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 Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 7:55 pm
(Random ninja!)
"One...", Bounto closed his eyes allowing his breathing to slow and regain control of his emotions "Two..." he slowly stood from his kneeling position and leaned against the tree for support, he could hear the footsteps of his attackers and figured he had the advantage since they didn't seem to know where he was "Three..." and within a heartbeat he was around the side of the tree, his attackers backs were turned. He grabbed the scroll attached to his arm via tape and pulled it free, his attackers turned but it was to late, he unlatched the scroll and whipped it through the air with one hand and formed a seal with the other "Brush Art: Ink Spike!" the ink blots on the paper began to form a 3-D shape as they flew out of the paper as spikes and sent the two ninja flying towards a tree... THUD... Bounto wrapped up the scroll and put it in his back pocket and with one glance back... left(I drew it too!!!http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h63/Broly_USSJ4/My art/artnindeath027.jpg ))
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:31 am
Nosfouratwo ((This has NOTHING, NOTHING, to do with naruto. Just lettig you know ^-^))Every moment writen in stone is a false message. God damn, what was it with people in this city? Although Rave and her sisters little squabble was over she wasn’t in the mood for messing with punks. But what torqued her off the most what the vibe this guy set off. He just knocked over her sister for not reason. Stupid cities, and there over crowded walkways, no one ever seemed to pay enough attention. However there was one perk she admired about him. He had the common decency to stop and make sure he hadn’t hurt the poor girl, lucky for him, he hadn’t, or there the headline for the nightly news may have changed. “Watch where you’re going bub!” Rave shouted at them man whom had knocked over here sister. She looked down to make sure she wasn’t bleeding or dazed only to be met by a stern look. That kind of look that said, didn’t we just go over this? “Er, please?” she added, trying to be a little bit kinder.
Rant sighed, her sister still had some things to learn. “Yeah I’m fine, thanks for asking.” She brushed herself off before taking her sisters hand. He had long enough to live… But that was always subject to change when her sister was around. Rant was never huge on making small talk, namely because she was better at listening then she was at striking up a conversation, but she owed it to herself to provide a good example. “Where are you headed off to today?” Nothing big, just a little banter, “Me and my sister here where headed out to the store to pick up some food.” She flashed a small smile before looking away awkwardly… She really needed to work on her small talk. Then again she was a kid; her sister should have been doing most of the talking.
“We were?” she looked at her sister before sighing, “Er yeah… We were…” She felt a small p***k in her side. Now that she thought about it she was starving, they had been distracted when heading to lunch by that one other god sent… The one that was flung into the car… Rave wanted an apple. “So, please excuse me if I sound rushed but we really must be going.” She held her stomach with her open hand hearing an addable growl. Nothing like your stomach growling to put a blush on your face. She faintly smiled as she heard a small chuckle coming from her sister. “Oh common, not like you got to eat lunch either.”
“Not my fault.” Rant spoke defensively.
“Actually it. Is. If you hadn’t chased after that one dude-“
“Oh so now curiosity is my fault?”
The two had entered a squabble not really remembering there was a person in front of them. If there was one thing all the passer-byers could pick up from the argument, it was that these two, where without a doubt, related.Now watch, as I write the truth. An excellent RP example. ^_^ pass
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:32 am
Fluer De Mal (Random ninja!)
"One...", Bounto closed his eyes allowing his breathing to slow and regain control of his emotions "Two..." he slowly stood from his kneeling position and leaned against the tree for support, he could hear the footsteps of his attackers and figured he had the advantage since they didn't seem to know where he was "Three..." and within a heartbeat he was around the side of the tree, his attackers backs were turned. He grabbed the scroll attached to his arm via tape and pulled it free, his attackers turned but it was to late, he unlatched the scroll and whipped it through the air with one hand and formed a seal with the other "Brush Art: Ink Spike!" the ink blots on the paper began to form a 3-D shape as they flew out of the paper as spikes and sent the two ninja flying towards a tree... THUD... Bounto wrapped up the scroll and put it in his back pocket and with one glance back... left(I drew it too!!!http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h63/Broly_USSJ4/My art/artnindeath027.jpg )) This is pretty good. Just make sure that you end the scentences or add commas before and after the speech quotes. ^_^ pass
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 12:43 pm
Ok haven't picked a village yet but anything BUT leaf...
