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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 10:39 pm
| Sorry for the wait. Text in bold and orange is information you should read for understanding and is not counted as words for training. | Hijacked Majora has been living in the Hidden Leaf for some time now. He has learned a lot over the years being here in the Leaf training with ryu and all. He just needed a little challenge. Ryu is good but Majora really needs someone that can go beyond taijutsu... but its fun training with Ryu; he is full of surprises. Ryu is waiting somewhere in Hidden Leaf and Majora is on his way to meet him. "I guess I'll be on my way to train with Ryu for a little while." Can you see the difference between your post and the one I hijacked? Capitalizing and knowing when a sentence becomes a run-on sentence are important when typing. To make things easier, you could type in Microsoft Word. Lines beneath text tell you when something is wrong. That is the best way to work on that.Naomi [Demon] | Randal [Betori]   "I cannot believe I have to go out and recruit members myself. Why did I ever send those Howard's into the exams?" Naomi grumbles as she wanders around the village marketplace. "And aren't you useful for anything aside from being dead weight?" Naomi asks, her red eyes glaring down and to her right at a small boy walking beside her. The boy rolls his eyes before stopping. He sniffs the air a moment before shrugging. Naomi frowns before continuing on and out of the marketplace.
Before long the group reaches the outskirts of the village where there were few trees or buildings obscuring sight. Naomi and Randal peer around before Randal jabs a finger through the air at a male just walking. It was none other than Majora. "Boy!" Naomi yells as she walks towards Majora. "I have been searching a long while for you. Come with us," she concludes pressing her chest farther out as Randal does the same.
If you want to be the one to choose the scenery then you have to be the one to describe the area in your post first. It can be as detailed as you want. In my post I have the images of m,y rpc. It makes it easier for me and opponents to see what each person looks like or tell who is posting in what quote. But that is just something I like to do. When posting dialogue for one rpc, you can keep the dialogue in the same paragraph. But when posting with more than one, it is less confusing to separate each persons dialogue by a paragraph. I will demonstrate this in my next post. Demon:: Calculations:: 83,100cp Betori:: Calculations:: 7,000cp When in combat it is easier for you and your opponent to post your total chakra and how much gets subtracted from you with each move used. As well, it s easier on you and your opponent to post what move you're doing. But that isn't required or very often done. So for now, ignore that small part in my post.
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Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 4:29 pm
As Kanji was waking up he found himself out side of where he had his house. Which was hidden under neath a building for reason being untold. Kanji was looking arund befor putting his right han on his head rubbing it like he had a headace that would not go away. Seems like the chunnin exams where fun but boy, they did know how to make you all warm after being accused of cheating. Kanji tried to pick his body up befor feeling a slight pain on the left side of his neck where his curse mark was. It was calling out to him to get stronger, to become better, to gain power to kill his target of choice. While looking around kanji paced his left hand on a snake shaped brick which started to move the wall on the other side of the ally which was the door to kanjis house. He was still a bit out of it but he did have some control of his body befor walking down the stairs seeing as how the candles where still lit up from his visit a few days or weeks ago which he kinda had forgot about. After reaching the bottom of his stairs, kanji looked around walking to his bed befor pressing a buttom making the top slid over to the side revealing a stair case. He smiled befor stepping into his bed and walking down to grab his special item. The boots of ifirt. These wold come in handy some day and they would help out in battle as well. Without and eles kanji took his bag off and opened it up putting the boot in there with a few of his chains and weights. He smiled as he removed his cloak and took his vest off revealing his scared body from a fight he had befor with the masked people. Kanji tried to rub the side of his head befor hitting his mask. He forgot about his mask as the last time he had it on was when he was in some villiage last. Befor kanji could make up his mind he closed his bag befor putting hs cloak back on zipping it up and placing his mask over his face with the hood on covering his head and mask a bit befor puttingh is nag on as he waked backed up the stairs. "Seems like im going to miss this place for a while. Better let it have some fun as i will need to be on my best as i will be gone for some time. Well mabey i mite go to some villiges of where the Angra Mainyu call home to. Time to go out then." Askanji as talking to himself he walked over to his stair case befor grabbing his katana and hooked it on his pants for close range combat befor walking up the stairs. As he was walking out the candles went out as the door started to close shut after he made his way out of his house for one of the last times he would be caught here. So far kanji had what he needed to leave here befor walking out from the ally and heading out to the Main gate.
