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@Gregar: I made a statement that I was at least Jounin Rank. I knbow that it doesn't make me any stronger, but the fact that I'm ANBU is merely a sign that I'm strong. That's all.

Your Rank: Gennin
Name of Jutsu: Mokuton: Moku no Ningyo Yoroi [Wood Release: Wood Puppet Armor ]
Rank of Jutsu: Gennin- Sannin
Range of Jutsu: Puppet Must have chakra strings attached to it.
Jutsu's Element:Suiton and Doton
Description:
A skill where the user can create an armor made of wood on a puppet that is connected to chakra strings, however this armor is a special type of armor. Weighing less then conventional steel armor, it is actually stronger then steel. Being heavily infused with Wood Chakra, making it very resilient to taijutsu damage. Ninjutsu blades can penetrate this armor. With each rank armor becomes more dense and weighs slightly more.

Name of Jutsu: Mokuton: Moku no Ningyo yaiba [Wood Release: Wood Puppet Blade]
Rank of Jutsu: Gennin- Sannin
Range of Jutsu: Puppet Must have chakra strings attached to it.
Jutsu's Element:Suiton and Doton
Description:
A skill where the user uses wood to increase the length, density, and sharpness of any blade on/ attached/ or is holding.
Any abilities a blade would have seeps through the wood infusing it with that ability. With each passing rank the wood becomes longer, denser, sharper. Gennin rank extends the blade by the amount of a dagger, while Sannin extends the blade by the amount of a long sword.

Name of Jutsu: Mokuton: kyuukyoku bougyo [Wood Release: Ultimate Defense]
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin- Sannin S rank
Range of Jutsu: Puppet Must have chakra strings attached to it.
Jutsu's Element:Suiton and Doton
Description:
A skill where the user can create an armor made of wood on a puppet that is connected to chakra strings, however this armor is a special type of armor. Weighing the same as steel armor, it is actually many times stronger then steel. Being heavily infused with Wood Chakra, making it very resilient to taijutsu damage. Ninjutsu blades of rank A or S can cut this armor.
This jutsu requires a constant feed of chakra of E rank amount. 1 E rank per post. This jutsu has a repair ability which costs C rank amount, this ability repairs any damage to the armor and can only be used every other post.


Denied. First problem would be that I will not allow wood to be sharper, or more effective than steal. Second for your blades you will lose your poison on them if it has any. Also I need how long the blades get for each rank.
Next if you have wooden armor it cannot be stronger than steel. Second it is effected by tijustu if anything because the weakest part of the puppets are the joints, especially if it is hit.
The last Justus is good for the most part except the wood and steel item I have a problem with. For all three Justus I would like a more detailed rp because they were not very clear to what they did in the rp, and if it did they were not used in the fight.

What am I looking for?

EM have u need the wood release jutsus that allready are for the bloodline? lol
for 1, my blades dont have poison... the effects my blades cause is from the materials they are made out of...also wood and plant life and everything like that (includeing us) has adaptive properties. And even if it was poison it would be absorbed into the wood...
for 2,
Mokuton: Moku no Yoroi [Wood Release: Wood Armor]
DESCRIPTION: A skill where the user can create an armor made of wood, however this armor is a special type of armor. Weighing less then conventional steel armor, it is actually stronger then steel. Being heavily infused with Wood Chakra, making it very resilient to taijutsu damage. Ninjutsu blades can penetrate this armor.
is exactly from the bloodline jutsus....
for 3 the wood its self is very resilient to taijutsu damage not even talking about the puppet... the joints are still accessible and if they weren't it couldn't move... and what would be the point of that?

for 4 agian... read #2

Ill take out the sharpness... only got the idea for sharpness from water release blades... but what ever i dont need that anyways

for 5 .... at the bottom i said i hope thats enough... meaning if u want me to continue just let me know and dont be a d**k about it... just say please continue your rp sample... that would of been very polite...

sry for the d**k comment, i jsut get a little frustrated when people say my stuff is Denied when they them selfs have not done any research pertaining to the stuff.

Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu: Oblivion ( Has numerous other names)
Rank of Jutsu: Genin-Sanin+
Range of Jutsu:Within reaching distance.
Jutsu's Element:Spiritual Chakra ( Hidden Clan Jutsu )
Description:
* ~Genin
Description: Outstretching the users hand,they will start to obsorb the spiritual particals in the area. Meaning,is the user was in the forest where wild life and trees lay,the user would be able to sap and steal the life of the area into their arm in which they would apply chakra. In doing this evil move,the user's arm will become engulfed in black flames. This is all done with the user's hand open. When the clentch it,they are condensing the chakra into a thick beam of charka and gathered spiritual energy that will surround their designated arm. This makes the move more accurate. When they hit their target,the opponent will take the fist and be pushed back by it's power but that's not the true power of Oblivion. When the user re-opens their hand,they will release the condensed chakra and spiritual energy into one full blast in which the opponent will be consumed by in the animals mouth that closely impersonates the person's soul.

*~Chuunin
The same aspect of as the first be provides more power;mostly because there is more suction of the spiritual energy of the area,as well as more chakra being induced. Unforunately,this move comes at a greater cost as unlike the first,the flames don't become condensed and continually eat at the flesh of the user for as long as he holds the technique. The power is also increased as instead of the opponent being incinigrated by one head,two heads will spring from the arm and devour the opponent into annhilation;hence the reason for the name of the move.
*~Jounin
Again,it's obtained the same way except this time the person applies fragements of their soul into it. The flames with turn white along with the color of the persons chakra as the flames won't hurt as much as pulling your soul into the technique. The user will be rendered unconcious by this move and may also need extreme medical attention. But the power of this technique will definately be admirable. Instead of the animal showing after contact is made,the image of the animal will be showing from the flames of the persons arm. If the user is truly bold,they will be able to use both arms to perform this technique but that would give them an extreme near to death experience. When the user does strike the opponent,or get close enough to perform the attack,the power and destruction of the move and level a tower easily and reduce the remains into ash. It will below the user back a considerable amount of yards back but the pain the opponent would face would be rather quick depending on almost soul was put into the move and how much chakra and spiritual energy they gained;also it would depend on how accurate the strike is.

~Sanin
This is the highest level of Oblivion recorded. It brings the user to a fatal point that if a medical ninja isn't there to help the body it is an automatic death. This time,the entire side that the users arm is own,is ungulfed in pearly white flames.(Plus the coloring of their chakra) The spiritual energy gained from this power will be reduce half of the life of the area into naught. Only few can obtain this stage,unless they have a demon/curse mark/or an release the enables them to gain this Sage-like move. This time,the animal is completely seen and roaring at the opponent from the flames. The user won't even half to get as close to the opponent,though they will need to get close enough for their animal to shred through the enemy. When struck with this move it will indefinately level the area into desinigration. Instead of like an explosion like the last few,when the opponent is struck,they will be pressed into the earth,or launched backwards while the animal will consume them and tear away at the flesh and muscle of the opponent.

~ SS
The last,and final technique that Zin Naga Tojiro created. He took the clans move to the last and final level. During this move,the user will drain as much life force from the area as he/she can,and add half of their soul into the move. This,enables the user to have powers that only mortals dream of although without a medical ninja near by it's definately not something you want to user everyday nor will you even be able to. As before,the animal that resembles the persons soul will be shown and they will be shown from the chakra flames of the arm of their choosing. The entire arm and body will be engulfed in these devouring flames as before initating the strike. The force of this move,is enough to a small town with only fragments remaining when contact is made. To perfect it,Zin made it a choice of having your fist closed or palm open but the attack will vary accordingly. With it closed,it's more for an individual strike to one opponent and pushing all that inhuman power into one spot. With it opened(palm strike) the power reasonates like an explosion. Having the 'animal' devour a wide radius of area. But this specific move comes at a disasterous price. The user for one week(IN REAL LIFE) will be unable to fight,train or move much. In fact,most of the posts will be your character rehabilitating. THE SECOND WEEK,you character can train but only on techniques from Chuunin-DOWN. With great power there comes a price. Although after those two weeks,you character can be back to their lives.
Rp Sample

