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 Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 5:43 pm
hello all Naruto Yaoi fans!
I plan to write a fanfic soon, about a gay pairing, dur...
and I need all the adjectives you can think of male body parts.
This includes...
the p***s
the a**s
the chest torso
the face
and so on...
and even adjectives to describe the emotions during sex.
Plz and thx
the funniest I heard so far about the sperm, marching tadpole army...
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 8:27 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 11:15 pm
Lol >.<
a**s: Opening, entrance.
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 5:44 pm
not something that I've already heard.... ninja
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 8:38 pm
How can we tell you something you haven't heard, when you don't tell us what you've heard? In my opinion, if you have to ask... maybe you should get a lot of practice before writing, or pick up a Thesaurus? I know that it took me lots and lots of writing to get my vocabulary as large as it is X3
Just one thing... Please... do not EVER... use the words 'c**k' and 'a**' in the same sentence. IT'S NOT SEXY. Not even for dirty talk.
p***s sounds funny. It sounds... small. lol Length, arousal, member, desire, manhood... um, that's all I can think of at the moment.
"Entrance" seems to be a favorite with slash and yaoi writers.
The chest?! You want words for chest?? I don't know any besides "breast", which is associated mainly with women to many people. The fame with face. What's wrong with saying chest and face?
As for emotions during sex... well, speaking from experience, this isn't easy for a virgin to write--and if you were not a virgin you would know. There's a lot of facts to consider about it, that a lot of first time yaoi writers do not take into consideration. When I first started writing, I found this wonderful site written by a gay man spicifically to help out female writers of gay male erotica. It was very, very helpful XD It included the NEED for lubricant, or else it's just painful usually, and even the best position for an orgasm LOL
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:09 pm
x_LoveObject_x How can we tell you something you haven't heard, when you don't tell us what you've heard? In my opinion, if you have to ask... maybe you should get a lot of practice before writing, or pick up a Thesaurus? I know that it took me lots and lots of writing to get my vocabulary as large as it is X3 Just one thing... Please... do not EVER... use the words 'c**k' and 'a**' in the same sentence. IT'S NOT SEXY. Not even for dirty talk. p***s sounds funny. It sounds... small. lol Length, arousal, member, desire, manhood... um, that's all I can think of at the moment. "Entrance" seems to be a favorite with slash and yaoi writers. The chest?! You want words for chest?? I don't know any besides "breast", which is associated mainly with women to many people. The fame with face. What's wrong with saying chest and face? As for emotions during sex... well, speaking from experience, this isn't easy for a virgin to write--and if you were not a virgin you would know. There's a lot of facts to consider about it, that a lot of first time yaoi writers do not take into consideration. When I first started writing, I found this wonderful site written by a gay man spicifically to help out female writers of gay male erotica. It was very, very helpful XD It included the NEED for lubricant, or else it's just painful usually, and even the best position for an orgasm LOL Lawl <3
You wouldn't have happened to have saved that site? Would you?
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:23 am
HA.
p***s: Loveshaft, fleshy man sword, rose tipped scepter of love, masculine rod, manliness, purple-headed yogurt-splurting monster, purple-headed womb ferret, wand of carnal delights, spam javelin, prostate poker, brobdingnagian manstick, dangling fury, harpoon of lust, honeyed sheath, inhuman man-mass, love lance, meaty pole, pleasure inch, slimy peter, stir stick of love, succulent pillar of fleshy steel, synchronised sex machine, velvet-sheathed steel, wand of copulation, weeping c**k, mushroom-headed ********, and my personal favorite, Photon Torpedo of Love.
a**s: Comecatcher, boy p***y, s**t shaft, poopshoot, puckered brown starfish, moist tunnel, brown eye, RECTUM
Don't ever use any of these....please. D:
Fun aside, I agree with Lo. D:
Its easy to fall into the Purple Prose category when you think too hard about what to call a p***s. :/
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 4:55 pm
xD. Omg.
Well, there's lots of words meant as... alternatives for the straight out terms, but it really depends on what kind of fic you're writing, and for what kind of audience.
Personally speaking, when people use the words 'c**k', 'a**', 'd**k' or whatever... ^^; It ruins it for me. I think it's too crude, but then again, it really depends on the audience you're trying to sell to.
Please, please, please for the love of god refrain from giving them names like...
Purple Headed Womb Ferret
Or... anything like 'lovestick' or 'oozing manhood', or... 'love scepter'. Those kinds of metaphors... RUIN it. They really, really do. Whenever I'm reading a fic, no matter how good... it stops there. It really does. Metaphors like that are NOT sexy. Not even a little bit.
