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 Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:46 am
I havent counted but thanks for stalking surprised Anyway Tekkenseisai is only the coolest bloodline ever!!!! If you have ever seen FMA it's basically like greed, the human shield.
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:48 am
oh lol im just going to be regular lol no bloodlines
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 11:52 am
Blah fine razz you might want to join Taki once you get out they don't have many students, there so you'd get a lot of attention from all the villagers, which there are like 9 of? hmm... really not sure.
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:01 pm
Yeah... I'm gonna be in overlords many clans in Taki and in my own Gama-Hito clan.... Woooooh! :glomp:
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 2:27 pm
I'm thinking about making a clan, it doesn't exactly have a blood line, infact it's more like inuzuka than anything, just not as cute as puppies. twisted
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 2:48 pm
hey tell me how this sound its my Rp example Leon was late for school.He was running as fast as he could but the weight of his heavy black pants where slowing him down. He stopped to take a break "man i better get moving at this rate sensei will kill me". With the blazing hot sun above him Leon felt as if he was in the middle of the desert with no water to cool him down. He started to run again he was wondering how long he would have to stay in the blazing hot sun. He tripped over a rock. "ow dammit! my toe" he grabbed his right foot and started to bounce around on his left foot. After that Leon ran to the school hoping he was not too late. When he finally got to school the teacher yelled. "Leon where have you been" Leon replied "I'm sorry i'm late but a black cat crossed my path so i had to take the long way around
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 2:49 pm
do you think that will get me passed role playing school?
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 2:57 pm
Young_Dark_Ninja hey tell me how this sound its my Rp example Leon was late for school.He was running as fast as he could but the weight of his heavy black pants where slowing him down. He stopped to take a break "man i better get moving at this rate sensei will kill me". With the blazing hot sun above him Leon felt as if he was in the middle of the desert with no water to cool him down. He started to run again he was wondering how long he would have to stay in the blazing hot sun. He tripped over a rock. "ow dammit! my toe" he grabbed his right foot and started to bounce around on his left foot. After that Leon ran to the school hoping he was not too late. When he finally got to school the teacher yelled. "Leon where have you been" Leon replied "I'm sorry i'm late but a black cat crossed my path so i had to take the long way around Its good,but to me it seems really choppy. This is coming from a person who seriously overuses commas >.< So take it with a grain of salt ^.^
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:00 pm
biggrin i hope i pass i really want to start role playing in my village Konohagakure really bad lol
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:00 pm
Young_Dark_Ninja hey tell me how this sound its my Rp example Leon was late for school.He was running as fast as he could but the weight of his heavy black pants where slowing him down. He stopped to take a break "man i better get moving at this rate sensei will kill me". With the blazing hot sun above him Leon felt as if he was in the middle of the desert with no water to cool him down. He started to run again he was wondering how long he would have to stay in the blazing hot sun. He tripped over a rock. "ow dammit! my toe" he grabbed his right foot and started to bounce around on his left foot. After that Leon ran to the school hoping he was not too late. When he finally got to school the teacher yelled. "Leon where have you been" Leon replied "I'm sorry i'm late but a black cat crossed my path so i had to take the long way around Watch your capitalization here and there. Some places would do better with commas. Elsewise, it's good. ^_^ <- grammar paranoid freak
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:01 pm
Tippies, try and switch Leon, with he or his or the boy. cause when you do s**t like that it doesn't sound repetivtive,
Also make sure you capitalize everythign that needs to be capitalized and add commas and s**t.
Than instead of writing about all the crap thats happening to him while he goes, you could write about what he's thinking and how he's felling, cause your him! You need to feel how he feels and s**t like that.
K I'm so sure about using,' the teacher said, "Your late" ' or whatever, because you wouldn't actually do that in the rp, but it's just an example so it might be ok.
Last thing would be not to say 'I black cat passed me' cause you didn't mention that earlier in the post. it could be like 'Leon, being so upset about the black cat passing infront of him, felt uneasy as he raced down the dirt road. Trying not to be late. But as he ran his foot snatched a large and he flew forward landing on his face. Damn! Just my luck!'
Other than that you had great discription biggrin
edit- Hey your not paranoid crying It's like pretending to not have legs in front of a cripple!
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:02 pm
Young_Dark_Ninja biggrin i hope i pass i really want to start role playing in my village Konohagakure really bad lol *Tackles* THANK GOD! The students there are so innactive,but I will be teaching you ^.^ The reason is because one is my friend and he is grounded,and the other does not want to post until others post.
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:04 pm
Eh...I'm really sorry to burst the bubble... >.>; But I do hope you know the Academy in Konoha is 'Academy Student-less'. With an usurper (Fire Master) controlling the village...not many of the original shinobi remained. If you wish to join the rebellion, however, Iwa's where a rowdy group of anti-Fire Master Konohagakurians are gathered! xDD
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:04 pm
yeah screw that damn order thing, I think it's crap personally. But anyway HIRO!!! My savior! *caugh* um.. i mean hi.
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:06 pm
lol ok but the black cat thing its called a lie lol . and i know i was reading the the konoha Academy thing and there where not a lot of post lol
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