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 Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 6:01 am
reckless impulse I am undecided on my village, a clan, and my name. RP Example: Max rolls over in bed to look at his alarm clock and to silence the noise by turning it off. He notices that it is 4:30 in the morning, after turning off his alarm clock, he leaps out bed and walks over to his closet. Max takes a glance out the window to see what the weather is like today, it is dark blue and clear. He takes a few minutes locating his sweat suit and his weight jacket, to go on his morning run and training excercises. After he finishes putting on his sweat suit and securing his weight jacket, Max goes down stairs to see what tsunai made for his daily breakfast.Tsunai is like a sister to Max. She serves him a bowl of tofu and egg whites. Max attempts to quickly finish his meal. Tsunai says to him, "Don't stuff your mouth Max your going to choke and be nice to your self today you still have the training from the academy to deal with. Don't think I am going to rub you down with liquid heat again because I wont do it." I look up at her from my bowl and grin. She doesnt know my pain or the reason i fight. I live to learn and I live to fight, but most of all I live to avenge my parents. After breakfast Max waves to Tsunai and heads out the door. The morning is cool and sweet, not a cloud in the sky. Max takes a deep breath and begins stretching his tired muscles. Max takes a few minutes to stretch. He readys his stance down the road he aways takes around the village, and thinks to him self, "today i will run seven times around the village and train ten times harder. I wil avenge my parents and i will become strong." Max darts forward at speeds rivaling a charging shark and disappears into the distance. Pass.
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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:30 am
Well it's not very good, but here goes
The wind blew gently, and the sun shined down. Everything seemed to be at peace. "Perfect time for a nap" thought Taka Nara. The Academy had just let the students go and although it was a beautiful day, Taka didn't care. he just wanted to lay down, and enter that warm world of dreams.
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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 8:04 am
I haven't decided on a character yet So I hope you don't mind if I use Hidan.
I'll post an intro I used for him a while ago...
!WARNING THE BELOW HOLDS STRONG LANGUAGE! Total darkness. Pitch black, mind eating, heart racing darkness. The light of god couldn’t reach here. It was a still black. The expanse of there was not but a small container. He remained still. Unable to move. Unable to see. Unable to hear. Forever trapped here by immortality. It was horrifying. To be forever dying and to live. The pain was no longer blissful. It was unwanted. Unloved.
He woke with a start. Beads of sweat rolling into his eyes. It stung. It all stung. The shame of being afraid of returning to that place. That grave of stone he’d been buried in for an unimaginable of time. It haunted his sleep, and plagued him far too often. He’d been freed from it over a year ago, yet it seemed to never want to leave. It was God’s punishment upon him from losing such valuable time. Some many priceless sacrifices slipped away during the time of his containment. “Maybe I should hop the border the soon...” He couldn’t remember what country he was closer too, Moon or Rain. And Jashin smite him before he ever set foot in Rain again. With a groan and several swears he took a flat stone from his pouch on each side on the same edge was a black dot. Still swearing he sat it on the ground spun it. The second it landed he snatched it and began strolling in the direction the dot pointed to.
And thus was the way Hidan had lived for less than a year.And now for a typical roleplay post... His fingers twitched compulsively. Oh how he wanted to swing his scythe into the unknown. He itched to feel the pain again. Itched to taste their blood and discover all their secrets and know them just before they would be snuffed out for good. The anticipation of the battle made it impossible to keep a steady walk. Every other step came a jolt as he tried to keep from turning around and hunting his hunter. Patience. Just a little patience, then all hell could be let loose.
Hidan could careless what became of him in the upcoming battle. All he wanted was to fight. To see blood that he worked for. Not some pigheaded heathen villagers who ran from him, not too him. Through the Cheshire grin his teeth were grinding and clacking together. Attempts to yell were stopped to nothing but bubbling chuckles. This was maddening. Hidan couldn't contain his bloodlust. It radiate from his body. Soon, so soon.
His pace forward halted. It was enough, he couldn't wait any longer. The pacing ended him at the edge of the forest. In front was a wide expanse dead plains that not far beyond began barren rock.
Hidan spun on heel and planted his feet to the ground. "Oi oi oi! Let's end the hide and seek and play a new game!" He couldn't mask the excitement in his voice, "Come on ya little chump!"
