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"Really? Where?" *Realizes this is quite a dumb question, but does not take it back, and slaps forehead* "What are you cooking?" *Looks through oven door* "Is that a... Combusken?"

*waves*
'ello Mimi!
*my Bulbasaur wanders into the kitchen*

"Well, no, I'm not." *Looks in at the Combusken and sighs* "Though I'm awfully picky about... Um... Chicken? Yes. I HATE fat. Ew, it's disgusting... But I like chicken." *Smells* "And it does smell really good."

After traveling through the many terrains of Hoenn, Red went through Mauville, then through Veranturf. Red decided to rest a while once he got to Rustboro, once he was rested he headed for Petalsburg, a town northwest of Littleroot. Red went straight through Petalsburg, without stopping. Red was going through the grass when a wild Poochyena appeared. Red sent out his Tyrogue,the young pokemon was eager to fight "Use tackle."Ryan said with exclamation. Tyrogue used tackle on the small Poochyena, weakening him greatly. Poochyena fought back using bite, which nearly faints Tyrogue. "Tyrogue, give it all you got, he's weak, just one more tackle." Ryan said hoping tyrogue would pull through. Tyrogue followed orders and used tackle on the enemy pokemon, fainting it. "Good job, Muscles, return." the tired tyrogue willingly jumped back into its pokeball. Ryan then got back onto his bike to continue his mission. Dusk approached as Red entered Oldale Town, a small town just above Littleroot. He sat down and waited for it to get darker before he would get any closer to Littleroot, not wanting any attention when he's there, for a stealthy entrance and exit. He looked around at the people that were unaware of what is going to happen once it got dark enough, just blindly going on with their business, not even knowing an Aqua member was watching them, and plotting to steal from the great Professor Birch. It finally got dark to satisfy him and he was off again heading for Littleroot, he entered the small village and parked his bike out behind the laboratory. Red found a way in through the slightly cracked window on the side of the lab, he then slowly lifted up the window and crawled into the lab, spotting his target, the flame pokemon, torchic. Red let out his pokemon, Kippy. Torchic woke up and used growl on Mudkip, lowering his attack. Red quietly said "Kippy, use bubble." Kippy blew bubbles onto the opponent. The move was Super Effective, torchic lay dazed, but not fainted, on the floor of the laboratory. Ryan then threw a pokeball to catch the flame pokemon. Torchic, weak from battle, did not put up much of a fight to try to escape the pokeball, and after a few seconds it was captured. "Yeah!!!!!! Torchic is mine." Ryan smiled as he picked up the pokeball, when he suddenly heard something moving in the direction of the front door, he looked and saw the doorknob of the lab twisting back and forth as if someone was unlocking the door "Crap, it's Birch coming in." Red said as he quickly recalled Kippy and bolted out the side window, onto his bike and took off for HQ. Professor Birch walked into the lab and found one of his pokemon missing "AHHHHHHHHHHHHH, I'VE BEEN ROBBED!!!!!!!" Birch yelled, knowing he would never see it again. Meanwhile, Red had made it back to HQ, exhausted from pedaling at a high rate of speed nonstop, he parked his bike and walked into HQ, grabbed a pop from the fridge and walked back to his chair and sat down, taking sips from his pop while researching data on the torchic on his TADS. After looking up the data, he walked up to Brian. "How did I do for my first mission, boss?" He looked at him wondering

(this one any better?)

"That's a good point." *Looks at timer* "Ten, nine, eight, seven, six..." *Continues* "Oh, hi! Seems like everybody here likes chicken." *Waves to Shadow Cat*

Fail, first it was still a little short. But the most important part is that the battles were way to short. At that low a level, attak aren't strong enough to be doing massive damage. Three to Four hit battles per Pokémon should be common. Also have the mission header in your mission.

*Sits down at the table* "Hurrah, dinner." *Watches Tauros* "You'd think it'd be full. But I guess not... Should I help set the table?" *Jumps up*