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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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 Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 8:49 pm
 ❁PurepawIf you die, I'm all alone
despite the souls that fill my home
The only thing I need is you
but if I tell, what will you do?═══════════════════════
[I moaned.
No. Please. Come back. I can't...I can't remember where home is-!
Something was wrong. Really wrong.
Maybe if he came back it would be right again. Maybe if he came back, the pain in my head would go away. The pain in my stomach would go away.
Forsaken, come back. I can't remember everything. I'm not...I can't...what...where...who...oh dear...
My moans turned into cries. I panted and began slamming myself repeatedly down on the shadows.
Can I do that thing he did too? Melt in the shadows? I have to. I have to! Find him. Find. Phase! Phase! Please, let me in!
I silently begged the shadows, but they refused me.
I let out a shriek.]
"For..." I gasped, shuddering as I slammed down on the grounds.
"For..."
Slam.
"For..."
Slam.
Slam.
"Fooooor..."
Slam.
Leaning back, I finally belted out a loud shriek, "FORSAKEEEEN!"
[The shriek echoed around teh rocks, jumping back at me: "-aken!...-aken!....-aken!....aken...."
[Don't
LEAVE
ME!]
═══════════════════════Let me keep one thing near;
the heart that bonds us, my dear
For if I sleep at end of day
I find your shadow fades away
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 8:56 pm
Not even you...  If I die before you wake
don't you cry don't you ache
nothings ever yours to keep
close your eyes and go to sleep  Shadow Spirit // Cursed Demon // Bio ▄︻┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一
[A cold, creepy aura filled the land as the shadows grew darker and began to dance. The clustered together and formed into the demon spirit Forsaken. It's glowing red eyes pieced the darkness in search for the lost nightclan apprentice. The immediately locked onto Purepaw who was crying out in the open. The demon sighed a sigh of relief now that she was found.] Is she hurt!? [Immediately the demon slithered to her side, a concerned and confused look on it's dark face as it peered down upon her petite form.] "Purepaw, what on earth are you doing out here!? You were supposed to be in your overcrowded clan! You sc... dont do that!" [Something was unusual about the entire scene something out of place, but what?] "...Purepaw. Why are you crying?" [The demon gave Vanillapaw a desperate look. Its eyes full of questions.]
▄︻┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻
...can cure me of this curse.
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:10 pm
❁PurepawIf you die, I'm all alone
despite the souls that fill my home
The only thing I need is you
but if I tell, what will you do?═══════════════════════
[I panted, and was utterly shocked when something apparated out of the shadows. I latched on to it immediately, burying my nose into its fur.]
I moaned, "Don't do. Don't. That's not nice. Do don't that, no, it's scary. So scary because."
[I tried to remember, but the blank slate of my mind held no answers. I felt delirious.]
"I can't think. It's cloudy. Why is it so cloud? Not really cloudy. Just blank. Like. Like. Like bones."
[I shivered and laughed bitterly, eyes wide.]
"Bones! Just like bones! Licked clean! Did you know? Licked clean!"
[I began to calm down. The wildfire in my belly didn't cease, but my pounding hard slowed down.]
"You know. You should know. It was wrong, it was all off. But you know, because you came back You're proof."
[I looked up at him, nostrils flaming.]
"You never come back," I said solemnly. "Did you know that? Never. You listened to me for once. Hah. Go figure."
[I snorted, then shook a bit, trying to remember.
Suddenly something played in my mind. Something I had seen with four eyes. It burned in my head softly, burning my mind.]
"So yes. Yes. It was. There was. Droplet. Reeds...bubble...fly. It was a shared thing, no?"
[I babbled, trying to remember.
Snap. the flame crackled on my head.
I shuddered.]
"Close, now, listen..." I whispered. "There.
It's a sound. Sound he can. A sound he can only hear.
Right? Yes. Certainly...yes.
He..."
[Trailing off, the flame disappeared. No, it...the flame wasn't in my head.
It was in my belly.
But why? Remember?
No, the flame was gone from my mind. Remember!]
"AIEE, but how! Blank, it's like. A...small, dark room. Cold and. Like that meshy nest at the twolegplace."
