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Sadistic Scalpel Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 6:12 pm
"Can Pablo help fight!?" Shiny screamed,the penguin waddled on into the
tent. "I-I guess so...?" Kohaku sputtered. "He can shoot lazer beams from
his eyes!!!!" Shiny went on and on.............
Naoki patted Envy's head. "Don't be ashamed Envy,I've seen you naked
thousands of tim-" She just remembered everyone was in one tent.
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 6:38 pm
naoki turned bright red. everyone was staring at her. khkau had an expression that she handnt seen in three years... the pervy face.
envy kinda looked confused. kohaku started giggling. and bust out laughing. naoki was happy to see that she was in such a good mood. kake was even up and walking around. melvin and bakura just kinda tried to ignore it...
the group was in a better mood than ever.
'these morons. im so glad they cant detect chakra. that woulda really screwed me over' kagehime thought. she was excited about the training tomorrow. shed have the upperhand in the battle that was coming up.
melvin (the real one) awoke in a bright place. "where the crud am i?"
'welcome spirit... this is the afterlife'
melvin looked to see that he was looking at his own, cold body. a hole was peirced in his chest and dried bloody tears were on his eyes.
"so... im really...dead?" the realization crushed him "man... i really am useless..."
"not so" the forme was that of an angel. he had big, white wings and a halo... (typical). his eyes were blue and his hair was black.
"there is a way to go back. i dont recommend it though..."
"HOW!!!?? I NEED TO GET BACK!!!!"
"you can enter peoples dreams in this forme... and combining your friends' powers... you could be brought back. that is all i will say." he faded from sight. melvin knew it. naoki was the answer.
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Sadistic Scalpel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:27 am
Naoki grabbed some pillows and made Envy as comfortable as possible. " I
know I haven't said this in awhile,but,I love you,Envy." He smiled and said
back "I love you more!" Envy playfully tackled her. Everyone was
starring,AGAIN. He got off of her and covered his face with a blanket. Later
that night Naoki started to squirm and grasp onto Envy tightly. "Naoki...."
She kept hearing. She found herself in a room with bright,white lights
everywhere. Melvin was sitting down on the floor. He got up and walked up
to her. "Please listen,don't speak yet. I'm no longer in your world. I've been
killed. That is all I can tell you." Naoki pulled him close and tears rolled down
her cheeks. "I can be brought back if you...."-
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:15 pm
"i can be brought back if you or envy turn me into a humunculus..."
naoki just stared, blank expression on her face.
"My body is lying in a forest somewhere. i think a few miles from this spot. you have to find me!"
his voice trailed off
naoki woke up. it was morning and shiny was crouchd down, lookin her straight in the face with an 'i cant believe how in love you are' look.
"sleep well?" she said playfully.
"where is envy? we have to get moving now!!"
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Sadistic Scalpel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:23 pm
Envy was cuddled up to Naoki,still sleeping. She nudged him several times
to wake up. "Come on,we have to go!" Yawning he said back "Not right
now..." Naoki lifted the covers up and saw his reasoning for not wanting to
go. "Put some damn pants on,boy! Can't you see I'm in a hurry!?" She ran
out of the tent flailing and waiting for Envy to put some pants on.
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 2:46 pm
"What are you doing?" A tall girl with unevenly chopped hair and goggles on her head entered the cave. She had di-chromatic hair; the bottom layer was purple, and the top white. This time grim was giving midori a noogie.
"Oh its just you" grim said with a disgusted look on her face.
"Nel." Midori walked up to the nel and hugged her tightly. She grinned
"seems like somebody's gotten taller since i went on my mission." nel patted midori on the head like a puppy.
"Whats with that rediculous get-up nel?" grim snarled.
Nel was wearing a fishnet shirt with a leather skirt as a shirt. It had been modified to wear on her shoulders and not fall down. She also sprted a brightly patterned skirt with koi fish on it. She wore a necklace with a lage sphere attached; full of water with a small goldfish inside. She wore black combat boots with gold laces and carried an axe chained to some sort of scythe.
"my clothes got destroyed. I was gone for a year by the way!" she yelled at grim.
"what was your mission anyways?" midori asked quietly.
