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Haru Mania
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O.G. Codger

PostPosted: Fri Apr 08, 2005 1:19 am


Saiko Koneko
gahhhh...must work on legs....dammit ><...and the cat boots looked so good.....i made them all one lined all nice and neat....*sigh* dammit......must deal with this
It's cool if you have to start over :3 I've wasted many good sheets of paper b/c I was unhappy with the way something was turning out x3

Just start on a fresh new paper and it'll be alot easier than trying to fix something :3
PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:52 am


mmmm smell the arty goodness.... it's like... reems and reems of fresh paper stacked ontop of one another for as far as teh eye can see!

Jon-OH
Captain


Neko Neko Usagi

PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 9:14 pm


Saiko Koneko Phase 3

okay here's the improved version but not final of course.
The legs don't look as great...

and i wrote some questions that i need help with on the drawing

thanks for your criticism, Haru!
PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 1:11 am


ummm i know my advice isn't nearly as credible, but as for the arm... i think it's too straight, and the elbow is too low... Try poking it out a bit more to the side, and raising the elbow up a bit, maybe?

Marisynos


Banshi

PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 12:56 pm


It's progressing along nicely. ^_^
I can't wait for color!
PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:13 pm


Saradiel
ummm i know my advice isn't nearly as credible, but as for the arm... i think it's too straight, and the elbow is too low... Try poking it out a bit more to the side, and raising the elbow up a bit, maybe?


I agree. Also, make the boobs bigger. 3nodding

Phil Srobeighn


Banshi

PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:33 pm


Phil Srobeighn
I agree. Also, make the boobs bigger. 3nodding
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 10:31 am


Banshi
Phil Srobeighn
I agree. Also, make the boobs bigger. 3nodding
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3nodding

Looking over this... the breasts still seem a bit off with how the midsection is positioned... maybe try making them a bit smaller and put a bit of a slope to them? Not much but just enough to get the natural flow of the breasts, because how they are makes them look as if they were almost floating or something. o.O;

If you tilt the angle of the catglove on the arm you're trying to fix back a bit and put a crease in the elbow a bit more, it'll give your picture a bit of depth. :3 Lemme try and make a small reference picture because I suck with teaching people who to do stuff. ^_^;;;

Haru Mania
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Haru Mania
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 10:49 am


PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 7:59 am


Haru Mania
Looking over this... the breasts still seem a bit off with how the midsection is positioned... maybe try making them much larger and put a bit of a slope to them? Not much but just enough to get the natural flow of the breasts, because how they are makes them look as if they were almost floating or something. o.O;


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Phil Srobeighn


Phil Srobeighn

PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 8:04 am




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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 11:15 am


Wait, what? gonk ?

Haru Mania
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Haru Mania
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 11:18 am


Phil Srobeighn
Haru Mania
Wrong URL


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PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 1:55 pm


Haru Mania
Phil Srobeighn
Haru Mania
Wrong URL


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Looks like the MSU department of Cover-Ups is getting kicked around a bit.

Marisynos


Archmage

PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 1:28 am


Haru Mania
Looking over this... the breasts still seem a bit off with how the midsection is positioned... maybe try making them a bit smaller and put a bit of a slope to them? Not much but just enough to get the natural flow of the breasts, because how they are makes them look as if they were almost floating or something. o.O;


cool Mmmm... the natural flow of the breasts.

...

eek Wait, umm...

...

*points* PHIL DID IT!!!

*runs from the room*
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