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SESauvie

Girl-Crazy Businesswoman

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 5:05 am


That ending totally caught me off guard Seaphron, so... whats the word....... Disney?
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 6:24 am


I like the way you have ended this story .
Different from your other one which shows you are expanding your writing style . xd Thumbs up

Diana Godstone


Terara Drakon

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 7:12 am


To tell you the truth, I didn't like it that much. Unless there's a prologue or epilogue or whatever, i'm not satisfied.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 11:08 am


@Aku- XD
@Sauvie - Is that good or bad? I was thinking 4kids, but Disney works too.
@Godstone - Glad you liked it. I am glad that you see me as improving.
@Mutsumi - (kirby right?) I am not surprised I was expecting more responses like this. I have another ending handwritten somewhere. The only difference is t says how he kills each person with great description. But that's the end sorry you didn't like it.

Seaphron


Hero Maul

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 11:17 am


So we all died? Weird.


It was sorta hard to follow. They die, then they die. Who exactly?
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 11:18 am


First room I believe was Forsaken, Koosei, Fish, and Godstone.
Second was everyone else.

Seaphron


Hero Maul

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 11:20 am


Seaphron
First room I believe was Forsaken, Koosei, Fish, and Godstone.
Second was everyone else.
Was I in the Second group? Did I die earlier on?
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 11:22 am


Hero Maul
Seaphron
First room I believe was Forsaken, Koosei, Fish, and Godstone.
Second was everyone else.
Was I in the Second group? Did I die earlier on?
You were in the second group. I am going to type the more descriptive one up some time when i get bored.

Seaphron


Koosei

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 11:37 am


Seaphron
Hero Maul
Seaphron
First room I believe was Forsaken, Koosei, Fish, and Godstone.
Second was everyone else.
Was I in the Second group? Did I die earlier on?
You were in the second group. I am going to type the more descriptive one up some time when i get bored.
biggrin a more descriptive version? twisted fun

and in response to the chap itself, all I have to say is:

eek damn


biggrin t'was very awesome
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 12:39 pm


Seaphron
@Mutsumi - (kirby right?) I am not surprised I was expecting more responses like this. I have another ending handwritten somewhere. The only difference is t says how he kills each person with great description. But that's the end sorry you didn't like it.
I'm okay with everyone dying, but I just wanna know what he does after that. Does he rule the earth? Does he die, too? does he get a succesful job, a wife and some kids?

You can keep calling me Kirby if you like.

I don't know why, but I feel like writing a descriptive ending to this story. I just... want to.

Terara Drakon


Seaphron

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 12:48 pm


@Koosei - I am glad that you enjoyed the story.
@Mutsumi - Nah dont worry about it I will call you Mutsumi. Go ahead and write another ending I would like too see it. (He gets married btw)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 12:49 pm


Everyone died. Sucks to be them.

Masamune 5.0


Terara Drakon

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 12:52 pm


Who all am I killing? Fish, me, Maul, Trenn... gah, I can't remember everyone! *looks over*
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 2:20 pm


@Masamune - Arent you glad that you are not in this story now?
@Mutsumi - Uh... ~goes to look over as well~

Seaphron


Terara Drakon

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 2:30 pm


Here's what I've gotten;

Draken, Kirb, Fish, Sauvie, Trenn, Forsaken, Godstone, Koosei, Skull, BC, Maul, Altae.

Is that right?
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