Rp Sample:
Dikamata stood there in the dusk light atop his favorite training spot, smiling as he leaned forward and began to fall off the edge of the cliff. He wasted as much time as he could, waiting for the most oppourtune moment to spin around and land on his feet. The wind began to whistle around him as his body picked up speed. "Heh" his eyes closed slowly so that the wind wouldn't hurt his eyes. "NOW!" his eyes shot open as he torqued his waist and spun around landing on his feet without a scratch.
"Time to head in i guess." he smiled slightly as he walked toward his home nestled in the middle of the village.
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Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 6:21 pm
...firstly, nothing to do with the approving... OHMIGAWD, it's Night! Welcome back!!! *glomps* Loraxond Strife Ok haven't picked a village yet but anything BUT leaf... Rp Sample:Dikamata stood there in the dusk light atop his favorite training spot, smiling as he leaned forward and began to fall off the edge of the cliff. He wasted as much time as he could, waiting for the most oppourtune moment to spin around and land on his feet. The wind began to whistle around him as his body picked up speed. "Heh" his eyes closed slowly so that the wind wouldn't hurt his eyes. "NOW!" his eyes shot open as he torqued his waist and spun around landing on his feet without a scratch. "Time to head in i guess." he smiled slightly as he walked toward his home nestled in the middle of the village. *ahem* *professional look* Pass. It's ok. Good length, watch capitalization and punctuation here and there. =3 Little mistakes detract from overall quality, you know? whee
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 6:06 am
The blood moon rose in the dark night, barely illuminating the gray trees with a hint of red. Owls hooted in sporadic bursts sometimes silently swooping down to pierce the mice rustling in the grass with their claws and interrupting the night with shrill screams of victory. Suddenly, a group of shadows flitted through the trees without making a note of sound emanate from their movement. The man at the head signaled the others to a slight change in direction towards the left, and smiled. It was going to be an easy massacre in the sleeping village. Taking out 2 kunais, he lunged forward from the trees into the darkness below.
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Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 9:59 am
The _ Light The blood moon rose in the dark night, barely illuminating the gray trees with a hint of red. Owls hooted in sporadic bursts sometimes silently swooping down to pierce the mice rustling in the grass with their claws and interrupting the night with shrill screams of victory. Suddenly, a group of shadows flitted through the trees without making a note of sound emanate from their movement. The man at the head signaled the others to a slight change in direction towards the left, and smiled. It was going to be an easy massacre in the sleeping village. Taking out 2 kunais, he lunged forward from the trees into the darkness below. Ooh. eek Excellent pass. whee
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Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:32 am
As Zane appears on the battlefield he discovers his fellow squadmates lying on the ground on the verge of death. Guilt overcame Zane as he knew that if only he hadn't overslept, this would have never happened. The 4 misterious ninja surrounded Zane with bloodlust in their eyes with only one thought...finish the mission. Zane only being lower rank could not possibly hope to defeat them. But he had to try. He had to stall for time so that the jounins of his village will come. The killing intent was so strong that Zane couldn't help but feel crushed by their power.
The misterious nin toyed with him, throwing kunais at him from all directions. He dodged the first wave by jumping to the right, but it was no use because the second wave was heading straight for him. The kunais hit their mark and penetrated his body. Zane realized that the ninjas were toying with him, seeing as the fact that the kunais did not hit any vital spots. Zane struggled to stay on his feet. His entire body was throbbing and yelling to just keel over, but Zane refused. If he gave up, then his team would die. The four ninjas surrounded him. They were going for the kill. "Grandfather, I must break my promise to you and use that jutsu...I'm sorry, BUT I MUST PROTECT MY FRIENDS!" he exclaimed as a strong surge of chakra emanated from his body.
The chakra took out the moisture in the air to form water, then swiftly sent out wind chakra to freeze the water. The assailants rushed straight at Zane from all sides. The water turned into four large icycles surrounding Zane. With a flick of his hand, the icycles launched themselves at the ninjas. The four nins were caught off guard and couldn't avoid them. The icycles pierced through their chests like blades. The four ninjas fell to the ground, still alive, but not able to move. Zane, completely depleted of chakra, stumbled to the ground and blacked out
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Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 2:43 pm
The night sky was littered with stars. Some shown brighter than others, but the action was not in the sky, it was on the ground. A young man, somewhere in his late teens stood face to face with his mortal enemy. The young man stood at least six feet, and his soft blue eyes shown through the mask that concealed his identity. "You know, it isn't smart to challenge someone you don't even know." The young man said as he drew out his katana. The young man wore nothing more than black spandex and a pair of black and white tennis shoes.
