)

• Sprenger (破芒陣 [シュプレンガ], shupurenga; German for "Explosion", Japanese for "Ripping Grass Formation") This technique uses five Seele Schneiders to create a pentagon-shaped seal which, when activated, causes a massive explosion within its borders. When an object or a person stands within the middle of the Pentagon the placement of the fifth Seele Schneider can trap them by wrapping and binding their legs to the ground with dense spirit particles. The Seele Schneiders function as accumulators, gathering the necessary amount of spirit particles to create the explosion. The liquid inside a silver tube acts as the trigger. The preparations for the technique combined with the charging time for the Seele Schneiders make its use in battle impractical unless the user has a partner that can stall to buy time, or has enough strength to create the formation while under attack

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