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Yeah! Of course!! I totally just came up with all this in, like, 30mins lol So there are probably a few things I should have put more explanation in.
Being Marked-
When I mentioned this, I just meant that he had cast a curse, marking her as his own, explaining why her hair is a pure white (like his/his clans) instead of being a midnight black, like her mother and fathers. They just called it a mark. So basically, the white hair is a mark to symbolize that she belongs to him (because of the curse)

Where the village/kingdom-
I hadn't actually planned on going back to the village for awhile (I'd be RPing around these towns for quite sometime, learning and helping and stuffs :3 )
wahmbulance Sorry if the whole King and Queen thing made it kind of confusing. It's just a smallish village of misfits and they're just the leaders of the good ones. I didn't know what else to call them, because I just didn't think leader fit? I can change it though if it's too confusing.
Anyways!
I wasn't really thinking where, more like just a small village that not many people know about. But if you have any ideas about it, my ears are wide open! Right now they're kind of in Limbo lol

And yeah, I can change the doubles thing if need be smile I just picked it because the glamour thing was open and having all of those spells seemed kind of OP, so I just picked one.

I'm totally okay with throwing them out there smile Thank you for your help!

Hmm actually, I think I'll just get rid of that one special ability. I'm okay with having the two and who knows? Since I'm sending her to learn, maybe she'll pick up something smile (if it's okay with whoever)

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Shadow has gone to sleep for tonight, so I'm not sure what to tell you (I haven't been part of the conversation thus far so idk whats happening). Probably best to wait?

I don't think there were any issues with your character other than the one power, which you have changed. So, I think you can go ahead and post them up.

Alright everyone, so I may have gone a teeny bit...oh who am I kidding...I went TOTALLY overboard with my bio. I had no intention of it being so wide reaching when I started it but I got absorbed with the story and ended up making some bold claims and implications and this is me throwing myself at the mercy of the higher ups to try and iron out the details so that it is cohesive with the rest of the universe. I'm going to outline some of the points that really have the implications proposed solutions and just outright questions. Once I have a good idea of what will fit in properly with the Vacant Ones universe I will adjust the bio as appropriate and immediately begin the tale of XIII. This will deal with the Hellfire Syndicate, The Abandoned, and The Voiceless Ones. Let's begin:

My character, XIII, is a hybrid of human and android via nanomachines used in an artificial womb in an attempt to make a human baby. He would begin with no knowledge of the Abandoned or Hellfire Syndicate aside from what is common knowledge and rumor. His goal is to find out why his parents were killed and he's building...something. In order to do so he is stealing from various organizations under another name and look, a rumor known as The Skull. Occupation will be a theif for hire (sorry shadow, had another idea), but only the Skull personality the XIII personality will be a meek mild mannered man.

His parents are of the Hellfire Syndicate and the Abandoned. I've already made a few tweaks to the story so I'll include it as the latest draft has it.

Hellfire Syndicate Concerns:
XIII's father is a man named Xavier. He is written to be someone who strived to be the right hand of the boss Sinnova and eventually inheirit the gang.
He falls in love and goes to the boss to seek asylum for himself and an Abandoned android.
Sinnova will not grant him asylum due to the implications but as an act of mercy banishes his father instead of killing him (Is this something in Sinnova's character)
Years pass and for one reason or another (I was thinking to prevent gang war or something) Sinnova has to have someone (or do it himself before he disappeared) track down and kill the member of their gang that attacked the Abandoned. This would be done with Abandoned Androids along with him to 'retrieve' their member who absconded with Xavier.
Sinnova (or assasin) tracks him to Hinas where he kills his father for the greater good, not truly wanting to but having to.

-Questions

Is the banishing, then hunting to prevent all out war within Sinnova's character?
Would Sinnova be the one to do the deed or would he have someone else do it?
Would that person be regretful or enjoy the thought?
Would Sinnova work with the Abandoned to do this?
There would one tense moment between the boy and the killer where he moves to eliminate him but blacks out before he can srike and the killer leaves him there. would this be something the killer or Sinnova would do?