[I remembered.]
"The twolegplace! Right! With the pain. Jaw pain. Yes."
[I gasped.]
"Oh, but what pain I have now! Maybe that funny man with the white pelt can help me eh?"
[I squinted at him again.]
"You need to help me figure out," I told him. "So things can make sense."
"Because I gotta tell ya.
I can't remember."
(( Did you catch what I did ther? D: )) ═══════════════════════Let me keep one thing near;
the heart that bonds us, my dear
For if I sleep at end of day
I find your shadow fades away
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:11 pm
[ooc:] Ahh, sidenote: Vanillapaw's in NightClan. Don't fret. =D
And by the way, I FEEL LIKE I'M GONNA CRY! I dunno,somehow, that all seemed so sad in nature....
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:15 pm
xXAnachronIsmEpsIceXx [ooc:] Ahh, sidenote: Vanillapaw's in NightClan. Don't fret. =D And by the way, I FEEL LIKE I'M GONNA CRY! I dunno,somehow, that all seemed so sad in nature.... ((Poor Purepaw. >< I don't know why I torture her so...;____; Vanillapaw's probably just all "DD8" DDD: Naksdfasdkjfh. .-. I feel so twisted. *hangs head* Purepaw: OH COME ON. Out of all the things you could've done to further the plot with me and Forshaken, you had to go and-?! You're sick! *slaps* Me: I SORRYYYYY *sobsob* ...this is all really just to further Forshaken and Peowpaw's plot really. It has little to nothing to do with the clans. D: ))
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:18 pm
Winged Timberwolf xXAnachronIsmEpsIceXx [ooc:] Ahh, sidenote: Vanillapaw's in NightClan. Don't fret. =D And by the way, I FEEL LIKE I'M GONNA CRY! I dunno,somehow, that all seemed so sad in nature.... ((Poor Purepaw. >< I don't know why I torture her so...;____; Vanillapaw's probably just all "DD8" DDD: Naksdfasdkjfh. .-. I feel so twisted. *hangs head* Purepaw: OH COME ON. Out of all the things you could've done to further the plot with me and Forshaken, you had to go and-?! You're sick! *slaps* Me: I SORRYYYYY *sobsob* ...this is all really just to further Forshaken and Peowpaw's plot really. It has little to nothing to do with the clans. D: )) Ahaha, yeah that does seem kinda twisted, to throw the poor she-cat through a loop like that and all, but that's okay! It was pretty epic to read.
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:18 pm
Critics agree that this is the "Best of the Series."
"Epic."
It's "Romantic and Intense"
Critics love Breaking Dawn .3.
I'm in awe of the spaces.
The spaces do it. You think the spaces and it creates suspense. Because my mind has to read the space and then go and look at whats happening.
Oh yes, I'm lovin' it.
Or maybe I'm just easily amused ;n;
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:26 pm
Not even you... If I die before you wake
don't you cry don't you ache
nothings ever yours to keep
close your eyes and go to sleep Shadow Spirit // Cursed Demon // Bio ▄︻┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一
[The odd beating in the demon's chest sank and ached. She was speaking in gibberish. Something most DEFINITELY happened! Forsaken's panic returned to it.] "Purepaw. Purepaw what are you talking about? Snap out of it!! You... your making me worry!" [A painful stinging swelled up in the demon's glowing eyes. It was painful to see her in such a state. The one time the demon had any desire to protect it failed. Just like when it tried to heal it's clan from that awful plague!] I cant do anything right!!! [Confused Forsaken did the one thing it could think of. it wrapped her safely in it's cold embrace. A single painful drop of rain fell from the demon's face onto the she cat's fur below.] "Purepaw please. Please tell me what happened!" [the fluid leaking form the demon's face burned, like acid eroding it's dark mask.] "Please smile. For me. it.. it hurts to see you cry. it hurts Purepaw." [the demon begged, her pain too much for it to bare. It was worse then dieing. A fate worse then death. Even worse then the curse it had to deal with every day of it's existence, the curse that made it the demon it was.]
