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 Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:02 am
Can't that was third time. 3 denials and I can't try again.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 3:09 pm
Arashikage2 Can't that was third time. 3 denials and I can't try again.
That just limits you from the Uchiha clan. Feel free to apply for any other of our clans. POTS has tons of them.
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Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 3:12 pm
White Water Lilly Arashikage2 Can't that was third time. 3 denials and I can't try again. None that interest me. Trust me, I've looked.
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 4:37 pm
I am sorry about this but I has been damn near a week can someone please look at my freaking application.
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 5:05 pm
@Azeiel: Azeiel, please watch your language and once more, please don't rush the mods to approve your things. I know waiting is hard but Jade and I are both busy with rl stuff from time to time. I'm not trying to make excuses but to go over an application for a detailed and long bloodline like the Uchiha takes time. Anyhow, sorry for the wait and here's the verdict.
Good job with the information section. I like how detailed you were and it covers pretty much all that's needed. As for the rp sample, it would've been better if you rped as a higher ranked shinobi with mangekyo but a solid rp sample neither less. Approved! Have fun rping.
-Edited by iJwlz-kun
Keep in mind how it is easier to get out of genjutsu when you reach the 2nd tomoe. Also, you obviously have knowledge about the Sharingan, but you need the PotS version of knowledge about the mangekyo. Killing your best friend isn't the only way to reach the mangekyo, and Itachi's isn't the only mangekyo available.
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:11 pm
White Water Lilly @Azeiel: Azeiel, please watch your language and once more, please don't rush the mods to approve your things. I know waiting is hard but Jade and I are both busy with rl stuff from time to time. I'm not trying to make excuses but to go over an application for a detailed and long bloodline like the Uchiha takes time. Anyhow, sorry for the wait and here's the verdict.
Good job with the information section. I like how detailed you were and it covers pretty much all that's needed. As for the rp sample, it would've been better if you rped as a higher ranked shinobi with mangekyo but a solid rp sample neither less. Approved! Have fun rping.
-Edited by iJwlz-kun
Keep in mind how it is easier to get out of genjutsu when you reach the 2nd tomoe. Also, you obviously have knowledge about the Sharingan, but you need the PotS version of knowledge about the mangekyo. Killing your best friend isn't the only way to reach the mangekyo, and Itachi's isn't the only mangekyo available. Thank you I apologize for the language. I will not make excuses for it, again thank you.
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 4:10 pm
(Question: Last time I was here, I had this same Bloodline approved. Do I have to fill out another application for it? I'll do it anyway, just to be safe, but just wondering.)
Rpc Name: Lauren Bailey
Village: Hidden Mist
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Crystal Release
What you know about the clan/bl:
The user must have raiton and doton as their elements
The user may charge their raiton chakra into the crystals for more power
The crystals can only be broken by Taijutsu of a higher rank
The user's eye colour and crystal colour is the same as their chakra.
Rp Sample:
Characters:
Lauren Bailey
Rank: Gennin
Elements: Raiton/Crystal
Class: Ninjutsu
Elizabeth Bishop
Rank: Genin
Elements: wind
Class: Ninjutsu
It was a beautiful day, the birds were chirping, the wind blew softly, and several young ninja beat each other to death for glory and advancement. That's right, it was time for the final rounds of this year's Chuunin Exams. The current fight was between Lauren, from Hidden Mist, and Elizabeth, from Hidden Leaf. The battle had been going on for a few minutes, and it seemed as though neither side was showing any signs of backing down.
Lauren crafted several hand signs to start up her next jutsu. She focused her raiton chakra into her arm, then thrust it forward, "Raiton: Lightning Bolt!" she said, as she produced a flashing blue bolt of lightning from her forward fingertips. Elizabeth quickly countered this with a simple gust from a wind jutsu. "Dont you know anything about basic elements?" she said, taunting Lauren. Lauren, who was at a slight advantage at first, was now back on an even level, with half her jutsu gone.
This little mishap didnt hurt her however. Lauren always had a back up plan, and it was time to use hers. Lauren began to perform a stream of hand signs and slammed her hands on the ground."Crystal Dragon Jutsu!" she cried out, focusing her raition and doton chakra into the ground. From in front of her, a large 10ft crystal serpent arose from the ground. It shot at Elizabeth at full speed, but was knocked to the side by an air bullet. Elizabeth laughed at Lauren, "You'll have to do better than that!." she said cockily.