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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 3:33 pm
Keldoz Well it's not very good, but here goes The wind blew gently, and the sun shined down. Everything seemed to be at peace. "Perfect time for a nap" thought Taka Nara. The Academy had just let the students go and although it was a beautiful day, Taka didn't care. he just wanted to lay down, and enter that warm world of dreams. Please be a bit more wary of capitalization and punctuation, ok? xD Other than that, you just made the minimum line length. xP Pass.
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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 3:35 pm
Doku Jaki I haven't decided on a character yet So I hope you don't mind if I use Hidan.
I'll post an intro I used for him a while ago...
!WARNING THE BELOW HOLDS STRONG LANGUAGE! Total darkness. Pitch black, mind eating, heart racing darkness. The light of god couldn’t reach here. It was a still black. The expanse of there was not but a small container. He remained still. Unable to move. Unable to see. Unable to hear. Forever trapped here by immortality. It was horrifying. To be forever dying and to live. The pain was no longer blissful. It was unwanted. Unloved.
He woke with a start. Beads of sweat rolling into his eyes. It stung. It all stung. The shame of being afraid of returning to that place. That grave of stone he’d been buried in for an unimaginable of time. It haunted his sleep, and plagued him far too often. He’d been freed from it over a year ago, yet it seemed to never want to leave. It was God’s punishment upon him from losing such valuable time. Some many priceless sacrifices slipped away during the time of his containment. [******** it all…” He moaned and slowly sat up.
It had been a less than a year since Akatsuki fell into shambles. Less than a year since he, Hidan, had left the ranks of Pein the false god. The black cloak was ditched, burned, and destroyed. All his alliances were left to Jashin, his eternal God. Hidan had often found himself rambling on to himself though. It was sort of humbling to realizes that you were alone. Humbling in the sense that in the past what you thought was utter insanity the ate your mind was nothing compared to how you were now. So to be humbled in such a way was very disturbing and extremely exhilarating.
Though still faithful to Jashin, Hidan had changed. His hair was longer and worn in a low small ponytail at the base of his neck. No longer was it slicked back either, the bangs hung loosely on the sides of his face and often strands would slide over and hang in his view. He wore a yukata shirt of sorts. It was white and sleeveless, the under shirt was red. On the front shoulder of each side was the black shape of the circle and triangle. Hidan’s pants were black, and were stopped by the black strapped sandals. Over said garments the fanatic wore a long ragged hooded red traveling cloak.
At this point he was awake and donning the cloak, then slipping the tri-bladed scythe on his back. With a groan of disgust Hidan picked a dead leaf from his hair. He hated sleeping in the wilderness. But without Kakuzu to pay for rooms he was stuck on his own. Getting by on pillaging. Though immortal he would still starve. Speaking of which, it had been sometime since he last raided and ate. The last time he ran into some shinobi in a village within the Land of Earth. One had almost mange to cut his hand clean off, but that dipshit was dead. After that he’d found some remote wooded area and had been hiding there for sometime. The wound on Hidan’s wrist was still healing, he’d stitched it himself and then wrapped it in a bandage to be safe. He was probably still being hunted for in this heathen filled country, “Maybe I should hop the border the soon...” He couldn’t remember what country he was closer too, Moon or Rain. And Jashin smite him before he ever set foot in Rain again. With a groan and several swears he took a flat stone from his pouch on each side on the same edge was a black dot. Still swearing he sat it on the ground spun it. The second it landed he snatched it and began strolling in the direction the dot pointed to.
And thus was the way Hidan had lived for less than a year.And now for a typical roleplay post... His fingers twitched compulsively. Oh how he wanted to swing his scythe into the unknown. He itched to feel the pain again. Itched to taste their blood and discover all their secrets and know them just before they would be snuffed out for good. The anticipation of the battle made it impossible to keep a steady walk. Every other step came a jolt as he tried to keep from turning around and hunting his hunter. Patience. Just a little patience, then all hell could be let loose.
Hidan could careless what became of him in the upcoming battle. All he wanted was to fight. To see blood that he worked for. Not some pigheaded heathen villagers who ran from him, not too him. Through the Cheshire grin his teeth were grinding and clacking together. Attempts to yell were stopped to nothing but bubbling chuckles. This was maddening. Hidan couldn't contain his bloodlust. It radiate from his body. Soon, so soon.
His pace forward halted. It was enough, he couldn't wait any longer. The pacing ended him at the edge of the forest. In front was a wide expanse dead plains that not far beyond began barren rock.
