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PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:22 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:49 pm


((this is NAtsuo's reconstruction profile. There were many flaws within Natsuo's original profile which would be considered auto or godmod. I have asked Temor and JEs if I can do it, and it has been approved. But there is one thing as well, I cannot have cero flowers.))

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Name: Natsuo Kazenshi and Youji- Endrance
[It is pronounced first name: Not-Sue-OO and Yo-gee/ last name: Kah-Zen- Sh-ee]
[His resserection is pronounced IN-DRAN-SS]
Number: Arrancar 11

Tattoo Location: 1 on Natsuo’s back, and 1 on Youji’s back

Nicknames: Natsuo and Youji: Hollowfied children
Endrance: Nature’s Epitath User, Wood’s Temptress, Mother Nature’s Reaper, The Wood’s interpreter

Aliases: Natsuo-sama,kun,chan, Youji-sama,kun,chan, Endrance-sama,kun

Physical Description: Endrance has two descriptions. One is with his separated form (Youji and Natsuo), and one with his completed whole form (Endrance).

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Natsuo has long, fluffy red hair, with bright teal eyes. His current height is “5’7” with a slim figure. He wears a black tight undershirt and pants under his arrancar uniform. His arrancar uniform cloak with a hood is red with white designs on it.

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Youji has straight long teal hair, with piercing vampirism bloodlust red eyes like Natsuo’s hair. He has the same height as Natsuo, of course, “5’7” with an also slim figure. He wears a black tight undershirt and pants under his arrancar uniform. His arrancar uniform cloak with a hood is teal with white designs on it.


Zanpaku-to (ish):
-Name- Mia [no translation]
-Appearance- Mia has the original appearance of two weapons called tantos. (a staff that opens up into two staff with blades on each staff) The middle, where it is to be held, is smooth and frictionless. Natsuo holds the ruby of the tantos, while Youji holds the teal tantos. The tips at both ends are black and as hard as steel. Once Natsuo and Youji separate them, they have them fuse together to become Endrance (Resurrection) and connect both middle part of the tantos reveals the true weapon. Both of the 6.5 inches long triangular blades are shown and are known to be as sharp as scythes.

Resurrección:
(Natsuo and Youji have a fusion resurreccion that make them into a fully armored man, Endrance)

Endrance: User Image
Endrance Weapons:
”Emblazon, Mia”


Endrance’s mental state is serious, fearless, and unwavering compared to Natsuo and Youji’s playful nature. Natsuo’s body changes as he grows 4 inches taller, his muscles expand, and his body takes on his grown up form. The color of his hair is bright silver and his earrings expand into what looks like a Tousen’s hollowfied mask (except there are holes for his eyes) for protection. Since his mask covers his whole face, he cannot be poisoned by a smell, a sight, or by mouth (if it is closed, which most of the time it is…)

Youji becomes his armor to protect him from harm. His light but extremely durable armor covers his whole body as his attire (everything he is covered in the picture with) which raps tightly around his body. This armor is 1 inches thick all around. His gauntlets strong durability and tight friction make it easy for Nathan to scale or grab any surface and take almost any attack that is thrown at him. His light-weighted boots increase his speed and has the same attributes his gauntlets contain.

The tantos (Mia) become wristbands that wrap themselves around his gauntlets. From when he ever thinks about a sword and shield, his right hand gauntlet extends into a blade still attached onto his wrist that has the same attributes as his tantos, but only as a samurai sword that is 5 ft long. His left gauntlet does the same in creating a shield with an intricate design that is known to be immune against energy based attacks (ceros, kido shots, and things like ichigos tensa zangetsu…) due to its durability and ability to feed off of the energy. Even though it looks like Earth it has the characteristics of steel with an oval shaped frame that is 4 ft long, 2.5 ft wide, and 3 inches thick. The shield can even shoot ceros out of its center. The shield and blade have been known to regenerate when broken with the use of borrowing energy, from a cero or release of spiritual pressure. Once it absorbs the energy to its full amount it can reflect energy based attacks.

Powers:

1. “Hollowfication Pollination” (Endrance/Natsuo)
a. With one swipe of his blade, Endrance can release seed spores which grow onto whatever surface they land on.