Elizabeth began to make several hand signs, then began to spin. As she spun, she pulled out a fan and kicked up a strong gust of cutting winds, "Kamaitachi no Jutsu (Slashing Wind Skill)", she yelled. As the girl was spinning, Lauren made several hand signs and slammed her palms on the ground once more. As she focused the raiton and doton chakra into the ground, she yelled, "Crystal Barrier!", and a large pink wall of crystals shot up from the floor to deflect the cutting winds.
While Elizabeth finished her move, Lauren was making new hand seals. Once she had finished, she pushed her hands against the crystal wall. With a loud cry, "Crystal Release: Crystal Senbon!", several bits of crystal flew from the wall at Elizabeth. The girl had little time to defend, and blocked off her body by using her under arms and legs to take the needle's attack.
Lauren walked out from behind the barrier a few feet and stopped to see her opponent's arms and legs, full of bright pink senbon needles. While Elizabeth dealt with the needles, Lauren performed one last string of hand signs. She stomped her foot, and a large tepee shot from the ground, imprisoning Elizabeth. Lauren walked up to the prison and said, "Give up, or die." Elizabeth laughed at the girl's demand. "I'll never give up, you'll have to kill me." Lauren sighed and punched the tepee. She focused her chakra into the walls, and from every angle, Crystal senbon shot out at the girl, only to stop inches from her body. Lauren sighed and said, "there, you're dead." the proctor then jumped down from his roost and named Lauren the winner.
Jutsu Used: (not in exact order)
Yadama Henshin Bakuha (Projectile Deflection Blast)
Kaze Bakuhatsu (Wind Explosion)
Raiton: Raikou Boruto no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Bolt Technique)
Crystal Dragon Jutsu
Crystal Shuruken
Kamaitachi no Jutsu (Slashing Wind Skill)
Crystal Barrier
Crystal Release: Crystal Senbon
Crystal Prison Jutsu
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 4:28 pm
@Snuff: As to your question I would assume so seeing as to how you lost your placement in the bloodline after leaving. Sometimes exceptions are made but I'm assuming that this is not the case.
For your application, denied. I know you said it was approved before but there are new moderators and we have different expectations. The info section was good. We don't usually see it in a list form but it works. As for your rp sample, you were suppose to include a list of all the techniques you used - that's one of the new rules to help make things easier on use approvers but since you just got back, I'll let it slide. Basically, your sample was alright but I would like to see a few more techniques incorporated into it. There are a lot of techniques a genin can use and it'll be nice to see more of it in your sample. Other than a lack of techniques used, I have to say you had a solid first try. Keep it up.
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 5:41 pm
thank you for the assistance.
I have edited my post and it is ready for round 2, whenever you are.
I used a few more of the crystal jutsu and added the list.
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:01 pm
@Snuff: No problem, just doing my job. And as for the results of round two...APPROVED! Have fun rping!
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:01 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:44 pm
Rpc Name: Haru Glory
Village: Cloud
Rank: Gennin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Dragonil
What you know about the clan/bl: They were raised by salamanders or dragons, thus have a special talent for Katon.
Rp Sample:
Haru waved to the swordsmen waiting for him on the dock. He had arranged the meeting himself. Ever since that fateful day, he had wanted to become a legendary swordsman and the easiest way to do so was by defeating an already legendary swordsman. It was simple in theory, but Haru did not have the forthcoming to see the problems in his plan. He began to work them out however, when the moment he stepped onto the dock a waterball slammed into his gut. He was sent tumbling across the dock, only saved from the water when he jammed his silver sword into one of the posts. Shakily, Haru returned to his feet, attempting to comprehend just what had occured. "I just wanted to talk," Haru spat out. His opponent uttered some deep grisly retort, but Haru was far too concetrated on survival to worry about such a thing. Water attacks hurt him more then the average shinobi, because Haru was one of the Dragonil. Those who had come in close contact with dragons and learned of their flames. To those firebearers of the Draonil, water was an akkeles heel. Haru let go of his sword to do a quick set of handseals, before opening his mouth and shouting, "Fire Dragon's Roar!" following shortly after was a fireball covered in runes, shot at the enemy shinobi. With nonchalange the swordsmen countered his fire with a shield of water. It was frustrating, but the steam generated from that counter move gave Haru enough of a distraction to withdraw.
