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o Introduction...

In advance, I'd like to thank you for taking your time to check out my concepts and/or leave me critiques. I really appreciate any tid bit you could leave for me, though it's not required. Also, if you would rather PM then that would be fine too. Oh ask questions also! Thank you once again for dropping by & have a great day. :3

o Concept 1


Name: Nerio [Greek:water]
Guardian: Namini
Gender: Male
Fel Essence: ? above ?
Soul: White Lion [1][2][3]
Hair color: Silvery white with some sharp icy blue and deep water blue strands.
Hair style: Uneven but still smooth looking. A long rat tail, either braided or like twisted and then adorned with shinies. This is supposed to appear like a lion's tail. C:
Eye color: White pupil-less, Black Sclera ... or perhaps a vivid green?
Skin color: Sunkissed, mildly tanned.
Markings on skin: None
Clothing style: Circus themed --> Ringleader x Punkish
Horns: None
Ears: Small lion ears
Accesories:
Personality: Though intelligent and straightforward, he has quite the temper since he finds it difficult to express his "sensitive" feelings. (Sadness, happiness, apology..) He snaps at others easily, but when he realizes his folly he attempts to apologize..though apologizing is his weakest point. His personality in a few words: childish, protective, and an odd kind of affection.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Extra/Power?: Power in stages>>

Stage Frei: There are certain memories in which a person adds unreal details to in attempt to remember the event. For example, if you recalled a n event and you said that "Remember when Eiry slapped Roux at that one party? :'DD? " and then everyone else is like "Um...that..never happened."
Nerio could remove these falsities and reveal the true memory.

Stage Sigel: Temporary "photographic memory". Nerio would be able to temporarily copy someone else and their actions (cooking, painting, etc) or spread this style of memory to someone else. For example, if David wanted to cook for his date but Namini wasn't home, Nerio would give him the power to "see" how his sister did it before and copy her.

Stage Valsaros: Memory claws. Basically, Nerio would, as a defense only thing, "pierce" one's mind and unlock suppressed memories to cause them pain. // (other option) A brief flash of amnesia [defense]

Mystery stage?! XD WHY AM I THINKING THIS FAR--

Alter memories.

o Concept 3
Time ebb..

o Guardian

[Name] Namini Nao | "Mini" or "Nami"
[Age] 16
[Height] 5'4"
[Weight] 105 lbs
[Appearance] With a small framed body and large dark blue eyes, Namini gives off a childish appearance. Her wavy auburn hair is adorned with lowlights and an unusual layered cut. She has porcelain skin thanks to her always having an umbrella.
[Personality] Incredibly clumsy and airheaded, Namini is constantly switching between jobs, though she always gives forth her best effort when at a job. She is pretty optimistic, though sometimes depression embraces her. She is innocent when it it comes to sexual matters and easily wears a blush. She's always trying to better herself and help everyone around her, especially her brother. There have only been a few times where she has become angry, and in those situations she becomes anti-social, lazy, and allows herself to indulge in junk food. Overall, she can be viewed as a child with her small random bursts of temper and her large amounts of energy!

[Likes] Art, cooking, animals, plushies, oranges, sleeping

[Dislikes] the dark, celery, perverted conversations: awkward situations

[Occupation] High schooler who works random jobs on the weekends and sometimes during school nights. Her most current job is as a hostess/waitress at a Fletcher's Fondue in Durem. Previously, she has been through six jobs: a stocker, cashier, waitress, office assistant, delivery girl, and telemarketer.

[History]: Growing up under a single mother, Namini grew up in a world where her mother was everything. Though she also had an older brother who she adored, though he picked on her constantly, all she could see was the happiness of life through her mother's eyes. Then one day her mother died in a car accident and Namini was devastated. She mutilated herself for days until her brother stepped in and got her guidance. She then realized that her mother wouldn't have been happy at her then, and so Namini decided to continue her life with an optimistic thought where ever she went. She now lives in Durem with her older brother, 24, in a small apartment complex.

She wishes for...: confidence

[Clothing] Since she's short on money, she chooses to wear simple, airy clothing. Occasionally she'll wear something formal and exquisite, but she prefers not to. [Everyday clothes - Waitress uniform]

The Memory Fragments fel essence is really great! The memories of a lake is a unique idea, and I'd be very curious to see how this would come to play in your Raevan and his powers.

I'd like to ask, why are Nerio's eyes black sclera and without a pupil? Is that due to his soul, or would the fel essence's nature have an effect on that? I think it'd be interesting to play off the lake idea and make his eyes mirrors, or perhaps a rolling color of blue that never seems to stay the same hue...or scenes from the memory of the person looking into them (perhaps that can be a power?). *can get carried away, ignore her*

Huan-yeu will be beautiful, I love her hair. My only concern is the ghost - do ghosts have souls, or is the ghost itself a soul? O: I'm not asking that as a question, but more as an idea for you to consider in your RP to aquire it.

Your essences are great, and I'll be interested to see if you continue on the theme of things that are broken, or if you'll find something that should be broken and is, in fact, whole. ;3

I think if you use ghost as the soul you will need to discover what kind of ghost it would be. The ghost of a human? The ghost of something else? What is it a ghost of because that's something important and would change things in different directions. There aren't just "ghosts" like whisping things that had no life - they used to be something and you can't just disreguard what they used to be.

I'm more than well aware of what a hungry ghost it. I've studied Buddhism for many years. But what kind of creature lead the greedy life and now lives wandering for years and never being satisfied?

If it was a human what did that human do in his life that brought him to this point?