The Abandoned Concerns:
XIII's mother is an android named III created with the full emotional spectrum of a human. The intention being so that she could observe human interaction and gain more information on the details behind a spreading rumor of Demons. The truth behind their existence is never confirmed, but the Abandoned see it as a way to induce fear into humanity so they assign her to then use the knowledge that she has gained to attempt to create an artificial demon. The overall goal being that by giving them a common enemy they may move towards a equal world by unifying against a common enemy of an unknown source. In her research she believes if she can create something that can be acknowledged as a demon, there would be no way to control it and giving it a body based on the latest technology would actually result in heavy casualty and the potential destruction of both races. The Abandoned still push the idea and she flees with the knowledge and any knowledge of how to create anything like her again. They eventually track her to Hinas where she has been living with a former Hellfire Syndicate member. They, along with a member of the Hellfire Syndicate are sent to retrieve her and ensure the man who killed several of their own while escaping with III is killed. In the resulting fight, they discover a boy who is neither human nor android and are ordered to kill the abomination, but bring his body back for study. As they try, III uses herself to shield him and is in turn destoryed. The boy loses it and kills the generic androids.

-Questions
Would the Abandoned engage in such a program?
Would the Abandoned send someone to reclaim the knowledge?
Would this be something high reaching enough that Death Enigma would have knowledge of it?

The Voiceless Ones
The Voiceless ones are only involved as far as his mother's research. XIII knows nothing about this so far but once he finds her research (something that would be far into his storyline) he'll see whispers of them. To her they were only rumors, whether or not she got close to anything is up to you to determine. I don't think it'll be too detrimental to his story even if all she heard were the same whispers that spread across the city.

-Questions
Would it be reasonable to assume she could have investigated rumors?
Is it safe to say she believed in them at the end even if she never met one?
Would her "artificial demon" research arc in any way interfere with any plans you all have set for them.



Alright I think that's all of it. If you have any questions on anything else in my bio or any other fixes that you believe need fixing, please let me know. Got a little excited and wrote a whole chapter as a bio so sorry about that. Definitely excited to get to Rping though.


-Yang

Unfortunately I do not know all that much about Sinnova's character nor do I want to touch any of that because he was Void's character and then I filled in for her. However, Abyss knows more about who he was supposed to be, though she's having issues with her internet at the moment but is being a trooper through her phone and wrote this out:


Well for one the guy wouldn't have ever become the second in command, cause Vincent made it pretty clear Jayce was the only one who would ever be in that position. Second, if Vincent had known something could have gone wrong while he was away, he would have told Jayce to take over the gang whether that was a good move or not, because he wouldn't have trusted anyone else with it. However he didn't tell Jayce to which is why he didn't even try, plus Jayce doesn't see himself as the safest choice to be lead anyways lol.

As for whether Vincent would refuse to offer Asylum or not, honestly if the guy had ******** up badly enough to piss off abandoned, and abandoned knew he was someone from hellfire, then no he might not. Especially if he was told to keep a low profile. However the guy would have to be someone Vincent held in high regards else he would have either straight out took him out himself right then and there, or had Jayce do it. If he was someone Vincent held in high regards then mercy would be offered, though Vincent still wouldn't be pleased with what he had done. He'd either choose to risk having the abandoned hunt him and his gang down and then cause serious problems when they find they were giving safe haven to one of their own traitors and the guy who took out some of their members, and who interfered with gang business he had no right to be involved with, or he'd choose to banish him from hellfire and lohrith both all together. While Vincent wouldn't have been worried about war, he'd have been concerned about Xavier and the womans safety, if once again, Xavier was held in high regards. That's why he'd be worried about abandoned starting a war at that time

However Vincent, no matter how cruel he can be, would no go back on his word. If he offered mercy, unless he personally felt the guy did something after that to betray him or his gangs secrets, he would never go to hunt him down and kill him, nor would he send Jayce to do so. Vincent is a very very good liar, he would find a way to convince the androids that Xavier never returned to lohrith, and that he had no clue where he might have gone. If the androids at any point continued to threaten him he would be the one to start that war, he would not avoid it.

Also Jayce holds no regrets, so if he'd been the one sent, he would neither enjoy or regret it. It would simply be his job.

Jayce would either simply leave the boy there, take some small amount of pity on him and move him to a hospital or personally give him aid before taking him somewhere to further be taken care of, or if it was in his job description kill him, even though he would not be happy about having to because he is a child, natural or not.