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:36 am
 A large flow of sand suddenly blasted across the gateway out of the village, a single male seeming to just emerge from the billowing of sand as it came to rest across the exit. His light blue eyes raising from looking at the sand in order to peer upon Kanji, while an almost twisted smile came across his face. "Where do you think you're going, Kanji? Leaving your village? Now that isn't an intelligent idea, don't you think? Well.. I'll be sure to help you with your tasks in the future, you know?" Ares of the Desert says, raising a single arm in order to gesture towards Kanji, sand erupting from the gourd on his back and launching towards Kanji, the Sand Binding Coffin technique coming into effect as it strikes out in an attempt to almost literally grab hold of Kanji like a hand, and then hold him in place with a decent deal of force though still keeping his face open to breathe. Grinning, Ares slowly lowers his hand as he would begin to walk forwards, making a single hand sign as he uses the Get Real! technique, preventing clones and substitutions in this fight that he had started for what appeared to be no reason at all.
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:02 am
 As kanji was walking ot the main gate he saw sand emerge in front of him as a person begin to show a man a strong male at the point. Kanji noticed the sand comig at him faster then he could move but not faster enough for him to activate his Sharingan to its final level befor letting out a smile as his Bomu Bomu power took effect letting out a explosion fro the sand touching him to let him get free befor jumping back and looking at the male. He smiled befor letting out a sign as he removed his mask showing his bored face at this time. Kanji raised his hand befor putting it on his katana on his side looking at the male. "So, Your Ares of the Desert. Guess Cruis sent you over here to help me out for my plan right. Leaveing this place will hurt me but not as much of what i thought it would do. Shall we get this battle over with my friend of sand." As kanji was talking he took his hand of his katana befor putting his handstogather doing some hand seals befor letting out a a sigh as he looked at Ares with a smile befor useing Chidori. The technique kanju used actually alters the nature of the his chakra, effectively converting it into electricity, As he placed his left hand over his right hand which was forming the Chidori for him to use like he planned on doing for some time.
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:38 pm
That was a foolish move, just because he could cause his body to explode, did not mean that the sand would stay away from it's initial course. By implanting a slight amount more chakra into the sands, Ares caused the sands to harden by such a percentage that when they came around again, after simply being scattered away, they would be strong enough to actually compact the explosion into the small area, causing simply a round about amount of explosions, which would simply cause the hardened sand to shake a little, rather then actually shatter from the force. Meaning the sand would simply roll off and continue to reform itself in order to seal Kanji inside, as more and more sand would layer from Ares' gourd in order to continue to reinforce the Sand Binding Coffin and ensnare Kanji in place. Making sure to suspend his Chidori wielding arm away from the rest of the sands, and keeping his face clear of the sand as well. "Well actually. We're deciding whether we should kill you or not.." Ares says with a chuckle.
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:54 pm
As Kanji was looking at his target he noticed the sand coming back again but he laughed at ares with a smile befor looking at him with a smile. Kanji opened his mouth and used his Goe Goe no mi power to make a soundwave emit from his mouth to push the sand and ares back for a bit be jumping bac fifty feet then useing body flicker to appear in front of ares's stomach region befor sending his right fist towards his stomach with the Chidori already finshed. The only problem was ares would have only one second to defend as it would take about three tofour seconds to get the sand to shift into a deffenisve type barrie as well as the sand form the gourd on his back. Kanji smiled befor letitng out a chuckle. "Trying to kill me allready. Wouldn't blame the guy, im the weakest member of Angra Mainyu. Leaveing my Villiage and going missing is all i can do since i failed the Chuinning exams." As kanji spoke he took his left hand and placed is straight over his chest like he was about to block something of not.
