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 Posted: Thu May 21, 2020 11:18 am
Evanescently Magnificent
Do you mean like a technique that grants you further learning bonuses like the ones that classes grant you?
Alright! So I also forgot to ask a few questions last time so sorry for that xD For Ride the wind, your last bit saying that your stack inflicts tier two paralysis? Do you mean that they deal no damage at all to the target and apply that status instead? Oh! and also a note about the bled effect we have in the guild! It actually doesn't have tiers "tries" but deals cause an additional amount of stamina to be drained from an opponent who is suffering from the trauma status. (Trauma in this guild is just what happens to you when you don't defend, block, or run away from an attack) Which is why I needed to ask you about the last part of ride the wind ^ ^; To the training question, nah ummm I. The style feats theirs occasional passive training techniques you can learn that give passive but circumstantial effects, I.e. later stages of kaiser fist allow you to train to buff the kaiser armors bonuses, I was wondering if I was able to make something like that for a minor bonus if three giant ferrets r tryna pin one poor dude or should I just make a technique that gains bonuses when used in tandem with itself from another source. No need to apologize smile Yeah I noticed that when reading through status with the whole bleed thing, what I was meaning there although now I feel it might be a little bent to do so I don’t mind changing it. It was meant to be instead of bleeding from the attacks due to this ability resolving around cutting attacks specifically would cause someone paralysis instead of stamina drain and would be unencumbered by pain, although realizing bleed is not its own status I would be fine cutting that down to just tier one or just changing it entirely or adding additional cost if need be, or if I just make another boost technique to do just that As I endeavour to be reasonable. The idea behind the technique meant to represent the kamaitachi myth about not realizing one has been cut until later because their wounds are deep but don’t bleed nor hurt and hence aren’t noticed Immediately. If this all answers your question >.<
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2020 3:20 pm
▰ Character: Kenshin Hyuga
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Stern Spirit Sword: One Thousand Birds Smite [ Ima Reiken: Chidori Sumaito ] | Rank X | Bukijutsu (Reiken no Michi) & Bloodline (Hatake) [ Lightning ] | Spiritual
Getsuruito in rapier or katana form begins crackling with dark blue chidori lightning along the blade. The high-pitched chirping sound of a thousand birds accompanies the sword's lightning illumination. With a blade slash, a ten-foot wave of electrical chakra one rank lower than the original technique will fly outward from the slash. This chidori wave treats chakra-based defenses as one-rank lower just as the standard chidori does. The Chidori wave pulsates bolts of lightning outward as it travels for one extra lightning blast per post that is two ranks lower than the original technique. Only one lightning wave can be discharged per post. This technique requires an upkeep cost two ranks below its original cost per post that it remains active.
▰ Stern Spirit Sword: Righteous Lightning Cutter [ Ima Reiken: Seigi no Raikiri ] | Rank S | Bukijutsu (Reiken no Michi), Bloodline (Hatake), & Senjutsu [ Lightning ] | Spiritual
While in sage mode and wielding his spirit weapon, Getsuruito, Kenshin applies his Raikiri technique to the blade. The Raikiri is amplified by sage chakra as the electrical chakra chirps and substantially sharpens the blade. Like the standard Hatake Raikiri, this technique applies blindness through sight and paralysis through touch at the same level. This technique lasts for one post as well. However, the sage chakra allows the Raikiri to cleave through techniques enhanced by corrupted nature chakra from forbidden seals and demon chakra treating the technique as one rank lower. This ability to cut through corrupted chakra does not extend to other sages and celestial mark users.
▰ Stern Spirit Sword: Stalwart Thunder God [ Ima Reiken: Gankona no Raijin ] | Rank X | Bukijutsu (Reiken no Michi) & Bloodline (Hatake) [ Lightning ] | Spiritual
Kenshin channels dark blue chirping electrical chakra through Getsuruito, his spirit weapon, before disappearing and reappearing next to any target in the topic. This occurs at shunshin speeds and consumes a body flicker usage. The bright glow from the weapon causes tiered blindness depending on the technique's rank. Kenshin then swings Getsuruito at his opponent with the intent to land a direct hit or even to miss. Once the sword is swung, a blast of electrical chakra expands outward to consume the target in a blast of lightning. This lightning blast is the same rank as the technique itself.
▰ Stern Spirit Sword: Storm Crown [ Ima Reiken: Arashi no Ōkan ] | Rank X | Bukijutsu (Reiken no Michi) & Bloodline (Raiu) [ Lightning ] | Complex
Kenshin holds his spirit sword, Getsuruito, and coats his body in crackling dark blue lightning armor at one rank lower than the cost of this technique. Kenshin performs the lightning breath rituals of the Raiu for the following post losing all activations. Once the post of meditation is over, four bolts of lightning then strike from the sky and land on his head forming a crown to rest on his brow. For the following three posts, Kenshin's speed and agility increase by two each. Additionally, any body flickers performed during this period of enlightenment do not consume shunshin uses at a maximum of three. Once the three post duration is over all aspects of this technique dissipate.
