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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:35 pm
Denied for not reading the first post of this thread and seeing that I have 2-3 days before you are allowed to bug me about a profile. approved Post it in here, that forum is for approved profiles only. This thread is for pending creations.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:37 pm
Enzio Kageryuu Post it in here, that forum is for approved profiles only. This thread is for pending creations. Well my profile is approved so it will stay right where it is.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:05 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Aerik Aurelius Pendragon Nickname: Ae (Pronounced: A)
True Age: 378 Age Appeared: 18 Birthdate: July 1st Gender: Male Ethnicity: Half Cree, Half French Caucasian. Blood Type: B-
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 5' 8" Weight: 130 lbs. Eye Color: Hazel Hair Color: Black
Life View: The whole world is evil. We as Shinigami must bring Hollows to justice. Show them the light. Personality: Aerik is a calm person, always watching a situation from afar. He must be able to defeat his enemy before joining a fight, and with that he is Constantly aware of everything around him.
Likes: Apple Sauce (Guy seriously LOVES it), Speed Training Dislikes being wrong. Being defeated
Division: Two Rank: Captain Side: Side of the Soul Reapers ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Aerik was raised in a middle-class district. As Such, he always dreamed of joining the Soul Society. On his 18th year of being a part of the Soul World in the Rukongai, Aerik decided to attempt to control his Reiryoku into the ball of pure soul energy that was required for admission into the Academy. Him and his friends were all around a Camp-fire when they all tried to do it. None could, But Aerik, wishing his hardest, created a large ball, showing his inner strength, and knack for his control of Reiryoku. The week after, he was enrolled in the Academy
Time at the Academy was a fun time for Aerik. He was put into the Advanced class right away, and learned he was much more maneuverable than those around him. His lack of height and his skinny features along with his ability to control his Reiryoku added to he speed and versatility. After some time in the Academy, He graduated near the top of his class, but The Highest in every aspect he tried hard. Hand to Hand, Speed, and Amazing Sword Skills. He was plucked from Academy Life, and put instantly on Squad 2.
His Speed and Hand to Hand Ability made him a Guard within the Maggot's Nest right away. He would single handedly stop every breakout by the time he made 3rd seat. He spent 50 years as a third seat, and by his 130th birthday, He had awakened his Bankai. His Shikai had come to him quickly, as It seemed as though his blade understood his need for power. When his Bankai came, he realized that he would need to train, and a lot. It wasn't a simple Bankai, and getting used to the Speed increase, and the Power control took the better part of 150 years. When he had finally mastered it, His Squad Captain stepped down, and he was offered the Job. He came to power not Long before the New Captain Commander. No one wanted to touch the spot. but when a young prodigy came from the Academy, he realized right away, there was no one else. The Captain Commander position had been filled. Aerik didn't want to meet him right away, as he feared the New Captain Commander, despite everyone saying how nice he was. Aerik knew that whoever this man was, he was a Beast. But Aerik eventually straightened up, and participated. To this day, Aerik remains anonymous to many of the Captains. but that would stop. Aerik would Join the Soul Society.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Transparent Reiryoku Level: Great
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Expert • Air Dash: Expert • Shunpo: Master Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Master • Shunko: (To be Decided) Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Master • Kendo: Advanced Reiryoku Techniques: • Kido Spells: Advanced • Reiryoku Gathering: Expert Other Techniques: • Dashing: Expert • Jumping: Master
Strengths: • Speed • Fighting Ability Weaknesses: • Kido • Loyalty to the Rules Fears: • The Fall of the Seireitei • The Deaths of the Ones he loves
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Sono Tenka Anei (The Lighting Shadow) Zanpakuto Location: In Shinigami Belt Zanpakuto Appearance: Appearance Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: Spirit Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana Zanpakuto Element: Light ▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Fusenmei Tenka Anei (Blurred Lighting Shadow) Shikai Incantation: Release into the Light Shikai Description: Once released, Aerik's Captain cloak seems to disappear, and is replaced with a black Duster. His Sword's shape remains the same, except for the dull light shining off from it. In Shikai, Aerik has the ability to bend the light around him at will, displayed in his attacks, he can create Mirages and briefly solid afterimages. All are Illusions created from Reiatsu that messes with a person's ability to sense through Reiryoku, and making it difficult to locate Aerik, but not impossible with someone who has mastered the power to sense through Reiryoku. Shikai Ability: Aerik in his Shikai and even in Bankai, due to the control of his Reiatsu being based around light fluctuations, cannot be blinded by instantaneous light, nor sudden darkness. And once he is has accessed Shikai, his retina expand to maximum width, and using his reiatsu, it triggers something in his brain that makes it so no matter how much volume of light, or intensity of darkness, Aerik can pierce it all with his gaze, and percieve his surroundings as though it were a natural sunny day.
Shadows Manipulation -Aerik uses light to create solid mirages of himself that are exact physical copies of himself, and cannot be discerned from the Original. They are illusions created through the manipulation of light, and through intense Reiryoku control, Only those who have mastered the Ability to sense through Reiryoku can know they are fake, but it takes much focus, and isn't easily discerned. Each Image can react to attacks, and feel solid if they are struck, but they do not have a physical sword, so they cannot be used for attack. (Maximum 7 Copies)
Shadow's Dance -Aerik Creates a Maximum of 3 Copies of himself which his Physical Body can move to near instantaeously. using a light connection between these Copies, He can transfer his Molecules through the light to become one of the Images he creates. These images can move freely, and even though they cannot cause physical damage, they have his speed, and can "create" the illusion of using a Kido. Once Aerik Transfers himself to one of these copies, that copy disappears. -Once All copies are gone, takes 4 turns to use technique again.
Shadows Balance -A Technique used for sneak, Aerik manipulates the light around him to make himself invisible. The only ways to discern his location is through Reiryoku sensing. At night, an extremely dull glow is emitted from his body, but in a created darkness, it reacts to his Reiatsu, and he is still invisible, so those that have the ability to see through the darkness still cannot persieve him.