The boy was not the most thoughtful when it came to thinking ahead, but he sure could think on his feet. It was a talent that made him worthy of carrying on the Dragonil mark. There was a tattoo, emblazened on his chest which marked this. The damage he had taken from the waterball had exposed this to the enemy as well. That was the most logical reason for why the swordsman was not towards him with a set of water clones. Haru cursed his luck, of all the places to fight it had to be over a lake. He had a plan in mind, but it would consume a great deal of chakra. Not that there was much of a choice, it was either sink or swim. Haru tore off the remnants of his black T-shirt and began to focus his chakra. Without any flame to consume, he would need to finish things quickly after this move. "And now for my finisher! Fire Dragon's Wing Edge!" He rushed his opponent, holding his sword in one hand and crafting seals with the other. In two quick moves he cut through two of the water clones, and pierced the final with a throw of his sword. Both arms free he opened them wide and they were lit afire. Haru began flapping his arm wildly reminscent of a dragon to release streams of fire. None of them hit the swordsmen, rather they lit ablaze the dock around him, trapping him within the flames. "Part Two coming up next, Fire Dragon's Sword Edge!" He had dismissed the flames from his arms, jumped backwards into the air and formed the seals. Now that the swordsmen could not move, he would finish him with an attack capable of burning his opponent to a crisp. As he completed the final seal his entire body erupted into flames. He shot himself forward at the swordsmen, only to miss by a hair and fall by accident into the lake.
Haru needed work on his aim. The Swordsmen, who had thought himself doomed a few moments ago, was now laughing heartily at that fact. Haru emerged to the water's surface, gasping for breath and desperately searching for where his opponent had gone. They were both in the water now, as the dock had given way under the opponent's feat. Of course, the water was much less troubling for a mist shinobi then it was for a Dragonkin. Haru estimated he had enough chakra for one technique, this was his thinking on the fly coming back into action. If he could recover his sword before the mist shinobi recovered from laughing, then perhaps he could still salvage a victory. Haru took a deep breath, and dove into the water, ignoring the discomfort it caused him. Underneath the waves surface he noticed a silver gleam, it was eisenmeteor, his sword. The next minute the mist shinobi's laughter died down, as Haru recovered his sword from the sunken depths and pulled himself back onto the beach. He swung the blade over his head once to be sure he was still capable of moving it, before sheathing it behind his back. "Come now," He taunted, "A swordsman such as yourself is going to give up the highground so easily?" Haru was hoping that the mist shinobi was too proud to give up even the littlest bit of tactical advantage.
It worked, and the swordsmen left the water and began to charge at Haru. In his hand was a simply silver katana, a weapon that was powerful despite its small demeanor. Unlike this swordsman, Haru had no plans on killing his opponent. He just needed to knock him down long enough to escape. The silver haired boy had never even wanted to fight in the first place. So for this mist shinobi, charging at him sword drawn, Haru planned a simple finish. With one arm, he redrew eisenmeteor, the key element in his finishing strategy. "Lets fight this old schol!" He taunted, as he clashed blades with the shinobi in a downward swing. Haru only held eisenmeteor with his left, while his right was busy once more making handseals. He made the final seal and curled back with his right bicep. The next scene played out almost in slow motion, but happened in a few seconds. Haru let go of his eisenmeteor, cancelling the chakra stream he channeled into the weapon to make it lighter. This caused the shinobi's blade to drop with his, and an opening to appear in his enemy's guard. With his right, Haru threw a great punch, propelled by his Flame elbow technique. He socked the opponent square in the jaw, enough to send him rolling around in the sand for a few seconds. Haru flexed in a quick victory pose, before his muscles nearly gave out on him as he attempted to lift his sword above his head. At that moment, Haru realized how much of his chakra had been consumed in the fight, and it was a better idea to run before his opponent stood up once more. Which de promptly did.
