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 Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 7:39 pm
Gaia Name: Moose85
Character Name: Dantar Crom (Crom for short, or Dant, either is acceptable to him)
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Race: Human (p.s. I''m willing to go Twi''Lek if it would help the guild differentiate)
Character Description: Dantar Crom is a tall, white male human with brown, wavy hair that stops shortly above his eyebrows and hazelnut-green eyes. He isn''t weak, but not exceedingly muscular either, and weighs 170 pounds. He wears a plain, dirtied white shirt with a brown jacket over it, and blue pants tucked into black boots. His utility belt is simple and brown, and his blaster is concealed on the inside pocket of his jacket.
Home Planet: Corusant
Starting Planet: Tatooine, after his ship was destroyed on a smuggling run. He only just escaped.
Relations: Crom''s sister lives on Corellia
Character History: Crom grew up in the middle-class section of Corusant with his mother, father, and younger sister. He went to a public school until he was 9, when his father, who worked for the Galactic Bank''s local branch in his area, was killed in a raid - there was nothing left of him save his I.D. The family was devastated. In order to support his mother and sister, Crom had to quit school to work for a restaraunt. However, upon returning home one day, he found his sister sobbing by a broken window facing the abyss below. Crom, 13 at the time, understood immediatley. His mother had jumped out the window in sorrow over her dead husband. The boy vowed to avenge his mother and father, to find those bandits that had killed his father and drove his mother to suicide. His sister went to live on Corellia with their Aunt, while Crom set off on his journey to get revenge on the bandits. Ever since he has been a crew member on a smuggling ship called The Dwarf Nuna, up until recently, when he struck out on his own...
Alignment: Neutral. Smugglers susually prefer to stay neutral in such things as politcis, though some like Han Solo were, well, pushed into helping the Rebels.
Occupation: Smuggler
Skills: Piloting, using pistols and making smuggling runs
Weapons: Blasters, and fist-fighting when it comes to close-quarters
Ship: Dantar has just escaped the destruction of his ship - he will be working or getting a loan to buy another
Personal Belongings: His Father''s I.D., his blaster, a holo-recording of his family, his equipment, smuggled goods and a few credits in his bag.
Roleplay Sample: Damnit! Crom thought, as he fired the primary laser cannons of his Z-95 Headhunter class starship. They''d come out of nowhere. Two TIE fighters had appeared from behind an asteroid as he''d entered the Tatooine system, carrying smuggled cargo. Dantar had had to pull into a twisting roll to turn and face the TIEs while simultaneously dodging their fire. His rear shields had taken a major hit, and his control panel was flashing red. C''mon, Crom, think, you''ve been in way worse situations than this! the smuggler thought to himself as he fired again. He had to either blow these guys to bantha poodo or shake them - the first seemed more likely to happen. These guys have no shields - should be easy to pick ''em off... He fired his wing mounted laser cannons, and the TIEs scattered. Crom pulled into a dive, and came up around one. Got ya! Two streaks of red light shot out and pierced the back of the TIE, engulfing it in a spectacular explosion. "Yeeeeha!" Crom shouted.
His celebration was short-lived, though - the other TIE had positioned itself behind him, and fired. His rear shields did not hold, and his engine whined. Damn! My engines are shot! Crom realized, hastily flipping switches on his control panel to answer the flashing red that had once again taken over the screen. The TIE was coming around, now directly facing him. I didn''t want to have to use this, but with my engines blown.... Desperately, the smuggler turned on his targeting computer. Only one shot.... Punching a few commands into the computer, he armed his one and only proton torpedo, the one he had saved for dire situations like these. "Almost got him...almost....NOW!" Dant pressed the button on his joystick. The torpedo launched, and, to Crom''s relief, headed straight for the TIE. The fighter realized too late what had happened, and tried to pull into a roll to shake it. However, the proton collided directly with it''s left wing, blowing a large gap into its hull, and sending it directly into the path of a rather large asteroid. "Take that!" Dantar cheered, watching the Imperial fighter explode against the surface of the asteroid. But something was wrong - his control panel was going haywire! Crom nervously checked the controls, and to his horror, discovered that has was trapped in the gravitational field of Tatooine, stranded. All of a sudden, the computer went off. This can''t be good...
Ok, not too shabby at all. Though I want to make a few suggestions. I like the character. But you need to work on your spelling in a few places. But more importantly in your roleplay sample you need to break it up with paragraph spacings, in the LEAST. It would be even better if you colored your dialogue font differently, to help tell in that regard.
That being said, it was a good application, and we definitely need smugglers to help liven the roleplay. Welcome. You''re Accepted!~~~~Merissa
Heh, I apologize for the spelling - I type rather fast occasionally, which accounts for most of the spelling mistakes. Also, I read your suggestions on the colored dialogue after I posted, sorry I didn't add it in sweatdrop but don't worry, I will in future. I'm glad to hear you liked my character biggrin I love smuggler characters, they just have so much more depth to them and backstory then Jedi do. And aren't you glad I didn't say "Dark Jediiii Mastur with wings and fire breath" for my occupation? The amount of Jedi here is...rather scary.
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Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2005 8:27 pm
Gaia Name: The Rune Lifter
Character Name: Ryari Slpho
Gender: Male
Age: 28 standard years
Race: Chiss
Character Description: Like all Chiss his skin carries a blue tint, though the color depth varries, his is a dark blue. His long black hair contrasts with his deep red eyes. These are the major differences between him and any other human. He wears a red-brown cloak over a black and white Kel-Dor tunic.
He seems cold and vile at first but can be very friendly once you spend some time with him. Like other Chiss he can be extremely loyal till death and holds his friends in high regard. He is quiet but isn't afraid to speak up if neccessary. He tries not make assumptions about people he doesn't know, but he also doesn't trust those people. He has been known to deal with both smugglers and the military, crime lords and diplomats. Though he does not express himself fully and he keeps his past to himself, he can be a great friend, business partner, or just employee.
Home Planet: Csillis (in Chiss cluster)
Starting Planet: Kessel
Relations: He knows little of his real parents, but is fond of his Kel-Dor foster father. Though it was bizarre for a Chiss to live in a Kel-Dor residence on a Kel-Dor planet; he considers it a home.
