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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:56 pm
Thing is even if it fits it doesnt mean that I can approve them. Your going to need to explain just what that first one entails.
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:19 pm
Azeiel The Fallen Thing is even if it fits it doesnt mean that I can approve them. Your going to need to explain just what that first one entails. Kugai [ World of Suffering ] While having the Sakkakugan active during a genjutsu, the user will supply an amount of chakra equal to half the genjutsu's base cost in order to further modify the technique. The enhanced genjutsu can no longer be broken by the releasing technique [ Kai.] However, no matter what the genjutsu's description says, it can now be broken by amounts of pain scaling with the rank of the technique. ( If the genjutsu costs [40] chakra to perform, modifying it will cost [20] chakra. ) You need X amount of chakra points to modify the technique if I'm not mistaken. So said attribute will grant him the ability to modify the technique with less of a hamper on his chakra. That's all there is to it. (If the genjutsu costs [40] chakra to perform, modifying it will cost [15] chakra.)
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:27 pm
Jelani564 Azeiel The Fallen Thing is even if it fits it doesnt mean that I can approve them. Your going to need to explain just what that first one entails. Kugai [ World of Suffering ] While having the Sakkakugan active during a genjutsu, the user will supply an amount of chakra equal to half the genjutsu's base cost in order to further modify the technique. The enhanced genjutsu can no longer be broken by the releasing technique [ Kai.] However, no matter what the genjutsu's description says, it can now be broken by amounts of pain scaling with the rank of the technique. ( If the genjutsu costs [40] chakra to perform, modifying it will cost [20] chakra. ) You need X amount of chakra points to modify the technique if I'm not mistaken. So said attribute will grant him the ability to modify the technique with less of a hamper on his chakra. That's all there is to it. (If the genjutsu costs [40] chakra to perform, modifying it will cost [15] chakra.) I can approve that I guess ^.^
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:28 pm
So my overall profile is approved then? ninja
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:30 pm
Jelani564 So my overall profile is approved then? ninja Lol yes
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:33 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:16 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Isamu Kira Masaoni Nickname: Kuro Neko
Age: 17 Birthdate: August 13th Gender: Male
Height: 6'2" Weight: 145 lbs.
Nindo: "Light is radiant because there is Darkness, and Darkness is sublime because there is Light." Personality: Quiet, reserved, not very stand-outish though at the same time not easily missed. Boisterous and a play-boy when drunk. Doesn't get phased easily or rise to provocations. Cat-like in more than habits and reflexes.
Village: Kumogakure Rank: Genin Main Class: Bukijutsu Subclass: Brawler ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Oni Clan | Saketon
Chakra Pool: 225 Chakra Element: Lightning, Fire and Sake Chakra Color: fiery red with flickers of his purple-ish eye color Chakra Materialization: Flickering like fire, especially in his eyes and ocassionally giving off electric sparks
Strengths: • Fading into the shadows • Seeing at night • Finding weaknesses in his opponents (observation skills) • Suiken Weaknesses: • Overconfidence • Modes of transportation (anything other than walking with his own two feet) • Loud sounds (sensitive hearing) • His cat-like nature (particularly when in warm patch of sunlight or the like...) • Cold.. • Sake Fears: • Canines (of all kinds and all sizes...) • Drowning (or large bodies of water in general) • Being without Sake for too long • losing his Oni clan horns Class Attributes: • Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess. • Willowy: Reflexes and flexibility slightly increased. Reductions: • Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes: • Taijutsu brawler - one [1] extra Taijutsu slot • Drunken mastery - learns Suiken one [1] post faster ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 04 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02 (original 1, plus personal attribute) • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Tonfa Weapon Range: arm-length + two feet at most Weapon Weight: Weapon Location: special harness(-thing) on his back with handles close to his hands • Kibakuro (black fangs)
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 5 smoke bombs • 5 senbon • 10 kunai • 10 shuriken ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Katon • • • • Raiton • • • • Saketon • • • • • • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s uSuiken: Drunken Fist • Xinyi Liuhe Quan • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Kumogakure Style - Paralyzing Fear Of Death •
{second style name} • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬Being of the Oni clan, he stood out among the other children in the village for the fact that he possessed the pair of horns on his head that all Oni clan have. This hasn't phased him or really affected him, though he tends to not be the center of attention as often as is possible. However, when he partakes of the sweet heavenly brew known as Sake his personality is much more open and friendly. Isamu tries not to cause trouble and would be considered a nice guy if anyone tried to see past his scary/stern/unfriendly exterior. He grew up in a normal family, with his father being one of the 'sober-lifestyle' Oni clan and his mother was a Suiken user not from the Oni clan. He has a younger sister who wishes to follow in their father's sober footsteps and an older brother who died on a S-rank ANBU mission five or so years ago. He uses the mask mostly around the villagers and generally only removes it or lowers it to eat.
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:03 pm
Weaknesses: Sake wouldn't be a weakness for an Oni-Clan member. Inventory: We do not have Flash bombs currently, please replace with an appropriate projectile. Hi! Nice to meet you!
