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 Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 3:35 pm
Dark Vengence132 character name: kaimeastra or kai for short i will be two characters aslo by separating by green and blue kai jumped in to the tree swiftly as he heard the count down from the other person " 3..2...1 here i come , your not getting away from me this time kai" rantu said searching from under a rock to searching tree to tree kai sitting so still as if he were not alive at all ,frozen , all though he feels something crawl down his shirt " sp-sp-sp-SPIDER "he yelled at the top of his lungs falling out of the tree on his back squishing the spider"dang it" you got me"" ha i got you your it now kai " rantu said as kai went over to a tree putting his head down and began to count down from 50Please observe proper punctuation and basic grammatical rules (capitalization, etc.). The post itself is fine, but fix that.
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 3:36 pm
unit01testtype unit01testtype I am completely new and nervous at this, but here goes nothing. RP Sample: Renshi was lying on the roof of the academy waiting for class to start. Lying there, feeling the warm rays of the newly rising pink and orange sun. "Aw. That's so beautiful, but i kinda wish class would start already". sorry i had somehow missed a whole line. Too short. Please expand.
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:36 pm
ProtoXtreme unit01testtype unit01testtype I am completely new and nervous at this, but here goes nothing. RP Sample: Renshi was lying on the roof of the academy waiting for class to start. Lying there, feeling the warm rays of the newly rising pink and orange sun. "Aw. That's so beautiful, but i kinda wish class would start already". sorry i had somehow missed a whole line. Too short. Please expand. ok. Renshi was lying on the roof of the academy. waiting. waiting for class to start. Lying there, feeling the warm rays of the newly rising sun. The many different hues of oranges and pinks flowing all around and through him. Renshi starts to sit up to get a better look at the new rising sun. after enjoying the warmth of the orange and pink sun light, Renshi practices his hand signs one more time before class starts. "Clone jutsu!" and it was a success. he managed to purform a perfect clone jutsu.
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 5:36 pm
unit01testtype ProtoXtreme unit01testtype unit01testtype I am completely new and nervous at this, but here goes nothing. RP Sample: Renshi was lying on the roof of the academy waiting for class to start. Lying there, feeling the warm rays of the newly rising pink and orange sun. "Aw. That's so beautiful, but i kinda wish class would start already". sorry i had somehow missed a whole line. Too short. Please expand. ok. Renshi was lying on the roof of the academy. waiting. waiting for class to start. Lying there, feeling the warm rays of the newly rising sun. The many different hues of oranges and pinks flowing all around and through him. Renshi starts to sit up to get a better look at the new rising sun. after enjoying the warmth of the orange and pink sun light, Renshi practices his hand signs one more time before class starts. "Clone jutsu!" and it was a success. he managed to purform a perfect clone jutsu. Oh...fine. Pass.
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Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:36 am
Animaru was sitting down in class, the final day before graduation. "Sigh. It seems like only yesterday was my first day." He grins widely. He isn't paying any attention to the lesson, it was on the art of tranformation, a subject he thought he had mastered. Each minute of class felt like a day, each second an hour. But soon it would all be over, and he would be one step closer to his dream.
The bell for lunch sounded, he walked out of class to see his friendly dog, Shikon, waitting for him. One thing had changed since his first day, Shikon who use to be the size of a puppy was now up to his hip, covered in black fur. He reazembled a wolf more then a dog. Sigh. Just another couple hours and I'm out of here.
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Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:35 pm
Ryu_Hokage Animaru was sitting down in class, the final day before graduation. " Sigh. It seems like only yesterday was my first day." He grins widely. He isn't paying any attention to the lesson, it was on the art of tranformation, a subject he thought he had mastered. Each minute of class felt like a day, each second an hour. But soon it would all be over, and he would be one step closer to his dream. The bell for lunch sounded, he walked out of class to see his friendly dog, Shikon, waitting for him. One thing had changed since his first day, Shikon who use to be the size of a puppy was now up to his hip, covered in black fur. He reazembled a wolf more then a dog. Sigh. Just another couple hours and I'm out of here.Pass.