Character History: As an outcast among his people he travels the galaxy doing whatever can keep him busy. He ended up in the home of Var Sjun a few months after birth. His foster father could not tell him much about his biological parents except that they gave him up regretfully to keep him safe. Var Sjun was a delegate for a great council that oversaw the peace and prosperity of the Kel-Dor people. Ryari learned a great deal of politics from his father, but once he left Kel-Dor he became more interested in seeing every planet he saw among the stars at night. The rest of his history is filled with smuggling, bounty hunters, diplomats, the government, and his place of birth, Csillis. Between periodic visits to Kel-Dor he often visited the Chiss capital of Csillis. He is now helping a Chiss counciler retreive certain data.
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Taken many occupations such as smuggler, bounty hunter, bodyguard, diplomatic mercenary, and hired pilot.
Skills: Expert of a form of Chiss hand to hand combat called Ti' krul. Expert gunslinger. Works hard to improve his mechanical skills.
Weapons: Customized heavy pistol, Trandoshan ritual blade, vibro-pike, light Zion class armor, and an assortment of very small compact weapons (palm dart shooter, proximity bug-mines,etc.).
Ship: A small personal cruiser by the name of Sacrifice. Outfitted with secret compartments and hidden weapons.
Personal Belongings: A medallion that was his father's old locater. It sends off a beacon when the Chiss are requesting someone to return to Csillis.
Roleplay Sample: *Ryari stood on the balcony with his back facing Grand Shiev. The elder counciler had called him up to discuss what Shiev called very important matters. There was a long pause after Ryari had told Grand Shiev that he would not finish his studies on Csillis. Ryari stood patiently and waited for an answer.*
Grand Shiev replied, "Everyone who knows you realizes you are different and some people may not like it, but that does not mean we will turn you aside as an outcast. You know as well as I do that your peers will not look down on you, but please reconsider your decision.
Ryari spoke with his back still facing Grand Shiev, "I just need to get away and find out what the rest of the galaxy is like...Even if I'm not being shunned by anyone I still feel that I don't fit in. Let me just go out and wander around, and then when I have enough I'll come back. I'll still come back if the beacon is set off, and I'll still respond to any jobs the council might have for me. I just... have so much swirling in my head right now, I think that if I go out and take a break from the world then maybe I'll settle down."
Grand Shiev came closer and put his hand on Ryari's shoulder, "You're so much like your father...I couldn't keep him in one place...even when his life depended on it. Though I doubt General Falm will take kindly to your absence at the end of certification," he laughed, "but I will try to convince him to let you finish later." Ryari let out a small laugh, "We Chiss don't fight, why do we even have a military?"
Grand Shiev laughed again, "Of all people you are the one who should know self defense best," another silence as he patted Ryari's shoulder, "come let's have a quick supper before I have to go."
*With that, Ryari followed Grand Shiev back inside the tower room.*
Ok, a pretty good application. though i noticed a slight tendency toward combat, it will be interesting outside of combat to see what your character does and where you take him. Congratulations. You're Accepted!~~~~Merissa
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 4:15 pm
Gaia Name: .Mooneth.
Character Name: Dailia
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Race: Talarian
Character Description: Dailia is entirely blue, save her eyes (which are extremely large), lips, and nails, which are silver. Her hair is curly and falls down to mid-back. She has small ears that are usually hidden in her hair, that are catlike. Her teeth are naturally sharper then most. She is around 5'3" tall and weighs 111lbs. She also has a small, blue tail.
Home Planet: Talaria
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: She is in love with Banji (not in this forum)
Character History: She was trained as a Jedi after she was discovered, an infant orphan due to a war on Talaria. She is secretly in love with Banji, which pulls her away from the Jedi and closer to becoming utterly unpredictable. Which, in her case, is not a good thing.
Alignment: She fights for the Republic, but she isn't sure if that is the right thing.
Occupation: She is a Jedi
Skills: She is adapt at healing due to her parentage, but also enjoys mechanics and fixing things. She also is a linguist and enjoys translating things into semi-forgotten languages for not apparent reason.
Weapons: A blue lightsaber.
Ship: She borrows random ones from unsuspecting travelers because it is, as she puts it, "Logical becauuuse if I haddd a ship thennn it woulllld nevvver be where I wannnnt it."
Personal Belongings: A necklace that was around her neck when the Jedi found her. . .it has a purple stone inset into the center of an unidentified flower (silver).
Roleplay Sample: (Note, this is from an rp that takes place after Anakin destroys the Temple)
Dailia sat slumped over at the bar, a drink in her hand. She hadn't really been drinking it....she didn't think. Then again, she could've been totally sloshed by now..she had lost track awhile ago. She looked up from her arm, which she had been using as a makeshift pillow. She noted her skin, a grey blue, and her hair in front of her face, a limp bunch of blue curls, and her torn black cloak. Her silver nails were bitten down and she could see, from the reflection of another drink, her silver lips were chapped and her large silver eyes were listless.
She leaned back, nearly falling off her chair, and gave the sign for "no more". She regretted it for a moment before she did fall on the floor, and then she simply cringed and sat there. She felt her ears twitch...her cat-like ears, which were hidden by her hair. Of coarse, they were covered in long blue hair as well, so it wasn't difficult.
She thought for a moment before remembering what had happened. She had become depressed again...and done something...oh yes! She had started drinking! But why was she depressed....she moved slightly, bringing her attention to the object underneather her...her lightsaber. Her face showed vague surprise, a great accomplishment for one who had downed as many Coruscant Sliders as she. She had been at the Temple..and then fire....and Anakin.
"Whoops..." she muttered. All of the Jedi had been killed...well most...she had survived because she had been chasing thugs...and then she went back...and a big smoke...and then she had left the planet...and come back to find her friends...and then she had found them dead and fled to the underbelly. And now she was on the floor of a dingy cantina....about ready to empty her stomach of its contents...as vulgar as they were. The Gods thankfully decided that the 'fresher didn't deserve such torture and her stomach settled....for the moment.
