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Akamaru was casually walking by the Academy of his village Kirigakure the Village Hidden in the Mist when he noticed the exam results had been posted on the front door, which was surrounded by his fellow classmates who were crowding the board

"At last, it's finally the moment of truth to see whether I had passed the exam or not," Akamaru scrolled down the list till he found his near the end where he found his name Akamaru Hohigaki, next to his name were the results, with a glance he saw that he had....

Hehe, I was so confused on where to fine this, but finally found it. Hope I do will...I like writing storys, so its going to be a bit easy for me.

Mizuki was walking around the forest for, wondering is what would call it actually. She liked these types of walks, just by herself and her thoughts. Just thinking of what just happened, she ran from her home village, Takigakure, the Waterfall Village. She had to tell herself over and over again, its not her fault that her parents died. She signed, stopped walking and looked at the night sky, looking at the stars, the moon. Wishing to just fly up there and touch one.
Thinking to herself that she should stop and set up camp for the night. Not wanting to walk anymore to fine fire wood, she took out her slepping bag, and rolled it out on the green grass forest gound, next to an oak tree. She took off her boots, and set her backpack on the gound next to her. Getting into her sleeping bag, she looks up, wishing on the same star, night after night sence she was 4 years old, wishing the same thing.

Pass!

((sorry if it is a little long, I got a bit carried away))

Reza drew his hair back into a ponytail that was his signature and pierced it with the senbon needles to hold it in place. He donned his black silk yukata and the lacquered geta before setting off to the academy where he was to see if he had passed the exams. He stepped out of a small shack that seemed contradictory to his appearance. His high cheek bones and pale skin gave him an ethereal beauty that was hard to come in even the most beautiful women. He eyes were dark and deep as a moonless midnight sky. The wind swept down from the heavens and blew his hair back past him and fanned it out. He smiled to himself and began his walk towards the academy.

It was early in the morning just a little after the sun had risen so he had little trouble with traffic and was allowed to actually enjoy his walk instead of having to hurry like he normally did. The clunk of his geta echoed down the empty streets and created a hollow beat. He began to unconsciously hum a lullaby that sounded more like a funeral dirge than something used to soothe restless children. He caught sight of the academy as he rounded the corner and stopped for a moment before continuing. On the outside he seemed to the epitome of calm and collected; yet under this calm exterior he was a whirl of emotion. Did I pass, did I fail, will they let me try again if I failed, what will I do if I don’t pass. All of these past through his mind in an instant. He swallowed and forced himself to calm done. Reza walked forward and gazed at the list hoping and praying with every part of his mind, body, and soul that he had been accepted.

Long is good. ^_^ Small note; it'd be best to show what is a thought by using italics or something so it doesn't blend in. Other than that, Pass.

character name: Euklid

here's my RP sample based to my true story:

Euklid was born a rich kid, he had everything.... every thing that a man ever wished for. his mother was a wretched woman that cares about herself.His father was a great ninja who was the right hand of the ORIGAKI Clan he had a beautiful life with her girlfriend Denisee. she was born in the KUZUKI Clan which is the enemy of Euklid family.fate has bought them together. until.. denisee's uncle Totem (an assassin trained to kill in order to live with his gang.) was ordered to kill denisee in front of Euklid's face.

that night when she died Euklid can't do anything. and got arrested in a misunderstanding matter. of course the Euklid's father had come to pick him up at jail,He told everything to his father about what happened and told about a secret place where everyone is going to be a ninja and learn the art of ninjutsu,but his father wont tell where it is and said. "if you want to know where that place is follow the beat of your heart" in a few days of sadness Euklid decided to run away.His parent's disagree..
there was no other way he could do but to break the ORIGAKI rules.
Euklid lost everything! and now here he is going to master the Art Of Ninjutsu and get revenge for her beloved love of his life.

on the road. he met his father and said " so you're sure about going to this place?" Euklid didn't answer and just walked that long straight road.
but before he walked away his father gave him a gold necklace and said
"here son. this is the last piece of our family heirloom break this and you can be where you wanted to be."

Euklid broke the necklace and was teleported to Amegakure (the hidden village of rain). in a mean time he became friends with the villagers and was being taken care of.. in the mean time while he was strolling found a training ground and beside it was the Academy of newbies trying to learn the Art of Ninjutsu. but in order to pass in that academy he has to learn 1 type of jutsu. at last he got his chances waiting in that Academy. And so he trained and trained year after a year he pushed his soul to the limit and didn't know that he gained part of a dangerous jutsu that anyone did never learn. and there he was ready. he had been accepted in the academy and came to the graduation exam. there he had his test up to the limit of a man can stand still he never gives up.

he had a flashback of the day of his tragedies.
and remembered a sentence which is useful to him.

"I Love You"

At last the final results has come!! its time to know if he passed or not passed.

Fate is guiding him..

his thoughts was saying something..... "don't mess up this time!"

and he looked up at the top 50 who passed....
and he was at #28th.

at last after a long loss of happiness he has regained his smile
and has the will to continue of what hes gonna do next.

Proofread your work and then we'll talk.

okay heres a sample from a zombie rp where i played a crazy ex veteran


William was in an alleyway he had hidden in a grocers and decided it was time to move on. Leaving the store from the back of it will came face to face with a trio of the invaders. Letting a low growl come from him Will did what he dose best. The three almost instantly saw him and began heading towards him. William ran directly at the closest one. It only had one arm and Will decided to change that. Grabbing hold of his arm spinning so that his back was facing the thing Will flipped the thing over his shoulder and onto the ground. As he flipped him Will herd the snap of bone it broke. With a small grin on his face Will spun and pulled on the arm. These things were weird William had never fought any invaders like them. But he had done recon he had seen what they can do and how to effectively kill them. The arm had come clean off at the point where the bone had broke. The end of the bone was sticking out and Will then proceeded to stab the thing in the head with the bone sticking out of the arm. That one dispatched William turned to the others. The closest one was about to reach for him, but will put his hand to his waist and pulled out his old army knife and simply dug it into the top of the invaders head. It fell to the ground instantly as will began saying “ head kill the head, they die, die not me I live,, living to beat them, them must die, die they I live.” There was only one left they were slow Will knew this he was old but was still moderately fast. Will ran at the last and spun around it facing its back Will tackled it with his knee forward digging into the invaders back. as they fell William grabbed hold of the invaders head one hand on each side. The second they hit the ground Will pushed his hands together and pulled. With a small grunt its head came right off. Throwing the head to the side William stood up and walked over to the second invader and pulled his knife out. As William walked out of the ally he felt the earth shake. Will figured that he should head that way. As he walked down the street will passed a shop. Suddenly a invader burst through the glass and came at him. as the glass shattered William grabbed a broken piece of glass and threw it at the invaders head. It hit the invaders eye and it fell dead. William just continued down the street as he said to himself. “ die they die living is what I do that’s all that’s left live, I like to live.”