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 11:36 pm
Ares at first didn't even seem to react as Kanji used his attack to launch the sand away. Of course he wasn't thinking fully, since there would be sand behind him and on either side as well. But Ares wouldn't dwell to fully on that, since he would let this man attempt an attack upon him. As soon as Kanji even began to appear before Ares, there was a powerful strike crashing into Kanji's stomach. This technique being the Tiger Upper Cut. This Powerful uppercut could thrust through the whole body at a high speed, meaning the second between appearance and strike of retaliation from Ares. This uppercut would be landed directly in Kanji's stomach, either piercing through him with brute force, or sending him straight up into the air. Sand following Ares' strike, causing the punch to not only land harder, as if a heavy sized hammer had just been slammed into Kanji's gut. The sand would also prove to protect Ares from any force from Kanji's explosive properties that would be caused from physical connection, and the speed and force would not only shoot Kanji up into the air with a severely damaged gut, but the force from the explosion would cause him to actually shoot higher then he would've with just the strike and sand impact. Canceling Kanji's chidori with simple ease of speed, and even halting any words that were being attempted after his attempt of an attack. Once shot into the air, Ares would wave a hand, sending the full mass of sand that had taken over the ground around him and sending it into the air with the use of the Sand Binding Coffin technique, the hardened sand preventing the explosion to work anymore, and the technique moving in such a volume that it would obscure Ares from view as it attempted to not only ensnare Kanji, but catch him in mid air so he couldn't react completely, and since it was coming from all sides now, it would be hard for the weakened Kanji use his sonic strike in order to dispose of the sand all around him, since it would keep coming from all sides, and if he did blow it back, gravity would take course and he would fall right into it's depths anyway. Should Kanji some how dodge or defend against his initial strike, the time delay would cause Ares' shield of sand to come into effect, this shield being an automatic technique that is always active, and would easily block the attack, and give Ares enough time to move backwards and away from the strike.
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:39 am
As Kanji was in range of hitting Ares in the stomach he felt the effect of being hit with a hammer in his stomach region after beng sent up in the air. Reason be was kanji used body flicker to increase his speed but also with the punch of Ares's and the sand working with kanjis Bomu Bomu no mi ower sent him up pretty far in the air around a mile of two of distance. As kanji was trying to get his sight working again he noticed the sand coming from all sides which would be hard for his sonic strike to work but kanji had enough time to to shift is body in the air by moving his center of gravity with his axis to send his body into a spinning rotation in mid air as he opened his mouth to release a second sonic soundwave while spinning to push back all the sand that was going to surround him befor the gravity took effect. Kanji smiled befor his body got heavy and started to drop back to the ground with the speed and force of causeing a impact strong enought to crush his entire body to pieces if he didnt have a plan. With what ever pain kanji had taken had made his Curse mark activate to stage one as a sprial patten started to cover his body as he placed his right hand out in front of him as a Giant spike shot out from his plan and straight in to the ground causeing a impact of a ten by ten radius from the forse and speed of being shot out from the distance of being in the air. With a smiled kanji placed his left hand on the spike gripping it tight as he started to to slid down his spike that he shot out befor to slow his speed down enough to cause a mild but if pain. While kanji was sliding down the spike he looked at ares befor speaking the best he could. "Why so serious boy, Why so serious boy." After speaking kanji smiled at ares but went down on one knee.
You took to long to post yesterday bro.