Ok! your character looks pretty good, though if you want to be in love with someone keep their appearances in the roleplay to a minimum. Good roleplay sample, and good character. you're an initiate. Accepted!~~~~Merissa
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 10:47 am
Gaia Name: Shining Tidus
Character Name: Hazar Star
Gender: male
Age: 23
Race: Human
Character Description: His hair is dark with his hair spiking up with red highlights, his right eye is the color brown and the other side is blue, his build is good but still skinny, and has a pretty boy look.
Home Planet: Datooine
Starting Planet: Dantooine
Relations: his foster dad which is a jedi master
Character History: As a child he was raised as a farm boy, his mother and father was killed by kath hounds, even though his father was a jedi outcast he could not fight off 20 kath hounds. He watched from far away as his mother and father were being bitten to death when he was just 5 years old. He was terrified that day of kath hounds and never went near one after seeing his mon and dad killed.
he was sold to and was made a slave since he could not make a living as he was only a child. A jedi saw him work day and day and couldnt let him work like this so he bought the kid and raised him as his own son. He would train him in the ways of a jedi and teach him not to fall to the dark side. As he grew older he helped kids with out parents as best he could. He knew that his parents would be proud of him if they were still alive so he did good deeds around the planet.
Alignment: Republic/light side
Occupation: Jedi
Skills: He is skilled at any kind of lightsaber and lightsaber dueling. He has supurbe healing skills and he is strong in the force.
Weapons: A collection of blue and green lightsabers[some purple] that he has built with his foster dad
Ship Your character's starship:A jedi starfighter
Personal Belongings: He owns 2 battle droids, an astromech droid, a chest were he keeps his lightsabers, and his mothers locket.
Roleplay Sample: It is a beutiful day on Dantooine as i walked on the plains of Dantooine I wondered "what ever happened to the jedi's on Dantooine". As i ponderd i saw a temple but went closer and saw it was an enclave of some sort.
I walked into the enclave deeper and saw that their was a battle of some sort here with corpses of people. I stumbled onto a corpse and triped. something rolled over to me and i was scared wondering and hoping it wasn't the head of the corpse
. I turned around and saw a lightsaber, wondering if it still worked. I ignited it and it was the color blue. I checked more of the corpses to see if there were lightsaber on them. To my surprise every corpse had a lightsaber. Some were blue, green, yellow, orange,etc. Then to my amazment there was a red. I thought to myself "my father has told me of there being sith with red lightsabers.
I was thinking maybe there was a battle here where the jedi and sith did battle. I went to a room and found a holocron were the jedi and sith battled each other feroucisly. I found a holocron hidden away and saw that it was the history of the jedi masters here. Their names were kavar, Atris, then the portion of the holocron was batered. I walked out of ther with the lightsabers in my bag.
Gradually getting better, but it still isn't up to par. Still lots of uncapitalised letters that really should be capitalised. Also, RP is so much better if you don't use "I"'s unless it's in speech. Spelling is still pretty bad too, and there is still something a bit off about your RP sample. Keep trying, you're getting there! ~ Sephi
The thing that's off about your roleplay sample is that it's BAD. There is not enough detail. It's like reading a bad history book. "This was done, this was done, this was done, this was done. "
Look at the structure of some of the other roleplay samples, they include thought,s physical descriptions, and much better defined actions. Do it again but do it better. ~~~~Merissa
you could be a bit more positve than negative all the time Merissa.
The only positive thing i see is that you're improving. Otherwise there ISN'T anything positive to remark on. And I saw no need to reiterate sephi's comment about you improving. ~~~~ Merissa
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 1:13 pm
Gaia Name: lilbratassassin
Character Name: Malgo Gen
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Race: human
Character Description: A man not only known for his killings, he was very well known for his battle scar which was a parting gift from a former fellow Jedi which cost him his eye. He stands 5'7 and has a great build and wears a glossy dark black and blue helmet which, covers his head and reveals his eyes. His helmet was battle damaged which shattered the visor on his helmet and reveals the his lost right eye. His armour above his ineer spandex matches with his helmet.
Home Planet: Tatooine
Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: None
Character History He stands as a fallen Jedi decieved by all. He was raised by his parents until the Sith terrorized Tatooine looking for a certain Jedi. Malgo had sworn to avenge his parent's death. Therefore he joined the Jedi and became a great Jedi Knight.
He eventually did avenge his parents death, but after he had slaughtered the Dark Jedi. He disappeared not to be seen as a Jedi any longer. Legend says that he was corrupted just as the many other great Jedi Knights. But Malgo's true reason was to become a Bounty Hunter. He figured he loved the taste of blood, and since the Jedi code spoke of trying to persuade the enemy into not fighting, but communication, he figured the only way to kill properly was to be a Bounty Hunter.
He wanted no power whatsoever. He just wanted bloodshed. Many people now call him a animal, for that is truly what he is. A fellow Jedi had discovered Malgo's secret and also sought revenge. He gave his former Jedi Apprentice a nasty scar that he would never forget. His right eye was gone, and his former Master would be too. He swore on his life that he would destroy the one who gave him the nasty scar.
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation Dark Bounty Hunter
Skills: Piloting, Killing
Weapons: A Dark Blaster
Ship Broken down Jedi Starfighter
Personal Belongings: Battle Damaged Helmet
Roleplay Sample
((This comes from the first application I sent in.))
As the wind blew his cloak fluttered while he stood near the landing platform in Tatooine. His Master whould arrive shortly and Aezon had very astonishing news. Darth Melex had been captured. The Jedi plan on interrogating the Sith Lord of his new intentions. Aezon spotted his ship the Frozen Falcon coming into Coruscant and landing on an unfamiliar landing strip. To his surprise his Master was not the first being to exit the mighty ship. But a Sith followed by his Master.
"Master what is the meaning of this?" Aezon had shouted.