Name: Fire Dragon's Roar (火竜の咆哮 Karyū no Hōkō)
Name: Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow (火竜の炎肘 Karyū no Enchū)
Name:Fire Dragon's Wing Attack (火竜の翼撃 Karyū no Yokugeki)
Name: Fire Dragon's Sword Edge (火竜の剣角 Karyū no Kenkaku)
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 7:33 pm
Unless Lilly has anything else to say, approved ninja
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:58 pm
{{Sorry it's so long...^^;;}}
RPC Name || Takeo Asahi
Village || Most likely Kumo.
Rank || Academy Student
Bloodline/Clan || Bushin Clan
Known About Clan || Every member of this clan is an elite warrior, chosen at birth. They are taken soon after birth, and if the medical examiners deem them worthy, if they carry the natural genetics of the clan, they are taken away, and their parents are either told they died soon after birth or they replace the baby with an orphan. From then on, the chosen warriors are put through rigorous training once they reach a certain age and are capable enough. They are formed into the most elite killing force there is, being trained to assasinate, fight, protect, and follow out a mission to the end. The members are naturally fit and are often naturally good looking as well, but have trouble using and dispelling any Genjutsu, due to their main focus on using weapons.
RP Sample ||
Characters
Name || Takeo Asahi
Rank || Jounin
Class || Weapon Master
Element(s) || Fuuton & Raiton
Name || Unknown
Rank || Jounin
Class || Ninjutsu
Element(s) || Katon, Fuuton, & Dotan
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The sudden silence was unnerving.
Even the birds had ceased their melodies to watch in anticipation; or perhaps fear. The only sound that could be heard was to wind, moving gently through the boughs of the great trees, standing resolute in the darkness that consumed the land. In the small amount of light that was offered by the sliver of a moon, one could just barely see a shadow upon on of those many branches shift slightly. If examined closely, it could be noted that there was a faint outline of a man crouched there. Looking down from his position, Takeo surveyed the forest floor calmly, searching for the man that he had been tracking for near three days now, and who had seemingly been able to evade him so far. Seeing naught moving in the unbroken darkness, he let out a slight sigh before standing once more. As soon as he was content that the target was not here, he took off, leaping smoothly from tree to tree, still watching for any trace of the target.
He had some idea of which way the man was heading, as he often found some sort of clue that had been carelessly left behind; or had been purposely been left, as bait. Either way, it didn't really matter. His mission was to track down and capture this man, and as it had been drilled into his very being long ago, the mission was his top priority, regardless of danger or loss of life. And he was to do everything in his power to complete the mission. While comtemplating this thought for the thousandth time, he finally caught sight of the man, stumbling foolishly along and leaning against every available tree that was nearby before pushing off to the next one. Takeo landed on a nearby branch, almost directly above the man, and looked down at him curiously. He looks like he's drunk, Takeo mused, somewhat humored. Though he knew better. He had been chasiing this man for nearly three days, with hardly any rest; the man was probably dehydrated and delerious by now. Smiling slightly, Takeo withdrew a kunai and leaped down, landing gracefully beside the man.
"Good evening, my good sir."
He quickly grabbed the man, placing the kunai near his throat for good measure. He hardly anticipated it when the 'man' dissapitated at his touch, and immediately realized what just happened. Leaping back, he placed his back against a nearby trees and glanced around at the tree tops around him. Damned clones... He replace the kunai and cast his gaze about once more, searching for the real target in the darkness.
"I honestly can't believe you fell for that."
Takeo immediately trained his gaze onto the spot where the voice had emitted from, and could just barely make out the figure of a man, leaning casually against the tree which he was perched upon. Takeo didn't reply right away, and instead measured up his opponent. Seemed he was as helpless as Takeo had first thought, though it would take a lot more than a mere clone to beat him. Letting himself appear to relax slightly, he gave a small shrug. ''I just did it so I wouldn't have to wait for the real one to show himself. And it appears to have worked," he bluffed, feeling slightly angry at himself for falling for such a mediocre trick. He gazed at the man calmly, watching closely as he leaped down from the tree, obviously confident in himself. "Of course you did, kid. Don't worry, most everyone falls for it. Of course, they're all dead now, but no matter. You'll soon be able to ask them for yourself."