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Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 4:06 pm
((Rping as one of my favorite characters i made...Uchiha Kogan))
Kogan sits in class as the teacher lectures on about ninjutsu. Reading his book kogan always liked reading, getting lost in the text its like entering a new world. Kogan was smart as he had to the Main family of the Uchiha Clan would always keep an eye on him. "Kogan can you demonstrate to our rookie's this year?" asked the teacher as he wrote down the a list of jutsus that must be learned for the next exam. "Of course..." saided Kogan as its been like that for a while now in the academy asking him to show example or help the student if they don't understand. Performing as needed Kogan would transform into an older form of him as hokage. Wearing the hokage's robe and hat the teacher was pleased with his work. Reverting back to normal and going back to his sit he jst flipped opened his book and started reading again until class ended. Hearing the bell ring Kogan walked out of the academy still with his book in his hand he then headed toward the Uchiha District for some real training.
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Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 10:58 am
iDizzy Da Kidd ((Rping as one of my favorite characters i made...Uchiha Kogan))
Kogan sits in class as the teacher lectures on about ninjutsu. Reading his book kogan always liked reading, getting lost in the text its like entering a new world. Kogan was smart as he had to the Main family of the Uchiha Clan would always keep an eye on him. "Kogan can you demonstrate to our rookie's this year?" asked the teacher as he wrote down the a list of jutsus that must be learned for the next exam. "Of course..." saided Kogan as its been like that for a while now in the academy asking him to show example or help the student if they don't understand. Performing as needed Kogan would transform into an older form of him as hokage. Wearing the hokage's robe and hat the teacher was pleased with his work. Reverting back to normal and going back to his sit he jst flipped opened his book and started reading again until class ended. Hearing the bell ring Kogan walked out of the academy still with his book in his hand he then headed toward the Uchiha District for some real training. Pass.
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Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 4:23 pm
Ok.. I'll just get this over with..
Saruki is stilling under the cool shade of the tree but a small brook. Felling the breeze of the wind, listening and watch the flowing watchers slowly, but steadily as they passed her. Flashbacks of her childhood keep rushing through her head. They thought I was weak. Just a child. She said in her mind. Kind of like the water in this brook, slowly buy patiently making it's way through life. A small grin fell over her, as she begun to speak softly. "But some day, it will become a part of something bigger. Like an enormous waterfall, being able to wash away even the toughest stone." Saruki stood up as she raised her head to look up at the clouds. "I will become the best!" She yelled at the top of her lungs as a smile formed on her lit up face. "I will train hard, I will graduate, and they will see. They will all see.."
*Crosses fingers.* How was that?
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Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 3:43 pm
Kurokawa was, as usual, the first to enter the classroom for school that day. And, also as usual, he arrived before the teacher did. His wait in front of the locked door was a short one, as the teacher had arrived only a few minutes after he had. Without a word between them, they nodded to each other, and Kuro moved to his seat at the beckoning of his instructor, whom had opened the door for him. After finding a comfortable position in his chair, Kuro pulled out last night's written assignment on the subject of Chakra. After touching the top of his head, and finding his spikes rock hard from his mother's home-made chakra gel, that strangely enough gave his hair freedom to move about its will as if it had not been gelled at all, then it would move back into position as he wished. After his assignment was reviewed, and he was confident for another 100% grade, Kuro pulled out his favorite title-less book and began reading. "Its going to be a good day", he said to himself, as he began reading. The teacher opened a window, and a light breeze entered the room. It flipped a few pages in the book, and as soon as he re found his place, he enjoyed the breeze. "A very good day.", he said once again to himself.
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Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 6:23 pm
Saruki Shimizu Ok.. I'll just get this over with.. Saruki is stilling under the cool shade of the tree but a small brook. Felling the breeze of the wind, listening and watch the flowing watchers slowly, but steadily as they passed her. Flashbacks of her childhood keep rushing through her head. They thought I was weak. Just a child. She said in her mind. Kind of like the water in this brook, slowly buy patiently making it's way through life. A small grin fell over her, as she begun to speak softly. " But some day, it will become a part of something bigger. Like an enormous waterfall, being able to wash away even the toughest stone." Saruki stood up as she raised her head to look up at the clouds. " I will become the best!" She yelled at the top of her lungs as a smile formed on her lit up face. " I will train hard, I will graduate, and they will see. They will all see.." *Crosses fingers.* How was that? Pass. Good job. =3
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Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 6:24 pm
The True Unknown One Kurokawa was, as usual, the first to enter the classroom for school that day. And, also as usual, he arrived before the teacher did. His wait in front of the locked door was a short one, as the teacher had arrived only a few minutes after he had. Without a word between them, they nodded to each other, and Kuro moved to his seat at the beckoning of his instructor, whom had opened the door for him. After finding a comfortable position in his chair, Kuro pulled out last night's written assignment on the subject of Chakra. After touching the top of his head, and finding his spikes rock hard from his mother's home-made chakra gel, that strangely enough gave his hair freedom to move about its will as if it had not been gelled at all, then it would move back into position as he wished. After his assignment was reviewed, and he was confident for another 100% grade, Kuro pulled out his favorite title-less book and began reading. "Its going to be a good day", he said to himself, as he began reading. The teacher opened a window, and a light breeze entered the room. It flipped a few pages in the book, and as soon as he re found his place, he enjoyed the breeze. "A very good day.", he said once again to himself. A well-earned pass.