Through his training his Master always lectured him on turning to the Dark Side and how it could corrupt you. But Aezon had never expected that his own Master, would turn to the Dark Side. "My apprentice," whispered Master Devon "Join me, Join the Dark Side. I have seen the truth. The Republic is a lie, they want power to themselves they are the enemy!" Master Devon had ignited his lightsaber and threatened to kill Aezon."Forgive me my Master. For I am a servant of the light, as you once were. I will never serve a Sith Lord. My Master there is still good in you, you can turn back now and leave the Dark Side!." Aezon had not ignited his lightsaber knowing that his Master had not fully turned to the Dark Side.
"Then you shall die!" Master Devon was no more. He was now a Sith, he was now Darth Devon. Darth Devon charged at Aezon with his lightsaber and engaged in battle. "Then your fate is set." Aezon muttered as he igniteed his lightsaber and clashed with his former master.
'proved
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2005 6:48 am
[[ Edited ]] Gaia Name: Comm Character Name: Cain Dravien Gender: Male Age: 24 Race: Human Character Description: Cain is about 6"2 and is Well built. He wears a dark robes with black mandalorian armour underneath  (Fullsize Pic) Home Planet: Talus Starting Planet: Coruscant Relations: Cain was raised by his father - His mother died at Childbirth Character History Cain was raised on the planet of Talus. His father was a Mechanic, His mother died at child birth So his father ahd to raise his son alone. Cain's father taught him many skills inculding piloting and mechanics. Cain often helped his father and gained alot of experience in the fields. At the age of 11 a Jedi Master was having repairs on his Fighter when he sensed Cain was force sensitive. The Master took Cain to the Jedi order and accepted him into the Order. After Cain's Jedi Knight trials he began to grow annoyed with the orders lack of action and how they were adamant to Do nothing when problems arised. Cain left the order -Much to the councils disgust. The Jedi confiscated His Lightsaber as when he left but did not strip him of his Force connection. Cain now roams the Galaxy as a Lone force User - He fights for what he see's as right and not what The Jedi taught him to do. (Not very exciting , But oh well - Not all of us can be raised by Dark lords etc eh whee ) Alignment: Self Occupation: Lone Force User Skills: - Cain is an expert combat fighter, He is trained in Teras-kasi martial arts and is highly skilled. - Cain is also a skilled Lightsaber Duellist, He embraces the use of Dual lightsabers in combat and is very efficent user of this abilty Weapons: Cain carries two Yellow Bladed Lightsabers Ship : The Sentinel - A Small modified Runabout Cruiser. Cain fitted the Ship with weapons, Shields and a hyperdrive generator. The Ship is capable of carrying upto 6-10 people Personal Belongings: Cain's only Belongings other then his Lightsaber , Are hisi Robes and His Black mandalorian armour And his Ship. The armour was given to him by a Scrap shop owner Cain saved from mercenaries on Rhen var. Roleplay Sample This is taken from a Jedi RP I'm in - Hope it'll do.. The man left the padawans quarters. Cain slung the blanket off and approached the door, he poked his head round - The corridor was clear. "Hmmm" He thought to himself "Where the hell is everyone.." Cain suddenly saw smoke coming down the corridors "Damn.. Fire" Cain ran out and ran the otherway, He gripped his blaster tightly as he ran down the corridors, His legs began to tire but the smoke was nearly catching up with him Cain sprinted faster but to no avail - the smoke overlapped him. He cudnt see a thing. Cain stopped. He rememebr what his master had taught him .. Calm down.. Reach out with the force . It will guide you Cain closed his eyes and reached his hand out, he sensed everything around him. He worked out their shapes and worked out a clear path he began to slowly walk forwards... Suddenly in the smoke he saw two red lightsabers clash. the sparks fizzed past him. the two Force users were shouting incanities at eachohter, One male and one female. Cain jumped back.. He recognised the vocie. they were the two sith he had seen earlier "Dammit" he thought to himself... He edged backwards towards the wall Cain pulled his jacket up over his mouth so he didnt choke. he turned and as silently as he could he left the room. The smoke began to clear as he climbed some stairs and across a raised walkway. some soldiers lay dead on the floor with lightsaber burns across there chests. There wasa Jedi lying on the floor dead.. His lightsaber lay by his side. Cain looked around then at the floor nervously He knew he wasnt supposed to have a lightsaber.. But he was only going to "Borrow" it He thought to himself. He shrugged his shoulders and grabbed the lightsaber. It was alot heavier then he thought it would be. But still light and agile. He clipped it to his belt and headed along the walkway. There was an exit up above 'proved, but you'll have to wait until knighthood before wielding dual sabers, you'll start as initiateI have changed the Application , Please can you Re-read and tell me if this is Acceptable
I looked and no it's not. You can't be a "lone force user" the mods all got togethor (the supreme mods ^_^ Xiao, Sephi, and Mr. Maniac) and said people can't just be lone jedi running around. You changed it just so you wouldn't have to start out as an initiate. You have to start out on the bottom rung like everyone else. Also, you can't have mandalorian armor. They died out THOUSANDS of years ago. Their armor is VERY rare. only 2 current time incidents of people having them. Sorry you need to fix it.~~~~ Merissa
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Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 11:46 am
Gaia Name: Danny H
Character Name: Bane
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Race: Human
Character Description: Danny is tall and well muslced he had a black cloak on and sometimes wears his hoodie he is lighted skinned and has blue eyes. His hair is slicked back and he has a long scar on the left side of his cheek. He wears black boots and a black suit under his cloak.
Home Planet: Coursant
Starting Planet: Coursant
Relations: none
Character History Danny was born and raised on the planet NarShadaa his mother a house wife and his father a normal carpenter. He never was aloud to go outside after his schooling wich would only fuel his growing hatred. One day while looking outside of his window he had saw a weird dressed man walking down the streets, A jedi he did not know why he was dressed that way or why he had some metal thing on his waist. He then saw another man walking down the street a sith. He then saw them start fighting and he was inttriuged and watched on until the jedi cut the sith in half.
