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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2017 4:53 pm
Gonna try to get it as a passive one more time. Looked back at a few previous passives and talked it out with some people and i think I have a way to make it adhere to the new rules on post one. Character: Rinka Technique Name: Oni Potency Rank: * [uses two slots as though S-ranked] Type: Bloodline Element: Saketon Description: Oni Potency: Rinka's clan has a particularly rich and potent Saketon chakra. So rich in fact, that mere contact with the alcohol created via their jutsu is enough to send even the heaviest of drinkers into an almost instant inebriation. This powerful addition to their chakra comes at a steep cost, however. It is a very common occurrence that members of her tribe are unable to harness the 5 base elemental chakras, with only very rare cases of members being able to even use a single element that isn't their own Saketon. This is a passive jutsu that gives the following effect to all of Rinka's Saketon techniques:
"Any individual hit by this technique receives a minus one [-1] DR to their reflex stat for a total of two [2] posts."
This negative modifier may be increased through further training, but is done so in a tiered learning system. The initial stage is learned as if it was a D-ranked technique and grants the jutsu's base effect. Stage two is learned as if it was a B-ranked technique and increased the negative modifier to minus two [-2] for three [3] posts. The third and final stage is learned as though it was an S-ranked technique and increases the negative modifier to minus three [-3] for five [5] posts. Stage two may not be trained until Rinka has reached a C-rank body and Stage three may not be trained until she has reached a B-ranked body.
These bonuses do come at a cost. Her saketon chakra is so potent, that it has put Rinka into a permanent state of inebriation, lowering her own reflexes and hindering her ability to precisely regulate her chakra expenditure for each jutsu she uses. Starting at the first stage, Rinka suffers a permanent minus six [-6] modifier to her own reflex stat and her Saketon jutsu cost an extra 50%. As Rinka grows and trains, the modifier to her reflexes is reduced. After training in Stage 3, the modifier drops to minus three [-3]. Additionally, all of her Saketon techniques are susceptible to Katon techniques.
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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2017 5:17 pm
Oni Potency: Approved for a trial run. This is the first custom passive so I want to see it in use before I commit to its full approval. I don’t anticipate this being a problem, but please give me a quote during a fight just so I can know if it’s fair or not.
Approved
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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2017 5:22 pm
Mattysandwich
Oni Potency: Approved for a trial run. This is the first custom passive so I want to see it in use before I commit to its full approval. I don’t anticipate this being a problem, but please give me a quote during a fight just so I can know if it’s fair or not.
ApprovedI can work with that. Thank you very much. Once I get into a fight I'll link you. or if we have a mock arena forum I can do a quick mock fight or something
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 11:23 am
Character: Atsuko Uchiha Technique Name: Side Step (Upgrade) Rank: X Type: Taijutsu Element: Spiritual Description: Replacing the users current version of side step, The user sidesteps an incoming attack, leaving an intangible after-image to take the blow, which includes any modifications already put to it it upgrades the technique from complex interaction to spiritual at the additional cost of 10 more chakra per use.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 1:04 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 4:21 pm
Character: Yugen Technique Name: Look Ma No Hands Rank: C Type: Genjutsu P/S. Sense: Sight // Touch Base Duration // Upkeep: 5 Posts // 10 Chakra Source: Phantasm Description: Makes another person feel and see that they've lost control of their arms. During its duration, the target will not be able to use their hands in any effective way.
Character: Yugen Technique Name: Break A Leg Rank: C Type: Genjutsu P/S. Sense: Sight // Touch Base Duration // Upkeep: 5 Posts // 10 Chakra Source: Phantasm Description: Makes another person feel and see that they've lost control of their legs. During its duration, the target will usually fall, unable to use their legs in any effective way.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 4:48 pm
((this here might be a hard one, you may need to consult AoE on this, a Marbled variable marble needs to have its effect approved here)) Tier 3 Marbling Marble: Animated: Provides simple sentience Description: Allows an object using the marble to act with a false sentience for 1 post. Gains 1 full duration for every supreme increase applied to the marble. The object will stand in place and follow a single command carrying the users intentions i.e attack, defend, etc. If not given a command will stand in place awaiting one until its duration ends. When the duration ends falls to the ground like any other object. Attacks and Defenses made by the object are treated as formless and equals the amount of marble decriptives applied starting at E.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 5:25 pm
Both Customs: Pending. 5 post is a long time to not have access to your limbs. Change it to 3 and you'll be approved.