2. “Hollowfication Flowers” (Endrance)

a. ““Monopoly Marigolds/ Resonating Rosa Rugosa/Catcus”
i. By distracting his opponent for a period of time, Endrance’s flower/plant lowers/increases it’s reiatsu to the level of his victim. It then connects his reiatsu and the victim’s reiatsu forming a bond between them. Within that bond it continues to lower the victim’s reiatsu by draining it until they are exhausted and are almost collapsing. This forces them into a hypnotic state under his will. The flower must be attached to the victim for this to work.

b. “Infectious Rambling Roses/Iris/Cactus”
i. This infectious plant/flower releases its spores which contain toxins in the air that affects his opponent. Depending on what Endrance wants to happen to the victim is what happens to the opponent.
1. Freezing: This effect lets the victim succumb a freezing state, to the point of numbness in the limbs. This attack has also been known to cause temporary freezing of the arms
2. Paralyzing: This effect lets the victim succumb a freezing state, to the point of numbness in the limbs. This attack has also been known to immobilize the enemy for 2 post.
3. Sleeping: This effect lets the victim succumb a drowzy state, to the point of a slow reaction time for all of your movements in which your body’s energy is being drained.
4. Poisoning: This effect lets the victim succumb an exhausted fate of being fatigue. This symptom includes vomiting, running nose, weazing, numbness of limbs and sometimes death. This attack has also been known to immobilize the enemy for 5 post.
c. “Climbing Cero Roses/Cyperus/Cactus” (Natsuo/Endrance)
i. This plants shoots ceros charged by Endrance, or by an energy source of something else. (Like quincies)
d. “Healing Hybrid Tea Roses/Hygrophelia/Cactus”
i. This plant/flower develops delicious water that heals Endrance of energies. The healing tea takes time to develop.
1. 1 post Heal body’s small cuts and scratches
2. 3 post Replenish energy/reiatsu
3. 5 post Heal body’s external injury injuries
4. 10 post Heal body’s internal injuries
a. (If anyone drinks the tea without Endrance’s permission, Endrance can easily end in their life by letting the flower mix a hidden poisonous liquid which poisons the opponent.)
3. “Foul Floribunda Roses Vines” (Natsuo/Endrance)
a. Vines: These vines do whatever Natsuo/Endrance tell them in protecting them or attacking them.
4. “Flower Replication/Substitution/Creation” (Natsuo)
a. Replication: Out of 20 flowers, Natsuo can replicate himself, with everything
b. Substitution: Natsuo can replace himself with a bunch of flowers by switching the positions of the flowers.
c. Creation: Natsuo can create his weapon, tantos, out of 5 flowers
i. (The total number of flowers he can create are 100)
5. “Hollowficating Summoning,” (Natsuo)
a. Reiatsu-Eating Shrubs/Trees
i. These shrubs just sit and feed off reiatsu high leveled enemy reiatsu.

6. "Telekenesis Spores," (Natsuo/Endrance)
a. Natsuo/Endrance, can create spores from pollination and control them with his mind.
b. Natsuo/Endrance can also control all plant-related material with his mind, and alter there shape, size, durability as he sees fit with his mind


Special Accessories:

Invisible Cloaks: These cloaks was stolen from the research facility and given to him, as a peace offering. The equipment makes the user invisible and completely shields their reiatsu to a very small level and insignificant level. Natsuo and Youji had this garb sewn together with their arrancar coat.

Abilities:

Listening to the Wood: Natsuo and Youji listen to The Wood for it to tell them where exactly people are

Controlling Nature: By Listening to the Wood Natsuo and Youji can control nature, meaning trees, shrubs, flowers, vines, plants, and anything of that nature. (Get it? Nature? Ftw!! Lol.) And yes this includes the petals on the trees and flowers, the needles on the cactus, and all the stuff on the shrubs and plants.

Personality: Natsuo’s personality depends on the people’s he is around. With friendly arrancar and espada, he acts like a happy, perverted, and playful teenager. With an enemy or stranger, he is very rude, picking at the things they are most sensitive about in their lives.