He would never forget what he saw that day. Once he was 16 he had learned even more about the jedi and sith. He vowed to himself once he was old enough he would hitch a ride to the planet coursant and train there to become one of the greates sith lords ever. At the age of 18 he walked across a dead jedi his lightsaber still incontanct and working great he stole it and everynight he would use it to train slashing it at the trees or even sometimes at the air. Finally his lucky day came a sith lord watching on unsuspectingly he was attacked by a crew of gangsters, he then grabbed his lightsaber and killed them all. The sith lord noticed the hatred in him and recruited him into the academy.
Alignment: Good/Jedi
Occupation Training to become a padawan
Skills: Fast and equally strong.
Weapons: Blaster gun.
Ship None.
Personal Belongings: None.
Roleplay Sample
Macst took the elevator down to the dock cantina, To meet her old master, and find out why he wanted to see her again. Those words of the Sith who she had met on Coruscant, burned and etched into her mind. She hoped she wouldn't have to face him in battle, but the time she knew would evidentially come soon. She had her baggy hood coverng her face as she walked through the crime ridden areas of her homeworld. So many memories flooded back to her as she stood in front of that old fateful cantina; Where she had first discovered her very first force power. But once the council had explained that it was a Dark jedi power, she had sworn it off forever; Or atleast she had tried.
"Ah, My old padawan, you have grown so - Well. Into the perfect form of a knight; Bt we all have flaws." Her master said, slumping out from behind the old dursteel bonded cantina door.
"I am here old master, as I was informed you wished to meet me here." She pulled her hood tigher over her face, just incase someone had recognized her.
"Yes, about that, Come sit, I have felt sstrange disturbances within the force, and I thought it best to tell you in person." His friendly smile slightly faded into reluctance.
"Yes, master, I have also felt strange for some time period now .. Do you understand what it is that is wrong?" She questioned.
"My great old padawan, There is trouble for you in the nearby future, it involves the dark side of the sith. It pains me so." He stated.
"Strange ... " She decided to keep the secret of the jedi she had met in her mind, she hid it deeply, afraid that her master could find her surface thoughts.
"Yes, I warn you, whatever to come, be prepared. For if you do not stay prepared and let your guard down, I fear the worst." He simply put.
"I promise, I'll keep watch closely, and be careful of the people I meet, old Master."
"Promises are rarely kept, old friend. Take care." He swiftly swept away and disapeared into the darkness of the old flashing lights.
Macst stood and walked inside the cantina, to try to relive old childhood memories. She quietly mumbled,"Home." as she walked by the game table and over to a table to sit.
As Danny was sitting he saw the woman walk in, He saw her wearing the same cloak as she was earlier when he attacked her. He watched patiently as the old man had vanished into the shadows and she sat down. He though should I do it here right now or somewhere else. He then grabbed his lightsaber and held it in his right hand. He stuck his palm out to do a familiar force power, this time he put more concentration on his push, he then pushed a powerful gust of wind blew towards the woman and the people around her would surely fall down and be injured he was curious if she would. His lightsaber then flickered on and the sounds of the cristals can be heard from a good distance. He then waited to see what would happen to her.
The chair Macst was sitting in flew up into the air and she was somewhat pushed backwards from the strong force move. A number of others had also fallen, the driod at the bar included. She turned and looked up at the man. It was time for a confrontation.
"I told you to be careful before, but you've gone too far, risking the lives of civilians like this. Especially on my home planet. Maybe we shall take this outside?" She muttered, and walked further away towards the cantina door, pulling out her double-bladed saber, She knew he was going to be strong, and that she would throw everything she has to either settle a truce, or win.
She stood in her battle stance such as before. She took her old master's warning now, to a degree that this may have been what he tried to explain to her earlier. She lowered her large grey hood to see better.
"Would you rather not fight? Or are you set in your ways to fight me?"She recommended.
Forget about it, Danny then jumped up towartds her and gripped his saber with both his hands still in the air he then slashed his saber down aiming for her head.He was heavily concentraiting in this battle, he would see if his power was good enough to wipe out a Jedi.
Macst saw that he couldn't be saved. She ducked to try and counter attack him, with her constant attacks. She would only resort to her strongest force move when all hope was lost. She tried to boost her attacks with the normal powers. She tried to recieve the thoughts of her opponent, but could barely scratch anything besides surface thoughts.
"I don't mind it being lost hope. It's too late for you, but others still have hope. If you insist on fighting me, I shall try my best." She retorted.
As she evaded Danny's attack he backflipped and listened to what she was saying. There is no hope for Jedi, only for us sith. He looked around the bar and saw many injured people. Follow me then his lightsaber flicked off and he walked past her outside he then used his force jump to hop ontop of the Cantina, Fight me now! He yelled.
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Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 3:15 pm
Gaia Name: The_Last_Plainswalker
Character Name: Isis
Gender: N/A, programed to have the appearance of a woman.
Age: No physical age, was created 20 years ago.
Race: N/A programed to have the appearance of a human.
Character Description: Isis is a AI, and an extremely advanced one at that, known as a 'Smart AI' (although all AI's a very intelligent, 'Smart AIs' are far smarter) she has practically no limits or boundries to her intelligance, and her program can continue to grow and mature like a human's intilect without need for downloads, but just simiple by observing. 'Her' appearnce is that of a shapely woman in her 20's, having the desired hour-glass figure, shoulder length, strait, black hair and fair skin. Her eyes always look as if data is flowing across them. Isis can be a bit unforgiving to those of low levels of intellect and can seem arrogent, though she is just truthfully that smart. Otherwise she has a very carring personality, and looked after Glacian while he was growing up, after his parents sacrificed themselves.
Home Planet: N/A she was created within the Jedi Archives and has lived most of her 'life' within the Jedi temple's computers and then the Raptor's systems.
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: N/A she had some 'sister' and 'brother' AIs, but she is the only surviving one.
Character HistoryIsis was created by Glacian's father, who was also very intillectually inclinded. She had 2 brother systems and 2 sister systems, though she was the best and quickest thinking, which is the reason she survived a razing of the archives by the public during the trying times in the past. She went with Glacian's father and mother by choice, and has been with the family ever since, now only down to Glacian.
Alignment: Whatever Glacian is
Occupation The Raptor's onboard AI. She is in charge of all system matinance and repair that she can do, Glacian is still needed for many manual repairs and mantinance. She is also in control of most hyperspace flying and weaponary on the Raptor itself.
