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 Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 3:39 am
--Stares at Daniel in awe-- That was wonderful. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 8:22 am
Mrs Reaper.. Have no fear in getting "out and out bashing" in this forum. I'm sure just because I'm going to say this that it will happen at some point lol but everyone in the guild is really nice and helpful (for the most part xd ) And I've posted some rather horrid poems in here and never gotten a bad review.. if anything I've noticed that the people around here highly believe in the phrase, "If you haven't got anything nice to say, don't say anything at all" lol
Now.. on that note.. don't assume that because no one has responded to your poem that they hate it lol.. just means we can't always keep up and check on every forum every day.. And I specifically have been seriously slacking in my duties here in the guild.
Okay.. enough rambling.. talked so much I forgot what your poem was about lol.. lemme go back and read and then I'll comment lol
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 8:25 am
Wow Mrs. Reaper.. how could I have forgotten that lol.. oh yeah.. I suffer from CRS. I like it.. Got any more?
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 12:18 pm
Just a random post.....
Sitting.. Cold and Alone
Starving. Hungry and Prone...
To crying...
Wishing I was dying...
It would be easier if I was...
So needy.. I am..
Wishing, wanting, praying...
But nothing, nada, wam...
I would sell my soul
but for a crumb you might toss me...
Thankful that you would even notice
this weak and ugly she
What I have done
for just a crumb
and again I am starving
yearning...
and alone...
with no-one to feed
the hunger and need
Perhaps just this once..
Starving really is the way to go...
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 3:04 pm
ErinsChaos Just a random post..... Sitting.. Cold and Alone
Starving. Hungry and Prone...
To crying...
Wishing I was dying...
It would be easier if I was...
So needy.. I am..
Wishing, wanting, praying...
But nothing, nada, wam...
I would sell my soul
but for a crumb you might toss me...
Thankful that you would even notice
this weak and ugly she
What I have done
for just a crumb
and again I am starving
yearning...
and alone...
with no-one to feed
the hunger and need
Perhaps just this once..
Starving really is the way to go... AWWWW *Noch pounces and uber hugs Chaos* "hey good looking no need to be alone that is if you can stand a goof ball like me" *Noch grins and sweeps chaos off her feet* "now i do believe there was a wedding in the bar that required our attention and presence......"
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 3:27 pm
and since i haven't posted in a while and i know Miss Chaos would hurt me if i posted anywhere else when i actually get in the mood to write something ill post this one here Change
I've come to a crossroads at the center of my life
To the right lies the known and beaten path
safe in its familiarity and its obstacles
To the left a future that is uncertain
To walk the new path i must venture out into unknown and uncharted territory
braving new challenges and new adventures
What drives me to the new path why do i take the unknown?
Am i driven by curiosity or hounded by devils
Do i long for a new life to shed this foolish mortal coil that i have grown?
What drives my soul onto the new path....
Tis that which has driven good men to become great
The call of another heart
the summons of another soul linked together with mine
bound together in all eternity by the strands of fate and love
Boldly and With a song in my heart shall i heed the call that draws me down the new path
Farethee well My Old life and my comrades
I shall evermore remember you in my heart and in my dreams
and never shall i regret that time together for it has formed me and shown who i am
Produce cries of joy and happiness for me as i go on to a life and a love that ever more have i sought and now at last i have found
-Noch (note: i tend to have random poetry so if your confused its ok this really wont make any sense at all and its not based upon any one in particular its just what came to mind when i stopped to reflect upon moving away from california and my home here and all my friends and family)
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 10:17 pm
nochdguir and since i haven't posted in a while and i know Miss Chaos would hurt me if i posted anywhere else when i actually get in the mood to write something ill post this one here (note: i tend to have random poetry so if your confused its ok this really wont make any sense at all and its not based upon any one in particular its just what came to mind when i stopped to reflect upon moving away from california and my home here and all my friends and family) Laughs I totally understand it being that I did the samething. Left my safe place and behind people. People I know should go and out of my reach. Wondering today if I was fool but I know I am doing what is right thanks for writing that. It touched me to remind I am doing what is right.
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 5:24 pm
Saddened to the very core, though the eyes show utter joy
Masked protection hides the pain endured by a lonely soul
Comfort given to others occupies the mind and heart
Distracting it from the tears the soul yearns to shed
One's value isn't questioned, rather totally ignored
Others placed before thyself for the soul knows not what's in store
Smiles remain a constant, reassurance turns to lies
No one's let inside beyond the joy seen in the eyes
Uncertainty....
Not much of a poem compared to my others, but I felt like writing it.
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 7:57 am
Rogue Angel Kiara Saddened to the very core, though the eyes show utter joy Masked protection hides the pain endured by a lonely soul Comfort given to others occupies the mind and heart Distracting it from the tears the soul yearns to shed One's value isn't questioned, rather totally ignored Others placed before thyself for the soul knows not what's in store Smiles remain a constant, reassurance turns to lies No one's let inside beyond the joy seen in the eyes Uncertainty.... Not much of a poem compared to my others, but I felt like writing it. ...... I know that feeling... "One's value isn't questioned, rather totally ignored" *hugs* I also know it won't mean much coming from me.. but you are never ignored here... And your value is well known.. Keep the poetry coming Kiara and keep your eyes on the future and the goals you have yet to attain..
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 4:41 pm
Ahh Kiara. Soo sads. Smile lovely...don't be sad. Lets turn this around to cheer you up huh? Lets see.... Jibber Jabber Scribble Scrabble Smile with this bit of babble. Funky Hunky Chunky Monkey Picture me dancing clunky. Tweedle Dee Tweedle Dum I hope this was a bit of fun. Whoopty Woo Loopty Loo From my heart this is true.  Uhhhh yeah whee
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 9:28 am
^ rofl 4laugh rofl 4laugh rofl ^
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 11:23 am
Every where I look I see you...
Every glance makes me sigh...
I see your face in every window..
and always in my minds eye.
You will always be here,
there, and everywhere now
But it doesn't cease my pain,
grief, or sorrow
Yesterday the girls were singing
And I broke down in tears
I can't believe this is happening...
Coming true is my worst fears...
I want to go back in time
Tell you we all love you
Keep this tragedy from starting
I'd sit on you if I had to...
I take small comfort in knowing
that you are no longer sad.
No longer suffering or grieving
over losses like mom and dad.
I love you bro..
Tell Dad we miss him too okay?
Hope you are having one hell of a party up there in Heaven tonight...
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 10:52 am
Sorrow and Grievance,
Crying and Bereavement.
That pain will not go away
No matter what I do or say.
But there will come in time,
A peace that you will find.
Life lived on will become dedicated,
And a remembrance of greatness celebrated
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:27 pm
*Throws a paper airplane at Joe as she heads out the door*
all it reads is " Thank you...."
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:47 pm
ErinsChaos *Throws a paper airplane at Joe as she heads out the door* all it reads is " Thank you...." uuhh is this a bad time to tell you I love you too Erin eek ???? hahahah xd Just kidding xp hehehe! Sorry I couldn't help it blaugh ! *huggles* 4laugh
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