Shadow's Light strike -Building up his reiatsu for attack, Aerik draws Reiatsu around his blade, and with a swing, it comes out, surging like a blade's strike. (looks much like a very light version of Getsuga Tenshou) Light Transfer. Transfering his particles into a light stream, Aerik has the ability to Teleport himself a maximum distance of 40 ft. -Turn Cooldown: 3 Light Expenditure -Pushing out his Reiatsu, and enhancing his physical Stamina, Aerik Increases his speed many times over, As he runs, It seems as though light is streaming behind him, but what it truthfully is, is his molecules attempting to maintain stability as his speed increases to dangerous levels. -Can only maintain enhanced speed for 4 posts, 3 post cooldown Light focusing Ray -Using The power of light within his Zanpakuto, Aerik creates a physical entity of light to be used at will. It is a ball of light which it's intensity is controlled by Aerik. This has the power to push back foreign darkness, or can be used to blind those he fights. Aerik however, in his Shikai and even in Bankai due to the control of his Reiatsu and being based around light fluctuations, cannot be blinded by instantaneous light, nor sudden darkness.
Light Bomb -The light bomb is not as it seems. It is not a bomb, but rather a technique nearly identicle to the Shinra Tensei of naruto. Focusing the light into a wave of particle, Aerik uses it as a pushing technique. He can through ranged based techniques off course, assault different opponents with a wave of negative energy, or even propel himself away from a technique should he be entrapped in some means he is unable to move, but can still control the area around him, such as a Bakudo that only impares his movements.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: Junsei Tenka Anei (Pure Lighting Shadow) Bankai Incantation: Focus Intensity... Bankai Bankai Description: In Bankai, Aerik's blade becomes a deadly blade of light itself. The Blade disappears and is replaced by a shiny looking metal that is actually a physical animation of light. It no longer weighs a thing, and instead pumps Aerik's body full of Stamina and Energy, increasing his speed much more than original, But not like the speed increase in his Shikai Attack, but still a significant speed increase. Every article of clothing, incuding the Duster is now replaced by a black leather suit that isn't truthfully leather, but an animation of the shadows that light creates, and it is imprinted on Aerik, making his Reiatsu so low on the detection level, that he is literally invisible to nearly all who attempt to see him through Reiatsu. At this point, Only those with Immense Reiryoku, or Mastered Reiatsu Sensing (Reiatsu based users) have the ability to sense Him. He is still very much physical however, and is still very visible. If you can keep up with him, and not lose sight, than you can keep him in sight. (Once donning the suit, His sensable reiryoku level is that of an Insect) Bankai Ability:
The Underlying Reiatsu -An interesting technique, Aerik Creates physical Clones of himself (Maximum Two) Created from the same Physical Light that his blade is made of, but altered. These Clones are exact Copies except for the noticable sheen of light eminating from their bodies. These Clones are, however, Not like Aerik as because they are Made of Reiatsu, these physical bodies have their own Reiatsu, and are very sensable. They can be sensed by all, as they have the Reiryoku level of a Third seat. Their Sword skill is Expert, and their Speed is at a Vice-Captain's level.
The Border of Light and Darkness Aerik learned long ago that his blade encompassed light, but also a shadowed light that comes from casting light on a shadow. (Penumbra) And in this attack, Aerik forces the Elemental energy of his Zanpakuto into an attack capable of creating craters, and vaporizing whole buildings. This is an entirely Reiatsu-based attack, and its focus of energy is so great, that Aerik only uses it as a last resort to force an enemy back, as it can bring him from good health, to exasperatedly gasping for breathe.
The Illusionists Grasp on the Mind -The Ultimate Illusionary technique, Aerik creates a barrier-like Sphere around himself and his opponent, and should the Opponent not attempt to escape in any way, or attacks Aerik, Aerik instantly has a grasp on the Opponent. He brings him to an Inner World where it is all purely under the control of Aerik. Any damage taken by the opponent is Mental. Aerik recieves no Mental Damage, but the damage sustained in the Illusionary world saps his stamina. The only way to break out of this world is to defeat Aerik, or have Aerik drop the Illusion.
Prior Knowledge (Using Two Attack Slots for This) -Aerik whilst in Bankai, has the Ability to use the Techniques from his Shikai.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • 4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from • 31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon) Fires a ball of red energy at a target. • 33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Firefall) Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power. • 54. Haien (廃炎, Nullific Flames) Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact. • 63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Sear) Fires a massive wave of yellow energy at a target.
• 73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin-Wake Blue Firefall) Essentially a doubled version of #33, this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety.
• 88. Hiryūgekizokushintenraihō (飛竜撃賊震天雷炮, Flying Dragon Marring Heaven-Shaking Thunder-Sear) Fires a gigantic electricity blast of spiritual energy resulting in a truly enormous explosion.
• 90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) Envelops the target with a powerful torrent of gravity that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. According to Aizen, it has the power to distort both space and time.
• 91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) Summons several spears of light that are all fired towards the same focal point where the intended target resides. The culminating explosion is exceedingly devastating.
▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • 4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) An energy rope entangles the target's arms. • 9. Geki (撃, Strike) Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them.
• 26. Kyokkō (曲光, Bent Light) Hides the target from sight, by bending light. The spell has the ability to totally hide the presence and reiatsu of the user or specified object. Incantation: Unknown
• 30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Thrust Tri-Flash) Forming a golden triangle with one's finger, it shoots three beams of light that pin the target to one place on a surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in a shape of an equilateral triangle.
• 39. Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan) Summons a shield of condensed reiatsu to block opponents' attacks.
• 58. Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Trace-Catching Pursuit Sparrows) Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on.
• 61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six-Staff Light Prison) Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams.
• 62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred-Step Rail Parch) A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile.
• 73. Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal) Creates an inverted pyramid-shaped barrier around the caster.
• 75. Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Five-Post Iron Weights) Summons five incredibly tall and thick pillars which are connected to each other by chains to pin a target to the ground.
• 77. Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Void Net) Transmits messages mentally to anyone within an area of the caster's choosing.
• 81. Dankū (断空, Severing Void) Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89. This is seen also when Aizen uses it to block Tessai's Hadō #88.
• 99, Part 1. Kin (禁, Seal) Ties the target's arms on the back in addition to wrapping the spiritual fabric around the entire body, and continues to pin the target with spiritual fabric stacked to the ground around the target with several iron shafts in an "X" shape.
• 99, Part 2. Bankin (卍禁, Great Seal) This spell covers the target from head to toe with spiritual fabric (First Song), stabs them with numerous metal bolts (Second Song), and then smashes them with an immense metal cube (Final Song).
