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 Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 4:28 pm
the essay is a topic about "The Stranger".
We were supposed to explain how we believed if Meursault should be publicly executed by guillotine.
I took my stance on how Meursault should not be publicly executed, some of the points as of why were because of how there was not enough information on the case. Another was that it took too long.
It is supposed to be 5-6, but I wanted your opinion and help on it so I can tighten the information I already have so that way it will make it easier on myself to make it to that amount.
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 4:40 pm
5-6...pages? Paragraphs? Lines?
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 4:51 pm
5-6 pages. sorry bout that.
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 5:24 pm
There's a lot of fluff in that paper, but I suppose that's fine if you need to stretch it a bit. You should try to use some synonyms or new phrases for words or such that you continue to repeat (such as 'executed by guillotine', or 'the second/first/third reason').
Your paper will sound more cohesive and less like an outline if you think about those sorts of things as you go back over it and make a few edits, I think.
Other than that...you're on your own. XD
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 5:36 pm
Thank you, Sire. I will work on that. I wanna make sure that I can at least form it into the best way I would write it while adhering to the rules. That's mostly because I am more known for straight to the point writing then so much info there. But since the teacher wants more, I will do my very best to give my best.
(Note: This essay was written from only having read 5 chapters from the book out of 12, two from the beginning and three in the middle. What I read really gave me knowledge, but it was just hard for me to walk into reading a novel with the soul purpose of evaluating it. I would rather get the evaluation papers for it after reading then to get them before reading them.)
On other news, it looks like Sinbad is here to show us around the 'Seven Seas'
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 5:43 pm
Also, I was wondering at what point are App users able to gain a second demon?
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Hopeful Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 6:54 pm
Zorc James Also, I was wondering at what point are App users able to gain a second demon? Gaining demons happens through events. Unlocking the 'second' Demon, on the other hand, has yet to be decided..... It was originally introduced in a different guild after all.... But Either way, you're better off just playing your app users as much as possible.
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 7:29 pm
I would play him a good bit more, if I knew how Yatsuda will get his App back. Is he just going to snatch it back, or is he going to take the long, arduous, and probably fatal way? Decisions, Decisions, Decisions. . . and questions. . .
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 7:29 pm
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 7:33 pm
Hello, Luna. You saw the nickname for Eiri, right?
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 7:35 pm
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 7:36 pm
Tarkus got accepted! Thanks Arena. ^^
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 7:40 pm
Luna, the names are on page 1090.
Ms. Stick, I see that Buckethead is doing alright.
Cause Sinbad likes that name, and shall use it.
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 7:42 pm
Tarkus? Tarkus!? TARKUUUUUUUUUUUUUUS! TARKUUUUUUuuuss!
I don't get the name. o wo
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2013 7:43 pm
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