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:34 am
Ares shakes his head slowly, this male didn't learn. Even with the curse mark he wasn't going to be able to keep fighting for as long as Ares will be able to. Grinning as he uses his Multi-Sand Bullet, raising a hand and gesturing towards Kanji as he was lowering from the spike. These hardened bullets of sand strong enough to pierce through hardened steel. Grinning as he launches the high speed bullets of sand in Kanji's direction, he continues to manipulate the sand with the same technique he had been using, once again attempting to ensnare Kanji in the sand. He would run low on chakra eventually, and since he was simply re-manipulating the same technique, his chakra wasn't being drained by it's use. Grinning he strikes out once again, this time aiming to catch Kanji off guard as the sand surrounds again. By raising a hand and pointing towards Kanji, suddenly the sand in the area began to multiply drastically. Creating a huge wave that thrust past Ares and then began shooting towards Kanji in an instant, towering high above them into the sky. This was the Quicksand in the Style of a Waterfall, large attacking waves of sand crashing down onto kanji at the same time, attempting to engulf and ensnare Kanji, drowning him in an almost never ending sea of hardened sand, in order to lock him under the sand and seal him there with a decent degree of entrapment in the process.
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:47 am
As kanji was looking a ares he let out a sigh as he stomach was hurting a bit befor seeing some sand type bullets coming at him with great speed. Befor kanji could even do a move he shifted his body to the right enough so the bullets went and passed right trough his body and his bones. At the second kanji let out a yell or pain looking at ares. "DAMM YOU TO HELL ARES, WHY ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!" As kanji yelled he let out a thrid sound wave from his mouth but this one was stonger then the last two as he started to push kanji back a few feet as it was three times bigger enough to get kanji up to his feet befor useing Body flicker to dissapear from sight to reappear on the top of the Main Gates looking down at ares befor closing his eyes then opening them up as he looked into Ares's eyes with a grin. Kanji was losing the abilty to lift his left arm up to his side but still had the ability to move his arm up a bit but that was all.
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 12:14 pm
By misjudging the sands that Ares used, Ares simply shifted a hand, as the sands shot from behind him into a taller waterfall effect, launching to cover the gates and Kanji as well as Ares himself. Without even really moving from where he stood, the sands would strike out attempting to knock Kanji downwards as well as entrap him in sand thanks to the multiple sand based attacks aiming to cover Kanji whole and hold drawn him in sand. Drawing a vial from his clothing, he snaps it in his hands and drops it into his sand. The sands shifting as they moved, spreading the special poison into the sands, causing the sands to have a sinister poison property added into them. Ares chuckles as he awaits his opponents downfall, the poison would seep into the wounds that had been caused in order to cause more damage.
[Bad post. I have to go soon, no time to post more]
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 12:22 pm
As kanji was looking down at Ares he noticed that sand coming around again but htis time kanji would not sit around let it take his body in a coffin. Kanji did the best he could by doing the hand seals for the Fire Dragon Blast, as he plced his right hand over his mouth and watched as he blew the fire out taking the shape of a Dragon as it went into the Sand turning into a Harden diamond type substance as well as keep it at bay for a few seconds to give kanji enough time to use his Toge Tge no mi power to turn his left arm into an entire spike giving his arm time to heal up since the spike covered his wound but left a little crack in the side so something could enter..
[post a little one ending this fight for no giveing kanji the antidote. Cause i can go post some where else while you leave. please bro.]
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:44 pm
A masked ninja stood on a rooftop watching the Kazekage himself deal with someone that was attempting to leave the Hidden Leaf to become a missing ninja. He made no move to interfere with the fight he had little doubt that the Kazekage could kill the lone Missing-nin himself though should it be needed Loki was ready to jump in and finish off the ninja.
"This have degraded far to much..." Loki thought to himself as he watched a kage of another village stop this one from leaving.
"Well it is a good thing I convinced you to leave the village isn't it Loki?" Serenitys voice echoed in his mind as he watched the fight. The one guiding light that has kept him under control.
[[Short Post is short post because I don't want to interefere with a Kage vs Missing-nin fight... just so you know though if the kazekage lets you get away im gonna kill yah since Ima hunter Nin Doragon Loki of the Hidden Heaven if u wanna look at my character.]]
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