Not waiting for a reply, the man launched himself forward with surprising speed, and had unnoticably drawn a kunai in the same instant. Takeo was even quicker, however, as he was much more accustomed to close range than this guy. He easily ducked beneath the man's swipe, and reached back, grasping the hilts of his two swords, and using the special Iaidō he had been taught long ago, unsheathed them and slashed upwards, all in one, smooth move. Caught off guard by the blindingly fast move, the man twisted away as the two swords rose in unison, though he was not fast enough to totally evade them, as the was now a long gash on his right cheek. Without waiting for the man to strike back, Takeo launched himself forward with incredible speed, and in a split second, was standing behind the disorientated man. He raised both blades, while at the same time incorperating chakra into his nervous system. He immediately felt the effects and brought the blades down, moving so quickly that it was almost unseen. The man started twisting away, but could hardly out-manuver the blades. The blades easily bit into his skin, cutting deep into his right shoulder.
Takeo quickly twisted to the right, skirting around the injured man, trailing the blades softly against the ground as he went to complete the Turning Swallow Cut. In a matter of seconds, he was standing in front of the man, bring the blades up once more to complete the move. The blades both slashed across his torso, though only grazing it somewhat, as the goal was to capture this man /alive/ and return him to the kage. But she didn't say he had to be concious. He stood back and watched as the man dropped to his knees in pain. "I suggest you stop resisting and come with me peacefully. Though you /will/ go with me, whether you want to or not," Takeo stated bluntly as he gaze down at the man, bent of in pain. When the man didn't reply, he scowled slightly, and bent down so he was level, both swords resting across his knees. As he did so, he noticed the man making hand signals and muttering. He felt the earth shifting below him, and immediately leaped back, without bothering to look down.
As he landed, he noticed what looked like two hard mounds of stone slowly rising, and realized what the man had just tried to do. Scowling he raised both blades, and almost immediately, chakra was dancing smoothly along the blades, utilizing the Chakra Scabbard that was essential to his clan. "Well, that wouldn't have been very good, huh? Trying to hold me down, eh? I guess that would be a no, you won't cooperate." Takeo smiled slightly as he stared down at the man. "Makes it all the more fun." He was suddenly behind the man, and he raised both swords, but as he was about to bring them down, he felt something hard hit him in the stomach, forcing him to stumble back into a tree. Grimacing, he looked at the man, then at the stone that had struck him. Almost immediately afterwards, he felt himself start sinking slowly into the ground. Knowing it was quicksand, he didn't bother looking down, instead twisting his body uncomfortably to face the tree that was behind him. He stabbed both swords into the bark as hard as he could, as high as he could, and tried to pull himself out. After an agonizing second of just hanging there, the was a slight sucking sound and he was free.
He hung there for a moment before bracing himself and pushing himself away from the tree, pulling the swords out at the same time. He landed shakily, the quicksand still stuck to him. "Kid, you got a lot to learn." He turned as the man spoke. Takeo noticed him standing now, one hand covering his injured shoulder in attempt to staunch some of the blood. Before he could reply, Takeo froze, suddenly noticing the presence of others, just before he heard a breath of air directly behind him. Before he could turn, he felt a sharp sting on his arm, and immediately felt woozy. Damn it... he thought hazily as he dropped to his knees. Well, if he was going to be captured, there was still one thing he could do; prevent them from gaining intel. Using the tecnique that all Bushin were taught in cases such as this, he would be able to do just that. Just as he felt himself about the black out, he activated the Bushin Mind Alteration. Hopefully, someone found him before the three days were up. But if not, there was nothing he could do. Almost immediately, he felt an intense migrain, and then everything went black.
Jutsu/Moves Used ||
Iaidō
Turning Swallow Cut
Bushin Mind Alteration
{{Dear god, I didn't intend for it to be that long. o_o Once again, I sincerely apologize for the length. sweatdrop If I need to incorprate more of the clans moves/jutsu, then I'll gladly do so. ^^ }}
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:57 pm
@Hybrixx: This might come as a bit of an inconvience and I apologize but after seeing this application, a few crew members reread throught the bloodline so it's currently under discussion. The clan may or may not be removed. If there's any problems/concerns/questions, just feel free to pm me and we can discuss it through that. Thanks and sry again for the unexpectedness of it all.
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