▬▬┤|Other Spells • Unknown Sentan Hakuja (千反白蛇, "Thousand-Coil White Snake") A spell that teleports a group of people from one place to another. • Unknown Shisō Kekkai (四葬結界, Quad Burial Barrier) This technique was used by Genryūsai Shigekuni Yamamoto, and is the seal used to lock away Kōga Kuchiki.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:21 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Amora Morono Nickname: Amore(Love), The Moonlit flower
True Age: 19 Age Appeared: 18 Birthdate: April 21st Gender: Female Ethnicity: Japanese/Native American Blood Type: O
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Height: 5'5 Weight: 119 Eye Color: Hazel Hair Color: Brunette
Life View: "Power is deadly in the hands of evil, but what is it in the hands of light?" Personality: Amora is a sweet girl at heart but tends to come off as a promiscuous b***h at times. She is flirty and fun, always the life of a party. Her confidence levels are high but she is not cocky(she knows her limits). The idea of her speaking her mind at all times seems to be the reason why some people might find her rude, but it is just who she is. Her flirty ways are meant to cover up her own emotional scars and avoid really connecting with people.
Likes: Spicy food Blood Orange tea Music Fighting Men(tall, and handsome) Gymnastics
Dislikes Negative Nancies Enemies of Cladeux Unhealthy foods Bullies
Side: Neutral(Ally of Cladeux) ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Amora was born in Sapporo,Japan on April 21st to a loving couple, each of them struggling to support their family. Amora never realized how much her parents struggled to keep her happy because they were always smiling. She grew up loved by her family and never knew how much trouble her family was in. When she was about 5 she started attending school, and was praised for her high level of intelligence. Her parents were proud of thier daughter, especially when she began taking gymnastic lessons. She wanted to be a star and go to America. It was her dream, and her parents always promised they would take her. That day would never come. Amora began attending highschool, and it was pretty rough her freshman year. She was always picked on for being nerdy and smarter than all her peers. She was called wierd because she was unable to have some of the things the others were allowed to have, like cellphones for example. She felt very discouraged and went through her freshman year depressed. One day after school, after being teased so badly, she went home and cried. She wanted herself to be changed, so that people would not look at her as different. To make matters worse, she had finally learned that her family was struggling and would lose their house soon. Her father decided to ask for help from a Mobster named Yoki. The man agreed to pay for thier home, and they were allowed to stay there for another 3 years. Her father was required to pay the mobster back after the time limit was up. As the years went by, Amora started to become more attractive to the opposite sex. People became nicer to her and respected her alot more. This fueled her ego a bit, which is why she is so promiscuous now. Things seemed to be going well for her. The rug was pulled from beneath her feet one night as a the mobster came to her home wanting the money her father owed him. Her father pleaded with the man to give them just a few more days. Yoki was not happy and ordered his men to destroy the house. From the upstairs she could hear her mother screaming, only to be silenced by the sound of gunshots. Amora stayed in her room and prayed as the men bounded up the steps. They broke into the room and pointed there guns at her. She held her head down in defeat and waited for the men to kill her. At once they all fired releasing a stream of bullets upon her. Amora screamed, only to hear the bullets smack against a solidified wall. She looked up to see that she had been surrounded by a flower like structure that extended from her necklace. The men screamed in terror, calling her a monster as they fled. Amora, traumitized by the events sat in her room for days after calling the police. Amora knew that because she had alerted the police, the men would be back for her. She was haunted for months by the face of Yoki, and her dead parents. She was alone and scared. For her, her world had ended. Finally, her prayers had been answered in a unexpected way.
She moved in with her Uncle in Karakura town, finishing up her senior year there. Instead of becoming a olympic gymnast, she had become a bartender in hopes that she would make enough money to one day go to America and purseu that dream while still training under her coach. A man named Cladeux introduced himself to her one night after the bar was closing. He introduced himself and the chance to discover her, 'potential'. It was then that her eyes were opened to her spiritual gifts that he began to teach her how to control. A new goal had appeared in her mind, to become a strong fullbringer for her newfound ally and to protect her loved ones. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Heavenly Orange Reiryoku Level: Weak
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Practitioner Level • Air Dash: Practitioner Level • Bring Light: No Skill Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: •Grappling: Practitioner Level { start at this level } •Gymnastic Street Fighting Style: This style is characterized by many dancelike and gymnastic maneuvers - graceful and versatile spins, cartwheels, handstands, tumbles and pirouettes.This fighting style is probably self-learned and self-developed by herself, since her father, who loathes violence, would probably never allow her to even practice any sort of formal martial arts training. This is probably why some of Amora's moves often reflect her background and personality.
Known Weapon Styles: • Fullbring Combat: Practitioner Level • Weapon Combat: Practitioner Level Reiryoku Techniques: • Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level Other Techniques: • Dashing: Practitioner Level • Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths: • Flexability • Perceptive Sight Weaknesses: • Physically stronger targets • Fire Fears: • Spiders • Death • Fear of losing those close to her
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Fullbring: Object Affinity Fullbring Name: Hanahime(Flower Princess) Object Location: Around her neck(See pic) Object Appearance: Flower neckalce Object Type: Pendant Fullbring Power: Allows Amora to manipulate nature and absorb sunlight, essentially becoming a human plant. ▬▬┤|Fullbring: Unlocking Unlocked Name: "Awaken flower in the Moon!" Unlocked Enchantments: Her stamina and ability to speed up her body's healing process. Unlocked Description:The pendant breaks and forms three medium medium sized flower petals on both wrists(two leaves on both hands as well). Allows her to mystically channel nature through her body. Unlocked Ability: Flower Cannon - Places both hands together to form a flower bud. The flower bud holds stored sunlight energy that, when the bud is opened, it releases sunlight in destructive orbs.
Language of the flowers - By whispering to the petals on her hand she can store a message in them. That message can reach her allies by floating off her wrist and to the designated ally.
Blossom - Amora places her hands on the ground to cause vines to grow out in a circle underneath her. The sunlight stored in the vines pulse upwards, healing minor wounds of those within the circle.
Boon of Petals - By placing her hands together, she can form a large blossoming flower that is harder than steel. It is capable of deflecting attacks from enemies. *One of the few abilities that is unaffected by fire. Two post cool down.
Leaf blades - The four leaves, two on each of her hands, multiply to become 8 steel like leaves. The leaves spin rapidly and when fired by Amora, become deadly blades capable of seriously injuring her targets.
