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 Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:59 pm
I'll make the changes when I get home.
biggrin Thanks.
However, I'm probably not going to make abilities for it. Meaning I'm completely tossing magic aside here.
Is it possible if I can still have the +1 speed while dodging bonus? I won't throw a fit if not, but I don't want to have to edit this weapon later and go through this process again if I feel like it's weakened me or anything like that.
Also, the reason why I added stuff like "Perception, Speed, Strength" is to show that the blade is S tier, but not necessarily S in strength.
I thought that, since it's Raphael's "special weapon", I'd make it more in-depth than just "it's rly strung."
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:12 pm
Since you're removing abilities, then you can keep the +1 to dodging. And I understand why you put in the extra stuff but you can always just explain that in the description.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:19 pm
Incubus Shane 
(I RIKE CAPS ROCK)
RPC NAME: RAPHAEL GILETTI
RPC RANK: EXPERT
RPC CLASS: WARRIOR
RPC ELEMENT: WATER
NAME OF WEAPON/ARMOR: ROXANNE
DESCRIPTION: Roxanne originally started off as an experiment. It was a weapon that would connect with Raphael -- and enhance him. Even its name was chosen in coordination to his own; both beginning with R's and both being of Western descent. Roxanne was made from Raphael's Incubus Horns, which were not only silver, but admired for the fact that they could not be broken by any normal means. They regrew, in time, every time they were cut, and eventually, enough of them were made to forge the sword with their remains. Which was eventually sharpened and carved into being one of the strongest weapons in existence.
Roxanne's creation sealed Raphael's horn growth halting -- inevitably stopping his bloodline abilities entirely. Roxanne is, indeed, Raphael's true Nightmare form. Without it, he is a human, and cannot use anything related to his Nightmare state.
The blade itself is sharp enough, with Raphael's strength in mind, to easily cut through humans almost as if they were nothing more than jelly. It does the same to steel, leaving only the option of magic or high-tier materials to defend against the full-force of the blade. Note that I have high strength, especially in my Night Terror form, so I could likely do this with any old greatsword, really. Roxanne isn't as powerful as you think. However, its cutting ability is not what its admired for. Roxanne is its own person, in a way, and acts with Raphael's safety in mind. Roxanne's perception is unrivaled; the blade even being able to "hear" the enemy, leaping to action and acting as its own intelligence dictates. It really does the fighting for Raphael, allowing him to observe the field and perhaps even assist the blade in its own perception, making the two, together, extremely adept at reflexes and counterattacks.
The blade itself is five-feet long, and weighs a fair bit, though Raphael can easily wield it with one hand.
It has also been dyed; the hilt is black and gold.
WEAPON RANK: S (SS,SSS)
WEAPON WEAKNESSES: Due to this being an extremely powerful weapon, I decided to add a section that was not required to justify it. I will simply list the weaknesses rather than go out and explain each one in-depth:
It is required for this weapon to be held if Raphael wishes to use any bloodline abilities. (and he doesn't have his BL stat boosts or any other bonuses/weaknesses when not wielding it)
Similarly, Raphael cannot use magic if not wielding this weapon.
This can be Raphael's only weapon with special abilities unless Roxanne is tossed aside.
Roxanne completely disables elemental magic while Raphael is wielding it. Raphael can only use Roxanne's own special abilities (to be added later).
This is the thing that makes me rely on it completely.
Raphael can't even use a shield with Roxanne -- the blade will refuse to be held unless it is given all attention. The only exception is in Raphael's Night Terror form, but that is only because the shield is Roxanne as well. As such, Raphael cannot dual-wield Roxanne and any other swords, he must only use Roxanne.
NOTES:
Roxanne is indeed still used in Raphael's Night Terror form, and is the only instance where Roxanne can change its own form -- though it can only be changed to the lance-form, not the bow-form.
Roxanne can only be destroyed by the combination of an S ranked skill or higher from every BL, all combined and targeted at the weapon. If this happens, the blade will immediately morph one final time -- into Raphael's lost horns... but they will, at that rate, be unable to even be touched.
If Roxanne is thrown into something where it cannot be regained from, such as lava, it will recreate itself in Raphael's hands.
However, if it is thrown somewhere where it can be regained without causing Raphael physical harm then it won't just automatically re-appear in his hands.
PASSIVE BONUSES/ABILITIES:
Roxanne gives Raphael +1 strength perpetually, and +(1) speed while dodging, since it increases his perception and allows him to put more focus into his speed while evading attacks.
