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 Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:51 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:16 am
Well... Im bored, started writeing a new song, figured I would post it here, see what ya's think.
Currently it is not named, and also bare in mind, this version is like a rough draft. I noramlly write out a song start to end, then make re-writes, verse changes and what not.
the fire within my chest burns
every time I see that demon look my way
enchantress of the night
skron of my insanity
bringer of this internal chaos
Rip out this blackened heart
Place it within the black alter
Drive your ritual dagger deep inside
And bring my torment to an end
Everytime I hear that voice
The sirens call from the abyss
The chill of death surrounds my spine
As I am led to my own damnation
In a world of forbidden pleasures
These voices scream inside my head
As those jewles eyes pierce through my soul
Its not close to being done, this is just what I have so far. Been writeing in between processing tickets here in the office
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:20 am
Very nice ^__^
Place it within the black mass alter <-- "black mass alter" will likely be a point of confusion for any listeners unless you have the most superior diction in the world >o>; imho.
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:22 am
A Name of Power Very nice ^__^ Place it within the black mass alter <-- "black mass alter" will likely be a point of confusion for any listeners unless you have the most superior diction in the world >o>; imho. Well, im always open to suggestions on changes biggrin
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:27 am
i'm no good with writing xp i'd just take out 'mass' .. cuz I dunno the melody, iono if that'd mess up the rhythm sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:32 am
A Name of Power i'm no good with writing xp i'd just take out 'mass' .. cuz I dunno the melody, iono if that'd mess up the rhythm sweatdrop Mass has been removed razz Theres no realy melody or rhythm to it as of yet, as its only a rough draft, and I haven't tried setting it up with any on the guitar tracks I have recorded
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:37 am
mtfbwy 4laugh
i can write music but I can't write lyrics lol sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:49 am
A Name of Power mtfbwy 4laugh i can write music but I can't write lyrics lol sweatdrop mtfbwy ?
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 9:59 am
I dont even know that one.... So yea WAAA!!!!????
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:04 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:09 am
HAHAH !!!! I get it now.... Yes young padwon you learn fast LOL
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:15 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:17 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:19 am
HE moves shout him !!!!!!!! * frost shock *
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:32 am
For your reading pleasue, I give you one of my finished songs. I wrote this the other night with influences from Cannibal Corpses, and the wars that humanity wages upon itself.
Now I should warn you, those that have read it have called it 'brutal', 'mess up', 'distrubing', and 'grotesque'. Some even called me ******** crazy.
Eyes
chaos looming all around this place
wretched souls and twisted lies
devouring the weak and pissing on the rest
killing without reason, feasting for the pleasure
deep in their skulls the knives are burried
skin peeled off, blood splattered
Corpses raped, ravaged, beaten and torn
Behind their eyes the angels die
demons laughing
angels screaming
devils ******** crying
demons laughing
angels screaming
devils ******** crying
blood soaked bodies strew on the streets
mulation in every wake
nightmares on every corner
desperate screaming, chaos bleeding
no peace, no help, no god here
bleeding and battered
sodomized and torn
eviscerated and bled
ripped the ******** apart
deep in their skulls the knives are burried
skin peeled off, blood spatterd
corpses raped, ravaged, beaten and torn
behind their eyes the angels die
demons laughing
angels screaming
devils ******** crying
behind their eyes the angels die
behind their eyes... ...
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