Seriously. I don't know ANYONE who enjoys reading that kind of language for anything more then a laugh. So if it's for a parody or something... ^^; Go at it.
But then again... I read stuff geared more towards a... mature audience.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 8:56 pm
I know there's a deleted post in there recommending Minotaur's site, but, on request, I've removed the post which didn't have anything but the link in it.
The site itslef is VERY informative, and I recommend it 100% (*read it when she was 13 or 14*) but the content is VERY explicit, and against Gaia's TOS, and could very easily get the guild shut down. So the only thing I could suggest is requesting the site via PM or something.
^^; Sorry guys.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:14 pm
Henada HA.
p***s: Loveshaft, fleshy man sword, rose tipped scepter of love, masculine rod, manliness, purple-headed yogurt-splurting monster, purple-headed womb ferret, wand of carnal delights, spam javelin, prostate poker, brobdingnagian manstick, dangling fury, harpoon of lust, honeyed sheath, inhuman man-mass, love lance, meaty pole, pleasure inch, slimy peter, stir stick of love, succulent pillar of fleshy steel, synchronised sex machine, velvet-sheathed steel, wand of copulation, weeping c**k, mushroom-headed ********, and my personal favorite, Photon Torpedo of Love.
a**s: Comecatcher, boy p***y, s**t shaft, poopshoot, puckered brown starfish, moist tunnel, brown eye, RECTUMDon't ever use any of these....please. D:Fun aside, I agree with Lo. D:
Its easy to fall into the Purple Prose category when you think too hard about what to call a p***s. :/ Second of all, as I said before: rofl rofl rofl Henada, where in the world did you get that list? XD
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:40 pm
x_LoveObject_x Henada HA.
p***s: Loveshaft, fleshy man sword, rose tipped scepter of love, masculine rod, manliness, purple-headed yogurt-splurting monster, purple-headed womb ferret, wand of carnal delights, spam javelin, prostate poker, brobdingnagian manstick, dangling fury, harpoon of lust, honeyed sheath, inhuman man-mass, love lance, meaty pole, pleasure inch, slimy peter, stir stick of love, succulent pillar of fleshy steel, synchronised sex machine, velvet-sheathed steel, wand of copulation, weeping c**k, mushroom-headed ********, and my personal favorite, Photon Torpedo of Love.
a**s: Comecatcher, boy p***y, s**t shaft, poopshoot, puckered brown starfish, moist tunnel, brown eye, RECTUMDon't ever use any of these....please. D:Fun aside, I agree with Lo. D:
Its easy to fall into the Purple Prose category when you think too hard about what to call a p***s. :/ First of all, Selenai THAT WAS NOT ALL THAT WAS IN MY POST AND YOU COULD HAVE JUST TAKEN THE LINK OUT. A proper mod would have known, you can edit them... You could have also asked me. Deleting posts completely without warning is extremely rude. It's not like we were in immediate danger. I doubt it would have been reported by a member so fast. I agree that the content was over the rating, but of course I wasn't thinking about that. Second of all, as I said before: rofl rofl rofl Henada, where in the world did you get that list? XD xD;; It was all your post, and I know you can edit them. I looked the post over three or four times, and it had a whole bunch of smiley faces, and a 'Ask and you shall receive' and then the link. As for the link in itself and us not being in danger? ^^;;; Regardless, it's against the guild's rules, which I'm SURE you've read as a 'proper memeber' and against Gaia's TOS, which I'm also sure you've read ^^;;
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:44 pm
x_LoveObject_x Second of all, as I said before: rofl rofl rofl Henada, where in the world did you get that list? XD Oh baby, I've been around the block. Only some of them I made up on the spot. Most I've actually read in fanfiction or heard it from someone else.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:46 pm
Henada x_LoveObject_x Second of all, as I said before: rofl rofl rofl Henada, where in the world did you get that list? XD Oh baby, I've been around the block. Only some of them I made up on the spot. Most I've actually read in fanfiction or heard it from someone else. lol Oh lord I would love to see that fanfiction XD
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 1:52 am
OMG xd This is hard. I mean, I'm currently writing a fic with a friend, but look! So many people have said things I can no longer surpass. I mean, I just can't say anymore LOL And by looking through the posts... xd I've learned new words, too.
I guess I can't say much. Feelings? Depends, really. If you'd give a situation, that'd help me/everyone else... uh, help you. LOL xd Whatever. Ew. It's not like I've done it. I'm innocent, I tell you! >oO I'm just about to turn 14! What the hell!
*ahem* Enough ranting...
So yeah... Sorry I'm not too much of help. sweatdrop
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