Hidan spun on heel and planted his feet to the ground. "Oi oi oi! Let's end the hide and seek and play a new game!" He couldn't mask the excitement in his voice, "Come on ya little chump!"The quality of this is quite stunning. O_o Applauded pass! ^0^
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:21 am
Well here goes nothing....:
Moonlight shone over the whole land. Darkness loomed over the forests striking fear in the hearts of shinobi's who have unfortunately wondered off alone. Wind began to blow through echoing strange noises though the whole forest.
Slowly She awoke. She who had Golden eyes that shone in the night, She who had dark hair tied up. "Darn, Grandpa's going to kill me for staying out late again." She said jumping down from the tree on which she slept. "I'll just tell Grandfather I was training that's what I was really doing, until I got tired and fell asleep." She heaved a deep sigh. "Being a ninja is just too tough without your dad!" She threw herself to the ground then looked at the glittering stars. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean too, This is your dream for me and I needn't want to disappoint you." She rose from the grass and threw a needle to the tree in front of her.
"Don't worry dad Tsunaki Kyrashi will continue your dream and I'll be the best ninja for you!"
After dinner Kyrashi went up to their roof and just lay there looking up at the stars. "I wish you were here dad. I wish you could help me train, y'know like old times. I wish you could see me now, how much I've grown from that little girl you used to know." She sighed heavily. "Dad, Please, come home." She said finally before dozing off.
Sun light beamed Kyrashi's face, waking her up. She slowly opened her eyes and sat up. She smiled at the new morning sun and headed back down into the house leaving her wishes and secret thoughts to the ones who she trusts the most. The Stars.
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So how did I do?
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Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 8:18 pm
kaname1020 Well here goes nothing....: Moonlight shone over the whole land. Darkness loomed over the forests striking fear in the hearts of shinobi's who have unfortunately wondered off alone. Wind began to blow through echoing strange noises though the whole forest. Slowly She awoke. She who had Golden eyes that shone in the night, She who had dark hair tied up. "Darn, Grandpa's going to kill me for staying out late again." She said jumping down from the tree on which she slept. "I'll just tell Grandfather I was training that's what I was really doing, until I got tired and fell asleep." She heaved a deep sigh. "Being a ninja is just too tough without your dad!" She threw herself to the ground then looked at the glittering stars. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean too, This is your dream for me and I needn't want to disappoint you." She rose from the grass and threw a needle to the tree in front of her. "Don't worry dad Tsunaki Kyrashi will continue your dream and I'll be the best ninja for you!"After dinner Kyrashi went up to their roof and just lay there looking up at the stars. "I wish you were here dad. I wish you could help me train, y'know like old times. I wish you could see me now, how much I've grown from that little girl you used to know." She sighed heavily. "Dad, Please, come home." She said finally before dozing off. Sun light beamed Kyrashi's face, waking her up. She slowly opened her eyes and sat up. She smiled at the new morning sun and headed back down into the house leaving her wishes and secret thoughts to the ones who she trusts the most. The Stars. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So how did I do? Pass. Pretty well done, though a bit of unorthodox capitalization here and there. =3
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Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 8:39 pm
Here goes nothing. :/
An accorn woke him from his nap in the forrest. Rubbing his eyes from the long nap he had Macha sat up. Streching his arms as he yawned, Macha looked around, to try and remember where he was. Wobbling as he got up he streched his arms out to try and wake his body. "Now where was I going again" He asked himself outloud. He looked around again, haveing no idea where he was, he just started to walk strait. Looking around as he walked at the scenery, at how beautiful the forrest looked with the sun shining through the treeline.
He came apon an open feild of tall grass. Still, haveing no idea where he was going, Macha noticed a butterfly fluttering past him. Ceruious as to were it was going he followed it.
Thats all I got.. :/
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Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 9:33 am
G-Blah Here goes nothing. :/ An accorn woke him from his nap in the forrest. Rubbing his eyes from the long nap he had Macha sat up. Streching his arms as he yawned, Macha looked around, to try and remember where he was. Wobbling as he got up he streched his arms out to try and wake his body. "Now where was I going again" He asked himself outloud. He looked around again, haveing no idea where he was, he just started to walk strait. Looking around as he walked at the scenery, at how beautiful the forrest looked with the sun shining through the treeline. He came apon an open feild of tall grass. Still, haveing no idea where he was going, Macha noticed a butterfly fluttering past him. Ceruious as to were it was going he followed it. Thats all I got.. :/ Hm...some spelling errors. A bit of awkward phrasing... Watch out for forgetting punctuation when a character is speaking a single line too. But it's do-able. Pass.
