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 Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 4:56 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:44 pm
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Full Name: Hisao Kimura Isamu
Nickname: The red cloud
Age: 17
Birthdate: 03/04(March 4th)
Gender: Male
Height: 1.87Cm
Weight: 87Kg
Nindo: "Regardless of the situation, Dust will never rust."
Personality: Hisao is very diferent from what he is supposed to at his age... At an nearly extreme point. He acts as an grumpy old man nearly all the time, reminding his distant ancestor, the Sandaime Tsuchikage near the fourth great ninja war. But some rare times, he act CLOSER to his age, mostly on thrusdays he'l be more like an friendly 35 years old. He is also a smoker
Village: Kusagakure
Rank: Genin
Class: Bloodline class
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Bloodline: Jinton
Chakra Pool: 350
Chakra Color: Bright red
Chakra Element: Fuuton and Suiton
Strengths:
• Bukijutsu
• Long range combat
Weaknesses:
• Can't keep from exaggerating.
• Bad reflexes
Fears:
• Seastorms
• Polar bears
Attributes:
• Dusty cover: Eletrical resistance increased
• Eye of ancestry: Learn Ninjutsu 2 posts faster.
Class Attribute:
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased
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Ryo: 両0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type:Three headed Spear
Weapon Range: 1.30 Cm
Weapon Weight: 2.6Kg
Weapon Location: Back, straped by a lace.
Summoning Type: Wolfs
Summon Sage: No
Pacts:
•None.
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-Pouch straped to belt
• Shuriken X10
• Kunai X5
• Sebon X5
• Makibishi X10
-Pockets
• A lighter
• Cigarretes X52
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Fuuton: Life release
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Doton: Planet Release
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Jinton: Universal release
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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Hisao was born of a normal family, they were all decendents of the jinton, but none of them were ninjas, rather, they prefered to live in a city separated from any ninja village. That was to keep away from the danger of that world, they said. Hisao was no different at the time... At the age 11 he was mugged by a small group of gangsters, and thats when he awakened his Jinton, harming the boys and sending them away.
With time, Hisao decided to abandon the city, he needed to return to the origins of his family, to the ninja world. He wasn't stoped, and was spported by a few relatives, but nothing really special, they gave him money to buy a small house on the village he joined, that happened to be Kusagakure. There, he displayed some talent, but never revealed his bloodline until the day he graduated. After revealing it, he was nicknamed "The red cloud" due his bloodline and his usually bright red clothing... And even due the imagination of some that the dust became stained with blood.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:05 pm
Did you kill Jung off? If so, accepted.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:24 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Sazan
Nickname: He has yet to receive one.
Age: 16
Birthdate: August 21
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11
Weight: 165 lbs
Nindo: "Strike fast... Strike hard."
Personality: Calm, calculated, witty, clever, intelligent. In battle he is cold, hard, and ruthless.
Village: Grass.
Rank: Genin.
Class: Enchantment.
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Bloodline: I have yet to apply for one. Maybe later.
Chakra Pool: 355
Chakra Color: Black.
Chakra Element: Lightning, and wind.
Strengths:
• Clever
• Calm
• Intelligent
• Brave
• Strong
• His class allows for him to imbue his weapons with his energy
• Skilled in close-mid ranged fighting.
Weaknesses:
• Long range fighting
• If he loses his weapon there goes his biggest strength.
Fears:
• He is afraid of himself... And the monster he may become. Because despite his ice cold personality deep inside is a warm hearted caring individual.
• Afraid of opening up.
Attributes:
• Learns ninjutsu in one post less.
• Quick draw, he draws his blades at speeds that are nearly unmatched at his rank.
Class Attribute:
• C. Attribute - Moderate Force: Able to place own elements within small basic ninja tools (Senbon, Shuriken, Etc.)
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Ryo: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type: Dual kodachi worn on his back.
Weapon Range: each kodachi has about 21 inches all together.
Weapon Weight: I'm unsure.
Weapon Location: Back one pointed at each shoulder.
