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 Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 9:29 pm
Name: Tame Kaze
Village: Sand Village
Clan/ Bloodlines: N/A
Element Affinity: Wind
Age: 17
Gander: Male
Weight: 278 Pounds
Height: 5 feet 8 inches
Jutsu: Puppet Master Jutsu
Hi I’m playing the role of Tame Kaze a young boy whose parents were killed in an attack on the Sand Village. Though he was about 5 or 6 years old at the time he can remember the Sound Village insignia on the ninja who killed his parents. Though he is a special shy and quiet boy who never talked since the slot erring of his parents he will seek revenge on those who killed his mother and farther. Tame uses puppets for weapons his main attack puppet is Kaze a short yet fast attacker who never waits for his opponent to catch his breath. Tame is a young 17 year old boy who has long purple hair neatly fastened in to a ponytail. He wears a long black trench coat stitched in purple and yellow lace. If he were able to wear his head band he would wear it over his neck to wear as a necklace. He has 5 puppets, but the other 4 are kept in his inner coat pocket on summoning scrolls in case the enemy tries to rate his attacks. So that’s it for now hope you’ve enjoyed reading my application.
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 8:15 pm
Fayt walked into the Academy for the first time. He was in awe that he was going to be starting to train in "The Way of The Ninja" in such a place. He sat at one of the desks & began to just stare into space daydreaming what his first day at school would be. Fayt awoke from his daydream when he heard something in the hallway. Fayt ran to the closest window, opened it, & before jumping out he said while looking at the desk, "I'll be back." With that said he jumped out & ran.
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Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 10:30 pm
OoC: I'll make a profile after this, since I don't want to skip ahead or anything...
RP Sample: Aleric walked through the courtyard, taking in the wild and extravagant decorations that had been set out. There was no reason for such excess in Aleric's mind. Today was not a holiday, nor a special occasion, nor was a ceremony going on. It was simply an attempt to make him feel lower of his status in life. Material possessions such as fine silks and perfumes were good in life, but they couldn't save your life from an attack, and they couldn't be brought into the afterlife. "A complete waste of time," Aleric thought as he walked.
After some time of waiting in the second courtyard of the estate, Aleric finally gazed upon the man who wished to hire him. Like the house he lived in, the man over-indulged in pleasures. His female hand-servants constantly complimented him on his good looks, even though the constant feasting had caused his body to fatten considerably. “Such a vain man, to be living in such a place. How sad," thought Aleric, “to be living alone in such a place. A king as it were, alone in his palace.”
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 6:38 am
here's my RP example 2:
I long to see your face in my dreams,I close my eyes and my heart pleads,To be blessed with a vision of truth,A perfect mirror in which to see,My own imperfect reality.A droplet of knowledge heightens thirst.
Like the glimpse of a jewel catching my eye,
Making me want to stop and stare,
Touch, hold, take for my own that diamond.
Precious and pure; untarnished,
And reflecting light, so was your essence,
The beauty of your life.A perfect form,A scent pure perfume,A smile of gleaming gems,A face that lit up darkened rooms,A character that made each companion,Feel as though he was loved best.Mercy embodied in a man,With warmth that never left,And a legacy that extends beyond worlds,In hearts it resides yet.Each word you spoke rings through time,Calling us like a clear bell.I long to hear the sound myself,In wakefulness or sleep,I wait at night for a vision to come,To have an image that I can keep.Your words are comfort and guidance,Yet still Iwish for us to meet,In this lifetime as well as the next,Oh Lord give me a true vision,Of your beloved as I sleep.
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Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 8:41 pm
RP Example:
Avalon rushed over top the roofs of the village, swiftly dodging dormers and ornate chimney pipes. His sandy brown hair with blond tips flew in his face as he turned his hand to see if he was being followed. He landed on a dormer to rest a bit, trying to conceal his chakra as best as possible. He heard a sound that seemed like a sandle squeaking. His ears perked as he dashed off to a village park. He rested on a tree branch, his ears listening to and analyzing any and every sound they could pick up. As soon as he heard a sound similar to that of someone weaving hand signs he began to take off again. As he got about a foot off the branch he stopped mid air and fell. He dangled by a vine wrapped around his ankle. It was an odd light green, and had a unique orange flower with sixteen petals.
"Got'cha Ava!" a petite girl said, coming from behind the tree. She was around the size of a twelve year old, and had the hand sign for horse weaved with her hands. She released the sign and the vine released Avalon. He fell head first to the ground with a large thud.
"Yes Karin, you got me," Avalon said, rubbing his head. "You're getting better at hide n' seek tag," he said, covering his eyes. He began to move his lips as though he was counting. Karin quickly realized and dashed off to find a hiding spot. She had caught her half brother, now he had to find her.