Natsuo used to believe that Aizen, his friends, and the espada would create a better world for all Hollows. After seeing a line of destruction, he is not sure anymore. But one thing is for sure, he will serve the espada the best he can, even if it means helping Aizen.

Youji is a manipulator who has stolen Natsuo’s true devilish personality. The true face of Natsuo’s hidden potential. He mocks those he doesn’t like, laugh in the face of danger, and takes crap from no one, not even Jes. >.<

Biography:
Unlike most arrancars, Natsuo, was not born of the Hogyoku. He was born as a hollowfied chimp below the true Hueco Mundo. With slow aging and constant devouring hollows and souls, he grew into the arrancar teenager of today. Through years of meditation and experience in Hueco Mundo, he had become “enlightened” with wisdom of himself and hollows. He was able to master all of the memories of his past lives. They each had lives of pain, sorrow, love, and lust. He uses each of these emotions and qualities to form his own personality and being.

Once Natsuo became an arrancar, he could finally reach the surface of Hueco Mundo and travel to human world. He was so delighted to have his first human soul. He remembered the agonizing pain of abuse from parents, the passionate feelings he had for a girl, and the perplex situation of where he stood in life. He was…so delicious. This lust for teenage souls soon turned into an addiction. So that one, turned into four, and that four turned into sixteen. It wasn’t long before Soul society became involved and sent shinigamis after him.

But Natsuo’s lust could not be destroyed like an ordinary arrancar. They tried to stop him, but they couldn’t. He destroyed and devoured the soul of each and every shinigami that came kill him. With his zanpakto, Mia, he felt invincible, that no one could stop him. Unfortunately he met his match against a lieutenant shinigami, who almost destroyed him out of rage and compassion for his fallen comrades. Before the final strike was made, Natsuo was saved, by one of the fallen shinigami of the Soul Society. He said he was “a fan of his work.” Natsuo grinned lightly just after that incident falling into unconsciousness due to severe internal bleeding.

The next day Natsuo woke up, dressed in espada garments, and an eye patch over his wounded eye. By searching the hallways for the man who had saved him, he had concluded three things.

1. He was in Las Noches (Inside a big palace)
2. Something had happen to him (It hurt to move)
3. The man had plans for him (Natsuo wouldn’t be saved for nothing)

At the last corridor, he caught a glimpse of the man’s white uniform going into the room. Using a Sonido, he was able to reach him. Natsuo asked him “who” and before he could finish, the man answered “Gin, and your Natsuo.” Natsuo stared blankly for a moment before asking “why?” The man replied “I was sent, to give ya real purpose.” It seemed that he saw potential in young Natsuo, and he was right. Through meeting with Aizen and a test of his combat skills, he was accepted.

(I’m gonna rp how Natsuo and Youji met later...something like Moses and the burning bush.)

Powers:

Bala
Hierro
Pesquisa- and take out spiritual readings
Basic Cero
Sonido
Speak to trees


Rp Sample:
“So this is Natsuo Kazenshi…?” the brown-haired, middle-aged gentleman asked as he observed red-headed boy then switched over to Gin. His voice sounded intrigued, but in the way it lingered he was bored at the same time. This was a sign of a very complicated man.

Natsuo raised his heads to look up and analyze the man sitting on the very high chair before him. His face wasn’t of innocence, for he left that act of appearance a very long time ago, so it seemed. His white espada garments suggested that he was a high ranked espada, but his spiritual pressure put him in a class of his own. This man clearly is not one of us. So why is he here? What are his intentions? Are they good or evil? By the time Natsuo stopped analyzing, it had seemed that this man was analyzing him as well. Natsuo’s eyes widened to his surprise, the man’s face showed a very bleak penetrating stare into Natsuo’s soul. It made his skin crawl with fear…and temptation to eat his soul.