Skills:Extremely intelligent to the point where most people can't follow her in a conversation about technical things. Her knowldge spans many subjects and abilities. She is a almost perless hacker and counter-hacker, she can manipulate other systems and lesser AI with relative ease. Anything electrical is her playground.
Weapons:Her intillect, AI abilities
ShipCan technically be on/in any ship's systems (or other building or machines) , but is usually found aboard The Raptor
Personal Belongings:Any place she calls home
Roleplay Sample
Isis popped up on her holopad, her eyes flickering with middle annoyance. "Glacian, we have tails, multiple, TIEs. About 5, maybe 6, hard to tell in this astroid field, and 2 Interceptors. I can handle the TIEs easily with The Raptor's armorment, it shouldn't be that hard, the TIEs aren't used to a ship this size being just as manuverable as them or and Interceptor." "Aye, aye Isis," Glacian said as he got out of the pilot seat and Isis took over while Glacian took the lift the the small hanger in the aft belly of the ship.
"Ready Glacian?" Isis said as Glacian got into his Jedi fighter, colored white amd green. As he fired up the engines, he flipped a switch, and the color of the ship turned totally silver. "Cheameleon armor is up, space fights are almost to easy when i'm in a completely black ship," Glacian said with a smile as he launched his ship and the ship's color changed to black against the black void of space and he took off, his engines' glow masked so they couldn't be seen.
"Alright, let's get down to business," Isis said as she brought the ships many weapons all online and aimed them at the soon to be dusted TIEs. She made the ship do a full reverse and nailed a fighter as they shot past, it's wing bouncing off the tip of another's, causing it to tumble some, leaving it open for Isis to squeeze of a shot from her belly quad cannon, dusting the shieldless fighter. A fire ball hiting a astroid signaled that Glacian was half done with the interceptors as Isis nailed another TIE with an Ion connon shot, shutting it down and causing the TIE directly behind it to smash into it, smashing both of them to scrap.
Just as Glacian destroyed the second interceptor, Isis used a termal beam weapon to melt the last two TIEs into harmless slag that floated in the space as Glacian flew back to the hanger, for a well deserved rest.....
were you even wondering if I would aprove you? blaugh go ahead
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 2:36 am
Gaia Name: Fortychan Character Name: Lainu Naberrie Gender: Female Age: 16 Race: Human Character Description: Lainu has long straight black hair, brown eyes and an olive complexion. She doesn't care about what she looks like. Lainu is the average height for her age. Home Planet: Naboo Starting Planet: Coruscant Relations: Family on Naboo Character History: Lainu is an orphan from the planet Naboo. Both of Lainu's parents were respected Jedi, Lowey Naberrie and Koruna Naberrie. They were killed by an unknown evil sith lord. Lainu barely remembers anything of her parents. When Lainu's parents were buried she was taken away from relatives on Naboo to Coruscant to learn the ways of the Jedi. Alignment: Neutral Occupation: Jedi Skills: Lightsaber skills, force sensitive Weapons: Lightsaber, purple beam Ship: Her father's Jedi Star fighter Personal Belongings: Lainu treasures a Sapphire and Ruby bracelet that was given to her by her parents when she was born and her droid TK-24 Roleplay Sample: Lainu was wondering about the streets of her home town, it was around three in the afternoon, people and droids were wondering about the place minding their own business. Lainu hadn't been back to Naboo since she was three-years-old. She was so excited to be at home finally after so long. Naboo looked so different compared to the pictures she had. Lainu thought for a moment. She wanted to go to the grave where parents are buried. She went to the grave yard and began her search. Lainu came across a headstone that said In loving, here lies Senator Padmé Žaberrie/Amidala She stared at it for a moment. No way could she possibly be related and then Lainu cleared her head and moved on to find her parents. She found it at the top of the hill looking over the ocean. There were two headstones and the grave appeared to have been neglected for years. There were dead leaves floating in the breeze and thick moss was beginning to grow on the headstones. Lainu knelt down to the stones and peeled back to moss. A message appeared in front of her. In loving memory of Lowey Naberrie In loving memory of Koruna Naberrie Hey mum...Hey dad. I wish you were here right now. Even though I can't remember you at all, I really miss you.... I'm studying to become a Jedi, just like you two... Why won't aunt Hanla talk to me about your death? It's so frustrating when she shuts me off. I'm old enough to understand everything now, I want to know. I have right to know don't I?Lainu sat in from of her parent's grave for a while with tears streaming down the side of her face. The sun was beginning to fade over the horizon, bringing in the night sky. Lainu curled up in ball on the ground and gradually fell asleep. Kronai sat in from of her parent's grave for a while with tears streaming down the side of her face. The sun was beginning to fade over the horizon, bringing in the night sky. Lainu was alone in the galaxy, sure she had her family here on Naboo, but she felt so alone. Even tho relations with movie characters aren't allowed, such a far relation shouldn't give problems... and your not saying you're skywalkers daughter like most of the disapproveds... so..approved smile
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:20 pm
[[edited]]Gaia Name:black_leather_biker_chick Character Name: Aurora Gender:Female Age:21 Race:Twi'lek Character Description: Twi'leks are tall, thin humanoids with skin pigment that spans a rainbow of colors. Their most distinctive feature is a pair of shapely prehensile tentacles that grow from the base of their skulls. I am 2 meeters tall. My marking are unique seeing that I am one of the very few who are tiger striped.  Home Planet:Ryloth Starting Planet:Tatooine Relations:Orphane Character History:My parents were killed when I was very young. I was living on the streets of Ryloth till I was 8. I then hitched a ride with a merchant who was going to take me to Naboo, but he landed in Tatooine an was killed by the Bounty Hunter Dyzz. So once againI was stranded.Not long after being there a few Jawas took me in as a guest. I had lived there till I was 18 an tried to get a job on a moister farm. I was able to get a job on the Eyvind's Farm. 2 months After I had started to work there It was attact. I was in Mos Eisely whne the Sand People destroyed the farm (or atleast it was made to look as if they had. The Bantha tracks weren't quite right though). I have ever since been out on the streets trying to pick up information of whats going on beween the rebels an the imperials. An upon some of the information I have recived I am all for joining the rebles on their quest to regain their place. [Alignment: Rebles ( republic) [ Occupation: none Skills: I am swift with movments an can run great distances in record time. Am also a pilot, an a very fast learner of weapendry Weapons: I have a blaster that the Jawas had given me for helping them. Ship: I have the Speeder that I had used to get to Mos Eisely the day the Farm burnt down Personal Belongings:Speeder, blaster, an a necklace that was given to me before my parents were killed. Roleplay Sample: I slowly moved to one of the merchants an tugged on his sleve. Sir?Yes Little one?