Pheremones - By placing both hands together she forms a full flower that releases a large gaseous cloud of pheremones. Should the pheremones be inhaled, the victim experiences visions of lust, and become easier targets to take out. The gas extends out 10 feet in front of her and lingers in the air for two posts. *Three post cooldown. ▬▬┤|Fullbring: Awakening Awakening Name: "I am the Flower Princess!" Awakening Enchantments: Speed is increased, power and speed of healing abilities increases. Awakening Description: Amora becomes one with nature and can manipulate it through her surroundings. Flower Princess Mode Awakening Ability:
Nature's Calling - Allows Amora to freely manipulate plants with hand gestures and use them to attack her enemies. (Giant lashing vines, etc.)
Thousand Blooming Flowers - The flower buds on her hands disperse into tiny petals that glow luminescently with stored sunlight and swirl around her targets. They are meant to mesmerize the enemy as a distraction.
Pixie Dust - A shimmering orange dust is released from a plant that Amora grows, flowing out into a gaseous cloud. Victims who inhale the pheremones become infatuated with her and attack their allies for two posts. Gas lingers for two posts, with a 5 post cooldown.
Photosynthesis - Amora forms a large flower around targets that absorbs large amounts of sunlight and can restore the reiatsu of a target as well as heal major wounds.
Venus Flytrap - Summons a large venus flytrap that stays at Amora's side and fights her enemies. It can fire sharp thorns off it's vine as well as defend her from certain attacks with it's body. It can eat people should it manage to get a target. Can be taken out by high level fire abilities.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:49 pm
Below is a checklist of things that need to be changed in order for your profile to be officially approved. If any other information is specified it will be in the extra section below.
[√] You have a lot of attacks for a Shikai, please remove at least 2-3. I suggest the shadow attacks, because if your power is light then shadows especially shouldn't be involved. Seeing as darkness is the absence of light. So your power would be weak in that case. One shadow skill is okay, like Shadow Balance.
I really think your zanpaktou is really cool!
I approve, but please fix the changes that I have told you to. If you don't agree with my suggestion then please pm me and I'll be happy to talk about it.
I am leaving soonish, so if no one has gotten to your profile when I come back I'll look over it. o3o
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:53 pm
Viivace Below is a checklist of things that need to be changed in order for your profile to be officially approved. If any other information is specified it will be in the extra section below.
[ ] You have a lot of attacks for a Shikai, please remove at least 2-3. I suggest the shadow attacks, because if your power is light then shadows especially shouldn't be involved. Seeing as darkness is the absence of light. So your power would be weak in that case. One shadow skill is okay, like Shadow Balance.
I really think your zanpaktou is really cool!
I approve, but please fix the changes that I have told you to. If you don't agree with my suggestion then please pm me and I'll be happy to talk about it.
I am leaving soonish, so if no one has gotten to your profile when I come back I'll look over it. o3o Vivi, he's a captain, he can have up to 8.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 6:59 pm
Oh mmk then, we were just messaging over it. :O
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:07 pm
Okay. Thank you, you guys. I appreciate it.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:35 pm
Gymnastics would be Practitioner, other then that, approved.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:40 pm
Enzio Kageryuu Gymnastics would be Practitioner, other then that, approved. Mmk, I'll edit that in. Thank you for looking at my profile ^.^
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 9:23 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Jubaku Hogosho Nickname: Ji-san (If he's in a good mood) True Age: 646 Age Appeared: 46 Birthdate: Maarch 17th Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: AB Sexuality: Straight Height: 6' 0" Weight: 160 lbs. Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: Silver-Gray Life View: "Justice and Vengeance never walk the same path". Appearance:  Jubaku is normally depicted as a middle-aged man with semi-short, straight, silver hair that extends all the way to the bottom of the back of his neck and a semi-long goatee/beard that is trimmed up, but covers the majority of his chin. He wears a non-standard shinigami uniform in that his left sleeve his been cut up to his bicep and the bottom portion of his uniform is divided into two leg sleeves instead of the standard single skirt-type. On his left arm, he wears a bandage cloth from the middle of his forearm to the middle of his knuckles. He wears his Captain's haori drapped over his shoulders, which gives the appearance that he is bigger than he actually is. Two of his signature possessions that can be often seen with him are his large, slender, gnarled-topped, wooden walking cane and his long, entricately carved, silver pipe. Markings:Several dozens of scars across his entire body, the most prominent of these are the star-shaped scar across the right side of his forehead and the single scar across his right eye (he is not partially blind). Personality: Jubaku is a completely duty-bound individual who puts his work before everything else, even personal relationships. He is the kind of man who is unwavering in his loyalty to his friends and to his duty. He is a composed and intelligent leader who is capable of making difficult decisions in the instant that they are needed. He has a commanding prescence in front of his subordinates and fellow Captains during which he often says things that are completely blunt and to the point regardless if anyone's feelings might be hurt in the process. He has a kind and compassionate side as well which gives him the great gift of listening to the problems of others and always having helpful advice or suggestions to offer them. It is this side of him that often makes his closer subordinates and colleages look to him as a father-figure or teacher. However, Jubaku is not the kind of individual who is capable of building relationships with just anyone. He has a unique character flaw of having a fear of opening up to people, which often causes him to come off as being rather blunt and cold to others. His character flaw does, however, have a good point in that with the handful of relationships that he does make, he will often express a deep level of feelings and emotions in those few individuals. Likes: Sunbathing with a towel draped over his shoulders, hot baths, and solemn walks across the Seireitei Dislikes: Hot tempered adolescences, ignorance of the law, abandonment of duty, and traitors Division: Nanabantai Rank: Captain Side: Shinigami ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Jubaku was born in the 77th Rukon District and from a very young age he had a considerable level of reiatsu, but what seperated him from others was his natural aptitude at controlling it not needing significant training at all. When he was an early teenager, he experienced the feeling of loss for the first time having lost his family to the ever more deplorable conditions of the Rukongai. He alone survived and traveled from outskirt to outskirt within the Rukongai for the next few years. After having ample time to ponder over what to do next, he one day past by a lone Shinigami practicing with his zanpakuto alone. The dedication and commitment the Shinigami put forth into his training was an inspiration to Jubaku. It was from that day on that he would devote himself to learning the ways of the Shinigami and soon after enrolled in the Academy. It was during this time that Jubaku's natural talents really stood out. His affinity for the sword allowed him to master it in no less than a couple of days and, while his kido skills were rough around the edges, he soon polished his skills and mastered it too. Jubaku still currently holds one ofr the fastest graduation records at exactly 1 month and 23 days. Upon graduation from the Academy, Jubaku was soon placed within Squad 8 under Captain Kyoraku where he quickly climbed to the position of 4th seat officer. After a few months, he was transferred out of Squad 8 and into the ranks of Squad 7 where he took the 3rd Seat officer position. Jubaku soon met an enthusiastic young Shinigami by the name of Lloyd. The two had their differences and were hesitant to interact with one another, but in time the two became best of friends and are still to this day. After a few years Jubaku would take the place of his Captain and become the active Captain of Squad 7. It was during this time that Jubaku would return to the Academy and begin teaching there as an instructor where he remains to this day. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Dark Blue Reiryoku Level: Great Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Advanced • Air Dash: Expert • Shunpo: Master Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Expert Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Master • Iaido : Master • Kendo: Advanced Reiryoku Techniques: • Kido Spells: Expert • Reiryoku Gathering: Master Other Techniques: • Dashing: Expert • Jumping: Advanced Strengths: • Swordsmanship • Advanced Combat Experience Weaknesses: • Kido • Agility Fears: • The destruction of his home • The loss of his purpose ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Zankoku (Harshness) Zanpakuto Location: On his hip within his obi Zanpakuto Appearance: katana with a jet black sheath and a modified hand guard extending out from the top of the handle and coming straight down at a perfect 90 degree angle. A gray, tattered piece of cloth dangles from the butt of the sword where it is tied in such a way that divides it into two pieces in which one is long and the other is a bit shorter. Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Zankoku could best be described as the strong, but silent type. Zankoku has a habit of using as very few words as possible, if any at all, to get across what he is tying to communicate, which leads to him use his frequent "one-liners" which are composed of one or maybe two words at most when he is talking to others. He is usually very passive and calm most of the time, but has a suprisingly short fuse when it comes to sensitive topics or issues that offend him. Like Jubaku, he is very unemotional in front of others, but has been shown to be capable of demonstrating deep levels of feeling. Zankoku also has an odd, curious nature to him. He is constantly moving from place to place trying to find things that picque his curiousity, even at times when it is inappropriate. His curiosity has a bad habit of showing itself at the worst times, such as in the middle of a battle. The cause of his curiousity is the fact that, like Jubaku, he doesn't really comprehend things such as emotions and normal social interactions and habits, and as Jubaku doesn't act on these urges to learn more about them, this curiousity manifests itself in Zankoku. Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana Zanpakuto Element: Fire ▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Zankoku (Harshness) Shikai Incantation: Fade Their Existance Shikai Description: A large headsman-style poleaxe with a large guilloutine-shaped blade on one side, a large, flat hammer extension on the other side of the shaft and a large, slender spike between the two at the top of the pole. The tattered cloth from the sealed form carries over as it now appears tied right below the base of the large axehead and tied in the same way that seperates it into one long piece and one slightly shorter piece. Shikai Ability: Uses Jubaku's reiatsu reserves to create giant bursts of bluish, fiery energy from the hammer side of the poleaxe as the axe side opens up to create a type of accelerator that can increase Jubaku's attack power and cutting force or propel Jubaku towards objects or people at high speeds. Tomoshibimaru (Light's Fang) - The stored energy in the accelerator on the back of the pole is directed into the axehead where it is stored until Jubaku releases it from the spike atop the axe in a solid pillar-shaped beam of light-based rieatsu that is capable of being widened to a point where it can raze building to the ground or narrowed to the thickness equivalent to a head of a needle for penetrating the strongest defenses and wounding or killing enemies with pin-point accuracy. The beam has varying levels of strength and firing speed depending on how long it has been charged. Short charges allow for small, rapid attacks that are much weaker in strength compared to a much longer charge that gives the attack immeasurable destructive power and range. Phantom Cleaver - Jubaku's signature shikai attack that involves a full head-on assault using his axe's accelerator. The cutting force of this attack is enough to cut hard metal with such force that the metal literally ripps itself apart by the sheer force of the cut rather than the act of cutting it. This is where this attack got its name as it looks as if the attack cuts right through something without actually touching it when, in reality, the force of the cut is actually ripping apart what's right in front the blade as the blade passes through or over something. Death Claw - An attack that utilizes the accelerator's charging function. Jubaku begins to charge the accelerator as he holds the axe behind him in a strike-ready position. As he charges the accelerator, instead of using it to create a massive speed boost for his attacks and himself, the energy is transfered into the axehead where it is released when Jubaku swings the axe upwards over the ground creating three crescent-shaped bursts of rieatsu that rend the ground as they surge towards the opponent creating a claw-like mark in the ground behind them before finally exploding with massive force upon contact. This attack does not require Jubaku to be stationary amd its strength and distance will vary depending on how long the charge is. ▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: Kakokuna Zankoku (Harsh Punishment) Bankai Incantation: Focus of Reiatsu into his sword and then sheaths it before drawing it back out with a cut and annunciates Bankai. Bankai Description:  Jubaku's Bankai gives his the unique ability to phase through solid objects as well as a nightmarish boost in his spped and strength. As he phases, the area around the part of his body that is phasing through an object is outlined by a silouhette of the blue fire, or Soulfire. This ability has limits however. Jubaku can only phase through solid objects if he is in direct contact with a physical area, such as the ground or a wall. If he can phase his entire body through a solid object, he can only stay phased in it as long as he can hold his breath. Since Jubaku can only phase through solid objects, reiatsu based attacks, such as Cero and Kido, can touch him. His Bankai also manifests itself in the form of a pure, geometric-style reiatsu axehead made entirely of yellow-colored, light-based reiatsu. When not in use, the ethereal axehead disperses and only the jet black pole of the axe is left. The empty top of the pole is what normally manifests when Jubaku goes into Bankai. The axehead itself wieghs practically nothing and can phase with Jubaku since it is also a part of his Bankai, hence a part of himself. Bankai Abilities: Fading Umbra - An attack that involves Jubaku's phasing ability in which Jubaku phases his entire body into the ground for a time to launch suprise attacks and evade incoming attacks. It can be used both offensively and defensively, but the downside is that while he is phased into a surface, his shadow with appear on the flat surface and move with him in a ghostly manner, which can easily give away his position when moving from one surface to another. This attack requires that Jubaku have all of the requirements to phase and is restricted for the amount of time he can stay phased by the amount of time he can hold his breath which is represented by 2 to 7 posts depending on how exhausted he is and how much spiritual energy he has used. Final