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Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:50 pm
My character is Haru Uchiha. He is 8 Years old. This is his first day at the accadamy.This is how his day went.(I edited it to make it longer)
He wakes up at the sound of kids running outside. He realizes that it is the first day of school. he gets dressed and quickly runs down the stairs, he knows he is late. He trips and falls on his knee, he stares at it noticing it is bleeding.He says "crap, I hate school already and im not even there yet". He quickly gets up and runs to school. He decides to get some ramen before he goes to school. The yound student orders a bowl of ramen. As he picks up the bowl he spills it, burning his hand. He runs off towrd school. When he arives he notices that no one is there, then realizes school starts tomarrow.
LOL
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:53 am
shaunsred My character is Haru Uchiha. He is 8 Years old. This is his first day at the accadamy.This is how his day went.(I edited it to make it longer) He wakes up at the sound of kids running outside. He realizes that it is the first day of school. he gets dressed and quickly runs down the stairs, he knows he is late. He trips and falls on his knee, he stares at it noticing it is bleeding.He says "crap, I hate school already and im not even there yet". He quickly gets up and runs to school. He decides to get some ramen before he goes to school. The yound student orders a bowl of ramen. As he picks up the bowl he spills it, burning his hand. He runs off towrd school. When he arives he notices that no one is there, then realizes school starts tomarrow. LOL Pass. Watch out a little more for capitalization, all right? It doesn't have to be impeccable but it helps quality-wise to have as less minor mistakes possible. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:27 am
((This has NOTHING, NOTHING, to do with naruto. Just lettig you know ^-^))Every moment writen in stone is a false message. God damn, what was it with people in this city? Although Rave and her sisters little squabble was over she wasn’t in the mood for messing with punks. But what torqued her off the most what the vibe this guy set off. He just knocked over her sister for not reason. Stupid cities, and there over crowded walkways, no one ever seemed to pay enough attention. However there was one perk she admired about him. He had the common decency to stop and make sure he hadn’t hurt the poor girl, lucky for him, he hadn’t, or there the headline for the nightly news may have changed. “Watch where you’re going bub!” Rave shouted at them man whom had knocked over here sister. She looked down to make sure she wasn’t bleeding or dazed only to be met by a stern look. That kind of look that said, didn’t we just go over this? “Er, please?” she added, trying to be a little bit kinder.
Rant sighed, her sister still had some things to learn. “Yeah I’m fine, thanks for asking.” She brushed herself off before taking her sisters hand. He had long enough to live… But that was always subject to change when her sister was around. Rant was never huge on making small talk, namely because she was better at listening then she was at striking up a conversation, but she owed it to herself to provide a good example. “Where are you headed off to today?” Nothing big, just a little banter, “Me and my sister here where headed out to the store to pick up some food.” She flashed a small smile before looking away awkwardly… She really needed to work on her small talk. Then again she was a kid; her sister should have been doing most of the talking.
“We were?” she looked at her sister before sighing, “Er yeah… We were…” She felt a small p***k in her side. Now that she thought about it she was starving, they had been distracted when heading to lunch by that one other god sent… The one that was flung into the car… Rave wanted an apple. “So, please excuse me if I sound rushed but we really must be going.” She held her stomach with her open hand hearing an addable growl. Nothing like your stomach growling to put a blush on your face. She faintly smiled as she heard a small chuckle coming from her sister. “Oh common, not like you got to eat lunch either.”
“Not my fault.” Rant spoke defensively.
“Actually it. Is. If you hadn’t chased after that one dude-“
“Oh so now curiosity is my fault?”
The two had entered a squabble not really remembering there was a person in front of them. If there was one thing all the passer-byers could pick up from the argument, it was that these two, where without a doubt, related.Now watch, as I write the truth.
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