Zin sighed as he rather couldn't sleep. His team mates had just finished with their first ever unified mission in transporting the Fire Country's Ambassador and fighting off any unwanted guest that decided to show up. Though his team mates slept soundlessly,Zin couldn't sleep a wink. His mind was going what seemed like a hundred miles a minute. His father had once owned the Rice Country. Otokagure was his legacy and now it was in ruins. Ruins! His only chance to learn about his past was trampled on, like a bully stealing candy from his prey and stepped on to put insult to injury. Sitting up and moving finally to his feet,Zin would walk a little away from his team mate's camp site and moved into the open fields with Nagi where he sat down to look up at the moon. For some reason,though the child was wide in the open he felt safe;like an invisible guardian was watching his every move. It wasn't until Zin wondered if he would ever figure out his past before he heard a twig crack and quickly sprung into action while whipping out Amaterasu and had the special blade illuminate like a white-flammed torch against the moonlight. Slowly,a figure appeared from the darkness of the forest with a hooded cloak that covered his entire form. The man's face was hidden but what caught the young Naga's eyes the most was the similarity in their eyes. It reminded Zin of his father and the dreams he has of him. Those serpant eyes looking down to him in such pride."D.......Daddy..........Daddy is that you?"Zin said softly as his blade lowered a little and his eyes glistened as warm tears formed. I.....I knew it was fate to come here. No one else has eyes of that kind!!!! I knew.......Daddy couldn't die..... But unfortunately for the child's spirit it was not his honorary legendary Snake Sanin,even though the eyes definately would prove other wise.