This is alot like a running jump. It is higher because there is effort put into it. It's not a last-second dodge. If that makes sense. o_o
The blade is known for the fact that it is seen as "blurry" when it strikes, which is an effect that is also applied to the arm wielding the blade. This is because the blade and Raphael are constantly transferring knowledge and thoughts to eachother, which ripples their energy and causes the "blur" effect on the arm wielding the blade.
Roxanne cannot speak, but it can tell Raphael anything it sees. However, it must be unsheathed and Raphael must be awake.
SKILL LIST:
SKILL RANK
SKILL RANK
SKILL DESCRIPTION
RP SAMPLE: (can I get an opinion first? XD I have no clue what to RP... it's generally a normal blade, but with a few strange aspects)
Just to clarify this again, Roxanne and my talent are my ONLY source of damage thanks to me removing my element and the possibility to use other weapons, thus even if it was very powerful in itself, perhaps even "overpowered" for a weapon, it would still be acceptable, IMO.
Resubmitting with the changes.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:25 pm
_Manpish_ _Manpish_ RPC Name: Aqua Graveheart RPC Rank: Student RPC Class: Mind-Blader RPC Element: Water Name of Weapon/Armor: Pure Ring: Revolution Pic: Pure Ring:  Revolution: Description: By using a "Pure Ring" Aqua is able to summon a unique blade called Revolution at will. Revolution is a falchion fashioned with an engine at the hilt. The Engine (when revved) charges the blade with energy allowing it to do C ranked damage. the Blade is made out of steel and the engine is a basic but lightweight engine model specifically designed for this sword. Rank: C Passives: Rev: By revving the engine on the hilt of the blade at least once it will coat the blade in energy. Skills: None Yet How about this?
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:26 pm
_Manpish_ _Manpish_ _Manpish_ RPC Name: Aqua Graveheart RPC Rank: Student RPC Class: Mind-Blader RPC Element: Water Name of Weapon/Armor: Pure Ring: Revolution Pic: Pure Ring: Revolution: Description: By using a "Pure Ring" Aqua is able to summon a unique blade called Revolution at will. Revolution is a falchion fashioned with an engine at the hilt. The Engine (when revved) charges the blade with energy allowing it to do C ranked damage. the Blade is made out of steel and the engine is a basic but lightweight engine model specifically designed for this sword. Rank: C Passives: Rev: By revving the engine on the hilt of the blade at least once it will coat the blade in energy. Skills: None Yet How about this? i already haz weapon called revolution sad that I can't use anymore, lol, but ya
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:40 pm
Then I'm denying, Shane. And here's why: nothing is indestructible. Give it something hard as hell and obscure to destroy it and I'll consider it again. But everything has a way to be destroyed. And yes, I know you tied a shitload of your character into the weapon but that's the weakness of having it. If you tie all that in and then make it indestructible, it's no longer a weakness. This way, you're a step up from an anima. You lose a lot of who you are if the weapon's destroyed but you're still live.
And for the record, Lili losing her seer powers is a possibility in the future here.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:48 pm
SorceressJacklyn Then I'm denying, Shane. And here's why: nothing is indestructible. Give it something hard as hell and obscure to destroy it and I'll consider it again. But everything has a way to be destroyed. And yes, I know you tied a shitload of your character into the weapon but that's the weakness of having it. If you tie all that in and then make it indestructible, it's no longer a weakness. This way, you're a step up from an anima. You lose a lot of who you are if the weapon's destroyed but you're still live. And for the record, Lili losing her seer powers is a possibility in the future here. So tell me... if it's destructible... what is the gain? Tell me. The gain is +1 strength. Period. The other gains hardly even matter. And at what cost? Is all of that justified by a +1 strength gain? No, it is not. I don't care if we have to argue for a year straight on this, I will never change that. At that rate, the weapon would just be a nerf. Nothing more -- than a nerf.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:53 pm
Incubus Shane SorceressJacklyn Then I'm denying, Shane. And here's why: nothing is indestructible. Give it something hard as hell and obscure to destroy it and I'll consider it again. But everything has a way to be destroyed. And yes, I know you tied a shitload of your character into the weapon but that's the weakness of having it. If you tie all that in and then make it indestructible, it's no longer a weakness. This way, you're a step up from an anima. You lose a lot of who you are if the weapon's destroyed but you're still live. And for the record, Lili losing her seer powers is a possibility in the future here. So tell me... if it's destructible... what is the gain? Tell me. The gain is +1 strength. Period. The other gains hardly even matter. And at what cost? Is all of that justified by a +1 strength gain? No, it is not. I don't care if we have to argue for a year straight on this, I will never change that. At that rate, the weapon would just be a nerf. Nothing more -- than a nerf. Then my decision will stand unless you can get Neko to overrule it.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 6:55 pm