"i was to go to several countries, recruiting anybody i deemed worthy for our military. I found many candidates eligable for the role of soldier. I gave them coded directions to our hide outs as a test. Once there, i gave them even more difficult codes with directions to the actual village. What are you guys supposed to be doing?"
"Gaurding this dork." grim said looking extremely bored.
Nel just looked at him
"dont underestimate this guy. I can see he has much experience and absolute power."
"there ya go with the psycho-talk again." grim said smirking
"Its psychic grim. You havent cahnged at all since i left. Neither of you have." Nel gave them both big hugs.
"when will she be back?" nel asked
"two days. shes leading them here to trick them." midori replied.
"ill prepare my techniques" 'i cant wait to get a taste of this guys power' nel thought looking at akuma 'then i will never be stopped, and hell finally let me join his group. Itachi uchiha... you will be mine.' nels evil thoughts were masked by a smile while midori played with grim's hair.
'so damn clueless.'
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Sadistic Scalpel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 6:36 pm
While running through the woods,Naoki explained everything to Envy.
Entering a small clearing,Melvin's body laid near a pine tree. "Over there!"
She yelled. Envy pulled her back a little saying "I have no intention in
reviving anyone or fighting for peace. I'm only here because I
must follow you where ever you go." "What do you mean.....?" Naoki tried to
get closer,Envy's arm sprung forward and grabbed onto her. "Let go! WHAT
DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING,ENVY!!!!!???" "I told you,I have no intention
of using my life energy to support a human." His other arm turned into a
large,sharp blade. Shifting it over to Melvin's body...He chopped it up several
more times.
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 6:58 pm
"HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!!!" Naoki screamed at the top of her lungs. "NOW HES STUCK ON THE EARTH FOREVER!!!" Naokis eyes widened, staring at envy full of rage and violence. envy just stared blankly.
"You cant brinng back whats already dead naoki..." envy said looking at her seriously
"But... you brought me back" she started to tear up.
"I didnt bring you back! You were STILL ALIVE!! If i tried to bring him back... hed me a souless monster." envy looked away and grinned. Besides, i can tell that he's still folowing us. You specifically, Naoki.
"Wha?" Naoki looked around and saw a faint figure in the sunlight. "MELVIN!!" she ran tworards his figure to give him a hug. She passed right through him. Naoki looked back at his intangible spirit, crying.
"Naoki... i cant be brought back. That means I have to pass on." Melvin started walking tworards her slowly. He stood right in front of her and they looked into eachothers eyes. Melvin reached for naoki and she actually felt him hug her, but it was cold and felt like fog.
"I have to go now Naoki. Envy..." Envy looked at him with the 'i really dont want to be here right now' face. "Thanks for being my friend. You were the best a guy could ask for. Besides, I still wanna fight you in the afterlife."
"Yeah, whatever." Envy looked away, trying to look like he didnt care.
A black-clad figure appeared behind melvins ghost. It held a scythe in its hand and had black feathered wings. It motioned its hand to melvin to follow him. The Reaper opened a giant red door, and flames could be seen inside. It was the gates of hell.
Melvin looked back at naoki one last time. He started to tear up. "Naoki, hopefully, i wont ever see you in the place im going. Tell the others that im gone. Tell them all goodbye for me." Tears started falling down his face. He waved and walked through the threashold. Melvin turned back one last time and mouthed four words to naoki.
-i still love you-
they stood there sadly and silent for a long while aftre the door had disappeared. Naoki felt tears falling down her cheeks. 'Dammit. Why do i allways end up crying?" "lets bury him at least... he deserves a proper burial." Naoki and envy lied his body to rest in the earth. A cross marked his final resting place, and on it hung a chain from his favorite shirt. Naoki just looked at the grave sadly, and hugged envy tightly.
"Naoki, we should tell the others that the other melvin is a fake.
