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 Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 5:03 pm
**TITLE**
**STORY**
**INVENTORY** (not useable till game starts)
**PLANETS**
**SIDES**
**SHEETS**
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 5:17 pm
STORY
"You can be what ever you want" your Grandpa said.You clung to those
words your whole life.Even when a war broke out you still had faith.But
when your family perished in a large fire. Cuased by a fallin movement
ship. You in a act of revenge you join the Sendonia knights.A group aganist
the movement now your part of the war too.With your help mabye the movement will fall,but you must have plenty of faith, a good weapon and a pure heart.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 5:33 pm
planets:ERATH,MARS,VENIS,DETAR,(couple planets are not discoverd by you yet) 
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 5:48 pm
SIDES
(it tells what side your on but the game hasent started yet so its not fixed yet)
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 7:12 pm
Ok, im not being mean here just trying to help, your post will get more attention if it has good spelling and grammar. Hope it helps. The dashes - around words point out spelling or grammar mistakes. ill delete this post once you have the mistakes fixed.
((1st Post))
**TITLE**
**STORY**
**INVANTORY** (not useable till game starts) --Inventory--
**PLANETS**
**SIDES**
**SHEETS**
((2nd Post))
STORY
"You can be what ever you want" your Grandpa said.You clinged--clung-- to those
words your whole life.Even when a war broke out you still had faith.But
when your family parished--Perished-- in a larg --large-- fire. Cased--cuased-- by a fallin' movement
ship. You, in a act of revenge join the Sendonia Knights.A group aganist
the movement now you--you're part of the war to--too--.With your help mabye the movement will fall.--comma, Not period.--but you must have plenty of faith--comma here,-- a good weapon and a pure heart.
((3rd Post))
planets:ERATH,MARS,VENIS--Venus--,DETAR,(--insert the word "A"--couple--insert the word "of"-- planets are not discoverd by you yet)
SIDES
(it tells what side your on but the game hasent started yet so it--it's-- not fixed yet)
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