SorceressJacklyn Incubus Shane SorceressJacklyn Then I'm denying, Shane. And here's why: nothing is indestructible. Give it something hard as hell and obscure to destroy it and I'll consider it again. But everything has a way to be destroyed. And yes, I know you tied a shitload of your character into the weapon but that's the weakness of having it. If you tie all that in and then make it indestructible, it's no longer a weakness. This way, you're a step up from an anima. You lose a lot of who you are if the weapon's destroyed but you're still live. And for the record, Lili losing her seer powers is a possibility in the future here. So tell me... if it's destructible... what is the gain? Tell me. The gain is +1 strength. Period. The other gains hardly even matter. And at what cost? Is all of that justified by a +1 strength gain? No, it is not. I don't care if we have to argue for a year straight on this, I will never change that. At that rate, the weapon would just be a nerf. Nothing more -- than a nerf. Then my decision will stand unless you can get Neko to overrule it. Psh, fine, would it be okay if it was just as tough as diamond? They can be broken... It's not like weapons ever get broken anyways neutral Still though, this blade is now a nerf. Yay. And I can't get rid of it. I'm going to keep it just for the sake of the fact that I had to argue two days straight for it, but I'm going to use the whole "destructible" part to destroy it later so I can make something different...
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:04 pm
Incubus Shane SorceressJacklyn Incubus Shane SorceressJacklyn Then I'm denying, Shane. And here's why: nothing is indestructible. Give it something hard as hell and obscure to destroy it and I'll consider it again. But everything has a way to be destroyed. And yes, I know you tied a shitload of your character into the weapon but that's the weakness of having it. If you tie all that in and then make it indestructible, it's no longer a weakness. This way, you're a step up from an anima. You lose a lot of who you are if the weapon's destroyed but you're still live. And for the record, Lili losing her seer powers is a possibility in the future here. So tell me... if it's destructible... what is the gain? Tell me. The gain is +1 strength. Period. The other gains hardly even matter. And at what cost? Is all of that justified by a +1 strength gain? No, it is not. I don't care if we have to argue for a year straight on this, I will never change that. At that rate, the weapon would just be a nerf. Nothing more -- than a nerf. Then my decision will stand unless you can get Neko to overrule it. Psh, fine, would it be okay if it was just as tough as diamond? They can be broken... It's not like weapons ever get broken anyways neutral Still though, this blade is now a nerf. Yay. And I can't get rid of it. I'm going to keep it just for the sake of the fact that I had to argue two days straight for it, but I'm going to use the whole "destructible" part to destroy it later so I can make something different... Since I see you gave it a way to be destroyed (a hard way but one none the less), your weapon Roxanne is now approved.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:06 pm
SorceressJacklyn Incubus Shane SorceressJacklyn Incubus Shane SorceressJacklyn Then I'm denying, Shane. And here's why: nothing is indestructible. Give it something hard as hell and obscure to destroy it and I'll consider it again. But everything has a way to be destroyed. And yes, I know you tied a shitload of your character into the weapon but that's the weakness of having it. If you tie all that in and then make it indestructible, it's no longer a weakness. This way, you're a step up from an anima. You lose a lot of who you are if the weapon's destroyed but you're still live. And for the record, Lili losing her seer powers is a possibility in the future here. So tell me... if it's destructible... what is the gain? Tell me. The gain is +1 strength. Period. The other gains hardly even matter. And at what cost? Is all of that justified by a +1 strength gain? No, it is not. I don't care if we have to argue for a year straight on this, I will never change that. At that rate, the weapon would just be a nerf. Nothing more -- than a nerf. Then my decision will stand unless you can get Neko to overrule it. Psh, fine, would it be okay if it was just as tough as diamond? They can be broken... It's not like weapons ever get broken anyways neutral Still though, this blade is now a nerf. Yay. And I can't get rid of it. I'm going to keep it just for the sake of the fact that I had to argue two days straight for it, but I'm going to use the whole "destructible" part to destroy it later so I can make something different... Since I see you gave it a way to be destroyed (a hard way but one none the less), your weapon Roxanne is now approved. AWWWW YEAH cool
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:54 pm
RPC Name: Peace
RPC Rank: Journeyman
RPC Class: Marine
RPC Element: Earth
Name of Weapon/Armor: Seraph
Description: This is a modification to the standard marine armor. Instead of the obtuse obstruction in the back, normally used for holding and storing weapons and ammo, the unit is open, capable of storing and protecting the wings of the Fallen inside. This unit is also capable of opening the sides of this container, allowing the wings to unfurl and become useful in battle, if so needed. This will also allow the character to glide for short distances, however, it is only gliding because of the sheer weight of the armor.