Naoki had forgotten. "OH CRAP!!!!" the duo ran back to the campsite. Naoki still looking back at where they had buried his body. 'rest in peace melvin'
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Sadistic Scalpel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:11 pm
"Envy...." Naoki said half crying. "...I don't want to do this. I don't want to
lose anyone else. I'm s-scared....." He looked at her in shock,Envy had
NEVER heard her say she was scared. Envy shook his
head and wrapped his arm around her. "Then let's go." He pulled her in
another direction. Naoki stopped dead in her tracks. "LEAVE? And let
innocent people die? Let the world plunge into evil? Let Melvin's murderer be
happy and FREE?!" "Naoki,I'm not like you at all. I'm still EVIL. I haven't had
a change of heart. I'd kill everyone back at camp if they weren't your
friends." She turned to him and took him by the arm towards camp. "I
know,I can't help that either. Now come on...." They approached everyone in
the middle of training-
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:38 pm
"Naoki!!!!!" Shiny and kake ran up to her excitedly. "kohaku taught me how to summon knives out of nothing!" shiny squealed with joy. "She taught me how to use substitution justsu>" kake said, pleased look on her face.
Naoki looked at all her friends, happily training with her sister. Then she saw HIM. The fake melvin was carefully observing everything naoki's friends were doing. He was studying the techniques. Naoki was furious. Furious at the deciever for impersonating her friends and even more enraged for killing one of her closest friends.
"YOU!!!!!!!!!!!" naoki stomped angrily at the imposter with fire in her eyes. "YOU ARENT MELVIN!!!" Naoki started attacking him viciously. "NAOKI!!! STOP!!!" Bakura screamed at her. Kohaku restrained naoki and told her to calm down. "THAT ISNT MELVIN" she kept repeating over and over like a mental case.
"naoki... if that isnt melvin... then wheres the real one?" kohaku spoke calmly to her sister.
NAoki started to sob so hard it hurt. "HES DEAD!!!! ENVY AND I FOUND HIS BODY... and...and...WE BURIED HIM!!!" naoki cried so hard she started to feel sick to her stomach. Envy just continued to have that 'i dont give a crap' look on his face. Everybody was tending to naoki except melvin and rya (she was too busy caring for her egg)
They all stared at the melvin imposter. He started to speak in Kagehime's voice. "He was just TOO EASY!!!! I mean, his gaurd was terrible!!!" she started to laugh maniacly. Kagehime teleported behind rya instantly. Rya's eyes stared straight at the imposters evil grin. She saw her life flash before her eyes. She was lifted up by her ankle and hanging upside down. Rya clenched lisa's egg tightly and screamed. "RYA!!!" bakura screamed so loud it could be heard miles away. "If you ever want to see her alive again, you will come to my hide out in 48 hours.
Bakura had to act. He grabbed his stop watch and teleported instantaneously, just as kagehime teleported.
He sat there staring, absent minded. Bakura kept repeating the phrase 'ive lost her' like a madman.
Naoki screamed.
Naoki just started crying so hard she actually passed out.
"Damn. She always goes for the weakest ones" Kohaku started crying over the loss of the two most defensless girls in the group.
"we have to do somthing." She looked around. Naoki was passed out. Envy just stood there not caring. Shiny was crying over the loss of two good friends, and kake just stood there, petrified. Bakura kept repeating it
"weve lost. weve lost. weve lost. weve lost. weve lost. weve lost......"
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Sadistic Scalpel Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:46 pm
"It's over. All of you go home and stay a way. You're not going to win. Evil
has won,it's simple." Envy gave a horrible grin and picked up Naoki. "Bye
guys!" He jumped off into the trees carrying her,not caring what will happen
to the human race.
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 8:26 pm
Kohaku just sat there, getting more and more furious. She walked over to bakura and slapped him in the face. He snapped out of it. They all looked at their leader, amazed that she could get angry.
"Get up... NOW!!! ALL OF YOU!!!" she commanded. Everybody got up quickly, afraid of what she would do next.
"I cant help that weve lost half the group..." she clenched her fists tight, knuckles turning white.
"BUT WE MUST MOVE FORWARD!!!!!"
shiny stopped crying. "naoki WILL come back. I just know she will!"
"I can learn whatever you teach me sempai." Kake said enthusiastically.
" I will save my sister!!!" Bakura looked extremley determined.
"Ill fight..." neko said. Everybody stared at her. "My fears of fighting and death are no longer rational. I have to fight to save everything we love."
They all looked at kohaku. She had fire in her eyes.
"lets do this! Naoki will be back. I know her, she is my baby sister after all."
They all got into their battle gear and stepped into formation.