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:51 pm
duckmasta Weaknesses: Sake wouldn't be a weakness for an Oni-Clan member. Inventory: We do not have Flash bombs currently, please replace with an appropriate projectile. Hi! Nice to meet you! it's a weakness in that he'd get distracted by the mere smell of it and could possibly be bribed with sake...but I can edit/remove that one... *3* awww, no flash bombs? alright and hi back!
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 8:31 pm
Crystal of Infinity duckmasta Weaknesses: Sake wouldn't be a weakness for an Oni-Clan member. Inventory: We do not have Flash bombs currently, please replace with an appropriate projectile. Hi! Nice to meet you! it's a weakness in that he'd get distracted by the mere smell of it and could possibly be bribed with sake...but I can edit/remove that one... *3* awww, no flash bombs? alright and hi back! Approved.
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Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2011 5:43 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Suou Raigyo Nickname: The Magenta Typhoon
Age: Seventeen [17] Birthdate: Decemeber Seventeenth Gender: Male Sexuality: Bisexual
Height: Seventy-One Inches Weight: One Hundred-Thirty-Two Pounds
Nindo: "To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but risk must be taken because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing." Personality: Flirtatious. That, in one word, is the best definitely for how Suou behaves. He is always flirting with absolutely everyone he is around, even in the most serious of situations. He uses his knowledge of the French language to try to seduce others and also uses his clan's traits to help, too. Suou is the type who can never be truly serious, but he is usually harmless in what he does. It isn't hard to get Suou into a fight, but he will never act aggressively towards anyone unless his own life is threatened. However, Suou is also quite chivalrous and will always lend a hand to a damsel in distress, sometimes a man if he is attractive enough.
Village: Kirigakure, the Village Hidden in the Mist Rank: Genin Main Class: Ninjutsu Subclass: Musician ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Raigyo Clan [Applying]
Chakra Pool: [275] Chakra Element: Fuuton [Wind] and Suiton [Water] Chakra Color: Magenta Chakra Materialization: Aura
Strengths: • Ninjutsu • Genjutsu Weaknesses: • Low Strength • Taijutsu Fears: • Buried Alive • Cremation
Class Attributes: • Class Attribute - Latent Talent: Able to perform techniques rank D and below via instrument. • Class Attribute - Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra. Reductions: • Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Additional [3] Ninjutsu slots • Symphonic Strength: All techniques used via instrument are moderately stronger. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 24 [Twelve per element] • Genjutsu : : 00 / 04 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Flute Weapon Range: Twelve Inches Weapon Weight: One Pound Weapon Location: In Sleeve
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Smoke Bombs x3 • Kunai x7 • Shuriken x10 • Senbon x10
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton: Wind •
Suiton: Water •
Kekkei Genkei: Raigyo Clan • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Suou was born in the Land of Tea and was one of the most beautiful offspring in the whole Raigyo Clan. As he grew older, he continued to gain more and more beauty. At the age of fifteen, his cousins became jealous of Suou's beauty and chased him away. Suou, being gentle-natured and nearly pacifistic, left willingly. He did not wish to get into any altercations so he complied to their will. Waka traveled for a long time and eventually found residence in Kirigakure. He is now a Genin there and is working to become the strongest and most beautiful shinobi in the whole village. He could settle for just the latter, though.
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Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:14 pm
Harky: "Additionally, any ideas or finish products blatantly copied from other Shows/Anime/Manga should not be submitted or created for guild use." Regarding this rule, at least his name must be different.
Your first attribute is denied because it would fit more as a technique. Your second needs to be changed into 'moderately' than per rank.
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Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:39 pm
Crystal of Infinity duckmasta Weaknesses: Sake wouldn't be a weakness for an Oni-Clan member. Inventory: We do not have Flash bombs currently, please replace with an appropriate projectile. Hi! Nice to meet you! it's a weakness in that he'd get distracted by the mere smell of it and could possibly be bribed with sake...but I can edit/remove that one... *3* awww, no flash bombs? alright and hi back! Someone is using that character, heads up.
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Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:34 pm
Redera Issun Harky: "Additionally, any ideas or finish products blatantly copied from other Shows/Anime/Manga should not be submitted or created for guild use." Regarding this rule, at least his name must be different.
Your first attribute is denied because it would fit more as a technique. Your second needs to be changed into 'moderately' than per rank. I can do that. Any other comments or changes?
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Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 8:51 pm
iHarkyInferni-kun Redera Issun Harky: "Additionally, any ideas or finish products blatantly copied from other Shows/Anime/Manga should not be submitted or created for guild use." Regarding this rule, at least his name must be different.
Your first attribute is denied because it would fit more as a technique. Your second needs to be changed into 'moderately' than per rank. I can do that. Any other comments or changes?Inventory: Bomb tags, aka Explosive notes, cannot be taken as part of your thirty projectiles. Blank scrolls must be purchased.
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