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 Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 6:15 pm
Hmmm... normally more people comment than this. sad
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 6:16 pm
Masamune 5.0 Seaphron Nice chapter I liked it. Quote: It would be unwise to leave while Meta_Ducky was still in combat with the Azure Knight. Thanks for the catch. .
No problem.
Who knows my story was dead for awhile as well.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 6:17 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:12 pm
Chapter Seven is now up. Please comment and enjoy. Tell me what you liked about the chapter, what you disliked, etc.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:03 pm
Nice chapter Masamune. Decent length, good fights, and a nice bit of depression, keep up the great work wink
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:04 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:22 pm
That was a great chapter.
Really long.
And great battle.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:24 pm
great chapter Masamune It is a good length, I love brutality in stories and the fight scenes are great great job masamune
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:40 pm
Very nice chapter.
A long one, too. Nice job on the battles.
Good job.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:58 pm
No one's commented on the fact that all of the things that the characters from Soul Calibur 2 say is taken word-for-word from the game.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:59 pm
Masamune 5.0 No one's commented on the fact that all of the things that the characters from Soul Calibur 2 say is taken word-for-word from the game. I KNEW IT! I was trying to figure that out re reading parts of the chapter.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 5:59 pm
Masamune 5.0 No one's commented on the fact that all of the things that the characters from Soul Calibur 2 say is taken word-for-word from the game. well I thought that was a little awesome and a little funny
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 6:00 pm
Masamune 5.0 No one's commented on the fact that all of the things that the characters from Soul Calibur 2 say is taken word-for-word from the game. I think I actually noticed that. Good chapter, very fightingish. Fight... fightingish... Reminded me I need to work on my story sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 6:02 pm
Yeah, I actually went to the profile section and wrote down a bunch of things the characters say from the voice section.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 6:12 pm
Masamune 5.0 No one's commented on the fact that all of the things that the characters from Soul Calibur 2 say is taken word-for-word from the game. Oh. I thought that was pretty obvious... Anyway, nice chapter. Decent fights. By the way, Killer Betman=PWN
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