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 Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 6:21 pm
alright, forgive me all for working my a** off, but i just ran around and sent mail to the moderators of both the video game guild, and the kingdomhearts guild asking for their help in advertising the novel project. i also went into the gaian writers guild and i set up a topic there askingfor help from good writers. i would head to the writers forum, but i tried that once to have no luck. next i am heading into the videogames forum in the ff subforum. i hope to collect more writers this way ^^. also, drunken master, i got your final edited peice, and i am going to check over it once more, then send it to another editor, sound good?
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 6:29 pm
I guess that works. Maybe we can't publish this, but if we use the same writers to write an original story we can publish it and sell it.
Anyway: Here's what I have so far tell me what you think.
*Whatever the person before me wrote.* Not to far away Cloud could see the outline of a small town. "Barret, do you think it's dangerous." Barret caught up with Cloud. "Why are ya askin' me?! I've never bin der before!"
"How do yo---." Nanaki had cut in, "I think it is the town Junon, a harbour town." Yufi jumped in the air "Yay! More things for me to steal!"
"don't you dare!...why is dat all you think 'bout?!...I would advise you not to." Cloud looked back, "would you guys shut up!" Cloud said in an annoyed voice. They continued to walk, the silouhette getting closer until they finally reached a small, foul-smelling, seemingly polluted town. The funny thing was, was that cheerful music was playing, while the group talked about what they thought about the town Cloud walked into the town and asked an old man what the cheerful music was for. The man told him that it was Shin-Ra serenating their new Leader...Rufus. "This town used to be a nice, clean, simple fishing town until the Shin-Ra built all that!" The man pointed to a bunch of massive metal poles holding up a dock over top. It must have taken very long to build, it was huge. "Now everything is polluted and all the fish are gone. Making money is harder than ever. Not to mention..." Cloud began to walk away from the man and could still hear him babbling, but he didn't really care.... more to come later.
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 1:51 am
Suka Strife also, drunken master, i got your final edited peice, and i am going to check over it once more, then send it to another editor, sound good? Sounds good ive started on the next bit should have it up by the end of the day, if you want me to pm it to another editor let me know. how much material have you had?
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 5:13 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 5:43 am
alright, naruto 4ever, i just finished PMing your work to evandre_vei, so she will start on that shortly, and then i will pass it on to another editor. to drunken master, i just finished printing out your second sheet and i will have that ready for you tomorow, then you can change anything you want from my rough edits, then i will pass it on once again to evandre vei. so far your peice has been routed to three editors, myself, evandre vei and return of say, leaving it to only be sent to Amyrthian and Alchem_DeRogue, so the earlier piece you sent me is almost finished going through all the editors, okay?
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:25 am
okay, drunken master your work has just been sent to a fourth editor. one more and it is all yours again.
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:31 am
Suka Strife okay, drunken master your work has just been sent to a fourth editor. one more and it is all yours again. will i even recognise it lol you must be busy smile
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:36 am
ah i hope you will crying . i am sorry, i forgot to edit your second piece, i was having a night with my friends. i will edit that for you today and hopefully post it either later today (doubtful) or tommorow.
i have been trying to get different guilds to advertise our novel project, so if anyone belongs to a FF guild of some sort, or another FFVII guild, ask them to advertise our project. i asked the video game guild, and the captain seems okay with it, so long as i advertise his guild. i am hoping things will come out okay, this is more work than i had expected. i logged in to eleven PMs in one night @.@
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 7:46 am
naruto 4ever, we are confused with your piece. it is very jumbled and poorly written, and i would like very much to know where you have written to or if it is finished. i promise after going through our team of editors it will be fine, but i need to know where it starts and ends, didwe get the whole thing?
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 8:03 am
argh... i just sent twelve PMs to twelve different Guild Captains, all of them somehow relating to final fantasy. i can only hope that some of them will reply and let me advertise in their guild. please do not forget to look out for writers where ever you go, okay?
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 9:53 am
It starts just as the group.(Cloud, Aerith, Tifa, RedXII, Barret,Yufi) are walking towards Junon. I am thinking of ending it either after they beat bottomswell or they sneak on to the Shin-Ra boat.
What about materia? Who has which summons and attacks?
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 9:54 am
i really do not care, since more than one of every materia can exist, anyone can have anything. just go for it, i do not care, but it had better be well written, and i would like you to include the poison bubbles somewhere in the writing.
do have in mind though, having knights of the round at this point would be completly out of line, so try to keep it all in time.
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:05 am
guys, you have not posted all night sweatdrop i am getting nervous here... anyways, sorry for the delay drunken master i just finished editing you work last night. this one however, might be a little more difficult to read than the last... one reason is because i lost my eraser, the other is because i found a hell of a lot more to edit... so i hope to my best you can read this all right. do not worry about the last section, where Cloud heres an animals growl. i still have to edit that, so just leave it to me. you seem to have a real problemhitting the '.' button >< either that or you just love runons.
AND to naruto 4ever, an editor is currently on the case of your writing. so, i hope to get that to you soon...
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:07 am
 just click on it to view the rest.
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 12:25 pm
"That edit job looks very shloppy Suka, maybe you should try an alternative editting method next time.
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