“Yea…” Gin answered,” I’d like ya to see whatch’ya think of ‘em...” As usual, Gin spoke as if he lacked proper grammar when using his lexicon. That was not the only thing; he was also slouching to the side with a psychotic grin on his face. He looked over to Natsuo and gave him a silly grin but Natsuo was still was fixated on Aizen, as if hypnotized. “I’d like ya to see what he can do…”

“Very well…” Aizen sat up straighter and pressed he “…send in Dark…” Almost instantly, an arrancar arose from the darkest part of the room. Natsuo broke Aizen’s stare, and looked at it. It seemed as if it came out of darkness itself, Natsuo blinked. “Do good kid…” Gin told him. Before Natsuo could ask what he was saying, Gin had already disappeared. This espada wasn’t liked the others, it was dressed in all black and had a strangely pierced face with an overuse of eyeliner. He walked until he was directly in front of Natsuo.

“What’s your name, boy…?” the woman said. “It certainly isn’t boy…” replied as Natsuo’s right eye twitched in annoyance. There was a moment of pause, since she was waiting for him to answer. “Feisty, cause we just hit puberty, right?” she smiled attempting to make embarrass him in front of Aizen, Gin, and the silent one with the same reiatsu as Aizen.
“I can’t say the same for you. Seeing as you haven’t developed, at all-“ Natsuo smiled as he was using her tactic against her. “And what is with your outfit? It looks like you were just dipped in black paint and set outside to dry…” A distant chuckle could be heard from Gin, on the sidelines.

Her face instantly turned pink of embarrassment then towards red of frustration. “You little-!!” she instantly dispersed into darkness and appeared as a claw behind in his shadow. Natsuo stayed calm, as she was reaching for his throat, he caught her hand. She could tell she was shocked by the trembling pulse in her wrist. “I’m not afraid of the dark…” he told her, as he lifted his sword from its scabbard. “…are you?” Before she could make a sound out of her opening mouth, her body separated itself into millions of pieces over the room and Natsuo. He dropped her hand, making that the largest piece of her left. Natsuo smiled as he looked towards Gin for approval, which he Gin gave with a nod. Natsuo then turned around to face Aizen and stepped forward, away from the corpse. “I am ready to serve at your side, Aizen-sama,” Natsuo bowed slowly. “Good...very good” Aizen smiled down in acceptance.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:05 pm


Remember, also, that you need to RP his meeting and eventual partnership with Youji. Until you complete that, you can't RP as the characters with these powers.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2010 11:56 pm


Understood

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 6:33 am


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Name:
Danubi Gangaran

Number:
13

Aliases/ Nicknames:
Slender Man

Physical Description:
Danubi appears to be a black-skinned humanoid male roughly nine feet tall and perhaps a foot wide at his shoulders. His entire body is completely hairless and his Hollow mask covers his entire head above the neck save for a circular area over his left eye and a pattern of cracks radiating outwards from that hole. He appears to wear a white suit with a black shirt, but aside from the shoes every bit of the 'clothes' are a part of his body and are affected by his powers.

Zanpacto & Resurreccion:
Zanpakuto - Danubi's Zanpakuto appears to be a Nodachi but is in fact two Kodachi, one with a classical handle and the other being housed in the sheath itself with a lacquered handle. The handle, sheath, and blades are black and the guard is a completely black circle of metal with a red line connecting the 'edge' side of the blade's connection point and the bottom of the guard.

However, as with many aspects of Danubi's appearance, even his Zanpakuto is not what it seems. Neither of the Kodachi he wields has an edge. The lacquered-handle Kodachi has a needle-like blade that has the strength and resilience of a regular Kodachi blade and all the defensive abilities but can only be used for thrusting attacks in battle. It is, however, slightly wider than a standard blade and thus has slightly better defensive capabilities. The guard-handled Kodachi's blade is simply an ovoid block of metal that fits perfectly into the sheath. It is made of an alloy that makes it weigh only half as less as a regular blade without taking away from the hardness. In addition, the hature of these blades allows them to combine - this is in fact the way that Danubi releases his Resurreccion.

Resurreccion - "Defile, Violador!" - Danubi's Resurreccion, Violador, is what gained him his nickname and what inspired its source. There is a legend among humans spawned on one of their communication networks of a being known as the 'Slender Man' who has no face and appears at night to spirit away children and devour them body and soul. His arms are infinite in number and his fingers can seek for human hearts anywhere in the world.