▄︻┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻
...can cure me of this curse.
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:32 pm
❁PurepawIf you die, I'm all alone
despite the souls that fill my home
The only thing I need is you
but if I tell, what will you do?═══════════════════════
[My nostrils flared. Purepaw? That sounded familiar.
Did he call me that?
Yeah. yeah...
Memories began to pop back, slowly. I twitched, holding my breath.
Then the right one popped back.]
"D-don't you remember?" I whispered crestfallen. "You...were there. You saved me from those bad, bad creatures...me and that other guy...and you took me here...and..."
[It was all a blur. I swayed a bit.
My pupils dialated into tiny dots.
Pools of hazel.
My eyes rolled around at nothing.]
"The dark," I whispered. "Couldn't. See or hear. But I was so happy. So happy. I can't even describe."
[I shuddered with the aching taste of the joy of it.]
"So happy. It was. Itwas.Itwas.
Bliss."
[I laughed a short laugh that held no emotion.]
"And then the fire," I hissed suddenly, "it burned like the hottest sun."
[My belly twitched. I moaned. There was so much pain in my belly. What had I eaten?]
"What have I eaten?" I asked him absentmindedly. "I have the worst stomachache..."
[I heard him say something about a smile. I shuddered.
Then I smiled.
It was more of a snarl. All of my teeth were showing. If I were a demon, it would have stretched from ear to ear.
I looked up at him, dialated pupils and such, with the crooked malicious smile on my face.]
"Smile!" I said. "You smiled like this! To the sky!"
[I looked up at the sky, smiling.
My eyes widened.]
"That's what you said, " I whispered.
Smiling to the sky, I hissed, "Gotcha."
((Aaaaand she slowly gains her sanity back.
Somewhat. ;___; )) ═══════════════════════Let me keep one thing near;
the heart that bonds us, my dear
For if I sleep at end of day
I find your shadow fades away
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:39 pm
Luni Lulu Critics agree that this is the "Best of the Series."
"Epic."
It's "Romantic and Intense"
Critics love Breaking Dawn .3.
I'm in awe of the spaces.
The spaces do it. You think the spaces and it creates suspense. Because my mind has to read the space and then go and look at whats happening.
Oh yes, I'm lovin' it.
Or maybe I'm just easily amused ;n;
Ahaha, it reminds me of that one part in New Moon when there's just a bunch of blank pages with months written on them after Edward Leaves Bella...Wait, no, nevermind. It's not. Really. Ahaha, I'm a GENIUS! But seriously, I agree with ya, Luni. It makes my brain process it differently than I would have if there hadn't been pauses in it. Kinda like the logic with punctuation, like how the brain interprets the same base sentences differently based on where commas are placed and if there's a period or exclamation point at the end.
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:42 pm
Luni Lulu Critics agree that this is the "Best of the Series."
"Epic."
It's "Romantic and Intense"
Critics love Breaking Dawn .3.
I'm in awe of the spaces.
The spaces do it. You think the spaces and it creates suspense. Because my mind has to read the space and then go and look at whats happening.
Oh yes, I'm lovin' it.
Or maybe I'm just easily amused ;n;
(( I'm a space maniac. ;___; If you look at all my "drama" writing, there's a ton of spaces. The brain follows the spaces. I've noticed that. xD Plus, it's exactly how poor ol' Purepaw's thankin right now. o___o Forsaken's face: ಥ__ಥPurekit's face: ° A ° ))
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:48 pm
 How can you see into
my eyes like open doors. Leading you down into my core where I’ve become so numb.
Without a soul... my spirit sleeping somewhere cold.
Until you find it there and lead it back home.
Wake me up inside, wake me up inside,
call my name and save me from the dark.
Bid my blood to run, before I come undone,
save me from the nothing I’ve become!
Now that I know what I’m without, you can't
just leave me, breathe into me and make me real, bring me to life... *ღ♣Vanillapaw♣ღ* ♦♣♠♦♣♠♦♣♠♦♣♠♦♣♠♦♣♠ [I stared, her green eyes wide and...confused as I
looked at her clanmate...Purepaw... horror filling her features as I took a
small step back. Yes...I was oblivious from what was happening at the
scene.] "Purepaw...what in Starclan's name is wrong with
you?" [I felt my fur bristle as I heard what the apprentice, like
me...said... it didn't sound like Purepaw...she was supposed to be that
little kit bundle of joy and happiness...full of compassion...not hate....]