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
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•5 Kunai
•15 Senbon
•10 Shurikan
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Raiton
Fuuton
{Custom}
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
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He grew up on a small farm just outside the grass village. He was 'discovered' by a jounin who was returning from a mission that needed a place to stay the night before making the trip back to the grass village. He realized the boy had an exceptional chakra level compared to normal humans. Which meant he had the capabilities of becoming a shinobi. As such he took the boy back to the village with him and trained him in the ways of the shinobi.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:27 pm
Denied ~
jk Acccepted ! looks goood !
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 2:02 pm
Teddy, you also supposed to help them correct their skellys. D:
@Full,
While I may not be a mod, I"d like to help you out with a few things.
For your normal attributes, They can rage from what you have which lets you learn ninjutsu fast to something like, "Quickly Draw - Draws weapons faster then normal." Or "Iron Will - Doesn't back down when things are tough." ect.
AND For your class attribute, its not the classes description, its the lil "c. Attribute" For your class it is: "• C. Attribute - Moderate Force: Able to place own elements within small basic ninja tools (Senbon, Shuriken, Etc.)"
Now look at your skelly at the ninjutsu types. Your supposed to replace "{Your 1st element's name} WITH you element. Not put it under it.
For you Other jutsu, mearly replace it with "Custom" Like you with what I said above.
Thants all I see, so if you could edit your profile and make those adjustments. But tedyy already approved you, so My opinion doesnt matter. xD
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 2:45 pm
Thank you for the help. I'll edit what I have to make it work better.
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:27 pm
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Full Name: Kunimai Imiyaka Nara.
Nickname: Kuro Bara (Black Rose).
Age: 15.
Birthdate: September 11th.
Gender: Female.
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 120 lbs.
Nindo: "The darkness is my greatest ally..."
Personality: Serious, intelligent, and rather absent in the sense of social aspects...such as kindness and love.
Village: Grass
Rank: Genin.
Class: Sensory.
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Bloodline: Nara Clan.
Chakra Pool: 365.
Chakra Color: {Any color you desire)
Chakra Element: Wind and Earth.
Strengths:
• Ninjutsu.
• Long-ranged combat.
• Accuracy.
Weaknesses:
• Close-ranged combat.
• Lack of being a team player.
Fears:
• Afraid of trusting anyone.
• Afraid of feeling emotions that would count as 'weak' (Such as love and kindness).
Attributes:
• Perceptive eyes; she is extremely accurate with throwing weapons...more so than most in her rank.
• Keen senses; Kunamai has faster reflexes than that of a usual Shinobi of her rank.
Class Attribute:
• C. Attribute - Chakra Sensor: Able to detect Chakra signatures and distinguish between them within 50 meters
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Ryo: 両0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type: Lengthened Kunai.
Weapon Range: 8 in.
Weapon Weight: 8 lbs.
Weapon Location: In back pouch.
Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:
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• 5 Kunai.
• 8 Shuriken.
• 2 Explosive Kunai.
• 15 Senbon.
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Fūton
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Doton
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Bloodline
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|E i s e i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
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Kunamai's past was a rather dim one...with her parents being murdered right in front of her eyes by a Grass Village Shinobi when she was just five years old. She could not remember the reason why, but...all she knew was that her parents loved her...and she loved them more than anything. When the Grass Village Shinobi killed her parents, he was about to kill Kunamai as well...until something unexpected happened. Kunamai unknowingly used her Bloodline technique to completely choke the Shinobi to death... As such, the darkness became her only 'friend'... As time passed, her hatred towards the Grass Village grew and grew...until she decided she would want to kill them all for what they had done. Within a few months after the murder of her parents, she joined the Grass Village Academy...using the remains of her parents' wealth (although it wasn't much) to live in a standard life at the Village. There, she graduated from the academy at age eight, showing extreme promise in her skills, especially her bloodline. However, she looked to make no friends with anyone at all...and did not want to trust anyone, either. Unfortunately, she would be in a team...which she despised the idea of. What would happen from here in the present to the future would be determined by her overwhelming, secret hatred towards the Grass Village.
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:36 pm
Edit your first attribute... you cant have deductions on 3 jutsu types sweatdrop
pick one and you're approved~
Cool drawing by the way 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 6:46 pm
I edited :B and thankies >w<
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:22 pm
Well the class gives you that. What he means is if you add the attribute you have the deduction twice which is no no, lol.