Where are you going next? I mean when you leave Ryloth *looks up at him an gives a sheepish smile while shifting my weight to the other foot*
I plan to go to NabooCould you take me there sir? I am sorry I have no money, but you see sir I am an orphane. *lowers head to look at the ground an begins to walk away* *smiles an reaches out an gently grabs her shoulder* Of course little one I can take you there an tell you what, you can even be my co pilot.*looks at him with a big grin and eyes as wide as soucers* Thank you, when are you leaving sir?In a few moments an you can call me Drakel no need for the sir if were are goign to pilot together.Ok, mine is Aurora. What do you want me to help you with?Just get into ol' Velince here an I will tell you what you need to keep an eye on. *smiles down at her and walks over to the Cantina's piolit entrance and vanishes through the door**smiles* alright Drakel. *Looks over her shoulder an sees what looks to be bounty hunters talking with one of the other merchants. I then scramble up into the ships cockpit. I duck down from view, for I know they are looking for me* It wasn't bad, but before I approve it, I need you to go through it and edit it. Check your spellings and punctuations. BEcause in places they were very bad. Also in your roleplay try to provide more description of what is happening, instead of just dialogue. ~~~~ MerissaI have gone back and looked over it. I am sorry that I am not that good at spelling or at sentance structure sweatdrop But I shall try and improve.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 12:25 pm
Gaia Name: golden_melody
Character Name: Jessi
Gender:Female
Age: 15
Race: Human
Character Description: Jessi is 5'7''. She has brown hair and dull green eyes. She looks completely average for her age. She usually wears plain clothes with a light brown cloak.
Home Planet: Dantoinne (sp?)
Starting Planet: Dantoinne
Relations: She has one older brother who is a pilot/smuggler living on Nar Shadda and her father who is a also a pilot.
Character History: Jessi has spent the majority of her life working on droids or ships as a hobby. She is a proficient pilot after the last few years of learning from her father. She has also seen Nar Shadda and Kessel with her brother.
Alignment: Though living on a some what remote planet of Dantoinne she is still very much a supporter of the Republic.
Occupation: Jedi
Skills razz iloting, droid repairs, and force sensitivity.
Weapons: Blaster
Ship: Very old remodeled X-wing.
Personal Belongings: none
Roleplay Sample: ((I haven't done much RPing, so I don't have much of a sample))
"Arseni! get the turrets already!" shouted Roren from the pilot seat. Sending the ship into a nose dive to try and evade.
Arseni climbed into the turret and swivelled the gun until she could see the TIE's clearly in her scope. "I can see them!" she called back to Roren.
Roren mumbled something under his breath, "Then shoot them already!" he yelled, fumbling with the controls. A red light flashed on above his head and he cursed as the ship shuddered again.
Arseni stared through the scope and sent one TIE flying madly into space before it exploded. "Got one!" she shouted. Arseni scanned around again waiting for more to fly into sight.
"One isn't enough! I'm gonna send us into a quick hyperspace jump to lose 'em." he said, punching buttons on the computer.
Looks good, you're approved ~Mr. M
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 4:26 pm
Skyjjin Elrodias
Ryan Elrodias (also known as Ten)
Male
16
Human
Ryan stands about 5'4" With black hair, which hangs down over his left eye. He has a scar from childish fights when he was young, located over his left eye. He always wears black, and sometimes red.
Coruscant
Same
Since he was born, he lived with his mother and two siblings, one boy, one girl. He recently decided to go out on his own and support himself, and an assassin after his father killed his family. His father on the other hand, was a Master of a Dark Jedi Academy, but went missing when his fellow masters had a mutiny against him. He hasn't been seen since.
Ryan had been living with his family for a while, when his friends moved away to a distant planet, and his family upset him the last time. He had always been in a good mood about things that happen in his life, and bad things that happen seem to upset, but not agitate him. He has never been in any fights, and eventually would want to stop them altogether.
Being only 16, his views are neutral about everything that goes on, which means that his decision for things rests in his heart, not with others in the Galaxy.
None
He has excellent Computer skills, a great agility, and usually thinks a bit faster than normal teenagers.
His only weapon is a blaster that was given to him by his mother, which belonged to his Father before he joined the Dark Side.
No Ship
Just the one Blaster, owned by Skyjjin Elrodias
(hehe now I get to have fun 3nodding )
Haha, I shot you. You loathsome twit!! You are losing at your own game!!! A voice Ryan knew way too personally came into his thoughts as he lied there on the ground, temporarily stunned. I can't believe he got me... usually I can tell where his attacks are coming from, but I seem to be slow today...
Are you gonna get up or are you just gonna lay there?
Oh shut up and get back to your starting point, you moron... Ryan says as he stands up and dusts off his black shirt, button-up, as usual... He may have got me once, but all it did was lower his chances. Now he will want to think that he is already better because of one win...
..you again gonk
aw well, go ahead lol
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 4:32 pm
Gaia Name:cannonfire
Character Name: Alec
Age: 35
Race: human
Character Description: He is brown, with silver hair and blue eyes. Because of an accident in his youth, his eyes are catlike and react like normal cat eyes do.
Home Planet: bespin
Starting Planet: kasshyk, the wookie homeworld.
Relations: family, dead. no other contact with sentiant beings.