[[OOC: I hope it was good ^^;]]
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 1:59 pm
RP Sample:
Kanji was half asleep laying on the side of a grassy sun covered hill snoozing the day away with a dog named Razor. "Kanji! where are u?". Kanji opened his eyes lazily. "Wat.....", Kanji said slowly. "Why can't a guy find peace?". Reggi laughed"The Kazekage whant's us" . Kanji yawned grabed his Lime green worn out jacket and walked down the hill with his friend towards the Kazekage's office.
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Posted: Tue May 12, 2009 5:00 pm
RP sample:
Makoto walking out to a lake with burn marks on his hands and arms. "Good, I have made improvements on all of my weapons techniques but I set a goal to perfect the fireball jutsu before I entered the academy" Makoto performed a series of handseals and then shot a large ball of fire from his mouth. Normally a child using a fireball jutsu was unheard of but Makoto was tought to use fire jutsu by his older sister, who was in the anbu, and she loved to make sure he was ahead of the game. "I start the academy tomorrow and I almost have this jutsu complete. All I have to do is be able to maintain control of the fire." Makoto looked down at his hands to look at the burn marks on his hand. "I got this" Makoto yelled while he performed the same series of handseals as before. "Fire ball jutsu" An even larger fire ball then before was produced and then shot across the lake. "Finally, I have tamed this fire" Makoto stood tall and stared up at the sky happy he would soon follow in his sister's footsteps.
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:05 pm
Brooklyn Hyuuga Character name: Brooklyn Le'Clair Village: Leaf Rp sample: "Oh good.... Your here...." "Yes, I was sent by the leaf to help your out with construction I beleive?" "Oh ho ho!!! No, no, no.... Protection is what we need most young lady...." She crossed her arms staring at the man in front of her. He stood to be about 6'1 and a bulky build. The busling noise of the construction site didnt faze her one bit. Brown eyes filled with determination. "Thats not what the report says sir....." "Well this IS kinda top secretive.... Cant tell ALL villages now can we...." "Guess not.... Depends though if...." "What? You think were plotting to ATTACK one of the villages?!?! Hahaha!!!! What a good laugh...." The man stood to the side and held his arm out showing the young kunochi the beautiful green scenery and clear, clean, sparkling blue waters. "The village hidden in the sun is not a country of war intentions.... We barely have and shinobi to keep us protected.... Were a small, peaceful country as you see Miss....." "Brooklyn... Brooklyn Le'Clair...." "Well Miss Brooklyn, you can tell your hokage about us and that you saw NOTHING wrong...." She gave him a knowing look. "First I have to see..... You never know what lurks in the depths of shadows..." "Guess your right....." "Yes, so were is this IMPORTANT treasure I have to guard?" "This way Miss Le'Clair...." "Thank you....." 'Now lets see if the Sun village is what it is SAID to be....' Brooklyn followed him silently in wait.... ((hope I did it right biggrin )) Pass ^_^
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:09 pm
Jeremy_Butters Ok my character name is Tame Kaze and I'm a Sound Village Ninja ANBU I think that's the assassin right? He uses puppets as a weapon like Kankuro he's asome. He has 5 puppets their names are Kaze, Hyun Mu, Bak Hu, Chung Ryong, Ju Jak. Kaze is the main puppet used for everything he doesn't like; Kaze was the puppet made for him by his parents who are decased. Hyun is for defence. Bak is for speed. Chung is for Arial attacks. Ju is for reconince. Tame loves puppets and like to make a new one every year. As Tame walked in to his new Ninja Class of the Legindary Sand Village .
With a frightning look apon his face. eek
He felt afride of the other students.
Tame is a shy little boy who never talks. sweatdrop
His parents were killed in a horrible Village attack. cry
Though is purple hair pined up with a yellow sweat band and purple eyes makes him apart from the other students he does prety well with his weapons.
He wears a long black over coat lined in purple stiching as a Ninja likes the color black. ninja
He carries his puppets every where Kaze is his main weapon of choice made especally by his mother and farther.
The other puppets are carried along his inner pocket of his coat.
So as he walks in to his new class, the students stair at him with fear of what he might do. confused
So Tame just strides right in and says nothing.
He doesn't talk to any student because he is shy. sweatdrop
He pickes a spot in the front row of the class so he can be well taught by the teacher. mrgreen Hope This was good enough I'm kinda good At this I think atleast I hope so! First off, we don't use emotes ro show our expressions in the RP. We describe the face and such. Secondly, you misspelled a few words. Thirdly, most of this was just a description of your character, rather than an actual sample of RP. Read some of the others here to guide you along. ^_^
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:11 pm
Fayt_Star Fayt walked into the Academy for the first time. He was in awe that he was going to be starting to train in "The Way of The Ninja" in such a place. He sat at one of the desks & began to just stare into space daydreaming what his first day at school would be. Fayt awoke from his daydream when he heard something in the hallway. Fayt ran to the closest window, opened it, & before jumping out he said while looking at the desk, "I'll be back." With that said he jumped out & ran. Um... we use "and" not "&." Also... you need more detail...