The enemy stared down at the young man, hoping to spite fear into the young man, but it did not work. The enemy then charged at the young man, unsheathing the small tanto that was tied to his back. The young man stood for a second, before charging at the enemy at full speed. In one fell swoop, they both passed each other, attempting to slice each other in half.
They stopped and stood for what seemed like hours, before the enemy finally fell, blood dripping from the enemies side, creating a small pool of blood in a matter of seconds. The young man removed the mask that concealed his face and let go of it. "No one beats Crowjii." Crowjii spoke as the mask slowly fell to the ground. His soft blue eyes stared at the enlarged moon, smiling as his long, spikey blond hair flew elegantly in the wind. Crowjii stood there for a few seconds, before he fell to the ground, blood dripping from the large wound created by the enemies tanto, creating a small pool of blood in a matter of seconds.
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:45 pm
BluewolfofMibu As Zane appears on the battlefield he discovers his fellow squadmates lying on the ground on the verge of death. Guilt overcame Zane as he knew that if only he hadn't overslept, this would have never happened. The 4 misterious ninja surrounded Zane with bloodlust in their eyes with only one thought...finish the mission. Zane only being lower rank could not possibly hope to defeat them. But he had to try. He had to stall for time so that the jounins of his village will come. The killing intent was so strong that Zane couldn't help but feel crushed by their power. The misterious nin toyed with him, throwing kunais at him from all directions. He dodged the first wave by jumping to the right, but it was no use because the second wave was heading straight for him. The kunais hit their mark and penetrated his body. Zane realized that the ninjas were toying with him, seeing as the fact that the kunais did not hit any vital spots. Zane struggled to stay on his feet. His entire body was throbbing and yelling to just keel over, but Zane refused. If he gave up, then his team would die. The four ninjas surrounded him. They were going for the kill. "Grandfather, I must break my promise to you and use that jutsu...I'm sorry, BUT I MUST PROTECT MY FRIENDS!" he exclaimed as a strong surge of chakra emanated from his body. The chakra took out the moisture in the air to form water, then swiftly sent out wind chakra to freeze the water. The assailants rushed straight at Zane from all sides. The water turned into four large icycles surrounding Zane. With a flick of his hand, the icycles launched themselves at the ninjas. The four nins were caught off guard and couldn't avoid them. The icycles pierced through their chests like blades. The four ninjas fell to the ground, still alive, but not able to move. Zane, completely depleted of chakra, stumbled to the ground and blacked out Pass.
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:45 pm
Crowjii The night sky was littered with stars. Some shown brighter than others, but the action was not in the sky, it was on the ground. A young man, somewhere in his late teens stood face to face with his mortal enemy. The young man stood at least six feet, and his soft blue eyes shown through the mask that concealed his identity. "You know, it isn't smart to challenge someone you don't even know." The young man said as he drew out his katana. The young man wore nothing more than black spandex and a pair of black and white tennis shoes.
The enemy stared down at the young man, hoping to spite fear into the young man, but it did not work. The enemy then charged at the young man, unsheathing the small tanto that was tied to his back. The young man stood for a second, before charging at the enemy at full speed. In one fell swoop, they both passed each other, attempting to slice each other in half.
They stopped and stood for what seemed like hours, before the enemy finally fell, blood dripping from the enemies side, creating a small pool of blood in a matter of seconds. The young man removed the mask that concealed his face and let go of it. "No one beats Crowjii." Crowjii spoke as the mask slowly fell to the ground. His soft blue eyes stared at the enlarged moon, smiling as his long, spikey blond hair flew elegantly in the wind. Crowjii stood there for a few seconds, before he fell to the ground, blood dripping from the large wound created by the enemies tanto, creating a small pool of blood in a matter of seconds. Pass.
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 7:06 pm
The sun was placed to show noon, and Ivana was tired of moving around on the rooftop. She simply fell onto her behind and placed both her feet criss-crossed on the red tiles of the roof. Hide and seek, find and destroy - it didn't matter what it was called; she didn't want to play anymore. I want to go home and eat, not look for a tall kid with brown hair that could be mistaken for a bamboo stick or something, Ivana tapped one of the roof tiles with her fingers. Then something caught her eye just before it turned a corner. On the left side of the street below her, she recognizes the black jacket with gray trimmings belonging to the friend of hers whose suppose to be in hiding. Moving from place to place now are you? Ivana leaned forward from her sitting spot so she could place her feet firmly on the foundation before getting off of it, landing on the barren streets with a thud. Dust and dirt unsettled and fluttered around her feet as she moved quickly towards the direction she saw her friend had gone. As she turned the corner, Ivana found an empty lot where there was only one building that was still in good condition to be used as a shelter.