▰ Stern Spirit Sword: Philosopher King [ Ima Reiken: Tetsujin Ōja ] | Rank X | Bukijutsu (Reiken no Michi) & Bloodline (Raiu) [ Lightning ] | Spiritual
Kenshin holds his spirit sword, Getsuruito, and forms a spherical lightning-based shield around himself at the same rank as the amount of chakra applied to his body. Electrical chakra flows through his body as he meditates for one post, unable to use any activations. This post of meditation involves supreme mastery over the lightning breath of the Raiu clan. In the post following this, Kenshin unleashes his power as electricity more violently courses through his body for three posts. During these posts, Kenshin is able to use his resources more efficiently by paying for spiritual lightning techniques as if they were complex while retaining their spiritual power. His lightning also becomes more powerful and will apply any status effects that the technique already has at one tier higher. Once the three post duration is over all aspects of this technique dissipate.
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Ephemeral Ozymandias Captain
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Ephemeral Ozymandias Captain
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2020 3:22 pm
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Posted: Fri May 22, 2020 4:42 am
▰ Character: Belamos Karna
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Sun Spawn [ Taiyo Supōn ] | Rank S | Bloodline [ Light Release ]| [ Spritual ]
Creates a harmless ball of light three-hundred feet across which hovers several hundred feet above the battlefield, casting bright light in the surrounding area. Cannot be used as a source of Light Release.
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Posted: Sat May 23, 2020 7:51 pm
These are Enchantments for Shuusui Uzumaki. Since I wasn't sure where to post them. I posted them here per Eva's instructions. The Empowering Path: This Enchantment boasts the singular effect making Resources Enchantments/Fuuin doubly effective. Any Fuuin/Enchantment that grants a resource now grants twice that amount. The Efficient Path: This Enchantment simply boosts Shuusui’s efficiency with Fuuinjutsu, having them cost one rank less of chakra for a minimum of [5]. Thus allowing Shuusui to better use his resources. The Resistant Path: This Enchantment enhances the inherent resistance in Shuusui’s blood, allowing him to resists poisons of two tiers higher than normal. The Harmonic Path: This Enchantment enhances the lethality of Shuusui’s attacks, allowing him to apply his Harmonic Death Art Trainings to all of his Taijutsu Style Techniques. The Cursed Path: This Enchantment strengthens the Uzumaki’s most secret ability, the Perversion of Nature: Forbidden Seal. To start: it boosts all of the users stats/caps by 4 rather than only two of them. The second ability increases the efficiency of the seal, requiring only 20 nature chakra per post in payment. The Subtle Path: This Enchantment is designed to supplement and enhance Shuusui’s strongest techniques. The first ability enforces Shuusui’s Way of the Snake, now requiring an additional activation and the Kai payment to be equal to Shuusui’s Body Rank. The second ability enhances Shuusui’s Nature Chakra sensitivity, the Enchantment passively gathers Nature Chakra for Shuusui in the amount of 150 per post. If Shuusui actively gathers Nature Chakra, this Enchantment does not (i.e. they do not stack). The Sealed Path: This Enchanment is Shuusui’s masterpiece, designed to focus on improving Shuusui’s Fuuin basic capabilities. The first ability triples Shuusui’s scroll storage capabilities. Thus allowing Shuusui to seal more per scroll. The second simply allows Shuusui to use the Fūnyū no Jutsu [the Enclosing Technique] while in the midst of battle. Finally, Shuusui’s Fuuinjutsu are hardened and can resist techniques such as Fuuin Houin or San no Fuuin Houin by paying a cost equal to the technique being used.
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2020 1:25 pm
1) Oh yus you can actually! They what we call augments basically ^ ^ or technique that alters another one! The only problem is that permanent customs are very limited so if that's the route you want to go your custom would still cost you something to have to use. Otherwise I'd suggest you making it into some kind of passive mode with a duration the alters your jutsu when they are used within that time frame!
2) Okay so I think I got it. If this is the way you want to go then I think it would just be an easy fix by saying that abilities that you want to cause the paralysis, to just say that "instead of the usual truama, these abilities inflict the paralysis of an equivalent tier. As cutting attacks are preformed in a way that the target does not realize it."
Approved!
Approved!