"So........You are my brother's child....yes?"The voice said softly as those piercing serpant eyes stared at Zin's distraught face."Yes.....It's of no doubt that you have the inheritance of my lost brother. I was wondering when I saw the fight amongst you and your team mates........That darkness in your heart seemed to have grown stronger now that you see.....The the Rice Country is in practical ruin."The hooded man said as his piercing eyes softened a little as he saw the tears go down the pale child's face. I see......He would be.....10 years of age calculating from when he was 'born' to when Konoha took him away.' It seems that he is still unable to control his emotions yet. But......The boy has potential. From what father told me...He may even be greater than Orochimaru.........Though your defeat is regretted brother.........I warned you about that.......irritable child and foolish experiements. But at least......You left part of you here. The man approached the weeping Naga child and wiped the tears from that youthful face and sighed,"Now now......That's not how the son of Orochimaru is supposed to act......Zin."He said squatting down and letting Zin see his face from underneath the hood. Zin could tell that the man was of relation of him. The eyes that no one but him,at least from what he has seen,piercing back at each other like looking in a mirror. The pale skin both shown and almost glowed against the moonlight even though most of his body was hidden and as Zin tilted his head,he too had a snake,thought much larger than Nagi,slithering over to greet them."Now Zin.....I show myself to you now because.......'We' believe it is time for you to know more about yourself. When you become stronger,and become a Chuunin,we will tell you more. But right now...."He stood back up and patted Zin on the head tenderly,"You are just a child. But when you become Chuunin......Everything will be revealed. If your Hokage cooperates.....Maybe he can be of use also."The man said as he couldn't let Zin know who he was until later.It would be better that way."Now.......I wish to teach you a technique that is only designated for the mostly talented of Naga Clan members. Not all can achieve this....But....'We' noticed that you have unlocked you 'Demi-God' form. Or what you call......Kiri biggrin emon Gate Opening?"He asked as Zin widened his eyes as he hadn't even told his team mates nor even anyone for that matter,about the technique."But....How do you kn-"The man moved his index finger to his lips to silence the child,"I'm sorry Zin. I don't have the time to speak if I'm to teach you this move. You team mates and Sensei will break out of my sleeping jutsu soon,but not fast enough that you will at least master the first stage of.....Oblivion." The man saw that Zin was going to go into another barrage of millions of more questions but silenced his nephew and walked a little distance away,"Now......To obtain our clan's ulitmate attack. You must have hate......Intense want to kill.....No....The true want to slaughter you opponent. This means there is no mistakes in using this move as it's not for sparring.....It's for killing. Just like your Shukuchi. It's not meant to play but to kill and annihilate your opponent."He said in a serious tone as those fierce,blood thirsty slits burned from underneath his cloak as Zin nodded timidly;mostly because that look was so fierce that it almost seemed like he was meaning that Zin was his source of anger."Once you get that mind set,you force your charka out to nature to steal their life source to better yourself."He said as his pale arm sprung from underneath the cloak and something odd,yet to Zin,magnificent happened. The tree's the were near him,the grass that lay underneath him,started to wither and die as if their lives were being drained and small specks of light entered and span around before seeping into the man's arms."This seem like a low level jutsu.....But those that think this are dead..The move can be as strong as the person who creates it. It is simply that a Genin of our clan can learn this move. As for me,I'll use Oblivion,at the stage of a Sanin."He said with cold eyes as he looked to Zin and hissed,"And jump back........and watch true power before your eyes nephew.."Zin nodded and jumped back as the cloaked relative,that must be his uncle's snake,nipped the child by his cuff and pulled the boy and his pet further back. The cloaked man,seeing that his nephew was safe from harm,and having sucked all the life force of the tree's that were close to him,he added chakra and started to manipulate the energy that he gained. Slowly,a image of a wolf would be seen emerging from his chakra flames as Zin blinked at the power,"It's......Beautiful....."The boy said softly as he felt the fear in his body yet he was trembling with excitement to see such destructive power formed. As the man raised his fist,he screamed venomously,"OBLIVION!!!!!!" He called out as his punch hit the ground,making what seemed like an earthquake that even from his distance felt strongly as the wolf showed up in the sky just over the 'target'. Once the man pushed the chakra into the ground to complete the technique,the face of the vicious chakra-flamed wolf soared down from the sky and plunged his barred fangs into the ground before exploding in power. Though the distance was claimed to be safe,Zin felt his body starting to get lifted from the sky from the force, before the snake that belonged to the cloaked man clamly wrapped around the waist of the airbourne child and calmly watched his masters power. When the dust settled and Zin blinked in astonishment to the crater made. It seemed as if he made a metor come down from space and slammed into the earth. Everything within the path seemed to be eradicated."It's........Amazing....."Zin said as he trembled from fear of the move as well as excitement of his deadly power. The man smiled to his nephew and chuckled,"And that Zin........Is only one level of Oblivion."The man said with a smirk.

Your Rank: Gennin
Name of Jutsu: Ninja Art: Snazzy Explosion Jutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Range of Jutsu: 20 meters
Jutsu's Element: Universal
Description: This jutsu is used mainly to stun the foe, but can cause some mediocre damage if a direct hit occurs. it focuses a large amount of chakra aroudn the users, and a small dome of their chakra color forms aroudn for a second or so, then istantly after, so the foe is given no time to recongize the attack, a large explosion that the user is immune to occurs, causing a large blast of light to not only act like an explosion, but rapidly flash red, blue, white, purple, and yellow. This attack temporaraly blinds and extremely disorients the foe, causing them to be easily attackable. Even looking at this explosion causes dizzyness.
Rp Sample Kira was surronded by foes. There was about seven of them, and they were in a large clearing. The ninja, which were mist gennin charged him, and Kria ducked and dodged the attacks, where ti was clear he needed to bail, quick. The Suna ninja quickly performed several handseals, a dome of lime green chakra surronding him. The Kiri ninja, not knowing what was going on, charged him, only to hear, "Ninja Art! Snazzy Explosion Jutsu!" And large explosion occured, knockign Kira's foes back, but causing the rapid flash to mess with their eyes, and several stumbled or fainted. By the time all the ninja were back ot their senses, their target had left.

((Just a question, we don't automaticly learn custom jutsu, right?))

((Got it))

How about this I will approve it if for every rank higher you are then them it takes 2 hits more. And if they are a higher rank then you it takes 2 hits less per rank. Does that work?