Revenant - The pure reiatsu axehead splits into the sprial-shaped disks of consecutive size being one larger than the next. These disks have a black, metal structure spiraling out from their center and the same bluish, fire-based reiatsu following along that same pattern to create a complete spiral shaped disk that resembles a hinotama. These disks can be used to attack an opponent from different directions using rieatsu-based beams of energy that resemble lasers which fire in rapid succession giving Jubaku a greater range of attacks to choose from when approaching a situation. There main function however shows itself when Jubaku's pole for his axe splits into tiny pieces and covers his arms and legs in a black kind of armor giving him greater offensive power when Jubaku uses the accelerator funtion of the disks to increase his speed exponentially and begins to use various forms of hand-to-hand combat. When not in use, they normally orbit around Jubaku in a specific pattern of largest to smallest with the smallest being the furthest from him and their orbits only intersect directly in front of Jubaku with only an inch or so between them as they pass over one another this being when Jubaku chooses not to use his normal sword form. These disks can also release a continuous or sudden burst of Soulfire that resembles the accelerator from Jubaku's Shikai. These bursts vary in strength depending on the disk they are coming from. If placed behind Jubaku, these disks can act as another kind of accelerator giving him more mobility with less wieght instead of raw speed and power like in his Shikai. Bakekyu Zessho - Jubaku's most destructive and damaging attack while in Bankai and his Bankai's signiture attack. The ethereal axehead becomes five times longer and wider than normal as Jubaku supercharges it which increases its range and cutting force. This attack is executed by knocking the opponent into the area and then jumping up after him where Jubaku performs a downward slash that accumulates damage by dragging the opponent down with it until slamming them itno the ground with collosal force and power. Prior Knowledge (Using Two Attack Slots for This) -Aerik whilst in Bankai, has the Ability to use the Techniques from his Shikai. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • 1. Shō (衝, Thrust) Pushes the target away from the caster. • 4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their fingertip. • 31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon) Fires a ball of red energy at a target. • 33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Firefall) Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power. • 54. Haien (廃炎, Nullific Flames) Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact. • 58. Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky) A widening tornado-like blast is fired towards the target. • 63. Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Sear) Fires a massive wave of yellow energy at a target. • 73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin-Wake Blue Firefall) Essentially a doubled version of #33, this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety. ▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • 1. Sai (塞, Block) Locks a target's arms in place behind their back. • 4. Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) An energy rope entangles the target's arms. • 9. Geki (撃, Strike) Engulfs the target in red light, completely paralyzing them. • 30. Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Thrust Tri-Flash) Forming a golden triangle with one's finger, it shoots three beams of light that pin the target to one place on a surface, slamming into his or her body in three places in a shape of an equilateral triangle. • 39. Enkōsen (円閘扇, Round Lock Fan) Summons a shield of condensed reiatsu to block opponents' attacks. • 61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six-Staff Light Prison) Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams. • 62. Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred-Step Rail Parch) A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile. • 77. Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Void Net) Transmits messages mentally to anyone within an area of the caster's choosing. • 81. Dankū (断空, Severing Void) Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89. This is seen also when Aizen uses it to block Tessai's Hadō #88. ▬▬┤|Other Skills • Ikkotsu (一骨, "Single Bone"): A powerful punch used o cripple and incapacitate opponents with a single blow. • Sōkotsu (双骨, "Double Bone"): Being stronger than Ikkotsu, it is a powerful two-fisted punch. The attack can completely destroy a much weaker opponent with a single blow.
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 9:25 pm
Profile's up and thank God. My back hurts from typing so much....
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 9:58 pm
Okay,
- Please follow the layout EXACTLY as I had put it, I apologize if it is not to your liking, but it must be followed again as it was made.
- Please do not remove BB Codes. Please repost following the complete profile layout. Your profile is seen as incomplete without them. ( This includes all BB Codes from font size, color, and etc. ) ( I only allow the change of the Formats color at most. )
- Your Zanpakuto spirit & Bankai image needs to be in: (Name Here) Form please.
These things need to be fixed before I look at the profile complete and address anything within the depths of it. I apologize if this sounds harsh, but I'm very serious when it comes to following layouts.
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 7:25 am
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Lizabeth Salander Nickname: Cero // Zero // "Clawed Espada"
True Age: 275 Years Old Age Appeared: 22 Birthdate: June 16th Gender: Female Ethnicity: English // French Blood Type: AB -
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Height: 5 ' 7 Weight: 135 lbs Eye Color: Ocean Blue Hair Color: Brunette Mask Remnant: Both Clavicles Hollow Hole Location: Her Bellybutton
Life View: (To Her Majesty) "You know what I like about you? You enjoy being in control. Like me. " Personality: Despite Lizabet appearence, she is a battle hardened individual. She feels battle is the one thing that connects everyone and everything, having this thinking passes on to her in the afterlife. Although the other Espada give her a lot of grief for protecting the Menos and GIllian Hollows; she sees them as the first libe of defense against those that would dare invade.
Likes: - Menos and Gillian Hollows - Reading human books - Honoring "His / Her Elegance " Dislikes - Wine Wine - Human smell ( Body Odor ) - Tight spaces ( Freaks her out )
Aspect of Death: ... Obsession ... Fraccion: Rank: Zéro // Cero // Núll Side: Hueco Mundo // Los Noches ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
- Lizabeth grew up in Southern France to an English mother and a French father, she was more then cared for and nothing seemed to be a boundary for her. She is a smart and fearless girl, but that would all change in a blink of an eye...
at the age of 22, Lizabeth was taken from her home in the middle of the night by french radicles. Fearing for her life; her parents searched for her along with the Police Force. This was an event that would be on going for months. Lizabeth was held in complete darkness without adequate food or water, as she was held her hatred for her captors would grow and grow. In the coming weeks they would learn that Lizabeth...smart and bright as she was would turn darker and darker.
One day, Lizabeth would escape from her captors; killing all but one of them. As ehe left, the last one approached her and viciously stabbed her. Dragging her back into that dark place, she would slowly meet her death. She knew that she had to sacrifice herself to make a stand against them. She closed her eyes and died. She may have left he physical realm but her hate and the feeling of self-sacrifice would stay...lingering around that last attacker. Her spirit manifested into a massive hollow with even more massive claws...she laughed at the irony that she was going to devour the person that metaphorically devoured her spirit.