Ivana sneaked up towards the closed door, the paint was peeling already from the old wood. She could hear movement on the inside and grinned. He's gonna pay for being a cheap hider, Ivana waited a moment before opening the door. It swung wide open to a very surprised friend. As Ivana ran forward and attempted to knock down her friend, he seemed to have dissapeared, replaced by smoke. Huh? Ivana wondered what just happened along with smacking head first into the wall of the building and landing with a mouthful of her black strands of hair all over her face. Without getting up, Ivana moved her right hand over her face to get the hair out of the way. The ceiling was racing in circles above her.
"Ivana, are you okay?" Ivana tilted her head slightly to the side towards the voice of her friend. A new shape a been added to her spinning vision. She squinted her mahoghany eyes as if she needed a closer look even though the voice was more than enough. She leaped up, grabbing the one who had just faked his appearance with a clone.
"What's wrong with you?!" Ivana shook his jacket color, flustered.
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Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 12:42 pm
(Yay...random post...)
The rippling water reflected the sun back towards the sky, making it appear as if the water was covered in the sparkles that children use during their arts and crafts projects. This quiet tranquility, however, was quickly disrupted as three girls came running towards the water. Accompanied by joyous screaming and laughing there were violent splashes as the girls dove in. The water was warm and now rippled in small, but violent, waves. Coming up for breath it was evident that these tree were shinobi on their day off. The first was a vibrant red-head whose eyes danced and sparkled with the water. Her skin was a darkened tan and she was known as the village's flirt. To her left was her older sister, a woman with mouse brown hair; but her eyes sparkled and shone the same as her sister's. Finally, as she was pulling the two under the water with her legs, was a girl with pure black hair and an alabastor complection. As the three fought for who was allowed to breath above the water and who had to fight their way back up there was a sudden change in the water. Instead of its peaceful and serence, yet playful and joyous, self a large wave appeared over the three. Before they had time to react the wave came down with crushing force, pushing all three under the water.
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Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 8:22 pm
((So.. I'm gonna make this a graduation from the Academy because I am going to start off as an Academy Student))
Rikku woke up in the morning. She rubbed her brown eyes and moved her hair out of her face. Her bangs kept poking her in the eyes. She then looked up at her clock to see that it was almost time for her to leave for graduation. 'I thought I'd wake up earlier,' she thought to herself and she quickly stood up on her bed. She then jumped off of her bed and landed with a loud thud.
She walked up to her closet almost tripping on all of her toys on her carpet. She opened her closet slowly and then looked at all of the clothes in there. She eventually found a pair of pink capris pants and a light purple shirt with a butterfly on it. She changed as fast as she could and then she ran downstaris nearly falling down the stairs because she was running so fast.
She noticed that she planned to leave five minutes from now and she dind't brush her hair or her teeth and also, she still needed to eat breakfast. She ran into the bathroom accross the hall from the kitchen and she slipped on some water in the bathroom. She then stood up in wet clothes but she didn't really care how wet they were. She opened the tooth paste tube and squeezed it as the tooth paste came out. She put some on her tooth brush and started swishing water around in her mouth. She then brushed her teeth. She looked at the clock hanging in the kitchen and she realised she had to leave now! She didn't brush her hair because she didn't have time. She ran into the kitchen and grabbed a banana off of the counter. She then ran to leave the house and she shut the door behind her.
When she got to the graduation, she saw many of the other Academy Students there as well. She grinned as she found a chair to sit in and she watched silently as the teacher asked for everyone's attention. When the teacher called the graduates to come up one by one, she nearly bounced off of her chair when she heard her name. As she was walking to the teacher, she got even more nervous for finding out who was in her team. She then shook the teacher's hand with her sweaty palm and went back to her chair to sit down.
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 6:43 pm
As nightfall drew closer, the village was silent they waited to strike the unsuspecting civilians. When night struck, shadows appeared from the wood and surrounded the village. One of the hadows drew closer and signaled the others to advance and slaughter them all. They pounced into the streets and stealthly wandered the streets going into each house and slaughtering the families. one by one the village fell the village barracks was soon overrun. Even the strongest of the villages shinobi were uncapable of defeating them. they were no match for the mysterious Shinobi.As the people who had survived returned to thier village they were sickened by the smell of death. Countless people killed in one attack, "Tragic..." some say. But in the end the mysterious shinobi were never identified.
Hopefully i pass with this...
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