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:23 pm
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh o.o so what do i do? XD
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:49 pm
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Full Name: Tsuki Sorano
Nickname: The silent kunoichi/Bookworm/Nerd/Brain
Age: 13
Birthdate: July 20th
Gender: Female
Height: 5'3
Weight: 100 Lbs.
Nindo: " To prove I'm not just all brains and no brawns..."
Personality: Comes off as cold and emotionless, but is actually a very sweet and caring
girl, not very talkative
Village: Leaf Village
Rank: Genin
Class: Medical
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Chakra Pool: 375
Chakra Color: Blue
Chakra Element: Wind, Earth
Strengths:
• Taijutsu
• Vast variety of knowledge from books and hands-on experience
Weaknesses:
• Older brother, Hiroshi
• Genjutsu
Fears:
• Not being able to be of any use to anyone
• Losing her brother(who's the only one left to call family)
Attributes:
• Learns taijutsu in one less post
• Fast-paced hand sign making
Class Attribute:
• Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased
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Ryo: 両0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 250 centimeters/98 inches
Weapon Weight: 1 pound
Weapon Location: Back under shirt
Summoning Type: N/A yet
Summon Sage: N/A yet
Pacts: N/A yet
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• Kunai(5)
• Paper bombs(4)
• Antidotes(6)
• Oinments(5)
• Senbon(6)
• Shuriken(4)
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Fuuton
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Doton
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Eiseijutsu
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
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{Style name here}
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{Style name here}
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Tsuki lives with her older brother Hiroshi in the Leaf village. After losing their parents to illness, her brother has been raising her all by himself since she was an infant. Now that she's older, she can take care of herself and despite having Hiroshi coming home late and stinking drunk most nights, she can still rely on him to have her back. Up to now, he is the only one she trusts. While others find her weird and usually finds herself being constantly picked on, she does have a few friends. Hinata Hyuga from the Main Branch of the Hyuga Clan being one, along with squad team mates Azite and Minkata. Her Jonin Squad-Leader and Sensei Eri, along with her girlfriend Ami(especially Ami) also treat her like family; though Eri thinks Ami mothers her too much.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 11:14 am
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Full Name: Tokui Uchiha
Nickname: "The Warrior of Pride"
Age: 16
Birthdate: June 5th
Gender: Female
Height: 5'1"
Weight: 138lbs
Nindo: "I will make myself great no matter what it takes, remember that!"
Personality: The only female Uchiha to have ever been recorded to be able to unleash the power of the Sharingan. Her parents died when she was twelve and entrusted her with the mantle of her male predecessors before her. She is forward and proud as any Uchiha would be, she hates to find weakness in herself and rarely does, but when she finds someone better than her she goes after them. She makes rivals easily but, when told she is weak she can become a force to be reckoned with.
Village: Leaf
Rank: Gennin
Class: Sensory Class
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Bloodline: Sharingan
Chakra Pool: 365
Chakra Color: Gold
Chakra Element: Fire & Water
Strengths:
• Enhanced Ability To Predict
• Master of Chakra Control
Weaknesses:
• Physically Unsuperior
• Prefers To Work Alone
Fears:
• Staining The Uchiha Name
• Being Insignificant
Attributes:
• Superior Skill: Allows her to restore her chakra by 200 points when things get tough.
• Master of Chakra: Can perform 2 techniques at half the chakra cost. [Increases by 1 each rank up.]
Class Attribute:
• Chakra Sensor: Able to detect Chakra signatures and distinguish between them within 50 meters
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Ryo: 両0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
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Summoning Type: N/A
Summon Sage: N/A
Pacts: N/A
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• Senbonx20
• Kunaix20
• Shurikenx20
• 50ft of Steel Wirex2
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]
Suiton:
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Eiseijutsu:
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Sharingan-Locked:
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Copy Element-Fuuton:
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Copy Element-Doton:
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Copy Element-Raiton:
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Her parents died when she was twelve passing a heavy burden to her, Tokui has always been a victim of pride since then and passed the academy at the age of 14. She has been a Gennin for two years and has trained hard, though she is a little green on the side of missions she has plenty of combat experience. With recent events leading towards a war and Konoha back stocked on ninja it is very clear that many young gennin like Tokui may be thrown in to the hells of war in no time.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 11:47 am
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