Danubi's Resurreccion is what spawned this relatively recent myth. When he slots the 'needle' and 'shaft' of his Kodachi together they crack and shatter, the effect extending up his fingers and arms, splitting them into hundreds of thin tendrils capable of extending for hundreds of feet. His legs, too, extend and wither, becoming useless, and the 'suit' he wears becomes fully black, giving him perfect concealment in shadowy areas. Because his arms are so thin he slows down substantially in this form, becoming unable to physically move his body more than a few feet a minute. However, he may still Shadow-Travel (see below) anywhere within his line of sight.

He makes heavy use of Shadow-Sight within this form, as the hole in his mask heals over when he enters his Resurreccion, leaving his face a blank black slate.

Special Accessories:
Monocle - Danubi carries a monocle on his person at all times, as he is mildly far-sighted. He slots it into the hole in his mask when he needs to read.

Abilities:
Instant Regeneration - This ability extends only to Danubi's arms. Any damage done to him between his shoulders and fingers instantly heals over, leaving no trace of any wound. This extends to attacks of any strength, and can even be used to regrow an entire limb. In addition, if his shoulder is separated from the rest of his body it will reattach itself. This ability costs a small amount of reiatsu per arm regenerated. While anything below several hundred is still a feasible amount, more than that will severely weaken him.

Personality:
Danubi is very introverted and rarely speaks, but is always very informal whenever he does, never using honorifics other than '-kun' or '-chan,' if he uses them at all. There is, however, one exception. He always addresses his 'father,' Maguda Shivedul, as "Maguda-sama."

Biography/History:
Danubi Gangaran earned the number 13 under unique circumstances: He was created at the exact same time as another Arrancar. His 'father,' the Arrancar he was created from, was Maguda Shivedul, a Vasto Lorde whose mask was ripped off by Baragan Luisenbarn. Maguda had been naturally schizophrenic as a side-effect of his Vasto Lorde transformation, and his other personality became Danubi, who grew fully-formed as an Arrancar out of the remains of Maguda's mask. Danubi has exactly the same memories as Maguda prior to his 'coalescence' as an Arrancar, and will refer to himself in the third-person when describing any events prior to Maguda's Shinigamification.

Strangely, despite their common origin, Maguda and Danubi don't seem to have any particular attachment to each other. Danubi is casually respectful of his 'father' whenever they happen to cross paths and Maguda ignores his 'son' in the same manner. Danubi's main role in Las Noches has become that of a security being, using his Shadow-Step and Shadow-Sight to patrol Las Noches and make sure that the Lords and Espada know of any intruders.

While he will not press the point if someone insists on going against it, Danubi prefers to be called 'Slender Man' instead of by his real name.

Powers:
Basic Hollow powers - Danubi has mastered all basic Hollow powers, with two unique variations:

Sonido - Danubi has never learned Sonido, having always used his Shadow-Travel ability to replace it.

Bala Barrage - This is a technique only available in his Resurreccion form. Danubi's arms each fire off a Bala in quick succession, sending a wave of spiritual energy at his opponent. These Balas are fired off so quickly that the force behind them has no time to 'charge,' and is weakened to the point that they are incapable of dealing physical damage beyond that of a normal punch. They have only a mild explosive impact, roughly equivalent to a firecracker going off.

This does not change the fact that there are quite a lot of them.

Shadow-Travel - Danubi has the unique ability to instantly move between his current location and any shadowed area in his vision. This is not a form of Sonido or ultra-fast movement, and he does not occupy any space between his point of origin and his destination. He cannot occupy the same space as another corporeal object and cannot use this ability on his own shadow. In any completely dark area or whenever there is a moon overhead he can effectively Shadow-Travel anywhere.

This ability is mildly disorienting, and he cannot use it multiple times in quick succession.

Shadow-Sight - Danubi's eyes do not see in the regular spectrum that most humans and spirit beings see. Instead, his eyes 'see' through shadows, allowing him to use any shadowed area (including his own shadow) that he can see as his 'eyes.' He can chain this ability with itself, allowing him to use successive shadows to 'transfer' his ability over hundreds of miles. This ability cannot function in total darkness. Its range is doubled in nighttime or other semi-dark conditions.

