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k.k.razy
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:22 am


Oh really? I never really got that impression of him.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:24 am


Unless you've known him personally for a while, you wouldn't guess it. He's nice enough but when he decides to rip into someone he can be really very insulting. Personally insulting that goes above and beyond the call of duty.

I think he just has a lot of attitude and he doesn't know how to direct that yet when he feels personally offended. He's actually been booted out of a guild because of how he was making it look when he was being particularly bad.

Nowadays it has gotten better. Much better but he can still be overly cruel.

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Bottle

PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:49 am


I'm not even going to bother sharing my feelings about Felix.

Anyway,

I'm going to be doing this next week, aka tomorrow! Thanks for bearing with me you guys! <3
PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:04 am


Bottle
I'm not even going to bother sharing my feelings about Felix.

Anyway,

I'm going to be doing this next week, aka tomorrow! Thanks for bearing with me you guys! <3
heart

k.k.razy
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Miss Blissy

PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:42 am


The only interaction I ever had with Felix wasn't fun.
I'll never make the mistake of critiquing one of his avis ever again...

And thanks for doing this, Bottle!
PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:52 am


xD
I honestly don't like most of Felix's avis
I don't understand why he's so popular for them

k.k.razy
Crew

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k.k.razy
Crew

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:05 am


I was pretty impressed with the cosplay arena this week
well, at least the top ones.

and I'm so glad that two of the war heros and one of the phobia group entrys won original!

I'm writing my critiques soon.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:46 am


1: 3/7
This is so unoriginal it's not even funny. She didn't even do a good job at being unoriginal. The top is really light and the bottom is really dark. That /might/ have worked if she didn't toss on that ridiculous cape thinggy. I've only ever seen like two people pull that hair off well. The art style of it is just to different from most items. Blue eyes... why? I wonder if she turned off comments before or after she won.

2: 0/0
Um... isn't this a cosplay? For a cosplay, yes it's good. For an original, it sucks. No matching, no appeal. Overall, just an eyesore.
Not rating cause it's in the wrong arena.

3: 3/7
Comment of the week: "Oh I hope you win this is the cutest ori avi out right now!" OMG SO KAWAII MROWW MEOWW CUTEE 100000/100000!!1!!!~~!11~
In all seriousness, it's really not that bad. Kudos for matching the hair somewhat. I liked Social Bondage's comment. Good advice, thank you.

4: 5/7
I'm so happy that some of the war hero's won this week, I was looking forward to seeing all of them. I like this avi a lot (Of course you do Raz, it's brown!) Shut up okay! I think she could have chosen better hair. I like the blues, I like the face expression, I like the description. I hate how people say make up makes girls look like sluts, no it doesn't D; it creates personality in the face. stfu you trolls.

5: 5/7
Grats Mini! I'm sad that this was the phobia that won. I don't think it was the best, but I'm glad that someone won. It's very appealing and I actually like the how the hair is used. If she's not looking for love, why is she so fancied up? She looks like she's got a really bad tan going on in the face too, a bit orange if you ask me. XD

6: 3/7
Grats Fae! Hmm, I haven't decided if I like this one or not. (Omg Raz doesn't like a brown avi? ;OO) Well I do /like/ it but, it's not special in any way. Just an average steampunky avi with a new background thrown on. I don't like what was done in the torso either. I do like how the avatar is connected to the background though.

7: 3/7
I have a really hard time liking Social's avatars for some reason. I enjoy the personality that is conveyed in them, but they just aren't... pretty? Idk... I guess it fits the theme. I just find myself having to really think about things I like about it, and that shouldn't be what I have to do.

8: 3/7
Yey, the 2nd war hero. This reminds me of that movie.. yaknow? whats it called again... Anyway, the matching is alright. I like the setting created by the rock, and it's not out of place looking.

9: 3/7
* seizes* Hmm, I don't like it. Looks like she fell in a box of melted crayons. There's a bunch of every color but nothing really matches. Not only that, but the textures don't even match or even go well together. It looks better with a white background, who do people use anything but white arrggg.

10: 1/7
Omg, someone take this child to 4chan. It's a ***** BEAR not a ***** moose. *facepalm*

k.k.razy
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Miss Blissy

PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:11 pm


Mondays are the only days that I have time so here it goes:

1st: 2/7 First off: I hate it when people don't allow comments. It's just cowardly and admitting that your avi is so bad that people will critique it. This is unoriginal, boring, and I'm pretty sure it uses a set.

2nd: 3/7 Um... coslplay? If it is, it's good, if not... no. It's just an eyesore of an original avi.

3rd: 2/7 Oh god. Barf much? It's cute, yes. It matches in a very vague sort of way. Actually on second thought no it doesn't. But it's unoriginal and simple and pointless. Blegh.

