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 Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 6:01 pm
Bishop now oulling himself up and now knowing that was a stupid idea"You guys go on without me
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 7:41 pm
Bishop is attached to the post, and Valaria is trying to find Cid... The place looks safe now, there are any other dog in the area
Bishop's rope began to move
"Hey what is it, now?" yelled Bishop holding tightly the rope
"I own you one... do you remember" It was Cid pulling the rope with all his strength
"Man sure you are heavy"then Bishop use his legs to make Cid's work easier
Then Cid began to pull the rope faster and it hurts Bishop "Hey man! easy easy" Bishops hands were to tight
"Just a little more... you don't want to lose the car"
Cid kept looking at the surrenders, actually he didn't care about the car, he was afraid for the "Thing", it could appear and take Bishop if he left him there
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 3:51 pm
Bishop gets all the way to the top and lays belly first he gets up with a face full of mud and starts to laugh"HAHAHAHA that was the most fun i had since i went to the pyrimads
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 8:21 pm
Valaria turns back around in the seat and let's out a huge sigh. She thought to herself, “That was just to close for comfort, and how the heck did Cid get to the other side when there was no longer a bridge to cross over. Who am I to question anyone, when I've got my own secrets to protect.” Just as Valaria was about to ask the sniper about how to get the guys, Eva began waking up. At least Valaria thought she was going to wake up, but all she did was a little moaning and groaning, and then it was back to LaLa Land for Eva. Valaria was so surprised that Eva didn't wake up, that she totally forgot her question for the mysterious sniper.
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 7:13 pm
( Reasons why I had made my character faint, black out, whatever was so I can catch up with homework. Can you please edit your post, Devine? )
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 7:42 pm
(( Cid / Bishop / Valaria / Eva ))
( Let's leave her "sleeping" for now, When everything is right for you, you can wake up her Yo. )
Misterious Driver: " If everything is right, I suggest to go now. It is not safe stop here for a long time. "
Misterious Sniper: " I agree. We will go now!! "
The driver connects the car and is preparing to leave.
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 2:06 pm
Valaria was in such shock that she was barely able to speak, but she knew that she had to.
"Where are you going? Why are you just leaving my friends behind like that?"
Valaria was not only upset and confused, but she was down right angry. She thought to herself, "How could these men just show up out of nowhere apparently to save us, and just leave the guys on the other side without so much as a single thought or word about their behavior's." Valaria's head began to pound again like it did inside of that strange house. This time would be different, she would not allow herself to become unconscious again. There was no telling what they would have done if Eva and I were both lying here unconscious.
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 6:11 pm
Valaria was very hurt and distressed that she could not do anything to help her friends. The fact that she considered them her friends was totally out of character for her. Growing up in the orphanage she always kept to herself and never played with any of the other children. She always felt out of place and different form the other children, but she could never understand why she felt this way.
Now here she is, thousands of miles away from the only place she had ever known as home, and she's calling these people, that she only met hours ago, friends. If she used her powers, then her secret would be revealed, and she certainly did not want that to happen. Not here and not now, she didn't know these two men and surely was not about to reveal herself to them. She did not know yet if they were friend or foe, or for that matter, what their intentions were.
Valaria really wished she could have helped her friends on the other side of the bridge, but it's to late to worry about that now. The way Valaria saw things now, her number one objective was to keep Eva and herself as safe as possible, although she didn't quite know how she could do that and keep her secrets a secret, but she knew she would figure out something and hopefully before it was to late.
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 6:48 pm
( Sorry ^^, we din't leave yet, we just preparing to leave. About Cid and Bishop, i waiting to know what they will do. )
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 7:21 pm
( Quickie. I am so sorry if I was being rude back there. I should be okay around the weekends. )
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Posted: Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:25 pm
Then after help Bishop to climb Cid rested in his knees and turn his face to the jeep's lights
"Look those soldiers can take us to the city..."
Bishop looked exited
"Yeah at last... the treasure..." thought Bishop
"Well Bishop let's go... the city is waiting for us"
and then both walk to the jeep and cid have some questions in his head... "why if he is working for the govenment he didn't know about those soldiers in the city?"...
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:29 am
I'm confused, if Bishop was on the opposite side of the bridge when he shot to ropes to make dogs fall down into the abyss of darkness, and it was the only way across , Then how in the world did Cid get to the other side to save him. Also, now that both of them are the other side of the crevas, how can they be walking back to the car?
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 9:10 am
((My fault Devine, sorry I didn't read the part "in the other part of the bridge" any way let's say this: Bishop ran to the bridge tie the rope to the post "our side post" then ran to the other side and shot at the bridge, he fall but the rope still in our side...
And anyway what's the idea in tie the rope to the post behind him if the dog are in the bridge, he just needed cross the bridge and cut the bridge them the dog fall and he is safely in the grown in the other side, this could be the better way if he wanted to be in the other side... well that's what I think
If someone have a problem with it just tell me and I will change my posts))
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:57 pm
(( hehe, for me it's ok. we just need know about Bishop ))
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Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:59 pm
Putting it that way makes more since, and keeps the story flowing smoothly. As long as everyone agrees.
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