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 Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:22 pm
Mana_ecl Zetsuya Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! I know it is, Tao. xD
Well, I just finished C rank for the Sangue. Mind givin' some opinions so far? Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away! Hm...Are you going to allow the blood off Abeo and such as well? Or just those three?
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:41 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! For now, it's just those three. After all, they cover the basis of cooperation, parasites or something independent.
To bring in more racial blood, well... That would take some time. For now, I'm going to establish these three, however in time, I might incorporate others. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:55 pm
Considering the name of the guild, I'm basically having it where the Abeo, the Book People ( rofl ), and the Kitsune are just returning to the world after so long of remaining hidden from the world (based upon the race, of course)
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:08 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! So you plan on intro arcs for the intro races? Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 12:08 am
Oh my, yes. Course, people will already be using them, but they are keeping quiet and hidden until they are ready to step out into the open. For some reason I see your race and mine being at opposite ends of the alignment pool, so likely when they move the Abeo will reveal themselves xd
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Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:28 am
Lan, his race is just the same with mine. Opposite ends of the alignment pool. So "The Book People" are going to have, like, two enemies out of the new races automatically it looks like.
Also, I would like some feedback as well.
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Royal Taorito Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 12:03 pm
I won't be on much the rest of this week as I attempt to produce two finished pieces of art for an artshow this saturday. Wish me luck! :3
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Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 12:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 5:30 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Best o' luck, Tao!
Now, now. The Valleto di Sangue are meant to appear on all bits of the spectrum. They aren't quite unified under their leader. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:25 am
Well, we can't entirely tell that with the information thus far. XD
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:58 am
Hm......I underlined the types of Guardian Angels to make is easier to read, Vucas, so if you noticed the change that was my fault. So far I enjoy that race!
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:26 am
Thanks. n_n Any points for improvement? From the organization of the information to how the race functions in itself?
For whatever reason, the fact that the underlines were now in the types of Guardians I had to go back at underline everything else, from the techniques to the ranks. Call it an OCD moment.
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 11:00 am
You should always do something to the name of each rank cause I skipped over a few without realizing it by accident.
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 1:42 pm
Tonight is the night we become great!The Stars will show us the way! Well, no s**t you guys can't tell by what I have so far. xD
I'm working the race itself out, however... It's quite a long process, as they are so versatile. Tonight is the night we become Great! The Stars are what gave us away!
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Royal Taorito Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:53 pm
*sigh*
I decided to give up my attempt. Not only has it caused a great loathing for my art teacher, whom I already disliked, it's causing too much stress. It had potential, so I will finish it eventually, and then I'll show you guys. But I can't finish it now.
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