Your marble: Denied. Sorry buddy, but sentience can never be simple. That's what the head honcho said.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 5:31 pm
Character: Yugen Technique Name: Look Ma No Hands Rank: C Type: Genjutsu P/S. Sense: Sight // Touch Base Duration // Upkeep: 3 Posts // 10 Chakra Source: Phantasm Description: Makes another person feel and see that they've lost control of their arms. During its duration, the target will not be able to use their hands in any effective way. Character: Yugen Technique Name: Break A Leg Rank: C Type: Genjutsu P/S. Sense: Sight // Touch Base Duration // Upkeep: 3 Posts // 10 Chakra Source: Phantasm Description: Makes another person feel and see that they've lost control of their legs. During its duration, the target will usually fall, unable to use their legs in any effective way.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 5:53 pm
Character: Chie Saegahara Technique Name: Floating Calvary (Augmentation of Sword of Kusanagi: Long Sword of Sky) Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Non-Elemental Description: Allows Chie to control up to ten weapons at a time. She can use them with the percision of the Kusanagi- Floating Sword Technique. The power and speed of the weapons, however, are divided by the amount of weapons controlled. The technique last for eight post. Character: Chie Saegahara Technique Name: Aquatic Armory (Augmentation of Water Sword) Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water Description: Allows Chie to make at most four weapons composed of water. These weapons cannot be long range unless they're something like javalins which can be thrown. These weapons have enhanced cutting, striking, and piercing potential up to the rank of the jutsu. Each weapon created divides the power and speed of the weapons (I.E one sword has A-ranked power, two weapons have B-ranked, and four have C-ranked). The technique last for eight post. While the technique is in place the user can fuse weapons into one or split into four at the user's discretion. Approved with AandOE's blessings.
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Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2017 11:14 pm
Mattysandwich Last Word: Removed. Don't get me wrong I loved what your ideas were for changing it, but I have a new character path for Lahlil and I'm going to need the custom slot later for a different kind of unfairness <3
Midas Touch: I don't feel like I can accept this in good conscious. Sounds crazy I know but the more I think about it the more I just think both are really strong. I mean yeah like six posts is great because fights usually last like around that time anyway, but the very nature of the jutsu is so detrimental. Sure pretty much every A ranked jutsu will kill you but if you use this one right it's never going to miss, and even in the case that I only hit one limb it's still great.
I'd like to have it petitioned to be changed. Just something small like having it's duration increased by two? So [1] post for each limb turning like you said, then one post of them being completely engulfed but still alive, and then death on the eighth post. Gives people more time to react and in return keep it off the hazards list so that everyone and their mother who has a holiday PA can't claimed complete immunity to being turned into a statue. Also! Make it clear that being struck can't be sped up by striking them multiple times with the same technique. Or not? I don't know if you guys would want to add that in there but I think it would be another good small edit. Also the more I think about it the more I like that it can healed by any Eiseijutsu. It will give a reason for people to play more medics :p
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2017 5:39 am
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Righteous Judgement Rank: C | Spiritual Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: By using expert chakra control Kenshin can mold his chakra into one hundred and twenty-eight needles and fire them in one taijutsu or bukijutsu thrust from the palm or blade. When struck these needles inflict the damage of any standard senbon, but with the byakugan they can be used to seal the tenketsu. The needles have a maximum range of fifty feet away from the target(s).
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Divine Detainment Rank: C | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: By targeting the tenketsu in the muscles Kenshin is able to use this Gentle Fist technique to temporarily paralyze muscle movement upon contact. The muscle is paralyzed for five of the victim's posts without medical treatment. It is most effective to focus this technique on large muscle groups especially in the limbs.
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Eight Trigrams: Rotation of Retribution Rank: B | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: By using a similar spinning formation to Eight Trigrams: Heavenly Spin while using the abilities of his blade, Purity, Kenshin is able to release a flurry of hundreds of rotating slashes and thrusts. The attack creates a large orb of cutting chakra around Kenshin's body as he performs the technique.
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity as well as knowledge of Eight Trigrams: Heavenly Spin.
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2017 11:48 am
Righteous Judgment: Pending. Make it B-ranked.
Divine Detainment: Pending. Is this a one shot paralysis? Or do you strike multiple times to paralyze the different muscles?
Rotation of Retribution: Approved.
Type it up and I'll see if I can get it approved.
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2017 5:17 pm
Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Divine Detainment Rank: C | Complex Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: By targeting the tenketsu in the muscles Kenshin is able to use this Gentle Fist technique to temporarily paralyze muscle movement upon contact. The muscle is paralyzed for five of the victim's posts without medical treatment. It is most effective to focus this technique on large muscle groups, especially in the limbs. One strike to a muscle causes the paralysis effect so multiple strikes would be necessary to make a whole arm paralyzed.
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique. Character: Kenshin Kōsei Technique Name: Righteous Judgement Rank: B | Spiritual Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu Element: Gentle Fist Description: By using expert chakra control Kenshin can mold his chakra into one hundred and twenty-eight needles and fire them in one taijutsu or bukijutsu thrust from the palm or blade. When struck these needles inflict the damage of any standard senbon, but with the byakugan they can be used to seal the tenketsu. The needles have a maximum range of fifty feet away from the target(s).
This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2017 12:04 am
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