After devouring is spirit and gaining this sense of power, she grasp the mask and troe it from herself...she dawned an new form and entered the Hueco Mundo. This would be where she would continue to hunt and devour souls of her fellow hollow/gillian. Her body gres in power with each Hollow or Gillian she consumed...until she rose to the power of Vasto Lorde; this is when she would be recruited to the Espada.
her body is still reminiscent of her Adjuchas past, dawning claws on her feet and hands. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Blue and Silver Reiryoku Level: Great
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Master • Air Dash: Expert • Sonido: Master
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Master • Muay Thai - Advanced
Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Master • Kendo: Master Reiryoku Technique: • Reiryoku Gathering: Master Other Techniques: • Dashing: Expert • Jumping: Expert
Strengths: • Hand to Hand Combat (( or Hand to Claw )) • Her Weapon Abilities
Weaknesses: • Extremely Long Fights •
Fears: • { what are you scared of } • •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Uhrata Zanpakuto Location: Strapped to her back Zanpakuto Appearance:Kage Gunsen (( Generals Massive Army )) Zanpakuto Element: Ajña (Third Eye): Light // Dark
▬▬┤|Resurrección Resurrección Name: Uhrata - [ True Sacrifice ] Resurrección Incantation: " Otan Mitä on Arvokas Sinulle " - [ Let me take what is precious to you ] Resurrección Description: Her mask remnant grows and engulfs most ribs, around her breasts. It travels down her left arm and engulfs it completely; massive wings sprout from her back giving her the ability to fly. Resurrección Ability:
Début (( 1st Act )): Lizabeth reveals the one said of her Zanpakto which is inscribed with the word 'Debut", upon its reveal a complete darkness envelopes the area. Lizabeths eyes take in all light, making her nearly immune to her own technique.
Deuxième (( 2nd Act )): Used in conjunction nwith the first attack, Lizabeth sends out a burst of light in an attempt to weaken further the sight of the opponent.
Troisième (( Third Act )): LIzabeth fires a Cero that is infused with her Zanpakutos ability to manipulate light and dark. This Cero is negative in color and powerful enough and hot enough to melt the sand of the Hueco Mundo.
Quatrième (( Fourth Act)): Lizabeth taps her Zanpakto on the ground and with her spiritual energy; she summons a legion of Gillian. Their power is doubled and they are completely obedient to this Espada.
Quinte (( Fifth Act )): Lizabeth sends out a barrage of slashes in the form of dark arcs, these arcs are the most deadly...they are able to slice through most matter and destroy even the Hueco Mundo.
Massive Tir Garganta: The traditional Garganta opens and the turbulent Reishi is unleashed unto the plane. Humans would see this as a mass of black clouds but, the Reishi is choking and detrimental is anyone else.
▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa Segunda Etapa Name: Greiver Segunda Etapa Incantation: " Let me show you true sacrifice.." Segunda Etapa Description: -_- Segunda Etapa Ability:
Blancheur Cero: It is a white Cero with a red outline to it, which Lizabeth states to be similar to His/Her Majesties Cero. This Cero presumably can only be used while he is in her release state. Lizabeths Cero in this state is strong enough to blast a hole bigger then the Los Noches itself.
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• Bala • Cero • Hierro • Gonzui • Pesquisa • Negación • Garaganta
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Diablo en Musica 92 Aspect of Death Changed and Life View
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 2:11 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Lloyd vi Fury Nickname: Sir
True Age: 912 Age Appeared: 30 Birthdate: 11/25 Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: AB+ Sexuality: Heterosexual
Height: 6'0" Weight: 150lbs { all muscle } Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: Brown { has claw marks/scars right through his left eye but it is still intact}
Life View: For Lloyd, life is seen as many things for other people. It can been seen as a cause for joy and happiness for some and for others an utter curse but however Lloyd's view on life is this. Everything must die and something must be the cause. Lloyd sees him self as one of those causes and wouldn't hesitate to take a life for the sake of another or to simply rid the world of one less creature.
Personality: Lloyd Carries with him a smug looking grin , as he is extremely confidant about him self and his abilities. This however is not a weakness as he is not cocky despite this fact. He rarely engages in idle talk and is mostly straight forward. He likes to keep a professional manner at all times when in the soul society and only when he is taking time off will he seem to let up the tense feeling he carries with him. He is also very calm in the face of any danger or challenge that may come his way.
Likes: -Sake -Peaceful times -Beautiful women Dislikes -People calling him old -Chaos -Running out of sake
Division: Zero Squad Rank: Captain Side:Shinigami ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Lloyd Fury was a Nobleman, but not just any Nobleman, for he was a Fury Clan Nobleman and that meant something, It meant that he belonged to a social class above all other and that he had to be the best regardless of the levels of others. This was of course all a bunch of crap to Lloyd. He could care less about the expectations of his Clan. Yes he would honer the clan and strive to be the best, but he would do it not because it was expected of him , but because he wanted it for him self. Of all his brothers, he was exceptionally gifted with a Spiritual energy like no other, a spiritual pressure that crush most people before a fight even began.His high spiritual pressure made fire Kido a hazard and he often blew up many training grounds in the academy and unlike his younger brother Raimundo , his days in the academy were long and hard. He was not gifted at Kido like he was but it wouldn't be long before he did get the hang of it. Despite his long time in the academy, after graduating he was placed straight into squad 11 as an unseated member. Hi s strength was legendary but his skill was still lacking and it was because of this that he remained as an unseated member. He could crush his opponents without any trouble at all but that was only because he was stronger than them, his lacking of skill would mean that a more experienced fighter would trump him and so unseated he remained.
After many many years of training and fighting Hollows he was finally moved to squad 10 and made the 5th seat.Lloyd had no doubt improved and it was by this time that his Brother Raimundo was 7th seat in squad 5. The kid was moving up but still behind despite his talents. Lloyd continued to be a force to be reckoned with and it would be many many more years before his position would change to the Captain of Squad 10 due to the untimely death of his captain and the mysterious disappearance of the Vice captain. It was later then made clear to Lloyd that some other hand was at play in his gaining captaincy and it would seem the Clan had a hand in it, but he couldn't be sure. Years later he rose to head of the Fury Clan and with one word he banished the elders of the Clan to a far away place, no one knows where or better yet even why he did this , but one thing was certain and that was Lloyd was in charge from now on.