Black Vision - Should Danubi choose to use his own eyes to see with, he can see perfectly in light conditions of any kind and regardless of the particulate content of the atmosphere. It is impossible to blind him via a sudden flash, dust cloud, or any other technique up to and including Suzumushi Tsuishiki: Enma Kōrogi's sensory-deprivation effect. This ability does not extend to his Shadow-Sight ability.

Defensive - Danubi's offensive techniques are even weaker than his 'father,' and he would barely be able to hold his own with an unseated Shinigami in physical combat. However, his defensive techniques are unmatched, and he can easily hold off a Captain-level shinigami for an extended period of time in or out of his Resurreccion form.

This has a drawback, though. While Danubi is capable of fighting in a full-defensive form while in his Resurreccion state, he cannot regenerate his arms while doing so. Thus, a sufficiently determined opponent could slice through his arms and get to the body within.

Terrifying - Danubi's Resurreccion appearance is inherently frightening, and any normal human that sees it will instantly enter a state of total abject terror. This ability does not function when he is in direct sunlight.

Manifestation - Danubi is able to become visible to non-spiritually aware humans at will. This ability cannot function when he is in direct sunlight.

Persuading voice - Danubi's voice is indistinguishable from that of a frightened child, and should he so wish he can attract an opponent with his voice, enticing them to see who is talking. This is not a supernatural ability and has no inherent hypnotic qualities.

Physical Malleability - Danubi can stretch almost every part of his body to bizarre proportions, allowing him to swallow a human-sized object in one bite. this is an inherent physical ability. He cannot stretch any part of his body to more than thirty times its normal size, and he cannot use this ability on his torso, though it functions normally for his arms, legs, and any part of his body above his neck.

Role-Play Example:
Tosen leaned on the 'rail,' looking out with his blind eyes at Hueco Mundo. The Forest of Menos was clearly visible even in the reiatsu-saturated environment, a pillar of energy rising above the ambient sea. But there was one dark spot, slowly traveling towards Las Noches. Tosen's ever-controlled features twitched for a moment as he smirked. His fellow pure being was returning to Las Noches. Pure terror had returned.

The being in question was not running or using Sonido, but travelling at a sedate walk, the light reflecting off of its monocle as it walked through the doors to Las Noches and seemed to melt into the shadows, its white suit vanishing in the darkness.

Tosen didn't bother turning around as he felt the blank space in the ambient reiatsu appear behind him. "Welcome back, Slender Man."

Danubi nodded to Tosen as he took his monocle out and stored it within his 'suit.' He bent down slightly as he made to leave, but Tosen's voice stopped him. "Wait, please."

Danubi paused for a moment, as if considering whether or not to stay or leave. Backing out of the doorway, he straightened up and walked over to stand behind Tosen, looming over twice the height of the Lord of Las Noches. "Tell me, Slender Man, what is it that goes through your mind? What drives you to do what you do? What drives you to terrify humans so much?"

Danubi considered the question in silence. Minutes passed, fifteen, then thirty, then an hour, then two and three. Danubi then spoke, in his quiet voice like a pleading child. It had lured many humans to their death. "I could not say, Tosen. It is just what I do."

He turned and quietly walked away, leaving the Lord of Las Noches to stare out blindly at the white sands and black skies. The sound of footsteps echoed through the silent halls of Las Noches, a steady click, click, click that became steadily fainter as the minutes wore on. After a few minutes, there was the sound of a Garganta opening and closing.

The footsteps stopped.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:49 pm


Jes any update on my application. I know its a different kind of character so understand if need time to look over. I got templates for the puppets, but will really take time to detail them once I know initial guy is ok.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:25 pm


@ Auri-- I've already mentioned my reticence about allowing this sort of character. I'd like to see you flesh out all five puppets and I'll be keeping a close eye on what you do with this character. What you have as of now seems pretty all right to me.

@ Doc-- As far as I know, you already have a character, don't you? If you're going to RP two of them, it's usually better to have each character on separate accounts as it avoids confusion. If that's really not possible, at least make their posts in different colors to make it easier to differentiate them.

