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 Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 4:59 pm
*Does as told*
Nice, FS. I look forward to another great story from you.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 7:03 pm
It's sometimes hard to follow with my character, James Tyler. He's either "James" or "Tyler" in here.
He's in the first and second chapter, but where is he it the rest of it?
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 12:27 am
Oh hell yes. I'm the cook. How could this possibly get any better? The personality again fits quite well, and the position as cook works with one of my favourite past-times that has led to a good cooking ability; eating. Great story FS, as was to be expected.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:58 am
ninja
Koosei hates meeee xd
She's gonna deck my lordly self =(
Pity my guy is such a b*****d.
Watch, he'll be stupid too and loud.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:05 am
Hero Maul It's sometimes hard to follow with my character, James Tyler. He's either "James" or "Tyler" in here. He's in the first and second chapter, but where is he it the rest of it? A few things: -You're not the main character, there is no main character. -You had the entire first chapter to yourself. -You will obviously appear again, but at the moment I'm trying to develop everyone elses characters first. -You have no links with cats (just in case ninja )
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:07 am
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] ninja
Koosei hates meeee xd
She's gonna deck my lordly self =(
Pity my guy is such a b*****d.
Watch, he'll be stupid too and loud. Everyone loves a b*****d. When people look back on the story who do think they'll remember first? Drakam: the b*****d xd 3nodding As for being loud and stupid, the best/worst is yet to come.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:08 am
oh oh Awesome story by the way xd
~forgot to add that a minute ago~
I'm enjoying it and Draken DEMANDS MOAR scream xd
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:09 am
Allwing Oh hell yes. I'm the cook. How could this possibly get any better? The personality again fits quite well, and the position as cook works with one of my favourite past-times that has led to a good cooking ability; eating. Great story FS, as was to be expected. I figured you'd make a good cook, you always reminded me of Sanji from One Piece. You haven't had much page time so far, but you'll have your moments like everyone else (well, if I write it properly anyways xd )
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:12 am
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] oh oh Awesome story by the way xd
~forgot to add that a minute ago~
I'm enjoying it and Draken DEMANDS MOAR scream xd MOAR on the way. I'm glad you're enjoying it, because I'm enjoying writing it. The best thing is that this isn't an open ended story like Amicitia, this story will end one day and will form a complete piece.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 2:29 am
ForsakenSwordsman MOAR on the way. I'm glad you're enjoying it, because I'm enjoying writing it. The best thing is that this isn't an open ended story like Amicitia, this story will end one day and will form a complete piece.
I actually liked Amicitia I'm kinda sad it died.
but this makes up for it ^^
I like my character =)
Oh by the way I'm currently making the Flag for the TWG role that you created =P
The Fear Monger.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:42 am
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] ForsakenSwordsman MOAR on the way. I'm glad you're enjoying it, because I'm enjoying writing it. The best thing is that this isn't an open ended story like Amicitia, this story will end one day and will form a complete piece.
I actually liked Amicitia I'm kinda sad it died.
but this makes up for it ^^
I like my character =)
Oh by the way I'm currently making the Flag for the TWG role that you created =P
The Fear Monger.
Cool, you're doing some good work with those banners. I actually helped create a few other roles too, but I forget which ones off the top of my head (Fear Monger is probably my favourite name however.)
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:57 am
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] ninja
Koosei hates meeee xd
She's gonna deck my lordly self =(
Pity my guy is such a b*****d.
Watch, he'll be stupid too and loud. damn right!! damn egotistic sexist male. stare rofl awesome chapters though, FS. surprised someone tried to poison me!! gonk scream we must hunt them down!!!!
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:25 am
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:32 am
Hero Maul It's sometimes hard to follow with my character, James Tyler. He's either "James" or "Tyler" in here. He's in the first and second chapter, but where is he it the rest of it? ForsakenSwordsman -You're not the main character, there is no main character. I never said James was. Only, he was like one. ForsakenSwordsman -You had the entire first chapter to yourself. So true. ForsakenSwordsman -You will obviously appear again, but at the moment I'm trying to develop everyone elses characters first. OH. sweatdrop ForsakenSwordsman -You have no links with cats (just in case ninja ) Dun Dun DUN!!!
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 1:33 pm
D: I'll get you back for that, Skitty Christina! scream
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