It would be another 100 years before Lloyd quit being a soul reaper and gave up his title of Captain, he wanted to become more involved with his clan and he was willing to give up his title. But before he could complete his retirement he received a message and upon receiving this message it was said that he vanished from soul society shortly after. No one knows what the message had said and no one knows where he had gone, but his Captain position was quickly filled and all would be well.It was rumored that he was given the position of Zero Squad Captain and that he spent all his time training for the day that the king would need him to defend the soul society.
It has been many years now and the death of Raimundo vi Fury Captain of squad 12 had taken it's toll on the Fury clan and just as everyone was ready to ask what would become of the Clan, Lloyd vi Fury enters the Fury Clans house with a serious look on his face and a rage pit of fury burning in his chest. Lloyd had finally returned, Captain of the Zero Squad. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Pure White Reiryoku Level: Immense
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Air Dash: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Shunpo: No Skills { start at this level } Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • { you may have one more at the same level } Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Kendo: Practitioner Level { start at this level } Reiryoku Techniques: • Kido Spells: Practitioner Level { starting at this level } • Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level { starting at this level } Other Techniques: • Dashing: Practitioner Level { start at this level } • Jumping: Practitioner Level { start at this level }
Strengths: • All forms of Close Quarters Combat • Brute Strength Weaknesses: • Fast moving targets • Losing Senses Fears: • Losing a battle • Failing the soul king • Losing clan members
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: グランドドラゴン死刑執行人{Grand dragon executioner} Zanpakuto Location: In his left hand, As it is two long to put anywhere on his body and it has no sheath. Zanpakuto Appearance:X Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: X Zanpakuto Sword Type: Great Katanna { 10ft long } Zanpakuto Element: Earth ▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: グランドドラゴン死刑執行人{Grand dragon executioner} Shikai Incantation: " Hear me roar " Shikai Description: Zanpakutou doesn't change however it is now glowing a pale white color. Shikai Ability: The Zanpakutou's Carbon Levels are off the charts making it the densest hardest mineral on the planet . For Lloyd the Zanpakutou is rather light despite it being 10ft long and always as heavy as a mountain but others would be crushed utterly by it's massive weight.Just by swinging the Zanpakutou Lloyd is able to send Crescent moon shaped waves of Spiritual energy towards his enemies.
死刑執行人の斧{ Executioner's Axe }: Lloyd floods his zanpakutou with spiritual energy and swings it down towards his Enemies. They weight of his Zanpakutou would certainly be enough to cause massive damage to his enemies but the added Spiritual energy explodes outward added a destructive force that literally cracks the earth and anything around 10ft in a 360 degree angle at the point of the Zanpakutou's impact.
グランドドラゴン死刑執行人の怒り{Grand Dragon Executioner's Wrath}: Lloyd Slams his Zanpakutou into the ground and it causes the earth to shake and quake for a few seconds, then the ground all around Lloyd for 500 meters of his position in 360 degrees in all directions literally causing the ground to cave in beneath that entire radios except the spot that he him self is standing on.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: 究極のグランドドラゴン死刑執行人{Ultimate Grand Dragon Executioner} Bankai Incantation: "Roar once again" Bankai Description: Looks the same as the Shikai only change is that Lloyd gains two Gauntlets of stone one for each hand. Bankai Ability:Same as before mentioned but Lloyd now gains the additional power to manipulate the Earth to his will.
死刑執行人の斧{ Executioner's Axe }: Lloyd floods his zanpakutou with spiritual energy and swings it down towards his Enemies. They weight of his Zanpakutou would certainly be enough to cause massive damage to his enemies but the added Spiritual energy explodes outward added a destructive force that literally cracks the earth and anything around 40ft in a 360 degree angle at the point of the Zanpakutou's impact. グランドドラゴン死刑執行人の怒り{Grand Dragon Executioner's Wrath}: Lloyd Slams his Zanpakutou into the ground and it causes the earth to shake and quake for a few seconds, then the ground all around Lloyd for 1000 meters of his position in 360 degrees in all directions literally causing the ground to cave in beneath that entire radios except the spot that he him self is standing on.
究極のグランドドラゴン死刑執行人のパワー{Ultimate Grand Dragon Executioner's Power }: Lloyd is able to manipulate the earth around him to encase his enemies, Trap his enemies in a prison of earth, send projectiles of Earth towards his enemies and even create Earth shields/domes to protect himself or others.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells 1. Shō (衝, Clash) Pushes the target away from the caster.
4. Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
31. Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon) Fires a ball of red energy at a target
73. Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin-Wake Blue Firefall) Essentially a doubled version of #33, this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety.
90. Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) Envelops the target with a powerful torrent of gravity that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe. According to Aizen, it has the power to distort both space and time.
91. Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) Summons several spears of light that are all fired towards the same focal point where the intended target resides. The culminating explosion is exceedingly devastating.
Unknown Jūgeki Byakurai (Kaizō Kidō) (重撃白雷 (改造鬼道), "Heavy-Strike Pale Lightning (Modified Kidō)") A modified version of the #4. Hadō spell Byakurai.
Unknown Gaki Rekkō (牙気裂光, Raging Light Fang) This technique was used by Kōga Kuchiki. A spell that makes a circle of energy, before firing blasts of green light from its center in a cage-like formation.
▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells 1. Sai (塞, Block) Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
8. Seki (斥, Repulsion) Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it.
61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six-Staff Light Prison) Summons six thin, wide beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. The target is then unable to move any part of their body including the parts that were not struck by the beams.
81. Dankū (断空, Severing Void) Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89. This is seen also when Aizen uses it to block Tessai's Hadō #88.
99, Part 1. Kin (禁, Seal) Ties the target's arms on the back in addition to wrapping the spiritual fabric around the entire body, and continues to pin the target with spiritual fabric stacked to the ground around the target with several iron shafts in an "X" shape.
99, Part 2. Bankin (卍禁, Great Seal) This spell covers the target from head to toe with spiritual fabric (First Song), stabs them with numerous metal bolts (Second Song), and then smashes them with an immense metal cube (Final Song). ▬▬┤|Other Spells Unknown Sentan Hakuja (千反白蛇, "Thousand-Coil White Snake") A spell that teleports a group of people from one place to another.
tech levels is what i need now (>w<)
Just for you to have a look (OwO)
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