So, for Danubi, he's a very interesting character concept, but I'd like a few things worked out. First of all, firing multiple balas feels very much like a specialty technique, but I'll let it slide. Just don't make it too overpowered. For his Defensive ability, you make the claim that he can defend himself against even Captain-class characters, but you never actually mention *how*. Not only that, but he might be able to fend off a Captain for a bit, but given that he's unranked and rather new, he'd have to expend a good deal of energy to hold his own in any situation with a Captain. As such, he would not be able to defend himself for very long.

Along similar lines, his regeneration ability should require expenditures of reiatsu, ensuring that he is not *forever* able to regenerate with no effort. That's a broken ability.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:38 pm


The Balas are unable to do physical damage. Their only effect is the psychological twisting.

The Captain-class defense is to balance out the fact that he's even worse than Maguda at fighting. Don't worry, his defense breaks after a few posts. And the regeneration only applies to his arms, and it uses the same mechanic that his Resurreccion works off of, so no, it isn't infinite.

I'll edit his profile to reflect these things. Please keep in mind, though, that both of my characters are based mostly or entirely on defensive techniques. Maguda has less open-combat skill than an average Arrancar and Danubi has absolutely none whatsoever. Neither of them would survive in an offensive battle against a Captain-level shinigami for more than a few posts, and they'd both probably die first hit if that shinigami got in a surprise attack with a physical-based weapon.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:09 am


K well I just wanted to get the main one down before I went to work on all the other ones since would be fruitless effort if the main one is not allowed to be. I'll likely RP his discovery of each one and give you their templates and skills beforehand so you know whether it is accepted character or not. Under this assumption it would seem I can move forward and just RP solely as the baby.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 8:44 am


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The Balas are unable to do physical damage. Their only effect is the psychological twisting.

The Captain-class defense is to balance out the fact that he's even worse than Maguda at fighting. Don't worry, his defense breaks after a few posts. And the regeneration only applies to his arms, and it uses the same mechanic that his Resurreccion works off of, so no, it isn't infinite.

I'll edit his profile to reflect these things. Please keep in mind, though, that both of my characters are based mostly or entirely on defensive techniques. Maguda has less open-combat skill than an average Arrancar and Danubi has absolutely none whatsoever. Neither of them would survive in an offensive battle against a Captain-level shinigami for more than a few posts, and they'd both probably die first hit if that shinigami got in a surprise attack with a physical-based weapon.

That actually makes the balas *less* ok. This makes them a modified/specialty attack which are only available to you by gaining Espada ranking and then training for the technique you want.

So long as you hold to those stipulations about the defense, I'm fine with it. Also, he's not able to regenerate infinitely. Each regeneration ought to require at least *some* expenditure of energy, if only in small quantities.

Other than that, if you edit correctly, you should be accepted just fine.


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K well I just wanted to get the main one down before I went to work on all the other ones since would be fruitless effort if the main one is not allowed to be. I'll likely RP his discovery of each one and give you their templates and skills beforehand so you know whether it is accepted character or not. Under this assumption it would seem I can move forward and just RP solely as the baby.


So far, yes. Just the baby. Until I see fleshed out puppet profiles, none of them are approved.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:03 pm


I've edited to limit his maximum number of regenerations 200. Seeing as he has 150 arms or more in his Resurreccion state this is a fairly even limit.

I'll re-edit to remove the 'can't do damage' part of the Balas.

And... got the defense thing a bit more balanced: He can't regenerate while in his defensive stance.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:17 pm


But there's still that fear-instilling aspect of the Balas that make them specialty attacks. Which, again, you can't have if you're not an Espada...

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 5:20 am


It's an effect of his Resurreccion state, and he can't use it unless he's released Violador. It's basically him infusing the effect of his 'terrifying' ability into his Balas.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:14 am


This doesn't change the fact that it is a Specialty Bala. There are rules about this: namely that you can't have one without being an Espada first.

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:21 am


Okay, I'll remove the ability, though it wouldn't have worked on anyone worth RPing in any case.
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