((Ily timber u r doing a beautiful job <3)) ♦♣♠♦♣♠♦♣♠♦♣♠♦♣♠♦♣♠ As sweet as vanilla...and as soft as silk... 
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:48 pm
Not even you... If I die before you wake
don't you cry don't you ache
nothings ever yours to keep
close your eyes and go to sleep Shadow Spirit // Cursed Demon // Bio ▄︻┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一
[Forsaken looked down at her, eyes wide at her unusual smile.] "Gotcha?" I dont remember being here... was... was someone impersonating me!? "Purepaw. I just got here. That couldnt have been me. Did... someone was here?" She was tricked! Someone must have used her, tormented her!! No.. no... nonononononNO!!! [Rage and confusion swarmed inside the demon's mind, rotting it with the need for blood.... blood.] "BLOOOD!!!" [Forsaken cried out to the stars! The rage was too much for the demon to hold. it overflowed from its eyes, transforming it into an entirely different creature. In exchange for the ability to think freely Forsaken grew into a monster. It let out a mosterouse roar as it began to swell, bulge and grow. The shadow that made up the demo began to ripple and bubble form boiling rage and grow a reddish tint. The pupils from Forsaken's eyes evaporated leaving the void of what it once was. The fangs in it's once crooked smile shot out and extended to the floor like long swords and its claws grew so long that the ends never emerged form the bubbling shadow beneath it's feet. Sharp spines extended like spikes from the demon's spine, ripping its flesh. the demon let out one more roar as it ripped the shadows open forcing it's new mass through. Even in the creature's absence could one still feel it's pure rage.]
((to the clans,to unleash horror. .__. /seaclan/ ))
▄︻┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 -─═┳═一┻┳═一 -─═┳︻ ┻┳═一 ┻┳═一 -─═┳︻
...can cure me of this curse.
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:56 pm
Ummm sorry for spam D: last one but why is every cat going crazy today? XD lol must be the crazy Black Friday karma~
Darkshadow, Purepaw, Foresaken, Blood, Dicefoot, Echosong and Tenderfoot have all been selected as Clan Cat's next Psychos biggrin lol srry no offense to any of the cats selected, it means they are the best XD and I luv their emotions~
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:57 pm
❁PurepawIf you die, I'm all alone
despite the souls that fill my home
The only thing I need is you
but if I tell, what will you do?═══════════════════════
[I stared emotionlessly at the raging mass of rage that swarmed at my feet.
I swallowed.
Pain finally showed on my little face.
A tear, an impossible tear, fell from my eye and onto the ground, hitting a leaf and slowly sliding off and hitting the shadowy ground.]
"So." I said hoarsely.
[I looked at Vanillapaw, a hollow look in my eyes.]
"You know," I told her knowingly, "it sometimes doesn't even matter why or who you are. You should remember that."
[I turned back around, staring at the rippling puddle.]
"So it was a lie." I moaned.
"No..."
[I sniffled, my little heart twitching. But I was in too much shock to feel the pain of it.]
"I don't understand what's happening but it'salie. Isn't it?"
[I poked the swirling mass of shadows.]
"If that wasn't you," I said carefully, "then who told me they loved me?"
[The question hung in the air, its volatile answer seeping in the back of my throat.
I stood and began to shakily walk away, trying to form thoughts. I felt too exhausted.
The fire in my belly worsened when I moved. My nostrils flared from the pain of it.]
"What did he do to me?" I whispered, feeling pure fear as I trembled on the ground.
[It was another volatile question whose answer lay hidden in my throat. I tried to hurl it out. But it wouldn't come.
I began to walk once again, stumbling forward back home.] ═══════════════════════Let me keep one thing near;
the heart that bonds us, my dear
For if I sleep at end of day
I find your shadow fades away
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