"MASTER?!!" all three girls said in unison. Kagehime undiguised herself. She was carying rya, mouth duct-taped, wrists and ankles bound.
"whats with the excessive bondage?" grimm asked
"shes a mage... if we dont do this, she could easily cast a spell and screw us all over." she replied.
"Midori... Nel... bring me the scroll..."
"yes, milady." they replied. they handed her a scroll. it opened to reveal a variety of horrid weapons.
"strap her down. Grimm and nel took rya, and held her down with the same sealing technique as akuma, mouth still bound.
Kagehime picked up a scalpel.
"rya bakura... level seven summoning mage. Hails from the bakura clan, a proud family from the villiage hidden in the snow." Rya had absolute fear in her eyes.
"The mage's order... an order filled with the best mages of the world. You are ranked 7th out of all the members. Very impressive."
She walked slowly at rya, scalpel in hand. She knelt down and took a badge out of her pocket. It had a wierd eye adorned on it.
"the symbol of the mages order... youre proud of this arent you?" Rya just stared at the sadistic monster. She kicked rya in the face. "when i ask a question i expect an answer." she ripped the duct-tape off of her mouth. Rya screamed a little.
"Are you... proud... of this symbol?" she looked, evil sadistic look in her eyes. "ye...yes" rya replied faintly.
"then ill let you display it proudly for everyone to see!" she laughed maniacally and started to carve the symbol into rya's wrist. Rya screamed in pain. It made even grimm cringe. The minions looked in fear of what their master was doing to this small child.
when she finished, kagehim licked the blood from the blade and then stood up.
"little baby rya likes to cry?" she said in a horribly cruel tone.
"CRYBABIES GET EXTRA PUNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!" she cackled and jabbed the blade into her thigh. Rya cried so hard she lost her voice. The blood dripped down from the freshly carved flesh. it read 'worthless garbage' "melvin was more of a challenge than you..." kagehime walked away, leaving the knife on the ground, her claws covered in blood.
rya was left on the floor to cry until the pain overwhelmed her. she drifted off to sleep.
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Sadistic Scalpel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:09 pm
Kohaku continued to train the group. Shiny learned elite moves,Kake learned
slashing techniques and Bakura learned to use his fists and stop time
longer.
Envy watched Naoki in her lab,the place where he was born. His shoulders
ached,he carried her all the way home. Naoki started etching a large circle
onto the lab floor. With that,she began chanting. Envy watched in the
doorway,he knew what she was doing: Trying to summon a spirit.
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:30 pm
"NAOKI?!!! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!!!" envy screamed.
"Im bringing heim back." she said with intense focus.
"NAOKI?!!!! It wont work..." envy said sadly. "Dont sacrifice yourself."
"im not bringing a body back, just the spirit..."
"YOU CANT DO THAT!!!!!!!!!! YOULL DIE!!!"
"I stole this old scroll from the forbidden library." she pulled out a scroll, locked with a living seal; sharp fangs gnashing, warning people to stay away. She opened it.
"Kagehime devised this technique herself... It can bring back the spirit of another person. She didnt figure out a way to make the soul stay in this world, but i found the answer... alchemy." He looked at her with surprise. "if i summon the spirit, i can seal it into somthing artificial with my own blood..."
Envy got angry.
"YOU CANT BRING HIM BACK!!!!!!!!" naoki looked at him, pissed.
"he doesnt want to come back... he doesnt belong in this world anymore..." envy looked like he genuinley cared.
"i have to try."
"IF YOU TRY YOULL CREATE ANOTHER HOMUNCULUS!!!!!! IT WONT BE MELVIN!!!!!! youll just sacrifice yourself..."
naoki picked up the scroll and unsealed it.
"envy... hand me that puppet..." envy handed naoki a puppet that looked a lot like melvin. naoki opened the skull's cavity.
"im sorry envy..."
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Sadistic Scalpel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:57 pm
She slit her arm open and drew the Transfiguration symbol onto the puppet.
Envy gawked and just left the room. Dark,red lights split through the
floor,revealing the Gates Of Hell. The hooded figure reappeared,smiling and
showing it's red-stained teeth. "Escaping Hell is tricky,but I'll let you see
what happens." The bony fingers pointed to the gate,opening it-
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