1) So my concern with Empowering path is that it's making resources appear where there is none. Such as a seal with chakra in it now gives you back more chakra than you out into it. Kinda like a magician's hat, except it can make Infinite loops because of certain conversion techniques we have in the guild which leaves me Leaning torwards a denial. If a more stores outside of battle is what you want, why not make another doubling storage effect stacking with your other one?
2) Approved! Mod Note*
I'd like to test this increased reduction out with our new rules. If you have concerns any of you can of course overwrite me.
3) I just need a bit of clarification on the wording here before ai make a judgment. "Resists poisons of two tiers higher than normal" of normal would be nothing so is this just giving you a defense against the first two poisons?
4) Approved!
5) Quick note here because I noticed you used the word "cap" the Uzumaki curse seal actually doesn't increase your star cap at all, it only increases stats by 4. If the increasing of your caps is what you'd like to go for than I'd suggest giving this ability the same drawbacks as our current curse seals and keeping the increase to all stats, or making it only increase two stats to 12 and then remove the reduction in chakra in favor of preventing a stat loss after the curse has worn off! C:
6) Holy beans how about a compromise! Remove the increase to kai and extra activation in favor of the person has to use the pain release system to break free! This makes it still super stonk but doesn't force a kai AND act cost equivalent to tier three pain. The nature part is approved.
7) Approved, but under ome condition! When sealing a jutsu the Funyu must follow the same rules as Nature sealing which would be something like this "In combat the seal made must be equal to the elemental ninjutsu being sealed." Without barring any reductions of course so you can still make use of those!
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2020 2:05 pm
▰ Character: Charybdis
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Predator Aquarium Technique [ Hoshokusha Suizokukan no Jutsu ] | Rank B-S+ | Suiton/Bloodline | Chakra
Charybdis creates a dome of water with his location as the center point of the dome of water. The dome of water's size is based on the rank of chakra used to activate this ability, and has an Upkeep following upkeep rules. The water created from this dome is functionally normal water for both himself, his allies, and his enemies. This means that suiton techniques that can only be used from large bodies of water, are enhanced around large bodies of water, and abilities that may increase a person's capabilities while in water function for both allies, enemies, and himself. However the water will continuously refill as it is used or destroyed so long as the technique lasts. The technique extends downwards into a sphere, however only when space is made for the technique to do such. The radius of the sphere is based on the chakra used during activation (B-Rank total size is 80 foot diameter dome/sphere). When space is made within the range, such as when earth is moved or ground is destroyed water fills the area. The jutsu does not ignore jutsu collisions, as such when an appropriate rank jutsu is used this jutsu will end.
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Posted: Mon May 25, 2020 7:07 pm
1) Rewrote Empowering to specify permanent seals so it's something meant for preparatory seals not quick infusion style seals. The Empowering Path: This Enchantment boasts the singular effect making permanent Resources Enchantments/Fuuin doubly effective. Any permanent Fuuin/Enchantment that grants/stores a resource now grants/stores twice that amount. 3) Sent an answer. But in essence, yes. Though it does stack with other such resistances. 5) New Cursed Path as discussed, posted below: The Cursed Path: This Enchantment strengthens the Uzumaki’s most secret ability, the Perversion of Nature: Forbidden Seal. To start: it boosts all of the user's stat by 4 rather than only two of them and increases the caps to match the new stats. However when it Seals mode ends it would apply the penalty typical for Forbidden Seals: reducing each stat equal to its boost (so 4). The second ability negates the penalty created by the first ability. 6) I changed Way of the Snake. I have the relevant portion below as the rest was approved The Subtle Path: This Enchantment is designed to supplement and enhance Shuusui’s strongest techniques. The first ability enforces Shuusui’s Way of the Snake, now requires the Kai payment to be equal to Shuusui’s Body Rank and extends the range of the effect by 20 feet. 7) Added the following line to comply with your condition: "If used to seal a technique during combat the seal made must be equal in rank to the technique being sealed."
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2020 12:06 pm
Almost good! Only change it needs it that it can't ignore collisions which I think the wording sort of implies ^ ^; just add in a line like this somewhere near the part where it will refill "until an appropriate strength jutsu is used!
Approved!
