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 Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:04 pm
((i dont see a talent on her profile))
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:07 pm
(You're kidding...right? Our characters have never met before, you weren't around when Fenrir assigned me my mission, yet you suddenly blurt out 'She killed Zane" and I'm not supposed to think that you read my mind, considering the fact that you're blind yet you looked straight at me as I approached...of course I'm going to know that you read my mind.)
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:09 pm
((maybe you both should edit ur posts: jacklyn, fix it that you sense a presence that makes you extremely angry and Cain helps ya, afte that, you edit ur post robin.))
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:10 pm
(Actually, her post is perfectly valid, and so is her argument)
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:14 pm
((I already established earlier that I made sure to be outr of line of sight to Fenrir and since you're kneeling next to him, you wouldn't be able to see me. As for the looking at you part, I'll go edit it so it's more fitting.))
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:20 pm
(That is then your fault not mine. I am not going to read every single post that was posted before my arrival. For the future, here are a few things that you yourself can improve on:
1. When someone new enters an area, don't post just a few lines. Explain what you look like, what you're doing, where's your location...all of these are important details that should you have mentioned, then I would have known. But sadly, your post lets me view it as that you are in the immediate area, next to Fenrir.
2. Then there's also a little thing called voice pattern. Being loud, being soft...you merely put growl. Do you know what I got from that? When an animal grows, it means that they are being agressive, and that growl could be a loud growl, could a soft growl...could be anything. You don't think I could have heard you?
So before you start getting onto me about MY post, you should look at your post and see what you could have done that was better...)
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:25 pm
((Look. I asked because I wanted to know how you, not even an expert, could sense what Fenrir, a sage, couldn't. I thought you might have had a talent already in place. As for what I post, I'm busy with a plotline that has nothing to do with you. My one mention of your character was all it was, one mention. Don't get yourself twisted over a little seer knowing who you killed and being angered by it since she knew the guy.))
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:25 pm
((issue is resolved, so chill out the lot of ya and lets get back to rping))
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:29 pm
(You're the one that can't take the constructive criticism. I'm simply showing you how you can be a better writer and a roleplayer. My post still stands and I'm not changing it)
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:31 pm
Witch Hunter Robin 94 (You're the one that can't take the constructive criticism. I'm simply showing you how you can be a better writer and a roleplayer. My post still stands and I'm not changing it) ((and you are overreacting over a question, now end the arguement and back to rping before teh crew gets involved. Drama bullshit ruins rp's))
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:33 pm
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Fenrir turned away from the game and glanced over his shoulder at Amaya. "So you won, thats good." he first said, noticing the necklace she clutched. He'd never met Zane before, but it certainly held a man's scent along with the faint aroma that came from Kusana's pollen and wildlife. "But did you kill him?" His cold blue eyes flashed up to hers.
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:37 pm
Witch Hunter Robin 94 (You're the one that can't take the constructive criticism. I'm simply showing you how you can be a better writer and a roleplayer. My post still stands and I'm not changing it) ((And you overreacted to a legitimate question. I went back and returned my post to its original wording since you can't be a big enough person to fix yours. Seems I was willing to take it but you're not willing to take the same.))
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:43 pm
Amaya, as she was spoken to the King, suppressed her aura back in place again. Those around her could have happy thoughts once more in this joyous place she herself kept kneeling before Fenrir. "Yes...I killed him...wether or not that was what you intended of me to do, I took his life and bathed my blade in his blood. If anything, sir, I figured that this incident would serve as a reminder that those who oppose the Shrouded Nation will die, and their nation will be torn assunder. The opposing nations, they fear you, my King, and only you. They do not fear Nocturne, they simply fear you as a person. I have shown Kusana that they should fear the nation as a whole, that those that are trained here are the strongest, the most willfull, the most cunning...but forgive me sir, for I am now rambling on things that are not my place to ramble on about," finished Amaya. She was still highly aroused at the fact that she was covered in her prey's blood, that she had watched him die before her, and those images will forever be ingrained in her mind. Zane's body staggering to its knees as she plunged her blade through his abdomen, piercing through his spleen. The images of the ground tainted a mosaic red...the images of Zane's lifeless eyes as he lied before her...
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:43 pm
((take it to pm people. stressed ))
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:51 pm
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GOOD? BAD? ═══════════════☠═══════════════ "Then you understand why I gave you this particular test. No fighter from Nocturne has ever lost a challenge to a foreigner." The King stated, a hint of pride showing in his voice as he addressed her. "I now trust that you will not ruin that reputation, and so you have matured in strength and ability. I now graduate you to Adept rank. Instead of buckling under teachers you can now seek your own training, and take responsibility in teaching others."
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