4th: 6/7 I really like the colors on this one, and the face is great. I only wish that the torso was more spread out and the feet had more blue. But it's really a lovely avi.

5th: 6/7 I like the overall idea on this one, and the background really works. I actually like the use of that hair. It is a bit unoriginal in the way of colors, though.

6th: 4/7 I do like the face and the overall idea, but there's nothing on this avi that really pops. The browns are a bit off, and it's quite simple.

7th: 4/7 Eh. The face is nice, but the color isn't spread around and the torso looks cluttered.

8th: 5/7 Loving this face! However, the colors are simple and not all that unique. I usually like Lilith's avis, but this one isn't the best.

9th: 4.5/7 It looks nice, but the goggles and wand are out of place and it's been done (and won) before.

10th: 1/7 Really? Another one? And here's another guy who's just excusing her lame win with "ur just jealous haha i won". That really bugs me...
PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:13 pm


1. 5/7- Fairly accurate besides some things. Maybe it's in the movie, but the Long Drag and black lipstick aren't in the reference. There shouldn't be a red belt. I'm gonna assume he can use red mist since his name is Red Mist. I would have preferred the black cape over the red one.

2. 7/7- I wish the Y Paddle had more arm poses so it'd look like the spoon was going in, not pointing out.

3. 6/7- Accurate for what Gaia has to offer. Something's off though D8

4. 6/7- Matches perfectly, but why the black wrist bands D8? The trim is white

5. 4/7- Is this some kind of meme? HOW HARD IS IT TO CHANGE GENDERS? That man has no feminine qualities at all. And I don't really think the Reve lady can really pull of that look

6. 5.5/7- Wow, that face reference is scary. After seeing it, a change of eyes is definitely necessary. This is quite nostalgic, too. The sash sorta matches. What about wrist cuffs?

7. 5/7- Another Peach...now I'm gonna wait for another Zelda. I like this one because of the cleavage jewel (I didn't know what to call it xD). The color of those eyes are some weird green/grey color rather than blue. And fanart as reference, ffffff.

8. 5/7- If he didn't want to attract unwanted attention, you think he would've named his entry something other than OMG ANOTHER Cloud Strife. Iirc, I've seen a better way to do the sleeve than using the Reve. He needs a shirt with a collar.

9. 6/7- I kind of hate Gaia for making cat items. Those hands are friggin' huge, man. I'm also iffy on the shoes

10. 4/7- lolwut. I'm not gonna even start. Belt should be yellow, lack of hero crest on chest, and there shouldn't be a wristband

Skyscraper Opera


Bottle

PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:08 pm


Since I did Tsu's contest judging today, I didn't get to this. I guess it'll be tomorrow night's chore. Don't worry, Raz, I won't make you do this again, haha.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:18 am


Barbie did it last week
he volunteered :]

and no worries

k.k.razy
Crew

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k.k.razy
Crew

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:42 pm


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http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102093711#title
PostPosted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:55 pm



      1.) Lady Assassin » 1/7
      Talk about no originality, I hate monochromes. If someone's gonna do a one-colored avi, then at least they have to make it stunning.

      2.) MoonSeraphim » 0/7
      Shouldn't this be in cosplay!? Bottomline it looks like a semi-digested frog vomited by a snake.

      3.) Princess Kitty » 1/7
      It's boring, cliche, unoriginal and just plain nooby.

      4.) Lucy Lightning » 2/7
      She used Lyndexer's Journal twice which pretty much made up half of its creativity. The hair didn't match the other browns and I read from one voter that she looks more like a whore than an Air Chief Marshall which is true. xD

      5.) Philophobia » 2/7
      The avatar's totally off-theme, she could've picked Eremikophobia (fear of sand) or Drakonophobia (fear of dragons) instead she went with an idea that didn't match the avi, which sorta took away its creativity. She also used a set (Crimson Tatsu Scale armor) which many of us dislike. rolleyes

      6.) Dare to Spy A Dragon » 1/7
      Aww come on! I submitted an entry with the same theme. gonk The browns don't even match.

      7.) The Janissary » 1/7
      The idea is well thought out I'd give him that but the avi just sucks. Nothing matches, I mean nothing, not one shade of color matches the other.

      8.) Hector Renard » 2/7
      It looks too plain, and there's nothing special about it. I don't see why it is any better than the other entries from its group.

      9.) Florid » 2/7
      Maybe if she only used a few colors to coordinate the avi then it will look more classy than a bunch of "colorful crap".

      10.) WHAT THE... » 2/7
      I think she should've included the word **** at the end of her title. There's nothing special about it compared to the other "a** shot" avi's.

      I'm not frustrated that I lost this week , I'm just frustrated that I lost to these avis. stare

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k.k.razy
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 8:56 am


Quote:
I'm not frustrated that I lost this week , I'm just frustrated that I lost to these avis

Story of my life.
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