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2020 12:09 pm
The Mark of Connectivity was given to Mina by Lahil after a successful mission together. Dormant Stage Provides the host with 400 Natural chakra. This chakra can only be recovered while the host has their seal in its dormant stage. In addition, the host gains a passive chakra and stamina increase of +50 per body rank. Natural chakra when the forbidden seal is not active passively gathers natural chakra. In a non-combat situations, the seal regains 50 chakra per post and 25 chakra per post in combat situations. Training: • Requires the user to write out five posts of the user training to activate the Mark. Awoken Stage In it's Awoken Stage, the Mark of the Void starts to spread in this pattern. It'll start at a spot on her neck, and spread down her left arm and up over her face, and glow with a substance that crackles like electricity. Effects: • Increases [ Strength ] and [ Speed ] to [10] and [ Endurance ] and [ Agility ] to [8] automatically. • Overwhelming Basic Ninjutsu (All elements and Maruton) • Cost 25 Natural Chakra per post used to maintain. Unleashed Stage In order to transform into this state, Mina will slam her fists together and generate a field of fire and electricity. Mina's skin will change to a shade of red that's a few shades darker than her hair and the whites of her eyes will urn black white the irises turn bright green and glow with electricity. Wings made of violet electricity will sprout from Mina's back with a wingspan of five feet. Effects: • Increases Speed and Strength to [12] and Endurance and Agility to [8] automatically. • Overwhelming Basic Ninjutsu (All Elements and Maruton) • Extreme MAX Impact- While in either the Awoken or Unleashed State, Mina is able to apply her explosive chakra through her magnetic sand, allowing it to be super heated and combustible. This applies Tier 3 Burning to anything that contacts the Iron Sand. Any armor stricken by Iron Sand is treated as one tier lower and is treated as if it had been hit twice. • Costs 50 Natural Chakra per post used to maintain.
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2020 1:44 pm
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Posted: Wed May 27, 2020 11:17 am
"The jutsu does not ignore jutsu collisions, as such when an appropriate rank jutsu is used this jutsu will end."Added this to the end, is that sufficient?
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Posted: Fri May 29, 2020 9:30 am
▰ Shade Soul [ Onryo ] | Rank X | Bloodline [ Void ] | Spiritual
Luo's signature jutsu. Through chakra flow to one of his hands, Luo can generate a varying amount of Void chakra at will to form a spectral wisp. Shade soul fires off as a energy bolt from Luo's finger tips, seeking to pelt a target at range with an explosive impact of five feet, corroding objects and flesh it hits with necrotic energy. Alternatively, the aura of Void can be used within melee to strike with up to a ten foot lash similar to that of a whip or be used to coat a weapon for a similar effect. Targets hit by Shade Soul will experience a sense of nausea and sickness, its energy sapping away vitality and makes foes suffer the Bleed effect of Trauma. Shade Soul requires no handseals or gestures to form but instead has an energy build up to take the same amount of time instead. Shade Soul used in its alternative method leaves behind lacerations on targets instead of corrosion.
A simple jutsu for ol' Luo // Take 2 Customs.
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Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 7:31 pm
Yus thank you, approved!
Approved!
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2020 9:20 am
Quote: The bolded areas are the changes I made.
▰Character: Nami Shōton
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Now You See Me
▰Category: Enchantment
▰Rank: B
▰Primary Sense: Sight
▰Additional Senses: Scent, Sound, Touch, and Taste
▰Base Duration: As long she pays the upkeep
▰Upkeep: 40 Chakra
▰Trigger: Handseal
▰Source: Sensory Phantasm or Other
▰Status Effect: Mental Stress T3
▰Description:With a snap of her fingers, the room looks completely the same. If there's two people in the room, then they are in the room. Say they are in the kitchen so they would be cooking like normal kitchen guests. If they are scared then you would see them fidgeting and trying to get ready to leave/get out. If the people in the kitchen get harmed/killed, the results are real. The sounds of blood and guts being spilt. The iron smell of the blood. Bones cracking.
Imagine you are a villain attacking a village. You entered into the room and see people scrambling and packing as they had heads up they are under attack and needed to get to safely. You kill them all. You can smell the blood, hear the screams, hearing the body fall to the ground, etc. Nami enters and laughs while snapping her fingers, they were never there. The room is exactly the same. The villagers already went to safely while 'decoy' was in their place. The goal of that is to obviously minimize casualties and cause confusion. Mental stress would be T3 under once revealed. The T3 mental stress lasts for 6 posts after the genjutsu has been broken/kai'ed out.
Not sure if it's too much but I also thought of that genjutsu decoy thing be a way of 'tracker' if they revealed their bloodline, she would know. If they reveal one of their elements (like maybe burning a body) she would know.
▰Character: Nami Shōton
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Pearl Mask [ Shinju Ōu ] | Rank X | Bloodline [ Shōton ]| X [ Simple ]
By doing handseals, a thin layer of pearl crystal covers the lower part of her face in a form of a mask. This provides her fresh oxygen and protection from gas and inhalants. Depending on how much she pays the upkeep will give her protection from these inhalants:
Tier 1 - Pay D-rank Chakra
Tier 2 - Pay C-rank Chakra
Tier 3 - Pay B-Rank Chakra
Tier 4 - Pay A-rank Chakra
The duration is as long as she pays the upkeep.
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