Character History: Alec has jedi powers, but an accident in his past caused him to lose his memory, all he remembers is his home planet and his name. He choose neutrality in the war and persues both the darkside and the light side with patience and understanding. He lives on the forset floor of kasshyk and has honed his combat skills fighting the local beasts. the wookies hold him in high regard for his helpfullness.
Alignment:neutral
Skills:force sensitivity and very good with electronics and nature.
Weapons: a double bladed blue lightsaber and two other light sabers that he had with him when he awoke from his coma with amniesia, as well as some blasters and swords that were given to him by his wookie friends.
Roleplay Sample: Alec walked through the forest on his daily trip to the nearby stream to get some water. He looked around as the foliage rustled and two creatures emerged from the foliage. They were predatures, as the sharp teeth and claws indicated. Alec chuckled, as he had faced these creatures before, he drew his lightsaber and activated the blades, quickly killing one of the beasts and scaring the other off. Alec sighed "another day, another boring fight with the native beasts." Alec said as he picked up the dropped water bucket and headed for the stream.
try to use some spaces and colors in rp to make it more readable... for the rest, the structure is well, so I am accepting you. Remember that you do need jedi training to use lightsabers (and reach higher levels to use dualblades), so you'can't use those yet... I'm eager to see how you solve that ^^
most likely make it so he once did but forgot it with all the other stuff his amniesia made him forget.
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:47 am
Gaia Name: demonic_sorceress
Character Name: Rhiannon Ray
Gender: female
Age: 15
Race: human
Character Description: Rhiannon is a taller than average woman, at least 5 foot eleven inches. Her hair is of the deepest ebony, and cropped short so that it just goes past her ears and frames her face lightly. Her almond shaped eyes are perfectly spaced on her deeply tanned face, her left eye being a dark chocolate-brown and the right being a light sky blue. Her frame isn't that well made by Mother Nature, and it shows that she still has some growing and maturing to do. Not like anyone can really tell, because whatever she tends to wear is her idea of "confortable". Hence the long, flowing, otherwise baggy clothes and she is always seen striding around in.
Home Planet: Tatooine
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: none
Character History: Growing up with parents that owned a local tavern, Rhiannon was pretty much left to her own devices most the time, as her parents were usually busy twenty four hours a day, seven days a week. Eventually she took to wandering about the city, and there she ended up at the pod racer stadium. Being a little child, many racers didn't think much of her except for one racer, who was kind enough to humor the child and keep her occupied and out of trouble by having her help him work on his racer. Or watch, at least.
Then the day two years later (when she was ten) arrived. The pod racer had suddenly injured himself, but a scant half hour away from the actual race. She didn't even think. Rhiannon pocketed some safety gear and before anyone knew it, she was speeding down the track in the injured man's podracer. After the race, and surviving the race (though not placing) her parents were furious, as was the man who owned the podracer she had 'stolen'.
But a few hours after that very race, a hooded man in her parents tavern came up to both parents and the little girl, and asked if he could take little Rhiannon under his wing, to become a jedi. It's been a while since then it seems, although a scant five years have passed.
After saving up all her credits, Rhiannon left Tatooine and headed for Coruscant, seeking more knowledge of the force and becoming a Jedi. There she was accepted and became an apprentice to a Master by the name of Alron.
But then, on her first mission, things did not go as well as planned. Master Alron was presumed dead, killed by a fellow Master. He, as he told them afterwards, was a neutral jedi, looking for apprentices within the Jedi Temple in Coruscant. Given the chance to become a 'grey' jedi and the possiblity to learn both light and dark, but yet never falling to one side, she did not refuse. She had come for knowledge of the force, and that she was going to get far more than what the Jedi Temple could ever give her.
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Jedi
Skills: Piloting, electronics, force sensitive
Weapons: A green light saber
Ship: None
Personal Belongings: An amber pendant that her family gave her five years ago
Roleplay Sample: ((Just something I'm making up off the top of my head))
You know what? Humanity is amazing. There's never been such a race that has evolved so swiftly; that has used its resources so amazingly to create such a suburban paradise about the planet they called Earth.
Their cities never slept, just like it's makers. They didn't want to sleep, so they created lights to outshine the night until day came. There was always something that needed to be done, something or someone that needed tending to. Busy busy busy was all they really were. They never stopped to admire the paradise they themselves had created with their own two hands. The hands of millions and millions of their people throughout thousands of years they reigned supreme over the planet.
That was, of course, until war broke out.
I can never fathom the kind of weapons they used in this war. Metal swords that sounded loudly and spouted fire-to kill a fellow human thirty feet from where they stood. Metal birds that dropped small, round objects onto the cities of man, and in but a minute, to have it all erased in but a flash of light and amazing bouts of fire.
They created gases, too. Something that looked like air but would slow you down, cut off your throat and suffocate an innocent city in hours.
Then, the most amazing feat that had ever been done by man. They created our safeguards. Not bird nor lizard nor mammal, but yet all three at once. How our ancestors had done it is all but hazy; exactly like everything else they had done. But yet, they had done it. They created our dragons.
But then, they also created our enemies. They mutated themselves into half human, half beast creatures encapable of any thought or emotion except for bloodlust. Why they did it is just as hazy as everything else, but our ancestors, the ones who created paradise were the ones that created their downfall into hell....
Amarin stared at the last sentence for another few minutes. All of this was just too much to understand at once. These....ancestors of theirs...had created the ancestors of her proud Harin?
It seems very hard to believe. Harin agreed. Amarin sat bolt upright and looked around the dusty old libary, the single candlelight illuminating nothing but the countless shelves and books about her.
I see through your eyes, Amarin. The sandy dragon explained in such a tone that made Amarin feel like she should have already known that. I read what you read, I see the thoughts that you think. How can we be one, when our minds are of two all the time?
Amarin nodded mutely and turned back to the old time worn journal. That last sentence was the last page, the last legible record of all there was in this once great and vast libary. The last thread supporting the gap between ancient times and the present, and it seemed highly unlikely that any of it had happened. A city that never slept, that forced night away from it. Pah. Useless rubbish. Why did old Lyria think that all the answers would be in here?
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Welcome to the club, approved -Mr. M
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