There are also two sets of blades, totaling four in all. One in each arm, and two jagged ones that can come out of the greaves. When the wings are out and the blades are unsheathed, the entire ensemble mimics the appearance of the legendary Seraph Angels.
Rank: B
Passives: +1 Strength
Skills:
Skill Name: Gliding
Rank: E
Description: A feat that replaces flight when the character is in armor. Only lasts for approximately two posts.
Skill Name: Dicer
Rank: B
Description: A tricky combination of arm or leg movements spins through the air, dodging weapons and shields for a strike at the opponent. There is an off chance for a backlash with this attack, the result of an odd roll of three or five out of ten.
Rp Sample:
Peace knelt down, taking the brunt of the blast with the armor. The shock to the metal could be felt from inside. This bothered her more than the notion that she had been assaulted by an unfeeling cannon wielded by a fool.
She pushed herself back to her feet, weapon set aside once more. She kept herself low as she started to run at the enemy. The back of the armor hissed as it released pressure, the sides of the back opening wide and allowing her gray wings to spread out. She leapt and caught the air, intermittently dodging, only with the help of the complete lack of accuracy of her opponent. She landed hard once more, wings stiffening and gaining the stiffness of metal as they curled around her, blocking more attacks. From here, she unclasped the blades attached to the gauntlets in the armor. They wished a fight, then so be it.
The wings furled wide and she leapt to the side of the cannon, gaining a solid shot for the fool behind the controls.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:35 am
RPC Name: Demitri Arashi RPC Rank: Student RPC Class: Unknown RPC Element: Doesn't matter Name of Weapon/Armor: Trasformazione Description: Trasformazione is a unique weapon. It is made from an unknown metal that when energy is applied to it, makes the weapon transform into a different one. Rank: Um...apply rank to it.. Passives: N/A Skills: Transform C It allows Trasformazione to transform into a different weapon. It's passive form is a dagger. Rp Sample: It is simple enough. If I must do one, I shall.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:05 pm
RPC Name: Antonio Russo RPC Rank: Journyman RPC Class: N/A RPC Element: N/A Name of Weapon/Armor: Templare [Templar] Description: Templare is his zanpakuto from a different realm. It is his one and only weapon, and he must keep it on him at all times. It has three different forms, sealed form, Shikai form, and Bankai form. Each form gives him unique abilities, and power ups. It is apart of his soul, so if he dies, it disappears. Weakness:I loose class Rank: SSS Passives: Sealed Form- This form gives him no power ups and looks like this. Shikai Form- This form gives him +2 to strength and +2 to speed. It looks like this. In order to activate this form he must say a chant: Aiutatemi, Templare. This lasts for for 30 posts[unless deactivated, or increased to bankai.] and has a cool down of 15. He can only use this twice per fight. Bankai Form- This forms gives him +5 to strength and +5 to speed[Does not stack with Shikai form]. It looks like this. In order to activate this form, he must say the words; Bankai… Santo Templare. You must have been in shikai for 20 posts before entering this form. It lasts for ten posts, and has a cool down of 20 posts. He can only use this once per fight. Skills:Santo onda[Holy Wave] Rank: SS Restriction: Must be in shikai form. A wave of gold energy is sent from the blade of Templare. It is similar to Getsuga Tensho. It can cleave anything[and anyone] under A rank in half. Onda degli Dei[Wave of the gods] Rank: SSS Restriction: Must be in bankai form. The wave has a silver outline. It is similar to Kuroi Getsuga(Bankai Getsuga Tensho). The wave can cut through Darkness. It can cut anything[and anyone] under S rank in half. Rp Sample:
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:41 pm
Not making a judgement, but I really would love it if we kept bleach out of this guild. Kthnx.
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