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:12 pm
Armads the Doom Bringer OoC: I'll make a profile after this, since I don't want to skip ahead or anything... RP Sample: Aleric walked through the courtyard, taking in the wild and extravagant decorations that had been set out. There was no reason for such excess in Aleric's mind. Today was not a holiday, nor a special occasion, nor was a ceremony going on. It was simply an attempt to make him feel lower of his status in life. Material possessions such as fine silks and perfumes were good in life, but they couldn't save your life from an attack, and they couldn't be brought into the afterlife. "A complete waste of time," Aleric thought as he walked. After some time of waiting in the second courtyard of the estate, Aleric finally gazed upon the man who wished to hire him. Like the house he lived in, the man over-indulged in pleasures. His female hand-servants constantly complimented him on his good looks, even though the constant feasting had caused his body to fatten considerably. “Such a vain man, to be living in such a place. How sad," thought Aleric, “to be living alone in such a place. A king as it were, alone in his palace.” Pass. Make sure your speech is quited, though. Thoughts are usually italisized. ^_^
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:14 pm
Tahong ng kadiliman here's my RP example 2: I long to see your face in my dreams,I close my eyes and my heart pleads,To be blessed with a vision of truth,A perfect mirror in which to see,My own imperfect reality.A droplet of knowledge heightens thirst. Like the glimpse of a jewel catching my eye, Making me want to stop and stare, Touch, hold, take for my own that diamond. Precious and pure; untarnished, And reflecting light, so was your essence, The beauty of your life.A perfect form,A scent pure perfume,A smile of gleaming gems,A face that lit up darkened rooms,A character that made each companion,Feel as though he was loved best.Mercy embodied in a man,With warmth that never left,And a legacy that extends beyond worlds,In hearts it resides yet.Each word you spoke rings through time,Calling us like a clear bell.I long to hear the sound myself,In wakefulness or sleep,I wait at night for a vision to come,To have an image that I can keep.Your words are comfort and guidance,Yet still Iwish for us to meet,In this lifetime as well as the next,Oh Lord give me a true vision,Of your beloved as I sleep. This is a poem, not an RP sample, sorry... Also, spaces are needed after commas, periods, and othe rpunctuation marks.
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:15 pm
iSolstes RP Example: Avalon rushed over top the roofs of the village, swiftly dodging dormers and ornate chimney pipes. His sandy brown hair with blond tips flew in his face as he turned his hand to see if he was being followed. He landed on a dormer to rest a bit, trying to conceal his chakra as best as possible. He heard a sound that seemed like a sandle squeaking. His ears perked as he dashed off to a village park. He rested on a tree branch, his ears listening to and analyzing any and every sound they could pick up. As soon as he heard a sound similar to that of someone weaving hand signs he began to take off again. As he got about a foot off the branch he stopped mid air and fell. He dangled by a vine wrapped around his ankle. It was an odd light green, and had a unique orange flower with sixteen petals. "Got'cha Ava!" a petite girl said, coming from behind the tree. She was around the size of a twelve year old, and had the hand sign for horse weaved with her hands. She released the sign and the vine released Avalon. He fell head first to the ground with a large thud. "Yes Karin, you got me," Avalon said, rubbing his head. "You're getting better at hide n' seek tag," he said, covering his eyes. He began to move his lips as though he was counting. Karin quickly realized and dashed off to find a hiding spot. She had caught her half brother, now he had to find her. [[OOC: I hope it was good ^^;]] This is a very good sample of RP. Pass. ^_^
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:16 pm
baxes kanji RP Sample: Kanji was half asleep laying on the side of a grassy sun covered hill snoozing the day away with a dog named Razor. "Kanji! where are u?". Kanji opened his eyes lazily. "Wat.....", Kanji said slowly. "Why can't a guy find peace?". Reggi laughed"The Kazekage whant's us" . Kanji yawned grabed his Lime green worn out jacket and walked down the hill with his friend towards the Kazekage's office. Misspelled a couple of words. We also spell out 'you' rather than using 'u'.
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 6:19 pm
brawler21 RP sample: Makoto walking out to a lake with burn marks on his hands and arms. "Good, I have made improvements on all of my weapons techniques but I set a goal to perfect the fireball jutsu before I entered the academy" Makoto performed a series of handseals and then shot a large ball of fire from his mouth. Normally a child using a fireball jutsu was unheard of but Makoto was tought to use fire jutsu by his older sister, who was in the anbu, and she loved to make sure he was ahead of the game. "I start the academy tomorrow and I almost have this jutsu complete. All I have to do is be able to maintain control of the fire." Makoto looked down at his hands to look at the burn marks on his hand. "I got this" Makoto yelled while he performed the same series of handseals as before. "Fire ball jutsu" An even larger fire ball then before was produced and then shot across the lake. "Finally, I have tamed this fire" Makoto stood tall and stared up at the sky happy he would soon follow in his sister's footsteps. Just fix up a couple verbs and I think this should be fine.
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