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 Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:09 pm
(I'm changing Jon's age to 19. 17 is to young for a warrior)
Jon saw the carriage stop and pulled his mount to a halt. He dismounted and pulled out his sword. With silent movements, he made his way to the cave and peered in through the entrance. "Only 3," he muttered. "what up," he said as he walked right into the cave. His eyes were fearless as he held his sword up. "What are you doing with the princess. It's not wise."
"I will come back for you." Renon's voice as courageous.
Kensho stepped forward. "I shall take her. You must get going before the sun rises completely," said the fox. He held out his arms.
Renon looked at Katriana bfore slipping her arm off his neck. "He kissed her tenderly on the lips before setting her gently in the priest's arms. He felt weird to see her in someone else's arms. "Good bye my love. take care of her Kensho." Renon glanced once more at his beloved before mounting up and disappearing into the night.
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:49 pm
Katriana smiled back at him. "Go well." She waved weakly before curling cup because of it being slightly cold. She felt a bit strange in someone else's arms, but she wasn't strong enough to wall yet.
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:56 pm
Kensho wrapped his tails around Katriana before walking inside. "I hope everything will be to your satisfaction," he said, setting her down on one of the five beds in the room. He pulled the blanket over her and smiled. "Good night." He disappeared into the door way.
The horses' hooves thundered along the path. Renon's horse was in the lead. He watched as the palace came into view.
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:02 pm
((i confused too i thought was rescued ... we'll all laugh about this later... we will wont we?))
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:05 pm
(I AM SO CONFUSED!!!! 1coolchic2 you're still in the cave!!!! Jon has come to rescue you! Get your story straight please!!! stare ))
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:10 pm
i'm confused as well o.o)) Katriana nodded falling asleep soon after being set down.
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:11 pm
((I hate to sound mean but she really needs to pay attention to what she puts. Her character seems to almost be jumping from place to place))
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:15 pm
1coolchic2 ((i confused too i thought was rescued ... we'll all laugh about this later... we will wont we?)) ((i'm laughing already. 4laugh no sweat. Jon is there, but you have NOT been rescued. I'll do the rescue right now, ok?))
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:17 pm
Jon slashed all three men down. He stuck his sword right through the leader's heart, leaving the other evil men injured. He walked over to Mara, his black hair falling in front of his face. He took his sword and cut the shackles, catching her body in his arms. "Princess, are you ok," he asked.
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:43 pm
"Yeah i think so." She said bleeding and bruised from the beating in the carriage. "Thank you." She said with honest and opened eyes "And dont call me that just Mara." She smiled behind her bleeding mouth
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:53 pm
^-^ but she doesn't seeeither her mother or father XD lol Jon must have told her))
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:26 pm
"Ok Mara." Jon smiled as he lifted her up. "I'll take you to your mother." He mounted up smoothly, Mara in his arms. "Don't worry. You're in good hands now." He urged his horse forward, holding her gently in his arms.
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:34 pm
Mara felt safe in Jon's arms almost warm. She held onto her breath, trying not to go out cold. Some of her dripped onto the horses mane dyeing it blood red in colour. Her sholder, chest, cheek and arm were bleeding, the rest of here body brusied. She slipped into the black for a while and awoke in her bed, coved in bandages. "Wa-where am I?"
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:39 pm
"I told you to stay clear." Renon's voice was harsh as he spoke to Jon. But Jon kept his ground. "Sir, where was I supposed to take her?! She was injured and the Day Kingdom was so far!" Renon looked at Jon. "I want her with her mother as soon as possible." With that said, Renon strode off. Jon ran a finger through his hair before walking into Mara's room. "You're back in the castle," he said, trying his best to smile.
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:50 pm
Mara saw the bandages on her hands "I can't of been that badly hurt surely." She had no memory of the accident only the horse ride back.
((soz for the 1 liner but i got to go
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