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Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:52 pm
Rp'ing ^_^
Character: Saburo Kitsyuga
Saburo nearing the village, looked at the large gray colored walls and the multiple ninja guarding it. He wondered if they were in a war, or were being cautious about incoming people. Saburo came upon the the doors and two ninja in a booth called him over. "Sir, I am going to need you to sign in," the guard said with a stern voice. "Ok." Saburo said. He signed in, and put the necessary info needed to wander the village. Saburo finished and walked into the village and instantly noticed that there were ninja everywhere, on guard for any attack. He was walking toward a cart to buy some fruits and food for his journey and needed supplies as a small kid ran into him and looked up at him then down. "Its ok go on and play," he said with a cheerful voice. The small kid ran off and started playing around with his friends. Saburo looked at them and looked forward and began to look for somewhere to stay.
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Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:03 pm
ll Konohagakure ll Rp'ing ^_^ Character: Saburo Kitsyuga Saburo nearing the village, looked at the large gray colored walls and the multiple ninja guarding it. He wondered if they were in a war, or were being cautious about incoming people. Saburo came upon the the doors and two ninja in a booth called him over. "Sir, I am going to need you to sign in," the guard said with a stern voice. "Ok." Saburo said. He signed in, and put the necessary info needed to wander the village. Saburo finished and walked into the village and instantly noticed that there were ninja everywhere, on guard for any attack. He was walking toward a cart to buy some fruits and food for his journey and needed supplies as a small kid ran into him and looked up at him then down. "Its ok go on and play," he said with a cheerful voice. The small kid ran off and started playing around with his friends. Saburo looked at them and looked forward and began to look for somewhere to stay. Pass!
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 9:24 am
Here we go!
Anji balanced on the red, wooden rail of the bridge on his way back home from the academy. He was absent-mindedly practicing hand signs on his way. "Dog. Horse. Sheep..." he muttered to himself. Once he reached the end, he hopped off and bounced a little bit on the landing.
In the distance Anji heard laughing. He glanced up, spying several of his classmates playing up ahead. He ducked into an alley to the left and decided to take a detour home. It's not that he didn't like them or that they didn't like him. Anji had always been an awkward kid, and he didn't want to do anything to embarrass himself. "Besides," the slim boy excused himself, "they're just wasting valuable training time."
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 1:20 pm
I do not have a name yet or village, but i'll use Jazz.
It was the final day at the academy for Jazz. From what she could see through the window told her it would be the perfect day for a pinic to celebrate if she passed. As the endlees minutes passed by Jazz sat in her seat with a look of hope on her face.
"Is it time yet" thought Jazz as she tried not to hyperventilate because of butterflies in her stomach.
"Ok the list of students who passed is posted on the door so don't forget to look and see if you passed" called sensei mizukey.
I hope it was good and I am sorry if there are a few words I forgot to see if they were spelled correct.
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 2:25 pm
xXTesla333Xx Here we go! Anji balanced on the red, wooden rail of the bridge on his way back home from the academy. He was absent-mindedly practicing hand signs on his way. "Dog. Horse. Sheep..." he muttered to himself. Once he reached the end, he hopped off and bounced a little bit on the landing.
In the distance Anji heard laughing. He glanced up, spying several of his classmates playing up ahead. He ducked into an alley to the left and decided to take a detour home. It's not that he didn't like them or that they didn't like him. Anji had always been an awkward kid, and he didn't want to do anything to embarrass himself. "Besides," the slim boy excused himself, "they're just wasting valuable training time."Pass.
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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 2:26 pm
panday12 I do not have a name yet or village, but i'll use Jazz. It was the final day at the academy for Jazz. From what she could see through the window told her it would be the perfect day for a pinic to celebrate if she passed. As the endlees minutes passed by Jazz sat in her seat with a look of hope on her face. "Is it time yet" thought Jazz as she tried not to hyperventilate because of butterflies in her stomach. "Ok the list of students who passed is posted on the door so don't forget to look and see if you passed" called sensei mizukey. I hope it was good and I am sorry if there are a few words I forgot to see if they were spelled correct. Pass.
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